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Posted: 8 years ago
If this is Suvi's situation, cant even imagine what Neel might be going through.
Ohh God. Hope his turmoil is not too evident to Suvi.

Nisha, when I am waiting for update i want all the ceremonies to be over as soon as possible. But once you give us the update, want to know more and more how they are dealing with it, what is each one thinking.

Superb. Loving it.

I hope Suvi never is reminded for that guy again. She has a Gem to cherish now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nihar, how will the kid deal with it now?
I hope he soon starts liking Suvi and the fact that his Dad married her.

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Posted: 8 years ago
I was at a meeting from 9am and all that ran thru my mind commencing 9.30 to 10.30 was, update aa gaya hoga and here Iam stuck discussing policies 😃
These two stories are going to be my undoing at this rate !!

Suvi is naturally going thru the whole gamut of emotions...guilt, fear, questioning her choice...But hopefully, even if the path ahead is full of hurdles, she will have Neel's hand to hold and his wholehearted support.

Wonder what Neel is going thru as he has more to feel guilty about ( ?? ) betrayal of Nupur and Nihar to an extent to start off with. Look forward to this love story every morning however rocky the circumstances seem.
Thanks as always Nisha !!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Amma mentioned that Neel is lucky to have Suvi. However, Suvi was reminded that if he was Lucky Nupur would still be there.

Hence, he is lucky but not lucky at the sametime.
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Posted: 8 years ago
She all along felt a nagging doubt about tying the knot with her scumbag ex ( if he can be called one legally) but proceeded anyway with it because of her naivety and neediness.

This time her desire for a life partner is not because of her neediness as such but is based more on on her strength and choice for companionship .

As past memories unleash one single time before they take the plunge yet again , hope they can separate the past from the present and envision a positive future together where they begin to see justice their share amidst the injustice .

Thank you for the updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey guys, IF has been a such a pain browsing the last few days. Not sure if it's their website issues or my network and devices. 100's of nonsense pops up and the page just hangs.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aanandasathi Prarthana Kara

The ceremony was the most beautiful Suvi had ever watched, and though it seemed like a fantasy she was part of it too, as the center of attention

The moment when Neel filled her parting with a orange red powder, it was a muggy
rainy evening the powder caked in his nervous fingers, and fell in giant clumps
across her parting, he smoothened it knowledgably... she felt his thumb graze her scalp as it spread it methodically, sending shivers down her spine

Her eyes strained to watched Amma's reaction, she was crying, so was Ruchi, Aabha looked like she was in shock, she cuddled Nihar as he looked at Suvi in horror

He wasnt sure about the rituals but had watched enough Hindi movies to know what it implied

Aadhya was nowhere around, she had taken off chasing a lil 9 year old... wide awake at 2 AM

Mamaji dozed in a chair a shawl wrapped snugly around him

Mr &Mrs Misra looked dazed as if they were in a completely unfamiliar situation now.

Mrs Misra clutching her eye glasses in a deathly grip, Mr Misra fingers linked in a prayer like clasp

His right foot throbbing gently from anxiety, as he tried to keep his emotions in check

They were seated in the third row, but the second row was empty in front of them, and in the first row an old lady lay flat and snoozed occupying 4 chairs

Everybody congratulated the couple, the crowd had thinned out a lot, there were around 200 people in the evening, now less than 50 remained

Amma's shoulder relaxed at first and slumped soon after she handed her purse to Ruchi and wrapped her shawl comfortably yet again

She walked over to Nihar and hugged and kissed him

Aabha joked, and Nihar smiled shyly

Amma pulled his hand gently and asked him if he wanted to say hello his step mother and father

He pulled his hand away and hid in the soft familiar folds of Aabha's orange banarsi saree

"Aap theek hain?" Neel enquired caringly

Suvi wasnt expecting a question, her voice was long gone...

She cleared her throat many times and nodded nervously, crushing a rose between the fingers of her right hand

The garland weighed heavily on her shoulders, so did the enormity of the recently concluded event

"Congrats nahi kahengi?" Neel smiled quietly

Suvi chuckled throatily

A young woman walked over and touched her shoulder "Aapki beti ko hum sula lein?" she asked kindly

Suvi nodded with gratitude

the woman looked at her strangely

"isme kya badi baat hai, hamari do bitiya aur Seema jiji ki bitiya aur Rajni bhabhi ki bitya sab ghar laut rahin hain" she smiled

Suvi smiled wordlessly

"Waise aapko congrats... Bareilly aayin aap to ghar zaroor aayiyega, hamare yahan ke bazaar to bohot mashhoor hain" she winked

Suvi had no clue

The young woman obviously referring to the jhumka gira rey song

"Mere ko UP ka idea nai hey" Suvi said ashamed

"Aur hamey Maharashtr ka..." she said kindly

"Neel bhaisaab, ghar laayen inko" she ordered Neel as he talked with Saksham about something

"Oh zaroor, bhabhi... zaroor," he said cheerfully

"Hum aapke bhabhi kaise hue, aap to Mamaji ke bhanje thehre aur hum, Mamaji ki mausere bhai ke sabse chhoti beti hain" she explained

"Phir kya kahen?" Neel asked

"Naam se pukaaren" she urged

Neel looked on sheepishly

"Hum shikayat laga jaayenge Mamaji ko... hamara naam Unnati hai bhaiyya" she giggled

neel nodde and did a apology namaste

People chattered, and women sang softly at the urging of a pandit...

Amma urged the couple to seek Misras' blessing
Suvi bend down reverentially

The lady touched Suvi's pallu clad head

"Jug jug jeeyo" she said almost choking, generously wishing a long life to the young girl, a gift her own daughter Nupur hadnt gotten

"Khush rahen beta" Mr Misra mumbled emotionally, as he patted Neel's shoulder, staggering as he stood up to hug his "ex" son in law.

Neel wiped his tears on his pink dupatta, and embraced Mr Misra in a long warm hold.

Mrs Misra handed her a tiny red box she had guarded ferociously for three days in her much used softened grey leather handbag.

"Pasand na aaye to behenji ko kehna aur laa dengi" she said politely

Suvi acepted it with open palms

"Thank you" she said hoarsely.


"Arey inka to beta hai na" one aging pandit hollered

Ruchi nodded

"To bas theek hain, unko kahen, woh aage aage chal lenge, gaadi tak" the Pandit explained a ritual

Ruchi squirmed...

"Ruchi inko rehne dein aap... yeh neend mein hain" Aabha declined politely patting Nihar's back

Another young male cousin completed the ritual

Bidai happened with pomp and show, and they arrived at Neel's Bandra apartment at 6 AM

Pushkar and neel's brother had left after the pheras and were asleep on the couch
when Ruchi arrived a few minutes before the baraat woth a couple of female cousins to arrange the ceremonial walkthrough

The apartment was beautiful with large windows and tasteful wall color

It was mostly empty since Neel's things were in NOIDA

Ruchi had earlier in the day "Swept" the walls to remove any remaining Nupur pictures off the walls...

Pushkar watched unable to suppress feelings of pain... a rare display of emotion from an otherwise bitter, cynical man...

Ruchi had paused mid way... and mumbled through constricted throat "Khushi ki prarthana karen Pushkar" she pleaded noticing the spark of emotion in her husband's eyes

Pushkar wasnt brave enough to admit his vulenrability... he had simply walked over to the balcony and leaned, looking out at the street







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Posted: 8 years ago
An offbeat wedding in a offbeat story
Hope you all liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

An offbeat wedding in a offbeat story

Hope you all liked it


Fabulous. Loved it. Thank you.

I don't think Suvi would mind seeing Nupur's picture on wall.

I am just worried about Nihar's reaction. the child should get soemtime to accept it.

Taking down the pics will make him dislike Suvi further.

Nisha, requesting after long time. Can we have one more small and happy update of the couple. Please.


Edited by PriteeMisra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very poignant update !!!!
The occasion is a happy one, but the emotions being held at bay by one and all...right from lil Nihar to Mrs. Mishra.
I loved it that she blesses Suvi with a 'jug jug jiyo' ...as though she is gifting her all the years Nupur did not live to completion...

What a storyteller you are Nisha !!! 👏

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