My very own Arnav-Thread 2-Part 30 Updated (June 15th 2018) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Hi All,

A few of you have asked me if Garima is evil in this story. She is not. She is a concerned mother. She was not very happy with this marriage from the start as she believed Arnav did not match Khushi's status. Also Arnav's cold behavior in the initial days of the wedding did not go well with Garima. She does not understand the bond that developed between Khushi and Arnav overtime and is not willing to comprehend either.

Though she does get influenced by others/ circumstances against Arnav, and can irritate us for a while. Please bear with her.

Thanks for the awesome comments everyone!!!




Originally posted by: piyalu

oh wow first part was so sweet with arnav and khushi.

preetham I don't want arnav to do anything to u I want khushi to fix ur business n put u n ur no good father out, n arnav can fix sheetal u both girls r same I think u guys should marry each other.

I kinda hate khushi mother when she marry shashi did she stay back in her house no right u move out to ur husband house so how the hell do u want khushi to stay back.

great update...

Edited by SillyLisa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Fabulous I expected this reaction from khusi n i liked it n also the growth in their relationship n i do hope they face all their hurdles in life with each other side by side n overcome. I'm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sweetie the story is shaping up beautifully. Let the storyline stick to the title.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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After marriage, a Husband supporting his wifey and Wife supporting her hubby at difficult moments n situations is highly necessary. And Arshi is following that policy fully. Secondly! Kiddos to the self respect of this Arnav. Let the last month of Arnav in GI be an eye opener for the rogues n the idiots in the office to know his real potential, efficiency , capability and also the ultimate successor ofShashi Gupta. As khushi Had decided that ArnAv stands amongst all, she should her shyness and naiveith for sometime and should be more rough n tough to protect her married life from the witches. Let the Mission Happy Union begin.n rock. And physical pleasure and lovemaking is not the sole base of any marriage. Let the foreign returned Preetham understand the fact clearly.infact in today's modern fast paced world,many marriage are leading to divorce as the partners aren't able to spend quality time with each other without ego n bickering and unable to find happiness out of small things.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Awesome update! Hopefully arshi stick to their promise of solving problems TOGETHER... I hope Arnav teaches this Preetham a lesson. I just hate her sooo much!
And now with him resigning I see a potential hazard in Sheetal too...

Thanks for the pm and pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
YAY so its more solidifying that ASR is in love.
I hope they fight against this preetham.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
awesome cocept..and amazing updates...loved it...cont soon..cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Awesome story
Read all the parts in one go

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Awesome storyline. Very well written. Read all parts in one go. I hope they fight against everything together. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear friends, I will be updating Part-22 in two sections as it is too long and has issues with formatting.



PART-22 (I):


  • Narrations: in Black
  • POVs: in Blue
  • Conversations: in Red
  • Flashbacks: in Green italics



Saturday evening (At Ruffel's party):




A large party hall with an attached lawn was the venue for the gathering. Since Ruffel Industries was a big name in Europe, CEOs and MDs of other companies were also invited for the celebration. Many of them were jealous of the deal that GI struck with Ruffel.


The employees of GI were over the moon. Many of them had brought more than one family member with them since it was a rare opportunity to show such celebrations to their families. Shashi and Shashank came in with the entire family while Arnav brought Khushi with him as his date.


Arnav went to greet the big heads in Ruffel leaving Khushi with the women of her family. Shashi and Shashank were meeting up with the CEOs.


"Hi Khushi", the ladies of Gupta family turned around in pleasant surprise when they were greeted by Abhinav Mehta. He later spoke to Garima and Bua and was introduced to Preetham. Mehtas had been irate after their alliance was rejected. It did not take long for the Guptas to figure out that Mukesh Mehta had taken this refusal as a personal insult. It was made obvious in his professional dealings too.



Abhinav congratulated Khushi on her marriage.


Abhinav: Sorry Khushi, I didn't get a chance to wish you personally after your wedding


Khushi: Not a problem Abhinav, life has been hectic for me too.


Abhinav: So, I heard he works in your company?


Khushi: Yes, he works at GI


Abhinav: Mind introducing him to me?


Khushi: Of course, give me a second.


Khushi messaged Arnav asking him to find her so she could introduce him to a friend. Arnav came to her in a few minutes while she was talking to Abhinav.


Khushi: Abhinav, this is my husband Arnav Singh Raizada; and Arnav this is my friend Abhinav Mehta.


Arnav (extending his hand): Nice to meet you Mr.Mehta


Abhinav (shaking his extended hand): Pleasure is mine Arnav, Please call me Abhinav.


Abhinav (continued): I heard you work at GI


Arnav: I do


Abhinav: What do you do?


Arnav: Designing


Abhinav: Oh, great!



Abhinav watched the ease with which Khushi and Arnav spoke to each other. He was jealous when Arnav casually placed his hand around Khushi's waist and she instinctively moved closer into him.



Arnav was then called by Shashi to introduce him to some corporate leads and Arnav excused himself. The rest of the Gupta family joined Abhinav and Khushi and chatted for a while.



Abhinav (extending his hand): Khushi, how about a dance?


Khushi (slightly uncomfortably): No, I'm sorry


Abhinav: Why Khushi? Can't you dance with your friend for a while? Or is it that you are scared that Arnav would get upset?


Khushi (defending Arnav): He is not like that, he doesn't mind.


Abhinav: Alright then, let's go.



Khushi looked around but couldn't find Arnav. Albeit not willing, she stepped out to dance with Abhinav.



Arnav met with his friends at the bar. He looked around to spot Khushi and his eyes fell on the Gupta family... Khushi was not there... but there was Preetham... Arnav remembered what had happened the previous day...




Flashback:


It was Di's Haldi. Arnav arrived at his house earlier in the evening from work. Khushi had left GM in the morning to reach Arnav's place. As soon as Khushi saw Arnav, she took him aside and told him to change out of his formals. She had left his clothes in his room upstairs. When Arnav went up to his room, he was disappointed to see Khushi laying out an embroidered Kurta for him to wear.



"God Khushi, I hate to wear this. I didn't even wear it during my own Haldi", he said.


"Exactly Arnav, that's why you have to wear it now. It is Di's Haldi, she will feel bad otherwise", Khushi tried emotional blackmailing him.


Arnav was amused. He pulled her close. "You little minx, now-a-days you command and coerce me a lot", he said kissing her on her cheek, "Not that I'm complaining", "but everything has its own price", He tried reaching for her lips.


"Not now Arnav", Khushi stopped him, "You will smudge my lipstick", she dodged out of his arms and ran out of the room yelling, "Come out soon Arnav".


Arnav sighed. He didn't have an option now. He changed out of his formals in the bathroom, got into the pants and came out. He took the Kurta from the bed and slid into the sleeves first and then tied pulling it over his head. He realized it was stuck on his head, he couldn't get it out either. Since the kurta was semitransparent, he made his way to the door, opened it slightly and called out for Khushi.


After a while, he was helped by a set of feminine hands, gliding up on his bare chest and reaching the kurta. The buttons of the kurta were opened slowly and the kurta was gently slid over his head with her hands stuck between the kurta and his chest.


Arnav was shocked to see that it was Preetham who helped him. Her hands still rested on his chest under his Kurta. She looked at him with a dark emotion in her eyes that he could not fathom. Arnav instantly took a few steps back while pulling her hands out of his kurta.




"What are you doing here?", he asked seriously.


"Well, it's Di's Haldi, so I'm here", said Preetham slyly.


"First off, she is not 'Di' for you. You should call her by her name; Second, what are you doing in my room?", Arnav asked sharply.


"Why are you getting angry Arnav?", she took a step towards him, "I just helped you", "By the way..um.. Khushi is busy downstairs", she said seductively.


Arnav did not understand if Preetham was suggesting something else because Khushi was downstairs or if she genuinely came to help since Khushi was really busy downstairs.


"Thanks, now you should leave", he said.


"Are you sure?", she asked provocatively.


"Positive", Arnav was now very irritated.


Flashback ends...




Arnav had been struggling since then to tell this to Khushi. How could he tell her that her sister had made a move on him? May be Preetham was just teasing him. May be it was just harmless flirting. "Why would Preetham try to hit on her sister's husband?" Arnav shook his head. He was just imagining things. He was reading more into it than there is. He should just ignore it and move on...Wait a second...




Something else flashed in his mind.




Di's engagement time...someone had kissed him in the morning at GM...not just on face but also full on lips...he had sensed desire in that kiss... Khushi had said that she was not home then... so, was it... was it really... Preetham?... But why???




"Gosh, I should have left with Khushi from GM that day. This is such a sensitive issue", he thought, "How am I going to explain this to Khushi?", "Would she trust me if I said something this horrendous about her sister?".


"But then she said I'm her life", a logical part of his brain argued.


"But this is about trusting me against her family",the rest of his brain asserted.


"But she said I'm her family first", his logical brain argued again.



Damn!... Arnav was confused... thoroughly... he needed to cool down... he needed a battle plan...to sort this mess out...



Arnav was pulled out of his thoughts by a gentle tap.


Sheetal: Hi ASR

Arnav: Hi Sheetal

Sheetal: Enjoying the party?

Arnav: Of course.

Sheetal: ASR, I heard that you resigned, but...

Arnav (cut her off): Not now Sheetal; Actually my mind is already made up, so not now, not ever.

Sheetal: Ok, in that case, can we dance one last time?


Arnav remembered how Sheetal had kissed him at their previous dance. He definitely didn't want to get into a tight spot specially in front of his wife.


Arnav: Sorry, I would like to sit this one out.

Sheetal: Why ASR, why can't you dance with me when your wife is dancing with someone else?

Arnav: Excuse me?

Sheetal (pointing to Abhinav and Khushi): Over there...



Arnav wasn't happy to see his wife on the dance floor with someone else, but he was smart enough not to show it.


Arnav (lied): That's her friend and I don't mind her dancing with him.


But then he saw how gracefully Khushi was dancing and was lost in her charm. He noticed Abhinav joking to Khushi about something, and saw Khushi smile at that lightly.


Arnav felt happy seeing her smile. He kept staring at her.


From the dance floor Khushi's looked around the area to find Arnav; When her eyes met with his, they were locked.


Relieved, she felt at home...


Sheetal
was dismayed that Arnav was not angry with Khushi instead was rather lost in her but she stuck with him at the bar.



...Continued in next post...



Edited by SillLisa - 6 years ago

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