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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional update...
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Emotional update eagerly waiting for nxt update dear and thanks for pm
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Emotinal update. Can't wait for next and thx for pm
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Emotional update dear...
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it's really emotional part...eagerly waiting for next dear...
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emotional update roshni made me cry let's see how sid handle roli her waiting for next eagerly update soon
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very intense update ..their breakdowns omg so bad ...made me so emotional ...really looking for next updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Emotional Part.😭
The way Ahaan became broken not saving Rosid Baby,it was so sad.😭
Sid said to Roli about her Miscarriage,it was so sad.😭
Roli became broken down on heard this News,it was so sad.😭
I hope everything will be fine.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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PART 74



Two weeks later. Roli sits in the hospital bed with the same gloomy expression she has been maintaining for the past two weeks. She hasn't smiled even once in this period and the tears that rolled down from cheeks never dried. She could not accept the fact of losing her baby which once was her single reason to live. She has been totally dependent on it on the months when she lived way from Siddhant. Yes...Rithik and Ahaana gave her strength to live, but the main reason of not being able to end her life was the presence of that little thing that grew inside her day by day. It felt like making her heart in to pieces when she came to know that she lost it.



Siddhant has been taken aback by Roli's state; he never wanted to see her so. He too suffers from the pain of losing the baby, but hides it so that he can be strength of Roli whose insides are broken ion to pieces by the mishap. Ahaana has seen through personally so that Roli recuperates at the fastest and now she is perfectly fine physically apart from the fracture in the leg that would take a bit more time to heal. Rithik and Aarav also stood by Siddhant, in the attempt of cheering up Roli but always feel sad on the lack of improvement in her.



Presently. Sid sits by Roli with a bowl of porridge in his hands and a smile on his lips. He scoops a generous amount of it in a spoon and brings it near her soft lips. "Roli...just eat it...I tell you; it's very tasty...And see, I have asked them to put your favorite tender coconut pieces in it...Just have a bit..." he says to her pampering her to the most. "I don't need it Siddhant..."says Roli very lowly. She wants to change; to smile at him who's genuinely trying to get her back; but somehow she isn't able to do it. "What is it Roli...You didn't eat properly even in the morning...How long will this go baby...if it's because of this hospital atmosphere, then evening we're going to our home...then you need not sit in this hospital bedroom...So now...please..." pleads Siddhant. "Please Siddhant...i don't feel like eating..." says Roli as tears start to appear in her eyes. "Ae Roli...don't cry..." he wipes her tears , hugs her sidewise and continues " You're my sherni na??? So you won't cry ...See...your Siddhant is beside you...So please...Though not for you, at least for me, have this..." he requests. Roli feels so lost in his authentic attempts and forgetting her pains opens her lips a little. Sid gets a smile at his and feeds her a spoon of porridge. He wipes her lips and smiles at her as she swallows the food. It is then when Ahaana, Aarav and Rithik enters the room. "Aahaa...it's eating time..."says Aarav as he smiles. H knows that he should do his side to get back his bestie to her lively self again. Sid smiles seeing the trio and gets up keeping the bowl aside. "All good na Roli?" asks Ahaana as she checks her eyes. Roli tries to hide her painful expressions from all and remains neutral. "what a questions Ahaana??? This football is all set...See...now she'll get up and slap me..." says Aarav to tease her. But Roli just fakes a smile which makes his smile fade away. Sid looks at him and nods in negative while he blinks at him conveying that everything will be alright. Rithik sits by Roli and hugs her. Roli leans on his shoulders and sits quiet. "My baby is fine na?" he questions. "Hmmm..." she hums. "So dear audience...now I'll tell you why we're here..." says Aarav in a typical media person style acting as if he's holding a mike. Roli and Sid stares at him amusingly without knowing what he's up to. "So now we're going to do a magic to cheer up this moody moody couple...What say Rithik?" he asks. "Absolutely..." Rithik agrees with him with a smile and gets up. Sid looks at them confused and Roli is in the same state. "So...here we have something...Something...Guess what???Ahaana ..."just give it..." asks Aarav and Ahaana gives him a little box. As RoSid wonders what's in it Aarav holds the box before their eyes. "So the surprise is over... The magic in this box is..." he says and opens it. "Tadaaa..,. he says as he takes out something that makes RoSid shocked and surprised. It's a mangalsutra and a little box of sindoor. Sid looks at Roli with tears in his eyes whilst they remember the unpleasant moment.



******** Roli moves to her neck and in one go breaks her mangalsutra letting the beads fall on the floor with a splatter. Sid eyes widens in shock seeing the sight. "Now no relationship...no past...everything is over..." says Roli. *************



Roli is taken out of her medications as Ahaana keeps a hand on her shoulder. "I know Roli...you must be remembering the past..But forget them all...now you both will have a new start in your life forgetting all the mishaps... And this...this will mark a new start..." says her as she wipes Roli's tears. Rithik moves to Siddhant and gets him to Roli. "You know what keeps you both united even after so much tests...The love and trust you both share...And these are the symbol of your love...your relationship... Roli...Knowingly or unknowingly, you had to stay away from these...But not more...Siddhant..." he looks at Aarav who gives the mangalsutra and Sindoor to Sid. Sid looks at Roli who's very emotional and gets them with trembling hands. "go,..." says Aarav as he pushes him to Roli. Sid looks at Roli's welled up eyes for a moment. He smiles, opens the sindoor box and taking a pinch of it, fills her hairline again initiating their relationship. Roli gets tears at this and looks at him with a painful smile. Then he takes the mangalsutra and ties it round Roli's neck as she closes her eyes. A tear drop escapes her eyes as she caresses the mangalsutra., only she knew how much pain she had gone through keeping them way from herself. Sid keeps his hand on her cheek and smiles at her assuring he's always for her. "I love you yaar..." he mumbles as he shows his pinky finger to her. "I love you too na yaar..." she says as she locks her pinky finger with his. Sid hugs Roli forgetting the presence of the trio who gets a smile seeing a positive event. It's the claps of the trio that brings RoSid back to the world. "Okay...okay ...Done for now...Now...Siddhant beta...juts come with me...we got to do the discharge formalities for taking your girl home...' says Aarav as he gets hold of Sid. Sid nods and looks at Roli. "I'll come in a while okay...Ahaana..Please feed her... " Sid says and walks out with Aarav and Rithik. Ahaana smiles and starts feeding Roli with the porridge.



Much later. It's Roli's discharge time and Sid ahs cleared every formalities. Aarav and Rithik takes all their belongings and arranges them in the car whilst Sid and Ahaana helps Roli in changing. "Come Sid...everything is ready..." says Aarav as he returns from the car. Sid nods and looks at Roli. He gives Roli a hand to get down. Roli grasps it and tries to stand but her leg aches like anything. She tries to take small steps but hisses in pain. Rithik looks Roli with tension whilst Siddhant knowing very well of what to do, bends and picks Roli up in his arms. "Whoaaa...that was a shot..." comments Aarav. Sid smiles at Roli and she tries to reciprocate it though it doesn't become successful. Sid understands her plight and without talking anything more, walks with her through the hospital lobby as the trio follows them. He gets in to the back seat with Roli as Aarav takes the driving seat. Me and Ahaana will come in our car..." says Rithik to which Sid nods. "Shall we go..." asks Aarav and Sid nods in positive. Roli leans on Sid's shoulders and sits silently whilst they start home.
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Awesome update dear hope roli will fine soon. Waiting for next and thx for pm.

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