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Posted: 8 years ago

WOW!! Beautiful updates...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh no Poor rosid they lost their child..
Waiting for next update.
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Oh no They lost their baby poor rosid. Roli ka reaction kya hoga can't wait yaar. Update soon and thx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
emotional update ...poor rosid ...hope they should come out without any depression
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it's very emotional update...oh no rosid lost their baby...eagerly waiting for next dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional update..
Roli lost her baby...
Thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Emotional Part.😭
It was so sad to see Sid like this.😭
Rosid Lost their Baby,it was so sad.😭
I hope everything will be fine.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
emotional update roshni sid's condition made me cry can't see him like that let's see how he handles roli waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago


PART 73


"Ahaana..." Rithik mumbles without able to believe what she said. Aarav is also in a state of shock after getting to know the state of the happenings. As for Siddhant, he speaks nothing but sits on the chair as if he lost all his senses. "Siddhant..." calls Rithik as he reaches him. The urgency of consoling him dominates in his mind. Rithik tries asking Sid but he holds his hand and looks up at Ahaana. "You took the responsibility right Ahaana? You took the responsibility of saving my Roli and baby right?" he asks making Ahaana hurt. Sid stands up coming face to face with Ahaana. "Then how did this happen Ahaana??? How????' he shouts. Ahaana cries seeing his state. She very well knows he isn't accusing her, but it his broken mind's outburst. "Siddhant..." consoles Aarav as he gives him a warm hug. "Aarav..." cries Sid as he breaks down. Rithik and Ahaana watches with tears and they know they can't do anything beyond that now. "What will I say to my Roli now yaar...What will I say???? "he cries. " will she be able to cope up with the fact that our baby is..." he stops as pain hits his heart. It's their first baby; their symbol of love that got lost. "Ahaana runs away to a corner unable to bear the guilt of not being to save the baby and Rithik rushes to her.


"Ahaana...it's okay..Siddhant didn't say it purposefully..." he consoles as he hugs her tightly. Ahaana cries in to his shirt as she fidgets with his shirt button. "it's..it's not that Rithik..I know that Siddhant didn't mean it...but..But...my pain...my pain..Is about Roli...I know.. I Know Rithik...she love the baby a lot...each time she saw the baby on the sonography screen, I only know how happy she was...how will we tell her that, we couldn't save it??? How Rithik??? What will I reply if she ask me.????" she cries. "Ahaana...calm down...we can't do anything with it...I too can't bear the pain...but what to do...maybe it's the fate..." Rithik says as a conclusion. "What fate Rithik? What sort of fate is it? How much has Roli and Siddhant borne in these few months?? how much?? how can god be so heartless to test them so cruelly? You know Rithik, the baby came in to my hands...A little baby girl who barely fitted in to my arms..We won't believe that she's... it felt like that she was sleeping...like a doll..." says Ahaana as she breaks down again. Rithik gets tears hearing this. He just tightens his hug around her and closes his eyes; probably to find some peace.


Much later. Roli has been shifted to the ICU and Ahaana, controlling her emotions makes sure that she's given best care. Sid has accepted the truth and controlled his feelings though he feels so terrible inside. He finds Ahaana coming out of the ICU and feels guilty of what he had said to her back then. He gets up and reqhs Ahaana whilst she wathes him nervously. "I'm sorry Ahaana..i..i know I talked rubbish..But I swear, it wasn't intentional...I just...I just went out of the mind..." says Sid as his eyes again tear up. "it's okay Siddhant...you need not to be sorry..i can understand your feelings...one way, you said it right as I couldn't complete the responsibility that i took in my hand..." she says with tears. "No Ahaana..You shouldn't say that ...i agree..we lost the baby...but it's because of you that my Roli is fine now...And I can't you enough for tat...Thanks..." says Sid emotionally. Rithik smiles seeing this and puts hand around Ahaana's shoulders. "you okay???' he asks her as she leans on his shoulders with tears.

It's a few hours since Roli is still in the ICU under high surveillance because she was going through intensive bleeding because of the miscarriage. She hasn't come around yet due to the effect of the anesthesia. . Siddhant is in a total devastated state... He's disconcerted thinking of how she will respond when she comes to know that their baby is no more; that the child she has been expecting all the while won't come now. The thought itself shoots up his blood pressure beyond limits. He has never felt the baby, never known anything of its development apart from watching from a distance, yet it feels like piercing his heart with a dagger when he thinks of the fact that it is lost. He wonders then how will Roli feel. She has been living just for the baby after they separated; she has known every little movement and development of the baby; She's its mother!!! How will she bear the pain???

As for Rithik, his state is no different form Siddhant's. Knowing much better than Siddhant of Roli's association with the baby, he has no clue of how to handle her after she knows the truth. Anyway they got to deal her with care because her physical condition is also not satisfactory.


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A little later. Ahaana comes out of the ICU with a grim expression. She looks at Siddhant who's standing staring at infinity and Rithik who's standing at a little distance from him. "Roli is conscious..."she mumbles making the guys come out of their respective medications. Siddhant panics. He cannot go through these, he just can't.. "Let me go out.. The moment she sees me, it will ruin her condition further...I just don't want to hurt her more...I just don't want..." he says as he turns to leave wit brimming eyes. "But she's asking for you..." says Ahaana making Sid and Rithik surprised. "Ahaana??" questions Rithik. "haan...She's yet to know of the miscarriage...but right now, she just wants to see Siddhant and she's asking for him..."says Ahaana. Siddhant feels nervous. What can I tell her, he wonders. Seeing Sid in utter confusion Rithik puts a consoling hand on his shoulder. "Siddhant...Just go..." says hm. "but Rithik...what will I tell her?" he questions. "listen Siddhant...this is a really tough situation and as much as I understand, only you can handle our Roli now...So go...just don't think of what will happen...Just remember this, we need our Roli...we need her safe...you get it?' queries Ahaana. Sid feels responsible. Yes...it's his responsibility to handle her. He has promised to stay by her in all difficulties and at least now he has to straighten up his spine and make a move. He levels up himself and wipes his tears. "I'll go..." he says with confidence. Ahaana and Rithik nods and watches him with hope as he makes it in to the ICU.


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Roli feels really wobbly as she stares at the glucose drip near her bed. All she can remember is the loud noise of a truck thrashing with her and her falling down. Fleeting images of a weeping Siddhant also runs to her mind. As she tries to think further, she spots him at the door-Siddhant. He's staying like a frozen iceberg; his eyes are filled with tears. Roli's eyes also well up as she spots him. Her heart beats fast. Sid walks up to her she watches him. He pauses near the bed and sits on it as he looks to her teary eyes. She throws her hand in air and slaps him and back and forth lightly on his face. "Couldn't you tell me you rascal???"' she questions him with tears as she grabs his shirt. "Roli..." Sid cries in to her shoulder as he hugs her overwhelmed with emotions. Roli too hugs him as she lies on her bed, as tightly as she can with her tears running down from her eyes to his shirt. Sid nuzzles to her shoulders as tears sprints down from his eyes. The two cries putting out all in them. Finally Sid pull back and looks at Roli. "Didn't you trust me Siddhant??? Did you think that I'll not give in if you ask me for something? Is it how you thought of your Roli???' asks Roli with tears. Sid feels so weak now. He has no answer for her query and he knows he'll not get for the ones she's going to ask. "I just...i just thought so...Roli..." Sid babbles like a two year old. Roli feels touched as she finds the full six feet man sobbing like a kid. "It's okay Siddhant...It's okay...I'm just sad that I couldn't stand by you in all your difficulties...I couldn't know it when you were burning within your insides...Sshhh...stop...Siddhant..."she tries to console him who falls to her shoulders and weeps without a break. All his emotions come out and Roli does nothing but cries as she runs her fingers in his messed up hairs. They stay in the same position for a while. "Siddhant...get up now..the baby will say that this Papa is too greedy to hug Mamma..." says Roli shaking the wits out of Siddhant. He gets up quickly and looks at her who innocently smiles at him. "Now there won't be any tensions...it's just me, you and our baby..." she says and is about to touch her belly it finds it reduced in size. She gets shocked at this and looks at Siddhant who looks away from her in fear if facing hr. Next moment she feeds her mind with the positive side. "baby must be in incubator na..."she questions him. Sid looks at her with tears. He doesn't know how to tell her the truth. "it's fine na...tell me, is it a girl or boy...I think it will be a naughty Roli..."she says. Sid closes his eyes in agony and feels Roli's hands on his cheek. "Why're you silent Siddhant...Oh...I know..The excitement na..I understand..." she says as he moves her fingers on his cheek and wipes his tears. She's seriously believing that the child is born and alive, How will it tell her the truth, he thinks silently. "Siddhant...when can I feed the baby??? I need to see it... I need to touch it..take it in my arms..kiss it..how nice it will be na..."she asks him naively. Now Sid really loses it. He can't take this anymore. "Areyy...just stop this...You can't do anything like that...Anything...because our child is not alive...it's not ALIVE..." he shouts. Roli goes frozen with this. What he just said, she cannot believe her ears. "Si...Siddhant...I forgave you for all that you did...but if you say such cruel lies na...I won't forgive it...I won't..." she says and cries turning her face against him. Sid come in to his senses with his and feels guilty for his outburst. " I know you're lying..." says Roli as she closes her eyes. Sid rushes to Roli and kisses her all over her face. "please baby...please...Listen to me... he says as he pulls back and holds her. Roli looks to his eyes with tears in her
eyes. "trust me...And please...please hear carefully...ya...our baby..our baby isn't...alive...But...but please..." Sid couldn't complete as he sees Roli in utter shock. She gets it; it's true. His eyes say it. It's true. She lost her baby. Her baby won't come to her now. The realization hits her hard and she runs her palm over her belly. "my baby my..." she mumbles incoherently. "Roli..." Sid calls panicky as he cups her face. But she pushes him off and says again "my baby..." Sid watches without knowing what to do. "my baby..."she cries even louder. Roli quickly pulls off the lead to the drip from her palm and gets up. "Roli..." Sid tries to control her and make her back to bed but to no avail. Roli gets up weakly and cries "Aaahhh..." Sid rushes to her trying to stop her but she doesn't listen to him. "tell me it's a lie...tell me Siddhant..." she cries as she holds his collar. Sid feels hopeless. He holds her weak frame in his arms and mumbles "Accept the reality Roli...Please..." "nooo!!!!!" cries Roli as she pushes him off. "No..."she says hysterically as she prepares to stir out. The wounds in and out and the numerous bandages makes it difficult for her but she seems determinant. But Sid catches her in nick of time. "Roli..please..." he begs. "I need to see my child...give my baby to me..i need to see my baby..." she protests in his arms. "Ahaana...Rithik..." shouts Sid as she goes uncontrollable. Ahaana rushes in with few nurses and finds the commotion. "Roli..." she calls and with the help of Siddhant's and the nurses' help forces her to the bed. "See Bhabhi...give me my baby...I need to see it..he's lying..Siddhant is lying..."cries Roli. Ahaana huffs in despair and quickly breaks a vial of soporific drugs and injects it in her vein as Sid holds her with tears. "my baby..my..." Roli mumbles unclearly and finally dozes off in the effect of drugs.
Edited by RoshniMenon88 - 8 years ago

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