Taarey ss ~ Kaho Na...Pyaar Hai, updated ch-14/11 june - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Amazing chapter, loved it a lot...
Next Chapter jaldi update karna😉
Thanxx for d PM..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Nice update ... Loved it ... Update soon ... Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
awesome update.
love Rey and sawyam's bickering.

and everyone teasing Rey about his lady love.

ria's hatred wish for Taani.. shows her hatred towards her.

and Taani in shivam's arm..what a twist
definitely a painful twist in their hearts.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
Beautifully described Reys feeling
But Taani with Shivam
I am fainting

Coming Swayam possessives Bhai mode is awesome

Loved it
Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Update on next pg :)
Edited by chinudolly-Pms - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Saying truthfully I really wanted to get over taarey but yesterday couldn't stop myself from writing about them. You must be hating me for disappearing like always but what to do friends, I have some reasons. This time also i cant promise of regular updates or something but ya I can just try to complete this story at least.

Please read and give your honest reviews, if not for me then for our taarey.
(Please refer previous ch if you have forgotten it.. i m bad at summarising...thts y nt giving any recap)

Ok here is next ch :)

Chapter-11 ~ burning heart ~

But he stopped in his tracks as his eyes landed on his Angel but his world came crashing down when he saw her in someone else's arms...in SHIVAM'S ARMS.

He was waiting for her from so long, he wanted to hug her, take her in his embrace as soon as he meet her, he was so afraid to lose her but he felt an unknown rage building inside him as soon as he saw his love smiling in someone else's arms.
He felt like burning the whole world with the fire of his burning heart.

Shivam came upto him and went across Rey in the canteen. Neither he saw him nor Taani.
Rey felt hurt cross his chest. His Taani didnt even spare a glance at him. She was so busy and lost with shivam that she didnt even look at him once. He felt his heart breaking with that mere thought.
He punched the wall in anger and left from there to the Rehearsal Hall.
**

Shivam entered the canteen with Taani in his arms shocking everyone there.
He made her sit on a chair.

"What the hell are you doing with my sister Shivam," Swayam asked angrily.

"Bhai... bhai.. relax Actually I got my leg sprained so he was just helping me," Taani interrupted and justified.

"What happened to your leg? Cant you walk carefully Taani?" Swayam scolded her.

"Bhai I am fine,"she assured him.

"Actually she got sprained while saving a puppy who was about to hit by a car. She put her life in danger to save that puppy. But thank god nothing happened to her," shivam clarified earning a death glare from Taani which meant 'What was the need to say this to bhai.' He gave a look "that I couldnt hide." He happened to be there and witness all by chance.

"Taani you will get nice one from me for all your stupid stunts," Swayam scolded her while shooting glares at her.

"Bhai that puppy was so cute. Com'on I couldnt just let him die,"she pouted making swayam smile a bit at his sister's innocence.

"Wont you hug me today? I missed you so much bhai," she said with glistening eyes opening her arms for swayam to hug him.

Swayam smiled shaking his head and bend down to hug her as she was sitting due to sprained leg.
He hugged her tightly mumbling, "You are crazy Taani...completely crazy." Both were smiling through their tears with their own fears burried in their heart for a moment.

All smiled looking at the cutest brother sister duo.
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In the rehearsal hall Rey was dancing aggressively as the images of Taani in Shivam's arms flashed in front of his eyes constantly.

Taani came to the RH finding Rey. Deep inside, even she was dying to see him but not showing it to anyone.

"Taaniii..." Rey whispered taking a deep breathe just when taani entered the RH. She stopped in her tracks hearing her name while Rey glanced at her through the reflection in the front mirror after removing his blindfold.
Taani shook her head smiling a bit.

"Rey, how come you always get to know about my presence?"

"Ehsaas." Rey mumbled.

"Hunh."

Rey turned around angrily and looked at her as she stopped in front of him frowning at his reply.

"Tumhara... Ehsaas.. jo mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai aur hamesha rahega par shayad tum he mera ehsaas aur pyaar bhool gayi..." Both pain and anger reflected in his words as he said that.

"Anyway I came here to ask about the dance rehearsals. How is your practice going? Only 2 days after left in this competition." She tried to change the topic turning around holding back her own tears.
But anger got over Rey with this. He slid his hand around her waist and pinned her against the mirror.

"Why do you always run away from me and my love...? Why?" He cupped her cheeks and whispered huskily. Her eyes closed and breathing fastened on their own but she remained her composure.

"I told you. I don't love you. All I can feel for you is hate... only and only hate."she replied with difficulty while going away from him. He still didn't let her go away.

"SHIVAM..."

"Hunh?"he pulled her back more close to him.

"Shivam... he is the reason why your love changed into hatred, Right?" He asked glaring her with fire in his eyes of jealousy and anger.

"That's why I hate you." Rey frowned at her words. She pushed him away and moved few steps forward to control herself and the storm of emotions rising inside her.

"Yes, That's why I hate you Mr. Reyansh Singhania because you don't understand me. You never did. You never will. You claim to love me but you just don't know me at all." She said looking at him from the side while wiping her endless tears.

Rey looked in her eyes searching for some unknown answers. Taani's phone rang and she ran away from there. Rey punched the wall in anger. Sometimes words have to be left in the middle as silence seems better at that point of time.
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Do like and comment from heart :)
Lots of love
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Keep smiling! :)
Edited by chinudolly-Pms - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Welcome back dear...
very nice update...
From where this Shivam entered suddenly...
I hope he is a positive character.
Thanks for the update...
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Candyfloss-TR

Welcome back dear...

very nice update...
From where this Shivam entered suddenly...
I hope he is a positive character.
Thanks for the update...
Waiting for next update.



Thank you so much for a warm welcome dear :)
Well thats a suspense if shivam is a positive character or negative
You never know 😛
Thanks a lot for your sweet comment once again ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Good to see you back
Awesome update
Rey and his anger
Their misunderstanding...
Shivam helping taani.
Swaani are a cute brother-sister duo.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Thanks for updating
I understand as well since i started writing aswell but soo many things to do and studies so i just read for now
Loved the update. Taani is right hopefully rey makes up this time.

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