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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Awesome update..

Yog par kisne hamla kiya anika ko kuch bhi clue nahi mila..

Anika me accha maza chakhaya uss goon ko..

Dono bhi dheere dheere karib as rahe he..

Plz continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awesome update..

Yog par kisne hamla kiya anika ko kuch bhi clue nahi mila..

Anika me accha maza chakhaya uss goon ko..

Dono bhi dheere dheere karib as rahe he..

Plz continue soon

Thanks for pm

Thanks Sonu Dear
Glad you liked it
that Moti deserved that treatment from her
Yes slowly & gradually they will come close
Stay tuned & keep commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Thanks Halima 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84



PART 4 A

After a while when Anika realized that Yog is in deep sleep she opened her eyes and takes a deep sigh yes she was totally hassled after whatever she felt today. She for the first time felt weak from inside as she had lost control on herself she really stood like a puppet in his arms she didn't even retaliated to his touch.

How easily Yog had melted her every negative feeling that she had about this marriage, his soft subtle talks, his actions, his concern and his gentle commands weren't easy to ignore and today her surrender to his intoxicating touch has shaken her to the core.

Anika started thinking deeply "Ye kya ho raha mujhe ... kyu main Yog ke saamne kamzoor pad jaati hoon ... kyu nahi rook paayi main unhe kareeb aane se?"

Taking a deep sigh she changed her side and and her inner voice said to her "wo isliye ki tum bhi unse pyar karti hoo Anika ... tum sabse jhoot bol sakti hoo khud se nahi"

Anika muttered again in feeble voice "nahi! ye theek nahi hai"

Her inner conscious replied again "Kyu theek nahi hai? wo pati hai tumhare unhe tumhare paas aane ka tumhara khayaal rakhne ka tumpe haqq jatane ka poora adhikaar hai ...

kya tumhe accha nahi lagta jab wo tumhe support karte hai ... tumhari galti pe gussa karte hai ... rooth jaao to manate hai ... kya tum nahi chahti kitum dono isi tarah kareeb raho ...usi tarah jis tarah abhi the kaise moorat ki tarah khadi thi uki bahoo main ...

ye baat to tum jhotlaa nahi sakti ki Yog ek acche insaan hai aur kis baat ka gussa hai tumhe unpe ki unhone tumse shadi ki ... ya tumse ye nahi kaha ki wo tumse pyar karte hai ... ya fir tum unke mooh se sunna chahti thi ye baat ...

yaad rakho Anika Yog jaisa jeevan saathi bahut kam logo ko milta hai aur yadi tum unhe nahi apnaogi to wo tumhari badkismati hogi"

Anika opened her closed eyes & took a deep sigh she couldn't take the tiff going on between her heart & mind. She slummed back on her couch and started making unsuccessful attempts to sleep.

Next morning Yog and Anika went to their workplace at Yog's room Yog was in his wonderland thinking about yesterday night. Jannat enters with a coffee mug & says placing "Assalawaalekum Bhai jaan"

That broke his trance and he reciprocated with a smile and says "good morning Waalekumasslam"

Jannat said with a naughty smile "kya baat hai bhai jaan kaha khooye hue the?"

Yog said with a smile "kahi nahi bas kuch sooch raha tha ... shayad maine galti ki mujhe Anika ko usi waqt bata dena chhaiye tha ki mere mann main kya hai shayad tab itni complication nahi hoti"

Jannat said "accha hua ki aapne aisa nahi kiya warna jis emotional black mail ki wo shikaar hai usme wo aapko bhi fasa deti ... unhe waha ke mahool se kheech ke nikaalna zaroori tha aapko pata hai na jab aap unke ghar gaye the kaisi giri hui baate kithi Mamta ji ne"

Yog sighed & said "par Jannat uski khaamoshi se darr lag raha hai mujhe wo bilkul chup si ho gayi hai aisa lagta hai jaise khud se lad rahi hai ... aur jab wo bevajah khud ko takleef deti hai to mera mann karta ha sab kuch bata doon use"

Jannat said "Main jaanti hoon aapko ye sab accha nahi lag raha par jazbaat ki chot itni jaldi nahi bharti hai apko thoda sabra se kaam lena hoga"

Yog said "Haan jaanta hoon! par main kya karu mjhe samajh main nahi aa raha jaanti ho kal Anika ko bahut buri tarah chot lagi thi poori garadan pe nishaan the aur peeth se khoon bhi beh raha tha fir bhi kisi ko nahi bataya ... wo to accha hua maine dekh liya warna ghaav khule hi rehte"

Jaanat asked unsure "kuch kaha suni bhi hui kya?"

Yog said "nahi kuch nahi kaha bas ankh band karke aur mooh bana ke aise khadi ho gayi jaise main uska operation kar raha hoon wo bhi bina anesthesia ke"

Jannat smile widely & said "Bhai jaan aap bhi na..."

Yog said making a serious face "nahi main sahi keh raha hoon ... wo to mujhse aise bhaagti hai jaise Good Night se macchar"

Jannat said laughing "kyu bhai jaan abhi se itni kaifiyat hai paas jaane ke liye?"

Yog said irritated "aisi koi baat nahi hai ... par wo normal to behave kar sakti hai na"

Jannat said with a tinge of pain "normal kuch ho raha hai unke saath jo wo normal behave karengi? ... Girish uncle ko heart attack aap par humla ye shadi itna sab hone ke baad to koi bhi normal nahi rahega"

Yog replied "haan jaanta hoon ... bas ek baar Girish uncle theek ho jaaye aur Anika normal ho jaaye main baat karunga use"

Jaanat asked "aur us bande ka pata chala jisne humla kiya tha?"

Yog said with a smile "wo to poora cartoon tha ... koi choota moota jeb katra hai paise ke laalch main ye sab kiya"

Jannat asked in a stern voice "par ye paise use diye kisne bhai jaan? Aur kaun peche pada hai aapki jaan ke?"

Yog said "maloom nahi! par isse ek baat clear ho gayi hai ki Anika ko meri fikra hai ... jis tarah usne meri jaan bachayi usse itna to smaajh main aaya ki main poori tarah haara nahi hoon shayad uske dil main mere liye abhi bhi jagah hai"

Jannat said "aur jis din unhe poora sach maloom chalega wo bhi aapse utni hi mohobaat karengi jitni aap unse karte hai ... aur main aaj aap dono ke liye Allah se khaas dua karungi" Yog smiled & both disperse to their works.

Here at the office Anika firstly calls her trusted informer named Dutta. He came & greeted Anika saying "Madam ji aapne yaad kiya?"

Anika said "Haan baitho ek personal kaam hai Dutta I hope tum niraash nahi karoge ... tumhara network bahut accha hai isliye mujhe is bande ki khabar chahiye kaha jaate hai kya karte hai kis kis ke saath uthte baithe hai everything tumhe inka saaya banke rehna hai aur koi bhi gadbad ho mujhe turant batana hai"

Dutta nodded & looked at the picture with shocked expressions & said "Madam Dr Vasisht aapke pati ...inpe nazar rakhna hai kuch hua hai kya?"

Anika said with a sigh "Haan kal inpar attack hua hai ... jo inhe maarne aaya tha Ganpath wo humari hisrast main hai hawala ke zariye use 50 hazaar ki supaari di gayi thi advance main aur tum to jaante ho na ki ye sab kaun kaun kar sakta hai ...

Interestingly uske ghar ki talashi ke baad bhi paise nahi mile bas isliye tumhe inpe nazar rakhni hai aur pata karna hai ki ye kaun hai"

Dutta said "aap fikar mat karo madam main sab pata karta hoon aur mere rehte to sir ka koi kuch nahi bigaad paayega main apne sabse teez bande ko lagaunga kaam pe"

Anika with a light smile said "thanks Dutta ...aur kaam hoshiyaari se karna unhe pata na lage ki koi unka peecha kar raha hai aur unka mobile number bhi tracking pe daal dena taaki yadi koi dhamki jo wo ignore kar rahe hai hume pata chal sake"

Dutta nodded & started his work to dig all the details. He firstly concentrated on Ganpath as he was offered the money & according to him he had locked the cash in his Elmira which was missing now.

After half day Dutta called Anika & she received the call saying "Haan Dutta batao kya pata laga?"

Dutta said "Madam poora chakkar samajh main aagaya hai .. Ganpath ko hawala ke zariye jo paise mile the wo unhi loog ne waapis le liye ...


Ganpath ke hisab se usne paise almaari main rakhe the taala laga ke par aapko almaari khuli milthi ... maine pata kiya hai yaha ke bacche subah subah paas ke school jaate hai unhone ne kisi chehra dhake aadmi ko Ganpath ke ghar main ghuste dekha hai 6 din pehle bhi aur kal bhi"

Anika voiced surprise "kya! now tell me a good news Dautta ki tumhe pata hai ki wo chehra dhaka aadmi kaun hai?"

Dutta said with a sigh "nahi madam ye to pata nahi chala ... Ganpath to waise bhi akela hai uske ghar pe koi nahi rehta uski biwi aur uski beti to wapis chale gaye hai"

Anika sighed in defeat & said "Dutta pata karo ye ki naqaabposh kaun hai aur mujhe iske chehre se naqaab jaldi hatana hai"

Dutta said "ji Madam ho jaayega aur haan madam Yog Sir ka number tracking pe daal diya hai aur unko koi gadbad call nahi aaya maine purana list bhi check kiya saare number unke pechaan waalo ke hai"

Anika said "Theek hai pata lagte hi mujhe call karna" with that Anika disconnected the call.

After completing her work she went back home in thoughts. After a while Yog to enter the house & little later Anika arranged dinner & both had a quite dinner. After a tough day Anika started arranging the bed as she was bit tired & stressed of all these riddles in her life.














SCROLL DOWN PART 4 B 😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 4 B



Anika sighed & slumped on the couch & closed her eyes she was still thinking about all the possibilities that how can she sort out all the mess. First of all she needs to clarify who is the person behind Yog's attack & basically the reason behind so that she may came close to the person or can get an exact Idea who is doing it.

Yog entered the room with two cups one was his hot chocolate & other one was turmeric milk for Anika. Yog said placing the milk near the table & said gently seeing her eyes closed "Anika! So gayi kya"

She opened her eyes & said "nahi bas kuch sooch rahi thi kya baat hai?"

Yog said "Lo haldi waala dooh pee loo ... chot main jaldi aaram milega aur tum bahut thaki lag rahi hoo tabiyat theek hai na?"

Anika said with a sigh "Yog! main theek hoon ... aap meri itni fikar mat kiya keejiye mujhe aadat nahi hai aise care ki ... mujhe ye sab bahut ajeeb lagta hai"

Yog said with a smile pulling her a bit closer "ab tum yadi apna khayaal dhang se rakho to mujhe kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi padegi na"

He touched her forehead & her neck with his palm & he was right she had mild fever as got drenched in the rain yesterday.

Anika said in a bit unsure voice "ye kya kar rahe hai?"

Yog said with a smile "Bukhaar hai tumhe wahi dekh raha hoon ... lo ye thermometer lagao"

Anika said muttering totally irritated "doctri ka itna shauk hai to hospital main hi ghar kyu nahi bana liya ... pata nahi inhe sab patient hi kyu dikhte hai"

Yog said annoyed "Haan Haan maine sun liya! ... aur patient hai to wahi dikhega na"

He took out the thermometer & showed "ye dekho 101... main galat bol sakta hoon mercury galat nahi bolega ab tassali ho gayi ho to doodh piyo aur bed pe so jaao"

Anika looked at him with surprise & Yog added "is liye keh raha hoon AC ke neeche soogi to bukhaar bad jaayega ... ruko main iska temperature thoda bada deta hoon"

Yog adjusted the temperature & Anika started having her milk & something clicked her mind she asked "Yog ek baat bataiye aapki research kaha tak paunchi hai?"

Yog was bit surprised & said "bas kuch test aur baaki hai lagbhag last stage pe hai ... actually yadi humara last positive aata hai to iske do fayde hoonge radiation ki medicines jinke ab tak side effects kaafi zayada hote the ab nahi hoonge ...

aur pata hai aaj shayam DRDO (Defense Research and Development Organization)ka mera ek jaankaar dost hai usne kaha yadi ye test positive hua to ise wo bhi use karna chahega shayad defense ko bhi iski zaroorat pade kyuki wo ek ANTI - MISSILE technology pe kaam kar raha hai"

Anika exclaimed with a surprise "What! ye baat aur kaun kaun jaanta hai?"

Seeing Anika serious says "bas main aur mera dost aur koi nahi ... par hua kya hai"

Anika said in a stern voice "Apne dost ka naam aur number batayiye"

Yog was actually blown a bit but said "Dr. Jagdessh Narang senior specialist hai aur ye unka number" shows her the mobile & asked perplexed "par achanak kya hua?"

Anika rushed to the system & checked complete information about him and after that dialed his number from Yog's cell. Dr Narang wished saying "Haan Yog bolo kaise yaad kiya"

Anika replied "Dr. Narang Main ACP Anika bol rahi hoon Yog ki patni"

Dr Narang with a bit surprised voice "Ji kahiye main aapki kya madat kar sakta hoon?"

Anika said "filhaal to itni ki jobhi baat aapke aur Yog ke beech hui hai abhi aap kisi ko nahi batayenge aapko jobhi help Yog se chahiye wo mil jaayegi par aapki help kaun kar raha hai ye kisi ko nahi pata chalna chahiye ...reason koi Yog ki jaan ke peeche pada hai aur ye isse bhi connected ho sakta hai"

Dr. Narang exclaimed "What! theek hai main kisi se kuch nahi kahunga"

Anika said "Thanks a lot Dr. Narang" with that she disconnected the call.

Yog was completely stunned for a while & said composing himself "tum itna sure kaise ho ki ye sab meri research ki vajah se ho raha hai?"

Anika said "sure nahi hoon par mera andaaza hai ho sakta hai ki ye sab isi vajah se ho ... aapko pata hai maine aaj investigate kiya parso us Ganpat ke ghar main kisi ko jaate hue dekha gaya mujhe sab kuch mila par cash nahi waha se kisi ne cash gayab karaya hai Yog ...

It is something more grave jo aap sooch rahe hai isliye please aap conscious rahiye"

Yog who was taking things lightly now realizes that things are much more grave & says holding Anika's hand "I will ... ab chalo so jaao"

Anika nodded & took the empty mugs to the kitchen & after washing them she took a glass jug of water to the room & saw Yog was in deep sleep & was sitting on the system & it appeared that he slept working. Anika shook her head in disbelieve & removed his specs lightly without disturbing his sleep. She poured herself a glass of water & was about to sleep when she spotted an intruder from her room window.

She turned & clutched her mouser & with quick steps started to move when with a jerk glass jug fall down & broke into pieces. This voice alerted intruder & Yog too got out of his nap but what he saw made him completely stunned a glass piece had pierced the right foot of Anika & she was running with all her might ignoring her pain.

Yog ran behind her to stop her but all in vain by the time Yog reached outside she saw Anika & the intruder in a scuffle.

Yog was too stunned seeing Anika like this & Anika yelled breaking his trance "Yog! Move warna goli aapko bhi lag sakti hai ... guards ko bulayiye jaldi"

Yog rushed & called the guards but by the time intruder had swallowed cyanide & was dead. Yog was bit stunned at all this & Anika ordered guards to remove the mask.

Guards followed the orders but the person was unknown Anika said "autopsy ke liye body bhijwaao aur iska data police record main check karo" Guards nodded & started the work.

Anika tried to move but yelped in pain as it was paining badly. Yog scooped her in his arms shocking Anika & she said protesting "Yog! kya kar rahe neeche utariye mujhe"

Yog looked at her annoyed & said yelling "Not a word now! Bahut ho gaya ... Anika naam hai iska matlab ye nahi hai ki vakai Durga mata hoo tum"

He came inside the room & placed her n bed & started checking her foot which was hurt.

Anika said in an embarrassed tone "Yog please! kya kar rahe hai chodiye mera pair ... paap lagega mujhe"

Yog said in a teasing tone "accha doosro ko maarte waqt paap nahi lagta ... mere pair choone se paap lagega ...zayada bola na to patti pair ki jagah mooh pe laga doonga"

Yog took out the large glass piece & dressed her wound properly. He made her lay on bed covering her with comforter & voiced "ab yaha se hilna bhi mat varna agli baar bistar se banndh doonga"

He lay next to Anika taking his comforter shocking her a bit Yog said looking at her face "Main kya doosre greh se aaya hoon ... daanav ya raakshas hoon ... ya phir aadi manav hoon jo tumhe khaa jaaounga"

Anika nodded her head in negative & Yog added "to aise ghoorna band karo aur so jaao ... good night" he turned his face opposite side & closed his eyes to sleep. Here Anika sighed & smiled at the concern and she to slept closing her eyes.

Next early morning when Anika got up from the nap she found herself arrested in Yog's embrace. She felt a bit embarrassed and tried to move & that broke his nap too.

Yog released her & asked "ab pair ka dard kaisa hai?"

Anika nodded and said "ab theek hai"

Yog again put his palm on her forehead and neck even her fever also vanished.

Yog said "Good ab to fever bhi nahi hai tum jaa ke fresh ho jaao aur pair pe zoor mat daalna aaj chaaho to chutti leloo"

Anika said bit protesting "par Yog!..."

Yog said cutting her short "tum baat sunti kyu nahi hoo shanti se ghar main 2 din rest nahi kar sakti ye rooz ka excitement zaroori hai? ... phone kar do aur aaj aaram karo"

Anika nodded and after shower she went to kitchen to prepare breakfast & Yog had gone to take shower when suddenly his phone started buzzing.

Anika thought it to be an important call of some patient so she answered the call but what she heard made her stunned.

Voice from the other end greeted "Giju Adya bol rahi hoon aapka message mila Papa kaise hai ab? Aur di kaisi hai mujhe bahut chinta ho rahi hai unki wo theek hai na?"

























So how was it guys please drop in your comments as I write for you guys so please do let me know all your bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love you all


Regards Goldie 😊😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Superb
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
Continue soon
Thanks for pm


Thanks Rinku 😊
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Nice update
Thanx for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dipamanvar

Nice update
Thanx for the pm
Continue soon


Thanks Dipa 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely Update Goldie. ⭐️
Anika is caught up between a tiff in her mind and heart, her heart isn't wrong. 😊
Yog is her husband and he has every right on her, plus she's so affected by that proximity. 😳 Cute.

Yog and his sense of humor!! 😆😆😆 Loved his talk with Jannat. Bina Anesthesia ke peration and good night to macchar! 🤣🤣

Hmm.. So Anika asked Datta to keep an eye on Ganpath and even she find out about the project Yog is working on with his partner is important and for that very
reason, he was attacked again.

Anika is really a brave woman and I loved her guts as to how she fought with that intruder. 👏👏👏
But she got injured and it was cute of Yog to take care of her and their tender moments. ❤️

And we have Adya too. 😊


Thanx For Pm.
Update Soon.

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