We Fall in Love Only Once (A SaJan FF) Chapter 10 Pg 36

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Srushti

@cynical_g

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

(Picture/Banner Courtesy- ImmortalLove)

Hi. I intend to share a story, which is based on the show Miley Jab Hum Tum, but with a little twist. It is the first time I am trying my hand at writing a fiction. Hope you like it. Do reply.

The CS is -

1. Gunjan Bhushan

Soft-spoken yet confident woman of today's age. A thorough professional, who wants to live up to her dad's expectations. Much wiser with words and experience, in contrast to her energetic elder sister, Nupur. A strong personality in a nutshell. One among the toppers of her college, she works as a project manager in an MNC. Currently, she lives in NYC.

2. Samrat Shergill

Sole heir to the Shergill Group of Companies. Arrogant yet quite matured in his dealings. Highly materialistic and has no concern for anyone's feelings. Lives with his parents and younger sister, Suhani. A thorough workaholic, doesn't have time for anyone. Currently, he resides in Mumbai.

3. Nupur Bhushan

A chirpy, bubbly girl. Elder sister of Gunjan and Mayank's fiancee. Highly protective of her near and dear, specially her baby sister. A worshipper of Raj/SRK of DDLJ. Often gets irritated with Mayank's seriousness. Lives with her uncle and her two cousins, Dia and Uday.

4. Mayank Sharma

A serious kind of guy with a sense of responsibilities towards his mother. Nupur's fiance. One among the toppers of his college, he works as a manager in a marketing firm.

5. Dia Bhushan

Former college diva turned into fashion designer. Nupur and Gunjan's cousin. Uday's sister. A highly desirable woman from outside, but inside her lives a simple, sweet girl as well. Cares about her siblings and friends. Currently, she is dating Benji.

6. Benjamin Swami aka Benji

Samrat's best friend and Dia's boyfriend. A simple, fun-loving guy. Handles his family business.

7. Uday Bhushan

Rich brat yet a sweet-natured, simpleton. Can be a bit cranky at times, hence nicknamed as Dodo. A complete foodie, he runs a catering business and is quite contented with it. Doesn't want to join his dad's business. Loves all his sisters.

All 7 characters mentioned above are the alumni of Excel college, Mumbai.

Other characters may appear later.

INDEX

Character sketch Pg 01

Prologue Pg 01

Chapter 1 Pg 02

Chapter 2 Pg 04

Chapter 3 Pg 07

Chapter 4 Pg 13

Chapter 5 Pg 18

Chapter 6 Pg 20

Chapter 7 Pg 25

Chapter 8 Pg 27

Chapter 9 Pg 32

Chapter 10 Pg 36

Edited by Srushti97 - 8 years ago

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Srushti

@cynical_g

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Posting the prologue here. Do tell me how it is.

Prologue

A 20-something girl was heading towards the departure area of the Chhatrapati Shivaji International Airport. She had worn a simple pink salwar suit. She looked wan, with the pallor on her face further enhanced by her flawless, porcelain-white skin. Her hazel eyes, hidden by those half-rimmed spectacles, had tears welling up in them. She had not tied her long hair, which came down till her forearms, pencil-straight, jet-black coloured.

"Chashmish. Chashmish. Wait, you can't leave me like this."

She heard him calling her. But she won't stay back, she decided. She has to leave. She made her way towards the terminal. It was her boarding time already.

"Chashmish, please. Why do you have to go? I know why you are leaving. On top of that leaving me? Why, Chashmish? You can't bear Sheena's insecurities, right? But I assure you that won't be an issue at all. Why aren't you listening to me? Chashmish, you have to answer me." He was barking like a mad dog.

She didn't dare turn back once, lest she will lose her control. She was already teary-eyed and didn't want to show them. To him. But he was also adamant.

"Answer me, Chashmish," he roared.

She turned back this time. He was crying, she noticed. He couldn't bear it any further. He went near her and held her tight in his arms. She too let her unshed tears on his shoulders. But she has to move on. And he has to live with this.

"My answer will be the same ... You have to understand my compulsions. I am leaving for my further studies ... Bauji wants me to achieve something in my life ... Please let me go with a smile, not a sad face ... Please." She pleaded and let go of his arms that held her tight.

He saw her going away from himself. He was broken. Alone. Totally. His friends were there for him but his best friend was gone. Perhaps, never to return.

She went ahead towards her destination, leaving behind millions of memories.

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Deepthi

@Beauceant

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Srushti, nice beginning! Waiting for more. Story starts a while after the original show I guess. I like the strong Gunjan.

One suggestion- in the title add which show or couple the FF is based on. Like if u intend to include entire MJHT cast- mention MJHT FF or if its a Samrat Gunjan story mainly, you can add Samrat Gunjan FF or SaJan as the jodi name goes. Helps people identify it.😊

Edit- Were you planning to reserve the first page posts? I didnt think of it..

Edited by -Deepthi- - 8 years ago

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Srushti

@cynical_g

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Deepthi-

Hey Srushti, nice beginning! Waiting for more. Story starts a while after the original show I guess. I like the strong Gunjan.

One suggestion- in the title add which show or couple the FF is based on. Like if u intend to include entire MJHT cast- mention MJHT FF or if its a Samrat Gunjan story mainly, you can add Samrat Gunjan FF or SaJan as the jodi name goes. Helps people identify it.😊

Edit- Were you planning to reserve the first page posts? I didnt think of it..

Deepthi Di

You liked it. I am glad. Yes, you have guessed it right, the story starts a while after the original story, since I have said earlier that there is a twist.

I will edit the title as suggested by you.

Well no, I don't have any plan to reserve the first page posts.

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Hey guys,

Thanks Deepti for putting out the question. It feels nice to be the on the first page. 😊

Shrushti, that is a wonderful start. Why is Samrat second guessing himself - Chasmish is still a best friend? I like how strong-willed she is at this point, asking him to smile.

Waiting for Chapter 1. Wonder how Sheena will react when she comes to know he rushed to the airport earlier. I am guessing she would have a larger role to play, will make him realize how important Chasmish is.

Oh I forgot to mention, that was a lovely intro of the characters. I am sure the twist will leave us all wanting for more.

Best wishes on this new venture,

Zeffy

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Ain

@OnepoundChic

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

i will always give my opinion as i get time. Lovely start Srush.

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BillyJean.

@BillyJean.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Great start Srushti! Waiting for next

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Srushti

@cynical_g

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

@Anisha Di

Thank you so much for finding it likeable. Will update asap. Am still working on it.

@Zeffy Di

Ah, you liked Gunjan here. Thank you. Well, Sheena's character is still under wraps. I will say only this- You are in for a surprise. Also, thanks for liking the CS, 'coz that's the one which seemed tough for me to write.

@OnepoundChic

I am eagerly awaiting your opinion. Hope you liked it.

@shonasandy

Thank you for liking it.

@neel11

Never seen you before though, yet a big thank you for finding this and liking it, 'coz you are the first of this kind.

One request to all.

If you know any SaJanian/MoNayaholics, plz tell them about this FF, as I don't know most of them. People have stopped writing about this show, particularly this couple. Fans have also moved on to other shows. Plz let them know once, so that they can read it, if they wish to.