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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Ha ha ha
Oh no no my dear,
U are so sweet
In fact I am happy now due to your comments
Surely I always share my views.

My dear I have one request .please add some action scene too. I love too see these particular scene.
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Haii
Di,
OK ,
Let's see,
I will try.
Thanks .

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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
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Edited by Agnishikha007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33



Haii di,
Thank u.
Keep commenting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Haii,
Dear friends
I am overwhelmed with your response .
So here is next update.



~~part = 2 ~~


Sharma Palace


Kahene ke lie to yeh ek palace hain par ab ...??? Friends ek time aaise bhi thi jab is ghar ki muskurahat ki gung bahut due tak sunai deti thi. Log kahete the " ghar ho to aaisa. Kaha jata hain banzar jameen par bhi kabhi kabhi phool khil uthti hain . Lakin kya usme wo shakti hoti hain ki sare garden me colour var de . Nahi na friends balki or bhi murchaya hua nazar aati hain. Aaise hi do phool hain is ghar ki bahu Kajal or ghar ki laadli Aahana.

Morning = 6 : 30

Aahana princess of this house is wake up now. She sat in the garden. She remembered some memories of her " Kabir Bhaiyya " Whom she used to call " KB".Who understand her very well. In fact he was the one whom she loves most.

Flashback :
Kabir was running with a mobile phone in his hand . Aahana was running behind him.
" KB please phone de do .Main ma ko bulaugi. KB please taan mat Karo. "

" Oh I am tired he sat on a sofa where family members including Ranveerji enjoyed evening coffee.
" Kabir yeh kya phirse ..." Sabitriji said in fake anger.

" Oh ho ma , aap bhi main to ...
Ok pahele tu yeh to bata ki yeh mahashay koun hain jinse baatien karne ke lie itni utawli hain."
" wo wo KB mere ek friend hain, we met 1 month ago & then ...

Kabir with mischievous smile ",Friend ya Boyfriend " He mentioned " boyfriend ".or 31st day 16 hrs & 50 minutes ."
Aahana was drumstruck. She doesn't think even in dream her KB embarrassed her . She did not raised her head. Everybody hide their smile but Kabir couldn't control he was laughing like hell.
" ha ha ha ha "

Waise accha hi hua we all present now to abhi baat kar le .Main to is intezar me hu ki kab yeh gana gau.
" taro ka chamakta gahena ho
Phoolo ki mahekti vaadi ho
Us gharme khushwali aaye
His ghar me tumhari Saadi ho "

Her chik turned radder now. She try to talk but couldn't. Kajal dekh rahi thi . hassi to use bhi aa rahi thi . Par usne Kabir ki lips pe haath rakhi .
"bus Kabi bahut hua tumhari yeh sahas ki tum is ghar ki laadli ko pareshan Karo . Waise wo ladka koun hain ? "
Aahana looks at her in disbelief.
Kabir with smile " Bhabi main to Abhi tak mila nahi hu par itna to janta hu Name hain Armaan Kashyap .Wo Jo "Anita's" fashion house hain na wo uski Ma ki hain.Currently he is out of station. due to some training. Aahana met him in a party."
" Are bah Kabi tujhe to sab kuch pata hain tujhe angle ne batayi thi kya ? Or is he right for her ?
" brow I know Aahana . Agar use koi acchi lage then its serious. So Maine aapni source se pata kia. Because I can't see a single tears in her eyes " .

"Kabir wo ladka Aahana ke lie sahi hain na " asked Ranveerji with concern.

Present :
Her chain of thought is braking .She try harder to stop her tears which is flowing now constantly.This is not knew for her its happened since Kabir was
out from this house. She quickly reached mandir. Where all members were present. Sabitriji arti kar rahi thi or bade muskil se apni aansu chupa rahi thi. Inki thik piche left side me Kabir or right side me Ranveerji khade the.
Ranveer Sharma " Rules " ki dusri name hain. From his point of views " rules are the piller of a house." Everyday he wake up before sun is raising. Unhe suraj ke saath aankhe milwana accha lagta hain.Aajtak aaisa kabhi nahi hua ki suraj unse pahele uday ho.
Logo ka kahena hain "rules banaye Jaye hain zindagi jeene ke lie par Ranveer Sharma jeete hain rules ke lie." Lakin friends is it possible " Kabir " who is his dream child.? Whom he had a great expectation? Unhe koi fark nahi pada Kabir ke chale jaane se. Is it true friends ki Jo dekhti hain wohi such hoti hain?
Kya so called ",Rules " me itni takat hoti hain ki real love bhi uske same kuch nahi? We see later. Time says who wins ? Ok by by.

Hay readers aaplog kahi ja rahi hain kya? Kya aaplogo ko yeh nahi jaanna hain What is going on " Kashyap house "? So let's go.


Kashyap house


Sounds of her Payel shows how happy she is. She is running down ward's. Her chick flushed due to happiness. She think her mother is very impressed about her boyfriend. She take her phone &...
remembered something.

" Mumma are u called me ? Then she noticed her loving brother was there.She overjoyed . A drop of a tear fall from corner of her eye. She tightly hugged Armaan. Armaan also hugged her back.
" Bhaiyya aap kab aaye? apne mujhe phone Kqun nahi kia?
Aap kaise ho? Or phir meri bha...,"

" Are bus bus gudiyaan kitni questions kar rahi hain.pahele thodi saans to le le." Armaan stop her before his mother getting suspicious about ," Bhabi " because he hasn't informed her about " Aahana " .

Anitaji noticed all this & understand something is happening. She try to hide her smile & said in a tough tone.
" Ananya Kal tum mujhe Romit ke bare me bata rahi thi kab se janti ho tum use ? Or Armaan did u know him?
" oh ma bus 6 month. Wo amm wo ... U know he loves music also .we met during a music show."

" Mumma main abhitak personaly nahi mila hu, but phone pe battien ki hain."
Ok Ananya main Romi se milna chahati hu, or baad me ... "
She thinking deeply wrinkles clearly visible on her forehead.Which Ananya did not notice but Armaan did though he can't understand .
He stay silent.
" mumma Romit is out of town due yo some work.usko 1 month to lag jayenge . "

" Humm thik hain " she goes to her room & said in pain
" Sudhi Kash tum yehaan hote to mujhe itni sochne ki jarurat nahi hoti. aaj tumari princess ko koi pasand aayi hain kya wo sahi ladka hain? Please Sushi laut aao .I really need u. Her tears now no bound. Slowly very Slowly she dialed a number
" Hello ".
This voice . Na jaane kitni arse se yeh awaj sunne ke lie tara's rahi thi Anitaji. Aaj kuch bol hi nahi pa rahi .kitna kuch kahena chahati thi wo,par ab...

Phone pe koi awaj nahi thi .lakin ustaf ki insaan shayed sun bhi rahe the or samaj bhi rahe the.
Unhone kaha

" Nita " he used to call her " Nita ".
bus or kuch kahene or sunne ki gunjayesh hi nahi thi. Dono hi sun rahe the dono ki unkahi baattien ko.



Oh hello friends bus aaj ke lie bahut hua. Bahut bore kar dia maine aaplog ko. Phir bhi agar aacha lage or na bhi lage to bhi comments kijie.

Thank u very much itni der bakwas sunne ke lie.




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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Hay hay
too good dear .
Its so beautiful
I think Ranveer KO hi sabse Jada fark
Pada hain.
When Kabir is coming.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Awesome update
But I am craving for kaya scenes
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
Kool11 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Haii dear,
Humm nice very nice. I really appreciate u.
Its good dear. So Sudhir Ji & Anitaji missed each other.
Hay Ranveer Ji dusra name ussol Ji Kqun nahi rakkhi.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Haii dear
Oh good very good.
Oh Kabir ke father is really a master piece.
Oh poor Aahana I understand
What is the problem between Anita & sudhir.?
OK
Let's see.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Nice & intresting character sketch!👏 😛
Awesome updates!👏 😛
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Haii,
Exlent dear,
Very good update.
So Ananya is happy.
OK let's see ki kitni din tak
Hay dear you have a interesting plot.
I can't wait for next part. Please cont soon.

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