We Fall in Love Only Once (A SaJan FF) Chapter 10 Pg 36

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi Srushti,

Wow, that's a lot of members! Thank you for the PM, hope your following increases more after this fantastic update. Love the pace it is such a treat.

Ranvijay at RG's, what a twist! Guess all the readers had the same shocked expression as Gunjan's.

I love how you have retained the character traits, yet there is a certain charm of your own added and makes them even more amazing. Diya's 'doll' and Nupur's 'By God' are one a kind.

Benji is back, what a lovely comeback. Dia and Benji have realized their importance for each other in their lives, now it is Sajan's turn.

Sheena and Ranvijay - They are kind of made for each other in a way, maybe found something common that they like/dislike. Will they become a part of the gang, time will tell.

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Thanks for the pm. Very nice update. Now gunjan knows that samrat brokeup with sheena and he has stopped smiling. I know that our chashmish will bring his lost happiness in him. Waiting for sajan's meet after such a long time. U can call me khushi. I am new to mjht forum and this is my first story that i am reading here. Well i love mjht and big fan of all the characters in it.

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DellzPM

@DellzPM

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Prologue and CS i quite interesting

Prologue tells me that Gunjan is leaving Samrat and going.Samrat trying and stopping her but she is isn't listening

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DellzPM

@DellzPM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Chapter 1

It was a beautiful start where Samrat was insisting Gunjan for her help ,but finally she had to .love the intro of Samrat beautifully defined.Loved the leap where Gunjan is come back and she is not at all afraid and she is became bold and she has taken her flight to come back to meet all of them .She is happy for him though .

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DellzPM

@DellzPM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Chapter 2

Loved Nupur and Dia conversation it's so sisterly and friendly talk regarding Nupur being dressed within 5 min.Gunjan was waiting for Nupur and Dia and finally they came ,they began gossiping,but Gunjan eyes for searching for Samrat but she hid her feelings and Nupur noticed it.As usual Nupur and her DDLJ crazy randomness ,selfie and all .Uday and Dia so cute ,loved it so nice.Nupur wants to know what's the reason by Gunjan hiding something,her feelings.They all are planning to go out nice.Loved it.

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DellzPM

@DellzPM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Chapter 3

They all went to RJ,and all were busy dancing with thier partners,suprised to see Sheena with Ranvijay who was once Dia's bf.Shocking that she ditched Samrat,everything got revealed.Sammy was really hurt,and he didn't have his best friend with him,his chasmish.Gunjan knows abt this mow I hope she will be able to bring back his smile and make him fall for her.The person who cut off the world and is all to himself . Interesting and waiting fot the next part.