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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the phenomenal response to the last chapter you guys.
Its a pleasant surprise to see so many loving Tan's character. Yep, he is a decent honorable man. After a point he responds directly
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Posted: 8 years ago
Putting a jaw to good use...

He slept the rest of the day, Nandu came by and sat on the edge of his bed

"Hey bud" he said gruffly

"How come Mom's not home yet?" Nandu asked

His voice was breaking, he had traces of a moustache coming. He was hairy like his Mama

He was tall like him, he was quiet like him. He was thoughtful and introspective like R&B
AND he was a teen...

"Hows school?" he asked smiling

Nandu shrugged

"That good huh?" Tan chuckled

Nandu hated to see his Dad in bed, unshaven, with his bald head and facial hair he looked odd

Ma was missing in the giant walk in closet
It was intact, no shoes strewn around by his sister
Ma was not selecting outfits to wear for the evening

The bedroom door would be locked and nandu would have to knock😳

"So? Are we going?" nandu asked

"Kidhar yaar?" Tan dragged him by his arm

The help brought chai and mutton pakoras

Mrs Batra walked unenthusiastically along the hallway without peeking in
The bedroom had two giant glass doors that were open

Tan acted like he didnt see his Mom

"Dad?" Nandu pressed

"Ruk yaar, pehle kha loon" he chuckled

Father and son scarfed down the plate of pakoras and chai Nandu was offered bournvita
Sam's orders

His mother had snuck some chai to him much to Tan's displeasure the past week

His Mom was being defiant and devious for no particular reason

Grieving the loss of her own daughter's marriage... she reveled in gently tearing up her son's


The help brought rasmalai

Tan ate quietly "Waha se laaya kya?" he asked

He knew exactly who had made it

The help smiled secretly

Tan grunted appreciatively... slurping

He ate 4 patties of it...

"Why do u miss ur Ma?" he teased Nandu

"I miss Lasya" he said turning red

"TU?" "SAHI MEIN?" Tan cracked up

"Daddd" Nandu was irritated

"Dont u think we shud let her relax a bit?" he said not looking at his on

Nandu was shocked

"Shes been there since Friday night" Nandu argued

"Ummm" Tan nodded, scratching his bald head... rubbing it, as he stared out the floor to ceiling windows.

Twilight was setting in... tomorrow was Ashtami according to Mrs Batra


The wheat stalks were over 6 inches tall, luscious and shiny and plump
Sam grew a bunch of them in a trough, and had them hand delivered to her beeji's house and to relatives in Ludhiana for some reason

Tan slid off the bed... and wore his hoodie


"Wont u shave?" Nandu asked excited

"Saale Mami ne sikhaya kya tujhe?" he chuckled

Nandu looked confused

"Ur Mami keeps begging Uncle R to shave" Tan smiled

Nandu realized it was an adult joke... he squirmed

"When u start shaving... u will get shit if u dont" Tan gave some sagely advice

"U think I shud?" Nandu enquired

Tan walked over and examined his chin

"Depends on if ur going to put the smooth jaw to good use" he whispered

Nandu smiled self consciously

"So it has been put to good use" Tan chuckled

Nandu pushed Tan away and got off the bed "Daddd... u are invading my privacy"

"OH TERI" tan cursed

And went into the bathroom...

II was making wet rice flour pattern in front of her idol arrangement

Sam had imprisoned Lasya and Nivi as the girls screamed

"Kal kya pehnoon main?" Sam asked

"Lets all three of us wear the same color? different types? or same type different color?" II gushed excited
She paused her rangoli making to chatter incessantly about twinning and tripletting and what not

Sam listened in amazement "Tamil bhi itna hi fast bolti ho?" she laughed

II nodded "Faster" she said

"Shud we?" II finished her sales pitch

"I owe u a saree for Navartri" Sam smiled

"I dont need one, lets decide on a color when I am done?" she asked


The girls were driving Sam crazy

She rang a bell so she cud hand them to Mahavir

Manya was out with Makarand.

sam had been spending the day moping, or cooking

Not calling Tan

Ranjan had had a "chat" with Tan and Sam separately, two nights ago when II got a ride from R7B

The day he went to ask Ranjan for help

But half way thru when Ranjan was still sermonizing Sam, her MIL had called to report II was found spying... II's car was spying (Pffftt!)

When Sam heard it, she was furious

She had called Tan

He had been in a meeting/dinner and so hung up abruptly

ranjan really didnt want to find Sam at MM every evening

But she was going nowhere


"Can I call Shravu?" the women heard Nandu's voice in the hallway

sam's eyes sparkled Ii noticed

She immediately got up and left the mandir...
II paused so Sam can have her private moment with her kid

Until she heard Tan's loud voice

"Yaad aaya?" he was mocking his wife

II smiled secretly...

RAKSHASANEY YOU NEVER TEASE ME LIKE THAT
U SHOW UP AT ROHINI
FOLLOW ME WITH UR GAZE AND ALL I GET IS A "LETS GO II"

She sat staring at her pattern

She had told him in teh bathroom the other evening about wanting her tubes tied

He had lit up

"Do u seriously believe the decision is yours to take?" he asked bluntly

"Yeah, when u have a miscarriage... and bleed for 2 weeks you can have the power back" she whispered furious

"In that case I refuse to go along with your plan" he said leaning back on teh wall arms across his chest

"I"

"No... let me guess... no sex otherwise" he said bluntly

And watched her turn a guilty red

That was it... he had walked into the tunnel like open shower and hit the dozen jets

Outside...

"Kab aaye?" Sam asked awkwardly

"Idhar ya ghar?" Tan scanned her body

"Umm.. dono"

Nandu was already in the theatre calling Bala asking if Shravu can come over for an hour

"Chai banaoon?" Sam asked politely

"Quit playing games Sam" Tan accosted her

"Tan..." she protested

"Naam mat le mera" he ordered as he continued to approach her until she hit the formal living room's wall

"Tan" she begged

"Agar main mahina laut ta nahi, to yahin rehti?" he asked hands on his hips

she squirmed... and lowered her gaze

"Kidhar hai bhai? Bhashan bada deti hai usko, yeh nahi kar woh nahi kar" Tan mocked enjoying her discomfort

"He is stubborn... I am not" Sam got her voice back

"Boss... tu stubborn nahi to kya hai?" he challenged

"Tan"

"Shut up yaar" "Bakwaas nahi... bilqul" he groaned as he gathered her in the most ferocious hug



Edited by Nisha0604 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Me first yaay

I m just loving tan more And more every time
He is truly a gem
🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love the bond between father and son
There casual talk was so cute...
And one thing is clear II is pushing dude way too much this time
Nisha do something and soon
Please
Can't see them like this
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Posted: 8 years ago
Breathing now!!
God!!!
These cpuples are sooo young at heart
Their romance still alive
How do they manage it???
I am sooo happy to see them !
Can we have more of such couply stuff???
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Posted: 8 years ago
"Shut up yaar" "Bakwaas nahi... bilqul" he groaned as he gathered her in the most ferocious hug

Yaar... this shut up to biwi is also awesome. This bald boss is seriously kicking ass and I love this.

I liked Sam's touch of rasmalai patties playing catalyst and the whole scene with Nandu that made Tan drive out to reclaim his precious family bk. Adorable father son moment emphasizing the beautiful bonds built.Too good a reason to rightfully get her bk home.

Nandu missing Lasya was so damn cute. The help of both MM
And SN are so cutie pies too ... damn observant , the loyalty and the silent unwritten support they show is amazing that speaks volumes of the respect and love shown to them by their employers in general .
when scheming discontent ppl like Mrs Batra invoke stars and bring Ashtami to manipulate , you know that's Bull... whole load of BS.

Another kick ass chapter from you Nisha. Looove this. 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
II and Dude's stand off is even more a private matter that can't be made very obvious. The wife fears a miscarriage getting pregnant again and Dude feels that decision can't be hers alone. This is surely a thagada matter for contemplation. And wife's using no sex as her weapon to fight this battle. But sex and the decision to add to the family...they are mutually exclusive decisions and it can't be made conditional.

If II's disinterest to extend her family stems from purely from fear of the trauma she went thro, it has to be addressed appropriately taking help from right channels. It's a diff matter if it's not out of fear but more her choice to just have one, then that gets trickier as the dude's entitled to have his choice as well and here it's the couple who will hv to weigh in their choices carefully.

Hmmm so the standoff continues.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved father and son bonding.
Sam hug him your husband is a gem. He truly loves you.
And I love this couple. ❤️🤗

RAKSHASANEY YOU NEVER TEASE ME LIKE THAT
U SHOW UP AT ROHINI
FOLLOW ME WITH UR GAZE AND ALL I GET IS A "LETS GO II" and he also says 30 minutes II 😳.

Thank you Nisha.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad



I prefer Tan's approach more than dude's approach. Nothing is right or wrong and no one is purely right or wrong either. Two most adorable men, both self made. It's just that you prefer one's approach more than the other. To each his own ... whatever works for them that keeps them sane.


👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
First, second and third...

II peeked out ever so slowly... R&B and Tan were laughing sipping beer, Sam was tying Nivi's unruly hair into a bunch of curls on top of her head

She looked... umm... lovely, II thought

Pink and flushed

Her eyes were still moist, after the emotional exchange they must have had

R&B turned when he heard II's feet, they gazed at each other for the first time that day...

"Umm... bas yeh poochhne aayi, ki khaana yahin na?" she asked nervously

Her husband was ogling her quietly

She had flour caked up around her wrist after making the pattern

"Yaar kitne din baad aaya hoon, hello nahi karegi?" Tan asked sadly

She smiled, bit her lower lip and walked up to him

"Since u were busy hugging wifey, mujhe laga mere liye kuch nahi bacha hoga" she chuckled as he hugged her warmly

"Mmm" he exhaled, patting her shoulder "Aur?" Ladna band?" he asked jocularly

Causing II to turn crimson

AYYYO
BAD TIMING

R&B sipped like II and Tan didnt even exist

"I am in my best behavior always. MAIN kabhi nahi ladti" she insisted

Tan laughed throatily

"Tan zara aap isko pakden" Sam called from the dining room

"Ruk" Tan went to his wife

"Thai chalega khaane mein?" she asked R&B

"Nahi" he said bluntly, looking deeply into her eyes, as if he was saying "I want to kiss you senseless"

"Oh?" "Phir?"

He sipped slowly, kissing the bottle, cupping the opening with his lips... forming an "O"

He lived a cool unfazed life, or so it seemed like

It was a "frigid" 25C outside and he was in cargo shorts anda plaid shirt with shoulder straps.

If he caused Tan to have a self realization, by texting or talking with him while he was in Pune, he wasnt showing it

He didnt talk much so he rarely bragged

II missed the physical intimacy.

Overhearing Tan and Sam's emotional reunion caused her to miss the curling up on the couch

The finger kangis... and the couch make outs

"II?" he questioned as she was lost in thought

"Kya?" she asked eagerly

He shrugged carelessly

"It was sweet of Tan to come get her no?" she chatted up

He nodded expressionlessly

"I find Tan to be sooo romantic" she clasped her hands and sighed

she sighed carelessly looking towards the dining room.

He lingered, without talking

"Tan laaye?" she asked spotting a bowl of fried food

"Hmm" he nodded
She approached it and was about to undo the red lid on the pyrex bowl

"Probably not something u will like" he saved her rom disappointment

"Oh" she nodded deflated

"Thai khaogey?" she asked AGAIN

He looked surprised

"Nahi" he said firmly

Then she realized it was a repeat

OH HOW COULD I FORGET HINDI COMING OUT OF THAT MOUTH?
GEEZ!!
SIGH

"Turkey sandwich?" she asked all knowingly

"I am not hungry" he said softly

To an observer they might have appeared like having a romantic convo

"Uh... umm... ok" she said "how can u not eat?" she questioned

"Very easily" he shrugged

"Do u have a Paris Roubaix chalenge?" she asked sadly

"It happens in April" he said

He was fit, and athletic, and did various things, many she had no clue about
He hiked and camped in places she had only seen pictures of in Natl Geographic

His "coolness quotient" was through the roof

She was a Ananda Vikatan reading Carnatic music singing, nose ring wearing, curd rice eating Iyer

"Dessert bhi nahi khaogey?" she asked

"Nope" he said quietly

"tchhh" she was unhappy

"Neeche kab aaye?" she asked unwilling to leave him alone?

"When Tan texted me" he said finishing the bottle and setting it on a glossy end table in the lounge

"Call hai?" she asked

"Nope" he said

"To Tan ke jaane taq yahin raho... rahogey?" Dad bhi aate hongey" she informed

"Ah" he barely acknowledged

"Main jaoon?" II asked unwillingly

Tan and Sam appeared holding Nivi as a screaming Lasya followed

"I want mommoreee I want mum more" she screamed"

"Tan do usko" Sam giggled softly

"Bas yaar raat ko soyegi nahi I dont need anyone awake tonight" Tan laughed loudly and winked at her

R&B grunted, he obviously didnt care for TMI abt Tan's sex life

"Khaana kya hai beta?" Tan asked cheerfully

"thai?" II asked deflated

"Sahiii" Tan clapped

Ranjan walked in all smiles

Nivi flew out of Tan's arms into Ranjan's

Lasya screamed more He bend down and picked her up wincing under the weight of two fat babies

Tan touched Ranjan's feet "Dadd... mutton pakoras" Tan laughed

"Hoye shabaash" Ranjan hugged him warmly "Stay blessed beta" he said swallowing a lump

"Suno, main help karoon? I have a new recipe for satay sauce" Sam said cheerfully

II nodded walking inside

"Gudiya... beer bhejin zara" Ranjan hollered "Oh bhool gaya... beer ren de, chai bhejin raje" "Navratron mein" he mumbled
"Pakore bhi freezer mein daal de, ya Mahavir nu de deen puttar"

"Sorry Dad, is nalayak ne beer pilayi mujhe" Tan tattled pointing to a texting R&B

Ranjan chuckled

"Aur second sorry maine ghar pe mutton pakorey khaaye" Tan said

Ranjan patted him kindly

"Hore?" "third sorry vi haiga?" Ranjan teased

"Aur kis baat ki kahoon?" Tan asked thoughtfully

"Dad" he said quietly touching his FIL's feet again as if saying sorry for the hubby-wife tiff, suddenly realizing he owed the old man a sincere apology.

"Na betaji... khush raho dono" Ranjan sighed, hugging him

The girls started to empty his wallet, pulling out all the cards

"Adhooo mummeee" "Adhoo mumeee" (Dadu do u want money?) Nivi waved her fat hand holding the Amex Black card

He kissed her hand

II paused on her way to the dining room to look at her husband

Oh yeah, he was looking at her...

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