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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes the wedding happened and too like we all wanted a dream wedding for SUVI
yaay 🥳
Congrats to all of us
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Posted: 8 years ago
You are a brilliant writer nisha...
Both your stories,are entirely different ...and never you made us felt like emotions getting mixed...the way you portrayed two marriages show the depth of your talent.thank you nisha...😊
And i m glad that you are continuing both stories 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Vani

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The world is FULL of good kind people with a big heart, you just have to be lucky to find them.

Pritee the gift is probably not earth shattering, must be something simple and regular.

This is a story of run of the mill people doing extraordinary acts of kindness and living larger than life lives.




there are stories we can relate to there are those that have a story line and characters that seem to have stepped out of a space craft... You are a story weaver that has brought together amazing bunch of people some of whom have become great friends. You may call your tale what you please...For your readers it is sheer magic...A reason to smile and frown and clamour for updates...Now that we have heard the Anandam Anandam Anandam e we smile and wish the couple a happy life.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant Nisha !! This chapter bought tears.

Following is so true, we have to be very lucky to find the "good kind people with a big heart in this world"

"The world is FULL of good kind people with a big heart, you just have to be lucky to find them."
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

An offbeat wedding in a offbeat story

Hope you all liked it




LOVED IT.

CONGRATULATIONS NISHA.

Last couple of nights I tried staying awake to catch the moment with you all but last I checked my watch was at 11:25 my time. Must have dozed off after that. And the update looks like has come minutes after I slept . Can't tell you what a pain again IF has been this morning. How can posts typed vanish 3 times. Beats the crap out of me when it happens in the morning.Anyway fingers crossed it will go this time.
Anyway Congratulations ladies .

It was beautiful Nisha . Right from the time the caked powder got applied by Neel to the short of words overwhelmed by the moment suvi to the joy of relief on Amma's face to the merry chachu snoozing to the
resigned acceptance of the Pants to the utter disbelief that this can't be happening on Aabha and Nihar's face to Ruchi doing a huge favor on Neel by having Nupur's frames removed... it was Just Perfect.

Got to say one thing for pushkar. Though cynical and bitter, he hasn't stopped Ruchi from being there for her mom and brother when they have needed her. She has made multiple trips to India and though reluctant and aloof in his presence he has accompanied her. That he did not lash out at his wife for taking off the photos is a huge relief.

Ruchi's plea for anandasathi prarthna Kara is the need of the hour. . Relationships need space and time to prosper. Hope Nihaar can come to terms with this New arrangement in his life if he gets happiness out of this in due course of time. Nisha, To your kushi ke liye prarthna Karen, we say
ThoduVanam Tholaivil Illai 👏

Thank you for persevering and sticking with us crazy bunch for ID and seeing us through this momentous occassion
Edited by Errantnomad - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nahi pahiley pana doosara

Nihar was not brought to Worli (I accidentally mentioned Bandra in the prev chapter), he was taken back to the bedroom he had slept in with the boys the night before at Mamaji's apartment.

Amma did arti and asked Suvi to do diya, the sun was coming up after all day rains on August 11th

Ruchi and Aabha and Saksham all looked tired

Pushkar and Neel's brother were asleep in the 3rd bedroom which was originally a study and the smallest of three

There was a rental sofa and coffee table and dining table, to make it look like a "home"

There was clothes bags and flower baskets and stacked gifts, Prestige pressure cookers and
Corning dinner set and Bombay Dyeing(?) bedsheet sets, there were even pink kitchen sets and tool boxes and Leapfrog touchpad for Aadhya.

Suvi felt that familiar lump on her throat at that thoughtfulness

It appeared like the Pants, Misras and Tripathis and Dwivedis and Sharmas and Mahants, and Chaturvedis and Shastris had gone all out to make Suvi and Aadhya feel welcome

Amma sat down wearily on the sofa and yawned

"Ruchi aap yahin so jaayen beta, bache aapke dono yahi hai na?" Amma said thoughtfully taking her glasses off and rubbing her eyes

"Aap hamare saath chalen buaji" Aabha said protectively

Amma smiled weakly

"Suvi ko kuch khilaya? bechari bhookin rahengi" Amma said bringing some enthusiasm in her voice

Neel was on the phone with US cousins who couldnt make it

Talking in the balcony as he paced back and forth

Suvi sat quietly in a one seater couch

"Beta aap change kar lein?" Amma urged

Suvi nodded politely

"Aabha (blowing air kisses) inko kamra dikhayen" Amma requested

Aabha looked taken aback, she didnt want to be the one taking the new wife to Nupur's master bedroom. The room where Nupur and her had spent many many nights giggling and singing and staying up
all night... not letting neel or Saksham anywhere near

Those card games, and Pictionary and Scrabble on the bed... and how Neel cheated and how Nupur made excuses for him

She abided by Amma's request and put away organizing the gifts and walked over to Suvi

Chaliye, hum dikhayen kamra" she smiled with a lil effort

Suvi got up immediately

And looked at the balcony longingly

Neel met her gaze and crinkled his eyes "Bus yaar do minute" he gesticulated with his fingers

She paused not agreeing, and then he touched his ear lobe to seek an apology

Suvi smiled stretching that luscious lower lip

Aabha observed the first silent exchange as her heart ripped to shreds

She walked quietly "Bathroom yaha hai" she said politely

And then looked at the open master bedroom, it was EMPTY

Aabha let out a audible sigh of relief

Someone had left the fan on, and a clothesline was strung from window to a closet door and clothes swayed under it...

She turned to smile at Suvi ...relieved she wouldnt have to "give a tour" of her best friend's room

They opened the door to what used to be the 2nd bedroom... Nihar's... a neatly made bed with new sheet set in orange and pink sat in the middle

The matching Bombay Dyeing curtains ballooned up and down under the fan's breeze

Suvi's suitcase had been magically placed in a corner

A new lounge pant set and a new nightie was placed on the nightstand

"Room Mumbai mein itna bada" Suvi finally found her voice

"Woh kamra " Aabha began pointing to the master... and waved changing her mind

"Yaha is society mein saare flat achhe hain" she said politely

Suvi nodded

"Mere ko Worli ka idea nai hey, meri landlady ki daughter Doordarshan mein rojgaari tha uska" Suvi pointed randomly towards the window to indicate DD was somewhere near Worli

Aabha visibly relaxed...

"Aapko bhook lagi hai?" Aabha asked softly

"Thoda both" Suvi said quietly

"Main khaane ko kuch laati hoon aur chai bhi, aap kapde badal lein" she said

Suvi nodded politely

"Aap thak gayin hongi" Aabha said

Suvi struggled... wondering if she shud shake her head or nod...


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Posted: 8 years ago
The most mundane of tasks ( changing clothes ) and a simple five minute interlude stretches thru the update. But the visual impact is unbelievable !!
I feel like a fly in the wall , observing a tired amma, the clothes drying on the line, the gifts, the cookers, the Bombay dyeing sheets 😃
The true litmus test lies ahead, but right now, am savouring every moment of Neel's and Suvi's journey 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
I guess these minute details described so well is what makes the story extra ordinary.
We can actually visiualise the room.

Suvi & Neel seem so comfortable with each other.

Just waiting for Nihar to accept Suvi. Once he does that I would be super happy. But I guess there is long way to go before that happens.

Thank you Nisha.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I don't want SUVI to change clothes..
I want Neel to compliment her in private as a girl looks her best on her wedding day
And getting a compliment from hubby is the bestest
😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
And Nisha as we have got an early one so are we getting another one 😆

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