We Fall in Love Only Once (A SaJan FF) Chapter 10 Pg 36

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irani-sanaya

@irani-sanaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Finally chapter 2.Superb update.
Loved it.cant wait to read the next part.update soon

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Anu Nair

@Capricious_Girl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Awsumm update😃

Questions that came to my mind.

Did Gunjan had/have feelings for Samrat??

Did she left him only bcoz of Sheena's insecurities??

Do Nupur know?? Or Is Gunjan hiding the same that Nupur thinks??

Just asking...eager to know😆

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._Jyoti_.

@._Jyoti_.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

thanks for pm awesome chapter

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Alina Malik

@AlooMatar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Loved the happy reunion. The Bhusban girls are so much fun when they all get along. Thanks for the PM

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Ain

@OnepoundChic

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

That was lovely and now its getting intriguing. The way you have written Dia and Nupur's lines,i could imagine them saying all that in their particular style and accent. I hope Gunjan is missing Samrat.Keep up the good work.

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Hi Shrushti,

Apologize for the delay. 😳

Chapter 1

What a lovely shift from the prologue! Not did only their personalities change, they now get to value each other even more. So it holds true that absence makes the heart grow fonder! I liked how you described the timeline, so little yet so much said.

How is Gunjan still confident that Sheena is a part of Samrat's life? Chapter 2 might help satisfy my curiousity.

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Chapter 2 is refreshing, Shrushti. Not just Samrat and Gunjan, Dia has changed as well. Bhusan sister's together, that is a nice twist. Is Mumbai's traffic that bad? Where does Mayank work?

Gunjan was in New York, wohooo! The trio in the vehicle didn't waste a single second and caught up, that was an amazing ride. Back at home, so Gunjan heard everything Dia said, did she try contacting Samrat?

The surprise - Samrat is going to be tricked to be at the pub. Is Sheena going to be there as well? Gunjan just obliged to go. I feel like I misinterpreted something here. 😳

Please have a few people shaking a leg in Chapter 3.

Last but not the least, don't worry about the chapter length, as far as the plot thickens all is good.

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Hey. Just now read both the parts. Your writing style is really awesome. Loved both the parts. So gunjan is back and she is a bit lost. I wonder what exactly is cooking between dia and nupur. Poor uday as always is a scrap goat for all. Waiting for next update dear.