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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _RagNaMyLove_

lovely update n thnx for pm

Thanks Jiya
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Posted: 9 years ago
Guys I hereby Introduce 2 new characters in the story :

Dutta Patil : He is a trusted informer of Anika & deals with all the field work. He respects Anika a lot as he knows her way of working & nature.




Dr. Omesh Mishra: Husband of Adya. He is from Pune and a good doctor, a gem of a person & a loving husband loves to irritate his wife Adya all the time







Hope you all will like it 😊









Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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superb update yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

superb update yaar
thanks for pm
loved it soo much


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago


PART 5 A


Anika said with a sigh "Adya main Anika bol rahi hoon ... tum papa ki chinta mat karo wo theek hai aur Yog ne tumhe message kab kiya tha?"

Adya replied "kal kiya tha ... unhone bataya mujhe ki papa ko heart stroke aaya hai ... kya aap aur Maa mujhe ek call nahi kar sakte the?"

Anika said "Adya tum apna trip enjoy karo ... aur humne isliye nahi bataya kitum bevajah pareshaan ho jaaogi yaha Yog hai aur bhi kaabil doctors hai tum Papa ke liye bilkul tension mat loo"

Adya said "Jaanti hoon Maa to shuru se aisi hi thi par aap kyu aise ho gaye ho di ... aur main bhi Papa ki beti hoon kya mujhe ab unke khayaal rakhne ka haqq nahi hai ...

Main Mumbai Airport pe hoon aur agle 3 ghante main Nagpur paunch rahi hoon aapke paas aapse kuch zaroori baat bhi karni hai" with that she disconnected the call.

Anika sighed & put his cell back when Yog came back after having a shower & asked "Kiska call tha phone baj raha tha?"

Anika said "Adya ki call thi ... Yog aapko use nahi batana chahiye tha wo apne pati ke saath bahar gayi thi aur trip cancel karke yaha aa gayi hai"

Yog said "to kya hua bataya ... main jaanta hoon ki tumhe accha nahi laga par is waqt uncle ki tabiyat stress ki vajah se bigdi hai wo jab tum dono ko apne paas dekhenge to unhe tassali hogi aur wo jaldi theek hoonge ...

Aur rahi ghoomne ki baat to main sooch raha hoon next month Raghav bhoomi tum main aur Adya aur Om hum sab saath chale Mauritius ghoomne tab tak research ka kaam bhi khatam ho jaayega"

Anika said with surprise "Kya! Par hum ..."

Yog said cutting her short "main nikal raha hoon deer ho rahi hai tum apni medicines time pe lena ... bye" with that he move out of the house.

After a while Anika completed some house hold work & prepared lunch when she heard a knock at the door she opened the door & saw Adya & along with her husband Dr. Omesh Mishra. Anika welcomed them inside & all three started to chat.

Om & Adya seemed to be quite comfortable with each other even Om didn't even hitched to go close to his wife in front of all & to Anika's surprise Om knew Adya likes & dislikes & many other things that to so quickly which meant that they knew each other before marriage too.

Om who was continuously teasing Anika & flirting with Adya irritated Adya a lot & she send him outside to meet his few friends after lunch.

Anika & Adya settled down & Anika said with a smile "mujhe bahut accha laga Adya kitum loog aaye ... jo hua uske baad mujhe lag raha tha shayad humare beech ab pehle waali baat nahi rahegi ... Om tumse bahut pyar karta hai bahut lucky hoo tum"

Adya said "Di Om ke pyar ki poochiye mat poora chipku hai inhe hamesha mere bagal main baithna hota hai ... aur tum aise kyu keh rahi hoo ... ek minute Yog Giju ne tumhe kuch nahi bataya?"

Anika asked perplexed "kya nahi bataya?"

Adya sighed & said "Aapko pata hai jab Yog Giju ghar aaye the to Maa ne kitna bada tamasha khada kiya tha"

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Anika speaks to his father regarding Yog & Adya's marriage Girish too agrees as Yog is from a very famous family & a loving person.

Here Yog had something else in his mind as after knowing Anika he started liking her even she saved his life too but after knowing Anika's heart he didn't said anything to her as it might hurt her lot he even agrees to meet Adya on her request.

Yog along with Janawaaz Jannat & his father Manohar reach Girish house. After their arrival Anika gets a call regarding emergency & she has to leave immediately. Yog & Adya were taken to Adya's room for talks.

Yog started with a hitch "Dekhiye Adya ji main nahi jaanta ki hume is waqt kya baat karni chahiye par main ek sach aapse kehna chahta tha maine kabhi apne life partner ke bare main detail main to nahi soocha par jo tasveer us sooch ke kareeb hai wo ..."

Adya said completing "meri nahi hai ... Thanks a lot" & takes a sigh of relief & adds "I am sorry maine aise bola par main kisi aur se pyar karti hoon ... Dr. Omesh Mishra mere senior hai"

Yog said with a smile "Great! main jaanta hoon unhe he is really a gem of a person par aapne ye baat kisi ko batayi kyu nahi ... is chakkar aapki aur meri parade karwaa di aapki di ne"

Adya smiles & says "main kya karoon ... mummy papa se aise keh nahi sakti aur di ka bas chale to meri shadi abhi karwaa de ... wo kabhi khud ke bare main nahi soochti ... aap mana kar deejiye keh deejiye ki main pasand nahi aayi ... aur aap bhi to kisi aur ko pasand karte haina kaun hai wo?"

Yog with a smile "Aapki Di"

Adya in excitement voiced in a bit louder tone "Kya! Aap di ko pasand karte hai?"

This was heard by Mamta who was passing by the room taking refreshments. Mamta next moment barged inside and in a annoyed tone "Accha yadi tumhe Anika pasand hai to meri beti ki zindigi kharaab karne kyu aaye hoo yaha ... Main jaanti hoon ye sab us Anika ne hi kiya hai ... wo meri beti ko kabhi sukhi nahi rehne degi"

Yog said tackling the situation "I am sorry Aunty par galti meri meri hai Anika ko kyu aap beech main laa rahi hai use kuch bhi pata nahi hai is bare main"

Mamta said irritated "haan haan wo to sacchayi ki putli hai ... saari galtiyaan to hum karte hai aur yadi tum Anika se pyar karte ho to use bataya kyu nahi ...

Main tumhe meri bacchi ki zindigi barbaad karne nahi doongi ... tumhare jaise bade gharo ke ladko ko ek kaafi nahi hoti ...aur pata nahi ye ladki humse kis janam ka badla le rahi hai akhir dikha hi diya sautelapan"

Adya in an annoyed tone said rebuking Mamta "Maa bas karo! aur koi bakwaas mat karna ... mana maine kiya hai Yog ji ko kyuki main kisi se pyar karti hoon aur Yog ji Anika di se pyar karte hai ab aap jaake ye baat sabko bahar sunayengi ya main jaau"

Hearing loud voices Manohar & Girish too came there & Yog explained the whole situation of Adya & said "Uncle Adya ki shadi aap ussi se kariye jise wo chahti hai aur main use jaanta bhi hoon ... aapki beti ne heera chuna hai"

Girish nodded & said "thanks beta! par ye sab aise ... mujhe maaf kar do beta mujhe ye sab karne se pehle Adya se pochna chahiye tha ... Main chahta tha ki app sab is ghar ka hissa bano par ... "

Manohar said cutting him short with a smile "wo to hum abhi ban sakte hai main aapse Yog ke liye Anika ka haath maangta hoon ... Yog ke liye Anika mujhe pehle se pasand thi aur mujhe Yog ne ye abhi kaha ki wo bhi Anika ko pasand karta hai ... ab bas aapki haan chahiye"

Girish said astonished "Par Anika ..."

Mamta replied stopping him "aap uski fikar na kare use main mana loongi"

All went back home giving & small Gold chain & pendent as a first Shagun for Anika.

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Anika was completely stunned after what Adya narrated her & said "kya! Par unhone mujhe kuch nahi bataya maine unse kayi baar poocha ki is shadi ke peeche kya vajah hai ... hamesha ye keh ke taal gaye ki sahi waqt aane pe batayenge ... maine bhi pata nahi unse kya kya keh diya gusse main"

Adya said apologetically "I am sorry di mujhe khud aapko batana chahiye tha par wo sab sunte hi aapko shock main dekhkr meri himmat nahi hui aur mujhe laga tha ki Giju sambhaal leenge aur yadi wo aapse pyar karte hai to izhaar bhi unhe hi karna chahiye ...

Main maanti hoon ki ye sab achanak hua hai aapke saath par sab haalat ki vajah se aur Maa ki vajah se hua usme Giju ka koi kasoor nahi hai ... Mujhe Giju se bhi sorry kehna tha ... aap please meri taraf se unhe sorry kahiyega"

Anika with teary eyes said "haan! teri taraf se sorry to bol doongi unhe par shayad main unse aaj ke baad kabhi nazrein nahi mila paaungi kya kuch nahi kaha unko maine ...

Par Yog ne kabhi bura nahi maana ulta Papa ke liye kitna kuch kiya jab abhi unhe stroke aaya tha tab se rooz milne jaate hai unse ... maine bahut badi galti ki hai unka bahut dil dukhaya hai maine Adya"

Adya smiled & said "Di aap pareshaan mat hoo Giju jaante hai ki aapko kaise laga hoga achanak ye sab sunke aur shayad wo aapko thoda time dena chahte ki aap pehle normal ho jaaye"

Anika said wiping her wet cheeks "Aaj unke aate hi main unse baat karungi"

Adya smile at her sister & after a while both Adya & Om went to Girsh to check his health & Girish was happy to see them & contended too even his health had improved a lot under the care of Yog & his suggested Medical specialist.













SCROLL DOWN PART 5 B 😊


Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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PART 5 B

Adya & Om who were worried about Girish's health felt contended after meeting him and Adya was mentally relaxed now as she had a guilt feeling after seeing Anika's reaction & was scared too about the blunder she did by not telling her the complete situation before.

After meeting Girish Om & Adya went back to Pune home town of Om. Here Anika was really feeling bad after what Adya had told her, she had been rude and indifferent to him but he always reciprocated this with his affection & dealt her anger with maturity.

It was evening time & Anika was waiting for him impatiently after a while she hears a knock at the door & opens it the very next moment. Yog enters the house with a smile & greets her saying "Hi!" & then looking at her dull face added "kya hua aisi shakal kyu bana rakhi hai ... rooz waala excitement miss kar rahi thi kya?"

Anika smiles lightly & replied "kuch nahi hua ... main aapke liye chai laati hoon"

Yog sensed something different today she was not normal anxiety was evident from her face & her eyes were also filled with a deep guilt feeling. His chain of thoughts was broken by Anika's entry who was holding a tray having tea & some snacks.

Yog freshen up quickly & changed into something comfortable & started to sip his tea. Anika was unusually silent & was thinking how to start & what to say to him. She was trying her best to start the conversation but words seemed to betray her.

Yog said looking into her eyes "Anika kya baat hai! itni pareshaan kyu hoo?"

Anika said looking away "kuch nahi hua Yog! kuch kehna tha aapse par samajh main nahi aa raha main kaise kahu"

Yog said with a smile "mujhse kuch bhi kehne ke liye tumhe itna soochne ki zaroorat to nahi hai ... tumhe jo kehna hai khul ke kaho"

Anika said with tear filled eyes "Yog! Maine jo galti ki hai maafi uske liye bahut choti pad jaayegi ...maine aapka bahut dil dukhaya hai kya kuch ulta seeedha nahi kaha aapse aur aapne papa ke liye aur Adya ke liye itna kuch kiya ... yadi Adya mujhe nahi batati to aap bhi mujhe nahi batate"

Yog said in bit shocked voice "Adya yaha aayi thi?"

Anika nodded in positive & said "haan! usne sab bataya mujhe ... Choti Maa ne kaise aapka apmaan kiya tha ... ye bhi ki wo Om se bahut pyar karti thi itna sab kuch kyu chupaya aapne ... ek baar keh to diya hota aapme se kisi ne main ye sab usi waqt rook deti"

Yog said calming her "Anika relax! Aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya hai tumne ki itna guilty feel karo ... to be honest main kehna chahta tha tumse sab par tumhare isi reaction ka darr tha mujhe jab shadi waali raat tumhe panic attack aaya tha tab main tumhe leke thoda aur darr gaya aur soocha jab Adya aur Om waapis aayenge to hum sab tassali se tumhe samjhaayenge"

Anika said in a frustrated tone "samajhne ke liye kya bacha hai ab ... aaj saara sach jaane ke baad mujhe lag raha hai jaise main khud ki nazron gir gayi hoon ... aapne bahut chota bana diya mujhe Yog" with that she broke down on her knees & started weeping hysterically.

Yog pulled Anika in his embrace & said consoling her "please Anika kya kar rahi hoo! Shant ho jaao ... tumne kuch galat nahi kiya jiski vajah se itna guilty feel karo ..."

He then added in a flared up tone holding her shoulders tightly "aur main ye baat tumhe kayi baar keh chuka hoon aur aaj fir se kehta hoon ki main tumse pyar karta hoon aur tumse hi shadi karna chahta tha ...

aur rahi kehne ki baat to Adya ki baat tumne kithi aur uske baad maine tumse kuch kehna theek nahi samjha ... shayad mere pyar main hi kami hogi ki main ab tak tumhe mere pyar ka yakeen nahi dila paaya ...

Par tumhe mere pyar ko ehsaan ka naam dekar uska apmaan karne ka haqq nahi hai ... aur aaj tumahri baat sunke mujhe itna yakeen ho gaya ki shayad maine aise insaan se pyar kiya jisme pyar ko samjhne ki kaabliyat nahi hai" with that he marched out of the room in anger leaving stunned Anika behind.

Anika was stunned with the range she saw today in his eyes she has seen him as calm composed person, but today for the first time he lost his temper on her which made her scared as she was about to apologize for misunderstanding but in the process ended up hurting him.

Anika took a deep breath & composed herself after a few minutes she went to his room & found him looking out from the window lost in his own thoughts. There was tinge of pain in his eyes which Anika hated to see. She placed a palm on his shoulders calling him gently "Yog!"

Yog in a stern voice replied "Anika please! Is waqt yaha se chali jaao main kuch aisa nahi karna chahta jisse mujhe baad main pachtaava hoo ...

aur is waqt main kuch bhi sunne ya samajhne ki haalat main nahi hoon tumhe jo kehna hai hum baad main baat karenge"

Anika said "Yog I am sorry! Main jaanti hoon is waqt aap bahut gusse main hai jaise main us waqt thi jab humari shadi hui thi par mera irada aapko chot pauchaane ka ya aapke pyar ka apmaan karne ka nahi tha ... main sirf ye keh rahi thi ki sach jaane ke baad mujhe ehsaas hua ki main kitni galat thi ...

Aap sahi kehte hai shayad mujhme kisi ke pyar ko samajhne ki kaabliyat nahi hai tabhi to main aapko samajh nahi paayi ...par main kya karoon meri zindigi main shayad bhagwaan ko pyar manzoor nahi hai ... mera guilt aapka dil dukhane ka tha mere ghar main hue aapke apmaan ka tha jise shayad main rook sakti thi par nahi paayi"

She wiped her teary eyes & joined her hands saying "maine pehle hi aapka bahut dil dukhaya hai ... ho sake to mujhe maaf kar deejiyega bas itna hi kehna tha aapse"

She turned to leave the room when Yog held her wrist & with a deep sigh voiced "I am sorry main shayad zayada bol gaya par..."

Anika said cutting her short "Please Yog! aap sorry mat boliye galti meri hai ... aur kuch un haalato ki jinme humari shadi hui aapne to bas unko sambhaalne ki koshish ki"

Yog had calmed himself after her apology & said "Jo hua so hua ... par please Anika aaj ke baad ye maafi, ehsaan aise shabd hum humare beech nahi aane denge ...

Main jaanta hoon ki shayad tumhe mere pyar pe yakeen nahi hai aur jis tarah ki zindigi tumne jee hai usme ye bilkul natural hai ... mujhe koi shikayat nahi hai tumse ... par kam se kam ek sacche dost ki tarah yakeen to kar sakti hoo na mujhpe"

Anika replied "aapke pyar pe aur aapki dosti pe mujhe hamesha se yakeen tha Yog bas main achanak hui is shadi ki vajah jaanna chahti thi aur jab pata chala to main bardasht nahi kar paayi ...

Aap sahi kehte hai hume humare rishte ko thoda time dena chahiye acche dost ki tarah ek doosre ki pasand napasand, khushiya dukh aur zarooratain samajhne ki koshish karni chahiye ... aur main aapse vaada karti hoon aaj ke baad main kabhi ye sab beech main nahi laaungi ... hum ab se acche dosto ki tarah hi rahnge"

Yog smiled & voiced pulling her in a side hug "to fir chalo khana khilao bahut bhook lagi hai"

Anika smiled & said "aap haath dho ke aa jaayiye main khana lagati hoon"

She walked out of the room with a contended smile to arrange for dinner.

Yog thought "Anika ke saamne sach to aa gaya par kya hum kabhi ek normal pati patni ki tarah reh paayenge? ... wo mujhpe yakeen karti hai aur mujhe shayad uski taraf dheere dheere kadam badana chahiye tabhi sab normal ho payega ...

Par main aaj tak ye samajh nahi paaya ki uske mann main mere liye kya hai?" his trance was broken by Anika's call who was calling him for dinner.

Yog came out to the dinner table in thoughts & Anika asked looking at him "Yog! Kya baat hai aap kuch sooch rahe hai kya? ...

Aapko pata hai maine kal apne informer se baat kithi wo bhi pata lagane ki koshish kar raha hai ki aapke humle ke peeche kaun ho sakta hai par abhi tak kuch khaas information nahi mili jo kal garden main aaya tha uske baare main bhi nahi ... aapko kya lagta hai kaun ho sakta in sabke peeche"

Yog in a soft voice answered "Anika ek baat poochu? ... main hamesha kya soochta hoon kya feel karta hoon hamesha iske baare main hi baat kare ye zarooi nahi ...

Balki tum kya soochti hoo kya mehsoos karti hai mere liye ye jaana bhi utna hi zaroori hai ... batao na aaj main sirf tumhare mann ki baat sunna chahta hoon" Anika went completely mum after sudden question of her husband.












So how was it guys please drop in your comments as I write for you guys so please do let me know all your bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love you all


Regards Goldie 😊😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
and nice CS...
do continue soon...
thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vishakha..

awesome update...
and nice CS...
do continue soon...
thanx for pm


Thanks Vishakha 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally Anika knew the truth of shaadi
aww How sweet Yog is...
finally he asked her about her feeling
luv u dear Goldie
u r awesome
the superb mind blowing update dear
must say your story are very touchy to my heart
i always waited for your updates..its like a magnet
i used to of checking the ff to search may be u updated n forget or late in PMing me..
thanks alot for PM dear
lovely update
n eagerly waiting for next update
as u know my request continue it soon plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely Update Goldie. ⭐️
And I'm really really glad that Adya came up to Anika and all the misunderstandings were cleared. Cuz that was very much required for a strong base of Yog and Anika's relationship. 😊

Adya loved Omesh and I liked her honesty that she cleared her standing to Yog and also got to know that he likes her sister.⭐️ But Mamta!! 😡😡
She's such a pathetic woman, like a typical step mother blaming Anika for everything. Its only for women like her, that one has a bad impression for all the stepmother's in the universe.

But I loved how Adya silenced her, she really loves Anika and isn't like those typical step siblings.
Anika's guilt was gradual after listening to all of this.

And I loved their confrontation. ⭐️
Anika's breakdown in front of Yog was justified but her claims that he has made her too small in her eyes was too much for even me and Yog, But I'm so glad that
he eased out all her insecurities and guilts. I'm looking forward as to how their relationship shapes up.


Thanx For Pm.
Update Soon.

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