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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Nihar, is the one who seriously is going to be affected by his Dad's marriage.
I wouldn't mind not answering Amma's concern but Nihar's concerns have to addressed. I trust Suvi to do that. She is sensitive to kids since beginning. As for Neel don't know how he will handle this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Nooo one more please

Does Nihar even know who his dad is getting married to?
Aiyyo :(

One last update for now..plij
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Nisha...thank you for the updates! I didn't say that in my earlier post
Both SoSy and ID are just really wonderful in bringing up all the human emotions up to the forefront. I am just lost in the stories you craft!! Thank you!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
""Amma wondered if Neel said that for the wedding or for the probablity of Suvi not changing
Amma pretended to remove droplets of frost from the Mother Dairy pouches she held in a veggie basket""

It's so easy to imagine this scene as you bring these distinct characters alive. I feel if we readers are being inconsiderate demanding for more I guess it's because of the hypnotic effect your story telling has on us. You have a knack for creating characters and You write stories we care about because we relate to it on many levels. Certain situations that you put in these stories ... It's so compelling that waiting becomes a tad difficult ...

Hope you rested well last night after a long day at work. Thank you and Take care.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Sometimes I feel when we have got to make challenging decisions especially when some are transitioning after a loss that leaves residual pain and lingering feelings in us, instead of looking at is a decision that's right or wrong, I guess it would be ok to look at it as the best one to take created by situations.

Maybe Amma's wisdom would prod her to think on these angles after the initial vetting.

I also liked gag's convo where he basically nudged Neel to say boss stop f***ing around suvi's feelings just cos you are unsure of your own".

Such convos kind of pinches good men to take a hard look at themselves and move on from a position of sitting on a fence which all of us do when we have a challenging decision to make.

Nihar needs good handling... Amma, Neel, suvi and other elders around him are considerate and capable enough to walk him through this when they themselves have firmed up on their stance on marriage and a future for them.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Colors... Laundry & Love



"this is all so bizarre" Neel muttered

Ruchi and him dried laundry on the terrace Sunday morning, exactly a week and two days after Amma's JNU meeting with Suvi
One day after Neel's meeting with Suvi at Delhi University...

Amma had summoned her to Delhi, she was going to come by to Mumbai in July but Amma wanted her by her side to "figure things out"
Pushkar was downstairs feeding his boys, Ruchi had two lil ones Pranav and Rehaan
Nihar was having ablast basically to have bua show up unexpectedly like this

Amma was busy, the kitchen was a mess, the lady chef was allowed to take time off so Amma can take over

Preet peeked in every few hours looking longingly at the chaos at Pandits

Ruchi was going to be here until Amma headed to Mumbai on 30th and then return to Scotland on July 15th or so

Her husband was not talkative like Neel and Ruchi he was quiet and moody

But he was polite

Amma pampered him with food and service
Ruchi admonished Amma for doing that

"Its not bizaree, u met someone at work, u happen to like her, she happens to like you and Amma thinks u shud be happy"

Amen to all except last" he muttered

"Amma aapse single rehne ko keh rahin hain?" she asked pausing stretching a balled up wet sock
of her son now died pink thanks to being washed with a hot pink kurti of hers

"I dont think she cares for Suvechha...he said

"aur aap?" she asked


I cant seem to comprehend what I am feeling for her" he said in shock and awe

"To bas... baat khatam... shaadi aapko karni hai"

Everytime the word shaadi was used his heart raced

He had gone from moving to Delhi in April and now being on the verge of marrying someone in July

It had been a tumultuous three months...

Before all that



They walked along the Kamla Nehru Ridge near Delhi University on Saturday morning, gomphrena and morning glory and zinnias bloomed in manicured perfection,
raat ki raani floweres dipped with every stroke of breeze, hoping someone would look up and take notice

"I am sorry if you felt she crossed the line" he said abruptly

"she didnt Neel" Suvi smiled

He was careful not to hold hands or walk too close she wore a green vine-y khadi kurta and a lemon yellow chudidar, and wore her sunglasses on her head hiding the helical springs
He wore tan linen pants and a navy shirt

It was a "not too bad" Saturday morning, 9 AM ish, she had taken Aadhya to day care for a couple hours

They both felt the need to talk

He had kissed her with insane amounts of passion that evening, the Thursday evening... before her Friday JNU meeting
After meeting with Amma he didnt pry, or dig deep just let it slide

"Amma hamey akele nahi dekh paa rahin" he said feeling a sudden surge of self pity

"U are a lucky man" she smiled

"Did she ask you what you thought of me?" he asked eagerly

"Abhi mere ko laga u are insecure, ab lag raha hai ki u are full of urself" she smiled biting the plump lower lip

He laughed

To onlookers and passers by they appeared like Ph D students wearing the pavement out trying to get some early morning Library research in

"I told her I like you" Suvi said softly

He had to pause, it was unexpected just like she was, mellow, muted and the opposite of dramatic
She had admitted to his Amma and she sounded like she needed a new power cord for her phone

He felt waves of foaming frothy delight whip through his insides like milkshake in a blender
Mahua, fiery champa and cool harsingar trees lined the walkway... Delhi mornings were the best he decided his heart rate soaring

"Amma ne kya kaha?"

She couldnt remember...

"My loneliness was driving me to options that werent even right" he admitted

"Dating?" she asked

He nodded

"My in laws and parents believe that marriage is the only option"

It was her turn to freeze, stone cold or red hot?
They stood by a sunshiney yellow amaltas.. the most stunningly beautiful yellow bloom hiding every leaf forming a golden canopy

she didnt know

She didnt have any experience of being proposed like that, they had gone to Mahalakshmi and Rutwik and dramatically draped a mangal sootra
There was no courtship, no flirting or chatting
Lots of sex though...

"YOU shud get married?" she asked confused... like a fool

He nodded and smiled, they paused by a fork on the walkway and he stepped over some landscaping rock and went to her left, and walked lazily

"Jee" he said again "Aapka kya vichar hai?" he asked seriously

"Thats very nice" she stumbled, missinga step... he held her elbow

Are u still adamant about not wanting marriage?" he asked

OH BOY!!!
WHAT A Q

She blushed... "Mera record ekdum bakwaas hai Neel" she chuckled

"Kitni shaadiyan kee hain waise aapne?" he asked softly teasing as they stood facing each other

"Ek" she whispered, the scent of the pearly meetha neem flowers wafting through the air

"Phew" he said theatrically, deliberately exhaling with relief

She smiled lowered her flaming face, quite appropriately near a palash tree with scorching orange flowers

He smiled again, as they stepped forward together... maybe half a yard

"Humse karengi shaadi?" he asked politely. JUST LIKE THATT... JUSTTT like that...

As a purple jacaranda flower floated down in a zig zag pattern landing on her shoulder...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Wow
Superb. And absolutely unexpected.

WHat did Suvi reply?

Is everyone here for some ceremony?

Aage kya hua?


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jacaranda...palash...neem...mahua...champa...harsingar...amaltas..Each one with their individual colors and fragrance...

And Neel & Suvi walking amidst them looking forward to a life filled with similar colors and bouquet of scents 😳
The perfect surroundings for a proposal under a canopy of all the colours of the Rainbow !!!

The trees over here are awash with monsoon showers and the smell of fresh earth enhances the colors around...Iam a sucker for trees of all shapes and sizes and this update was the ultimate "high" for a lovely day ahead.

Welcome back to ID ladies !! Much as I love SOSY, ID offers the promise of happiness & hope and right now, that makes it totally purrrfect for me 😳

Sent you a PM Nisha. Please read if you can
Edited by VeeIyer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Bas keh diya!! Itna socha samjha and its all about the right moment, it always comes down to that one moment that they will look back and reminisce that no persuasion was needed and yet the words came out just right 😳

Pandit jee I'm in awe of you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Whoa!!!that was a kidilam proposal!!!!!❤️

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