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Posted: 8 years ago
Madhyaratri Paryanta

The haldi was in the morning. Neel's was at the apartment next door and hers was in the room she slept the nigh before
The amount of pampering and care she received made her dizzy.

Aadhya hid behind the curtain and stared mesmerized as women applied the creamy turmeric, cream paste all over her and rubbed it down enough to let the flakes fall off

The room smelled like rose essence and turmeric

She caught a glimpse of Neel as he passed by along the kitchen and tiny washbasin/bathroom area

His spotless white kurta was stained yellow in places

His hair had yellow clumps when a male cousin might have applied haldi in jest

The kurta had a side opening and she noticed his chest hair and turned red

He paused his mouth open, breathing audibly

The lady applying haldi was turned towards her as she vigorously applied all over her neck and teasingly poured some concoction down her shirt giggling

Suvi closed the opening of her kurta in horror as the warm paste slid down her cleft

A grand aunt that was sitting in the corner mumbled to the young woman about an ogling Neel

The lady turned

"Neel bhaisaab dekhna MANA HAIII" she shrieked enjoying Suvi's discomfort

"Ab hum to dekh chukey, kya karen batayiye?" he quizzed lingering drinking the sight of his wife to be

"Jurmana bhar lein aap" the woman said panting and heaving as she tried to rub the haldi down Suvi's right calf

"Aapko dein?" he asked taking a step toward the room

"HUM kya karenge... jinko dena hai unahee ko dein aap" the woman laughed hysterically

"Kya lengi?" he asked

"Batao bahu raani" the woman roared

"Neel" Suvi was a puddle of goo

"Suvechhha" he said savoring the name as if he could taste that cream on her skin...

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Ruchi and Pushkar had a meltdown on the side in the adjacent apartment when one kid accidentally shut the window on her oldest's thumb

It was swollen like a cherry... Amma looked extremely nervous as she confronted Pushkar to tell him when Ruchi was taking a bath

"Ghar pe aapne tamasha khara kiya hai, bachon ko kaun dekhega" Pushkar said inaudibly

"I agree somebody was careless" Amma said politely

"Ruchi kahen... naam lein aap" he challenged

"I mean the lady that was watching him." Amma said firmly

Neel's brother had mellowed a bit since last night after Amma had a word with him he sat cross legged down on the floor and helped Mamiji and Aabha Bhabhi apply haldi on Neel

There was a pooja scheduled for Noon, it had begun to rain again, all the kids crowded in the apartments

Neel's brother went up to ask teh neighbor if they could play video games up there, all 9 trudged up as the caterers blocked the stairwell trying to sort out giant aluminum tiffin carriers

Women sang hymns in the living room of the main apartment

Mrs & Mr Misra sat in a corner and read a Hindi newspaper

Amma frequently checked on them

They were being entertained by Aadhya

She sat on Mrs Misra's lap and pulled out one silky mane horse after another from her pippa squinkie collection

She had 100s of them

"Mede house mein LOTSSS hey" she explained

Mrs Misra smiled spontaneously

"Meda house?" she teased

"Mede house mein aaogey?" she asked politely

Mrs Misra's eyes filled up as she realized the lil girl's house will be the house of the man who used to be her son in law... or who was her son in law... or is her son in law... until midnight tonight

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Posted: 8 years ago
All that teasing is a welcome relief and so much fun
Can some one slap that idiot of ruchi.he is the father of the kids why couldn't he bloody take care of his own kids then blaming others.

Loved the way suvi checked on nihar and cared for him without him knowing in the last update. Amma saw everything which was good now she would know a part of suvi that she is a caring person and not just after Neel
Thanks for lovely updates nisha


Happy Easter to everyone.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Madhyaratri Paryanta 👏
Neel, even you need to wait Maydhyaratri paryaant (untill midnight) after that Suvi is all yours.

Addhyaa and Nihar, I hope don't feel the void of other parent in their life after this midnight.

Misra's, I sorry. I know its very difficult for them to witness this for them. Its great of them to still attend the wedding.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely buildup to the shaadi 😳😳
Nisha " abhi naa jao chodkar ki dil abhi bhara nahi " 😃😃

Midnight will bring along many changes...wish tai could turn into a pumpkin or a rat or something worse too 😛
Our Cinderella is all set to don the garb of Mrs. Suveccha Pandit 😳
Edited by VeeIyer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: VeeIyer

Lovely buildup to the shaadi😳😳

Nisha " abhi naa jao chodkar ki dil abhi bhara nahi "😃😃

Midnight will bring along many changes...wish tai could turn into a pumpkin or a rat or something worse too😛
Our Cinderella is all set to don the garb of Mrs. Suveccha Pandit😳


This was exactly what my mind was also saying!!!!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
I love the two kids aadhya n nihar,more than the leads❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's the romance of the rose essence and the haldi adding to the Lucknowi tafri on air. One thing this sweet talking cheekat nawab has is that he's never short of words to cast his charm . 😳
Mean While an elderly couple in a different world after having lost their kanya prepare their hearts to do a 'var' dhaan at the stroke of midnight ... why? Because life moves on. ... BITTERSWEET


Edited by Errantnomad - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aadhya is a cutie ... It feels bad to think Misra's relation with Neel is no more ... Nihar is their grandson and as grandparents their relation with Neel will never change they have to visit Neel and Suvi to meet Nihar and eventually they might see their daughter in Suvi. Lovely update Nisha thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
And in real life I have seen many like Ruchi's husband but never saw one like R&B, Tan or Neel ... Only in fiction stories they exist maybe 😕
Edited by KM03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nisha ore oru kostin. Madhyaratri paryant is madyaratri CST or MST. Stroke of midnight is only less than mins away...MST... just saying...

The Cinderella only has 30 mins or so. The air of nervous anticipation is already heavily pregnant . Also we the Cinderella sisterhood can only handle so much pregnancy . Bas ab the water has to break and the baby has to come out. 😳

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