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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Neel's sudden proposal worded with care music to ears
Soothing and melodious
An Indradhanush of flowers shower on the couple

SVM '''

You, Vani and Kalpana understand the poetic language of nisha so well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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phool to khil gaye gulshan gulshan , but our dear Suvi is taking very long to respond to the proposal. its been two days since shes been mulling over this... She needs to release Panditji of the torture!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: taramira

phool to khil gaye gulshan gulshan , but our dear Suvi is taking very long to respond to the proposal. its been two days since shes been mulling over this... She needs to release Panditji of the torture!


We r also waiting for the answer...
Nishaaa
Update !!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful & Passionate


"shaddi abhi?" she asked

When he began to laugh hysterically
She became self conscious and said "Aaj?"


He shook his head first... and then swallowed and exhaled, catching his breath

"Haan ya nah?" he asked
He would ponder over the proposal later that night and the next morning drying laundry out in the terrace, chatting with Ruchi

"I cannot believe you are proposing to me" she said shakking her head vigorously and shutting her eyes

Then opened it finaly and said "Nihar ko maloom chala?" she asked

His face turned somber

"Nihar ko maloom nai?" she asked

"He knows the talk is happening at home Suvechha" he explained

This was the first time he had said her name AFTER a wedding proposal

She turned red as she imagined him calling her that way as she dried laundry on the terrace or went to check on the pressure cooker

Waves of delight swept her away, almost bodily shoving her towards the amaltas limbs

"Marathi mein poochhen hum?" he asked scrolling through his phone

She smiled like a child

"Without consulting Google" she whispered

He leaned and whispered something naughty in her ear, her ear was sizzling hot

"We both dont know what we are doing" she said nervously reaching out and holding his hand for comfort as if they were plotting to rob a bank

He held and squeezed her hand tight

"We both know we like each other" he said

"You are my boss, I am a single parent, you have known me for 4 months?" she said

"I am a single parent too and I like what I see... and know" he said

He said it with confidence he hadnt felt before

"Neel... I dont know what to say" she felt tears
He paused, and led her to a park like walk way away from the street, with flowering plants all around

She sat down weakly on a concrete stool and he stood in front of her

"Amma just met me... I dont think she wants to see me take Nupur's place" she said

"There is no "taking" Suvechha" he said

"Your family has protocol, high expectations, rituals surrounding everything... mere ghar pe siraf Varsha hey... usko batane ka hai nai batane ka hai maine socha nahi... means about us... and then the proposal" she said

She smiled

"I havent been asked so nicely" she said and then said sheepishly "Its not like mere paas both proposal hey.. but I cannot forget today" she said

She had made up her mind, she was going to be nice and listen and review and click on it and "move it to the Archive"

He sat down by her

"aapko Varsha se dar hai?" he asked

"Everything is scary Neel... we dont know how its going to be to live with each other, you want your mother to stop looking for a girl, so u think I am a good choice" she said

"Is that why I asked u u think?" he was not happy

"Lets face it... u went from not wanting to remarry to having a relationship to wanting a remarriage" she succinctly broke it down three ways

"Nihar ke approval barobar nai hai" she said fearfully

"Hes TEN" Neel interupted

She observed how impatient and impulsive he was... going after something he liked with so much passion and courage
He was unstoppable

She was unable to step forward

Disillusioned, fearful, petrified, ashamed
She had her heart broken catastrophically by Rutwik
She had told herself her first broken heart was going to be her only broken heart
How could such a beautiful thing like Neel Pandit emerge from the mess?

"Amma did not think I measured up to Nupur" she said softly

He exhaled

It hurt him to see her feel so humiliated

He wanted her not to be competing with Nupur

There was no way for him to stop that competition
She will receive it as a wedding gift

"Work... we are not thinking about work... the office, Gomez... sab log kya bolega" she said

"Shaadi kayi log karte hain" he mocked

She smiled

"I heard" she mocked back

"Do u mistrust my motive?" he asked

"NO!" she said passionately

their gaze met...
That was the only thing that was good about this proposal at this point...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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What are people's 4th of July plans?
Shilpa how do u like California?

I bet the weather is gorgeous

If u are living in the Bay Area then it probably looks like Bangalore
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woo hoo... update!!!!
What a Lovely update!!! Thank you Nisha!

I am so glad that we picked up right after the proposal and I am so happy that Neel gets to see how inadequate Suvi is feeling right now (especially after her meeting with Mrs. Pandit)...what I really like about Neel is that he is aware of her circumstances and that her world view is very different than his somewhat protected situation-both as a man and as a widower. He has empathy for her situation and that just makes him even more likable!

Oh oh are we going to see some push back from Nihar?😕

No plans for 4th Nisha...might go see a movie or try to catch up on sleep!!!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rational thinking by suvi
All douts r so apt and bang on
But in her double mind she forgot to cherish the proposal
And yes nihar' approval is as important as of neel's
He is no kid
If it's so difficult for amma to think anyone in place of nupur then how bout nihar ???!!!!!

Hmmm let's see how it's going to be...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nisha it always feels as if u r there with the characters and u write while they r talking
It's amazing how u think so naturally
It's beautiful how suvi replied

But the biggest question is
aage kya hua ???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Amma did not think I measured up to Nupur" she said softly

He exhaled

It hurt him to see her feel so humiliated

He wanted her not to be competing with Nupur

There was no way for him to stop that competition
She will receive it as a wedding gift.

This show that their struggle is long and it doesn't end merely with marriage.

I just hope Neel is as much empathetic towards her post marriage and doesn't compare her with Nupur himself. As Suvi might not mind being compared by other but if Neel does the that would hurt her.

Thank you for beautiful update. For 4th July, I plan to read more updates 😉.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nisha0604

What are people's 4th of July plans?

Shilpa how do u like California?

I bet the weather is gorgeous

If u are living in the Bay Area then it probably looks like Bangalore


The weather is good Nisha...still getting used to the sunset timings...8 pm is like 4pm for me. We dont live in Bay area...its Southern California Glendora city. Without car its very difficult currently. Planning to go check out some this weekend.

Thank you for asking..😊

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