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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rahiroy31

Haii

dear,

Good very good.
I really enjoyed their playfulness
Very well written.


Thanks for the pm dear.

Keep it up.


Hii
di,
Thank u.
In future I hope u enjoyed most.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Avinanda120

Hii

At fast I really thank u for this ff.
Truly beautiful.
I enjoyed most Kabir & Ananya convo.
Hay when u revealed Kabir's past?
I'm waiting egarly

I think this episodes hero is Sudhirji.
Wow great . He is true guardian.

OK dear, please update soon.

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Hii
di,
Thank u
My pleasure.
Well di when situations demund .
Yeh di Sudhirji is best.
Please keep commenting.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kratiagrawal

Nice ...

Plz update soon




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti120

Hello

Agnishikha

Aapki story bahut hi unic hain.
Mujhe to Ananya bahut hi pyari lagti hain.
Kabir bhi bahut hi dashing hain.
To Kabir Abhi tak dubidha main hain
Ki wo Jo kar rahe hain sahi hain ya galat.

Or idhar sudhir Ji yeh soch rahe hain Ananya ke lie Kabir perfect hain.

Ab to or bhi maza aaiyegi jab Kabir Anita se milenge.

Bahut khub.

Jaldi jaldi update Karo.




Hello
di,
Thank u.
Hain Kabir Abhi tak uljhan me hain.
Sudhir Ji apni beti ko sahi haath me Dena chahate hain.
Yeh jaldi hi update kar dungi.

Please aaise hi aapko views share kariye.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Agnishikha007




Hello
di,
Thank u.
Hain Kabir Abhi tak uljhan me hain.
Sudhir Ji apni beti ko sahi haath me Dena chahate hain.
Yeh jaldi hi update kar dungi.

Please aaise hi aapko views share kariye.

.
Hii

Agni

Mujhe na Kabir or.Ananya ki romantic moments ka intezar hain. Please sad some .or yeh Romi ko yehaan se bata do.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello dear,
Agnishikha
Ek baat kahu bura to nahi manogi.

Please Hindi me hi likhna. English shabd ka proyog thodi so kam Karna.
Sabhi to English me hi likhte hain
Hindi me to bahut kam likhte hain

Agar sambhab ho to hi Karna.


Thank u
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti120

Hello dear,

Agnishikha
Ek baat kahu bura to nahi manogi.

Please Hindi me hi likhna. English shabd ka proyog thodi so kam Karna.
Sabhi to English me hi likhte hain
Hindi me to bahut kam likhte hain

Agar sambhab ho to hi Karna.


Thank u

.


Hii
di

Full Hindi me likhna to mere lie possible Nahi hain but phir bhi try karti hu.


Thank u.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello
My dear readers
I thanked all my readers for comments their valuable views. Friends criticism is always welcome. If u feel something wrong in my writing please feel free to share. Because this is my first ff . please stay with me.



Thank u all.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hii
dear friends
here is the 5th part.




Ahesus

Pyar
Ki

Part = 5






In Mall

Sudhirji clear his throat. Ananya come out her thought. Seeing their expression Kabir is puzzled. He asked Sudhir ji
" kya hua uncle ? Main janta hu ye sab mujpe aacha nahi lagega. Aap bhi na mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha hain. Sab mujhe aaise Kqun dekh rahe hain?"


" Nahi ,nahi Kabir tum to bahut
handsome dikh rahe ho. Agar main ek ladki hoti to aaj tumse to mujhe pyar ho hi jati." Seeing Ananya's state he said gladly.

Ananya lower her eyes. Her cheek emitting heat which is the effect of his closeness . She murmurs " he is looking so hot."

At that time one sexy girl in mini skirt with haulter neck top come to Kabir " Hello handsome are u single? If yes then mere saath chaliye na . Waise bhi aaj ka din badi suhani hain hume aap Jo mil gayi " she try to pull Kabir.

Kabir is in trouble. That girl kissed him on his cheek & play with his finger. He tries to pull away his hand from her hold. " madam
main aklela ..."

" Excuse me miss , yeh mere saath hain". She hold Kabir's hand & plustered a smile . She is not pleased. In fact She feels uneasy with the presence of that girl but why she can't understand.
" oh I am sorry . Tumhe ek advice deti hu. Is handsome ko kabhi bhi akele mat chodna. kya pata koi
uda le jaye."

Kabir is now relieved. He looks at her asking silently how he is looking? Ananya feels his unuttred word but deliberately avoids him
" papa chaliye hume der ho rahi hain. Mumma intezar kar rahi hogi."
Sudhir Ji said sadly " Nahi beta mera safar aahi tak tha . Tum Kabir ko le kar jao." He takes a deep breath.

" Kabir all the best beta "he patted his back. He smiles & place his hand on Ananya's head " accha beti main chalta hoon"

" papa kya aap kabhi ghar Nahi aayenge ? I miss u papa? " her eyes is now teary. She hugs Sudhir Ji

Sudhir Ji

avoid her question. "Beta Ab such me late ho rahi hain. Tu to janti hain na late Jana Nita ko pasand nahi."

Kabir notice this & thought "aaisa kya hua hoga Jo uncle auntie se itna pyar karne ke baad bhi ghar nahi jana chahate ?"


Kashyap house




" Armaan maine Ananya ko s subhe se dekh nahi rahi hu kahi gayi hain kya ? " Anita Ji said in concern

" Hain mumma wo papa ke pass gayi hain Romi ko bhi to yehaan me aayegi " Armaan absent mindedly bol dia .

" kya !! ? Sudhir se milwane ke lie Romi ko us basti me me gayi? a startled Anita Ji said.

Armaan bite his lips. He can't hide anything from his mother.
" Ahh hain mumma wo ..."

That time a car is parked in front of their house. Armaan looks this from the window. " mumma angle aa gayi Romi bhi saath hain.main
ja raha hu. "

Kabir & Ananya gets out of that car. He looks at Ananya , she assures him & hold his hand in her hand. Kabir give her a questioning look

" what ? Kabir u hum lovers hain to aaishi jana hain .Nahi to mumma ko shock ho jayegi. Ab chale ? I hope sab thik hoga."


Kabir nodded in yes . He is not ok & feeling some unknown pain. He knows this particular house is his little sisters ' mother in laws ' house. He is quite a beat nervous. He cursed himself " pahele maine Kqun pata nahi lagaya . Damn it. Agar meri vaja se meri princess ko kuch problem ho gaya to... nahi nahi hay vagwan meri vaja se pahelehi bahut kuch ho chuka hain ab or nahi. Please help me God."He closes his eyes with tremendous pain.

" kya hua Kabir chalo ?" She pulls him. She notice his paining look . She think
" ab isse kya hua kuch der pahele tak to thik hi tha.Humm shayed nervous hoga. Par iski aankhon me itni dard kqun ? kqun mujhe uski dard itni takleef de rahi hain? Kqun main use aaise nahi dekh sakti?"
Armaan notice this . He come downstairs to receive them. He smiles seeing his sisters state. He said to himself " to Romi aa gaya. Wow he is so good. I liked her choice .lakin Anu to kahe rahi thi ki Romi nahi hain. Lagta hain aa gaya .or waise bhi meri angle ki baattien to sabko manna padta hain.



" Ananya chal na . Romi please come in. Well tum to mujhe jante hi ho , maine to baat bhi kia tha tumse.Hii main hu Armaan . "He forward his hand


Kabir is now full of emotions His eyes welled up with tears. Because he is going to meet his sister's future husband. He controls his emotions & forwarded his hand. They shakes hands.


In her room Anitaji is awaiting. When they entered her room she is half laying & reading a file.

" Mumma this is Romi. " Romi andar aao na." She pull his hand .

Kabir entered her room. He take a glance casually. Then touching Anita ji's feet.


Anita Ji is impressed " Romi please seat down. "
She gueture him to seat beside her .

" Tum Ananya ko kabse jante ho? Tumhari families ko pata hain Ananya ke bare me ? "

" Ji auntie Ji piche 6 mahine se
Wo hum dono hi ek music show par mile the . Phir dhire dhire Ananya mujhe aachhi lagne lagi to..."
He stopped & take a look at Ananya. Or auntie nahi maine abhi tak gharme Ananya ke bare me nahi ki . socha pahele aap se milke baat karlu. "Ananya silently nodded its ok.


" Romi maine sun rahi hu tum Jada time abroad me hi rahete ho to future me wohi settle ho rahe ho kya? To tumhari future plan kya hain? "


Kabir is swating . Because Ananya hasn't told him about this.
" oh auntie in future..."


Ananya knows Kabir doesn't answer this questions. She stand behind her mother.
" tum bhi ajeeb ho Romi abhi to tum bata rahe the ki hum abhi nahi kuch din baad abroad settle hinge. Tab tak tum yahhan ka cum clear kar loge."


Kabir smiles " hain auntie humne aahi socha hain. Waise bhi dad ke baad mujhe hi to sambhalna hain."


" Accha Romi jab tum itni badi empire chalte ho to tumhe to koi renowned soliciter farm ki jarurat padti hain na ? To koun si company ko tumne higher kia hain?

Kabir has no idea how to answer this question? " wo auntie ..."


Ananya intervains again" uf ho Romi tumeh to kuch bhi yaad Nahi raheta. ma wo jo Bajaj & company hain na wohi farm dekhte hain."


Armaan who is silently observe this convo. Finally said." Are bah gudiyaan tujhe to sab kuch pata hain. Wo bhi Romi se Jada.Good very good.


" Ha Armaan kuch Jada hi .Romi tum Anu ko apni P.A. Kqun nahi rakh lete." She said suspiciously.
" waise Romi tumhari ek company Mumbai shift ho raha hain kya? " asked Anita ji

Kabir is totally drumstruck. He knows nothing about this questions. He feels restless. He try to thought a reasonable answer

Ananya once again save him " Ab kya yeh bhi main batau Romi ."
All eyes look at her, but one pair is suspicious. " Are tumhari ko Jo hotel.."

Kabir understand this " yes auntie humari company ko ek naya hotel banane ki contract mila hain. Using silsile me ek office uha shift kia gaya."
Then he & Armaan busy in businesses talk.
Ananya is silent. She knows kabir's background She can't understand where he get this businesses idea ? The way he advice Armaan is truly magical. The One who never in businesses can't get this idea.

Armaan is very impressed & Anitaji also. " Romi tum ab rahete kaha ho? Tumari house ki to renovation chal rahi hain na ? " Anitaji said casually.

" wo Jo M. G. road ke pass chawl hain na wohi." Kabir said casually& then bite his lips.
Ananya gritted her teeth.

" Kya chawl me ???" Armaan said

Ananya said hurriedly " Nahi Nahi bhaiyya . chawl ke pass me hi. " she give a hard look to Kabir.

Anitaji notice this " Ananya yeh kya ab tum ghar ki manners bhul rahi ho ?"

" Kqun mumma ? "
" Romi kab se aaye hain tumne coffee ya tea kuch nahi pucha . Romi kya loge beta tea ya coffee?"

" Ji auntie Ji coffee black coffee without sugar. Auntie Ji ek baat puchu ?" He hasitated
" ha beta pucho na " she said curiously.
" Auntie Ananya bata rahi thi aap ki tabiyat kuch thik nahi raheti .kya hua hain? Dr kya bol rahe hain? "
Ananya's heart is swells. Her eyes filled with tears.
" Ananya tum abtak gayi nahi .Maine kanta kaki KO bol dia hain."
" Anu yeh kya tarika hain .jao or khud le kar aao." She said in displeased.
Ananya didn't wants to go. She wants to stay here. Because she thought if her mother realized that he is not Romi. She hurriedly placed some snacks & coffee on a tray & entered.

She served coffee Armaan & Romi aka Kabir & tea for her mother. Armaan & Kabir are busy talking something.

That time Anitaji thinking deeply." Romi tum music me interested ho na to tumhe guiter play karna aata hain ? Agar aata hain to ek gana bhi suna do ."
That time he bite a pakoda, listening this he coughs heavily. Ananya patted his back & drink him a glass of water. She is helpless. She murmurs "oh God please help me . Kabir ko mumma se bachalo."
After a while Kabir says " well auntie main gana ga to let a hu par Ananya jitni aachi nahi . phir bhi agar aap insist kar rahi hain to
He notice left side of her bed a guiter is placed. He brings that & play a tune.


" Nagme hain, Shikwe hain
Kisse hain , battien hain.
Battien bhul jate yaadein
Yaad aati hain.
Yeh yaadein kisi
dil- o - janam ke chale
Jaane ke baad aati hain.
Yeh jeevan diljani
Dariya ka hain paani
Panni to bahe Jaye
Baki kya rahe Jaye
Yeddain yeddain yeddain."

Everyone listing his sweet melodious voice almost spellbound. His voice create a magic .Anitaji can't control her tears . Ananya is stunned. She learns music . She knows now Kabir also learns music. Because without learning noboby is master of music. Yes definitely he is the master.
Song is now end. Anitaji who was bedridden now gets up & hold Kabir aka Romi' s hand. " Tum business field me Kqun aaye beta tumhe to music me Jana chahiye tha."
Kabir simply ignore it & smiles
" Auntie raat ho chuka hain . kya main ab ghar chal sakta hu. Ap thoda rest kar ligie."

" its OK beta . Main rest kar lungi.lakin Ab jab Jan pahechan ho hi gayi hain to tum yehaan aayte rehena. Ananya ke saath hi nahi usne bina bhi aa sakte ho."

" Yes Romi tumse mile bahut accha laga. Kya voice hain tumhari. OK let's be friends. " They hugged.

" yeh Armaan mujhe bhi bahut accha laga. Thanks " He control himself .

" Mumma Romi car ke kar Nahi aaya to main use chod ke aati hu."
She chided. Because Anitaji told him that he comes here without her.
In car

Ananya is driving. " Kabir tumne gana kaha se shikha ?"
Kabir knows she asked him that question. So he is ready for it " madam hum jaise chawlwalo ke pass gana shikhne ka time kaha hain? Wo to pass me hi ek music school hain jaha bacche shikhte hain to main kabhi kabhi chala jata hu."
Ananya know he is hide something. She is more irritated.
She said to herself "mujhe idiot samajta hain kya? Kabhi kabhi Jane se koi master Nahi hota. Kashyap main bhi Kabir se gana shikh pati."

"Waise Madam aap kuch bol Nahi rahi kaisi lagi meri acting ? " he asked curiously.

" bahut hi ghatia , tume to kuch bhi nahi aata . wo to main thi jisne tumhe banchayi , varna aaj tum to sab gadbad kar hi die the."

Kabir is in anger " wo madam break maro. Mujhe training tumne di thi. Or mujhe kya pata tha ki auntie Ji aaise sawal karnengi. Tumhari ma hain tum khud Nahi janti. "

"Kabir tum bahut ajeeb ho. Tumne yeh Kqun kaha tumahara ghar chawl me hain. Mumma to tumhe pakad hi li thi." She said in anger.

" Ajeeb !! madam ajeeb to tum ho, or kya galat kaha mera ghar to chawl me hi hain na. Ab mujhe kya pata wo tumhari Romi kaha shift ho rahe hain. Aap ne thodi na kuch bataya tha."

She is now very angry ",aacha Mumma ne jab kaha tum mere bina hi aa sakte ho tum man Kqun gaye ? Kya matlab hain tumhara?"

Kabir is hurt. He clearly understand what she mean. His eyes turned red in fury. He clench his fist to try to clam him down.

Ananya didn't notice that . His silence somehow itcehes her . " Tumne jawab Nahi dia."

Kabir's anger now unbearable he said " kya kahu madam jab aap Jan hi gayi hain ki mera kuch matlab hain to kahene ya na kahene se thodi na kuch badal jayega. Dekhiye main janta hu aap mujhe pasand nahi karte . waise sahi bhi hain. Aap bade log hum jaise chawlwalo ko aaisa hi samajte hain. Koi baat nahi main aapki soch ko badal to nahi sakta par itna jarur kar sakta hu.Aaj ke baad main aapke same kabhi bhi nahi aauga. Or ha gadi rok digie mujhe sahi utarna hain. Aapki ye kapde kal aapko mil jayenge. "
Ananya is startled . she don't expect this from Kabir. She said casually .Her intention is not bad.
But listening his word she is now angry. " how dare u Kabir? Tumne aaisa .. .. U are just disgusting. " serf or serf papa ki vaja se maine tumhe ..."

Kabir smiles sadly " ha serf uncle ki vaja se . unhone mujhe ek kum dia tha Jo maine kar dia . Ab by by . Ek aur baat madam yeh jaga kuch thik nahi hain or raat bhi ho gaye hain to aap jaldi se nikal jayyie."
He walks away .



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Haii all dear friends this is the end of 5th part. Please keep commenting & stay with me.


Thank u.










Edited by Agnishikha007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii
dear,
This time I the first one.
Exlent dear,
Nice so nice
I really liked this part.
So Anita ji is impressed .
Good going . but at last Kabir & Ananya face off.
Oh Ananya is so nav.

Hay thanks for the pm.

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