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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 8_

Part 8:

Next day di mrg

Im so hapie...as I can meet my sid

Im in my room...

Fully confused

Which dress to wear

Neha is helping me in selecting

Atlast I finalized a yellow n green clr lehenga.( roli dress at the tym of fake mrg plan with veeru)

Im satisfied

Neha said: roli ur frnd cum luvr..vl flat..if he c u in this lehenga may b sid vl take u to mandap n marry u..ur mrg vl happen instead of premar

I thought ...Wow by imaginig it hw beautiful it is...

I blushed

Neha observed this: arey roli went into dream land...come on yar...atleast spend some tym with me nw...i know u vl frgt me aftr cing my bhayya...leave abt me..u vl frgt urself

I blushed hard...becz its matter of fact...i really frgt myself...when I c my sid...

Neha is teasing me more n more

While v r njying

Neha got call

She z tensed by hearing news

She was shocked..she kept phone by saying I vl start soon

I asked her: neha wat happened yar

Neha said: roli buaji fell frm stairs...they joined in hsptl...I have to go to lucknow

I was tensed...hw is she nw?

They said she is ok...bt her hand got fracture I need to meet her...she said with shivering voice

I hugged her n relaxed her...I know hw much she loves her buaji...neha lost her parents in her childhood...she grown in orphanage...her buaji thought to take neha with her...bt her husband didn't agree...bt still buaji used to come to meet neha in orphanage...she saved money...n used to give money to her fr her studies...with help of buaji...n doners...neha completed her education...she is always thank ful to her buaji...bt today she met accident...so she cant able to cntl herself

I said: ok I vl drop u in station...u can meet buaji

Neha: sry roli..i promised I vl b with u in di mrg n vl help u in always...bt I cant able to keep my promise

I felt touched: no dear...its ok...than me..nw buaji needs u...n ofcourse u fulfilled ur promised...till nw u helped me lot...

Neha toldl: y cant I help..simar is my di too

I nodded: ok lets go...v vl tell to maa n papa..n I vl come n drop u

She agreed

she packed her clothes...n v went down

v r surprised

ya...sid ji is there..talking with papa n maa

all lukd us

papa came to us

papa asked: arey roli...wr u both going..n neha...bag in ur hands

I started: papa ...buaji fell frm stairs...neha want to meet her

All r shocked

Papa asked: oh god...hw is she nw

Neha replied: ha papa she is fine...bt I want to meet her

Maa came to us

She caressed neha cheeks: dnt wry beta...mata rani v take care of her...v vl pray fr her...u go fast...c her..n cum fast...v vl b waitin fr u

Neha nodded

She took all blessings

I turned to papa

N said

Papa i accompy neha till station

Papa agreed

Papa asked: hw u both vl go

I said: by auto

Papa : take care

Before v can start

Sid ji intrupted: papa im also going in that way...I drop them

Jaman agreed

V 3 went to car

Sidji sat on driving seat

Me n neha occupied back seat

Im busy in consoling tensed neha

V reached station...n gave send off to neha

Nw I lukd at sid ji

He too lukd at me

V both shared smile

i asked; wat spl...u came to home today

he replied: nothing...mataji told to handover some stuff which groom family have to give to bride family..so came here to give that

hmm ok...i said

V both came out

I thought I can c sid ji on didi mrg...bt I met him today..im so hapie fr that

I turned to sid

I said: ok sid ji im leaving bye...

Sid ji immediately responsed: oy wr r u going

I said: to house...maa z waiting fr me

I vl drop lets go he said

y u took pain sid ji..i asked

arey wats pain in that.cant I drop my frnd..in fact.its my pleasure...

I smiled

He opened car door

I occupied passenger seat

He is driving

Its my first journey with sid ji...

I prayed it should becum 7 janam journey...no no journey fr every birth

I saw outside

I shouted all of sudden

Sid ji

He is shocked n stpd the car with sudden break

He asked with tensed tone: wat happen roli

I showed golgappa stall outside...n said...im hungry sid ji

He took deep breath

Oh my god roli...u took my breath...it stpd a minute

I cannot let that happen ..i said with low voice

He asked: what?

I said nothing...lets go sid ji... vl eat golgappa

He agreed

V both got down frm car

I ordered two plates golgappa

I was excited...becz I luv to eat it

I started blabbering...hw much I luv golgappa

He is listening with smile on his lips

Seller gave two plates of golgappa

I took one plate

N gave to him another plate

I was abt to keep one in my mouth

I saw his xpression

He lukd confused

I asked: wat happened sid ji

He asked with hesistation..hw to eat this

I just cant able to cntrl my laugh

He glared at me: y r u laughing

I m still laughing...in middle I said: then wat to do...ur the first person...I saw who is asking hw to eat golgappa

Roli dnt laugh much...i really dnt know hw to eat this...

Ok I vl tell.by saying this.i poured that water in poori which is stuffed with curry...n kept entire poori in my mouth...its some wat spicy..bt still njyd it...n said..yummy...its just osum

By cing this...sid ji started following it...he filled poori with water...n abt to keep in his mouth...I remembered something..i just dragged his hand...n pulled golgappa frm his hand...

He is shocked

Roli kya hua?

Sid ji..u have allergy frm spicey items na...its too spicey...im such an idiot...hw can I frgt...by cing this golgappa..i frgt abt ur allergy

I took golgappa plate frm his hand n kept aside

He said: roli this is too much...till nw u tempted me by saying..its yummy...tasty..ba bla...bt tuk frm me...when iam eating...I don't know...bt I vl eat...its little bit spicy na roli no prblm..plz give it

I didn't agree to him I said: no sid ji...its too spicy...I cant take risk again on u...

By saying this...I started eating golgappa...becz I don't have heart to leave it like that...I luv them lot

Sid is glaring at me

I took golgappan poured littlebit spicey water in that as I dnt like to eat with more water...I was looking at him..n eating..im getting laugh by cing his serious face...so while eating I didn't observed its angle...I kept only half in my mouth n ate half part only ...I observed that..nw i abt to keep entirely inside my mouth...i found it was pulled frm my hands

I was surprised

Yes it was taken by sidji

He kept remaing part in his mouth

I cant understand hw to react

He came towards me n said roli its nt that much spicey...ok u eat...I vl wait in car...by saying this he went to car

I was still in shock

Once again entire incident rounded in my mind

I rememberd hw sid ate golgappa which is already tasted by me

I blushed...my cheeks became pinkish

Later I went to car...n occupied the seat

I didn't dare to lift my head...n c him

I cant bear his eyes

There was a sielence

V reached home

Sid said: roli...tq fr golgappa party...n ha...vl meet tmrw...he showed his fist

I bumped it with my fist

I got down

Sid ji said bye

I smiled n said bye...n rushed inside

Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow roli wore yellow colour lehenga i luv that dress roli looks so beautiful defnitely frnd cum luv will flat by cing her ...sid marrying roli instead of premar ...roli will frgt evrything by thinking abt sid ..poor neha...hope her buaji is safe ...she helped roli alot..sid telling i'll drop them...then they'll get time to spend alone...roli shouting suddenly..sid gt fear sid saying my breath stopped n roli telling i cannot let that happen ...roli telling how to eat it...after telling nt allowing him to eat...he ate golgappa which is tasted by roli super yarrr u remembered golgappa ...now i want to eat it ...i want now u only remembered na so u only have to give me😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update I like Roli and neha friendship very much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really roli looked very beautiful that day when she weared that lehnga on her fake marriage but that lehnga only added more beauty bcoz our roli is always pretty eagerly waiting for more dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 9:

Next day

Simar didi mrg

Im the most happiest person

Y not my line vl b clear...if di mrg complete

I went to di room..to c wat she is doing

I went to her

I saw she is sitting infrt of mirror

With tensed filled face

I thought its becz of tension of mrg n leaving mayaka

I went to her

I kept my hands around her nack frm back n leaned on her

She was shocked by my sudden act...n came out of trance

She saw me frm mirror

She kept her palm on my cheeks n caressed it

I said: di...dnt frgt me.after going there

She gve a dry smile

I was blabbering continuously

Bt she is nt reacting

I was surprised

I sat infrnt of her..on desk of dressing dable

N hold her hands

N asked

Wat happened di

She didn't reacted

di...i shooked her

tears started rolling frm her eyes

I was shocked

Di wat happened...I asked tensedly

She said: roli I got call fr atteneding auditions of jhalak

I excited

Di congrates...ur going to achieve it

She cried aloud...no roli I cant

Y di...y ur saying like that

Roli...audition vl b today...they send mail so many days back..bt in over luk..ididnt check my inbox...today while im checking my inbox I found it...

I was shell shocked

Di bt today is ur mrg

Ha roli...its my fate...she started crying again

I cant able to c her in tears

I tried to console her

Bt its vain

I felt bad

Bt di suddenly wiped her tears n stud

No roli I wont cry...infact its tym fr me to take decision..she said firmly

Im trying to figure out...wat she is gng to do

She turned to me hold my hand

Roli till nw u did so many things fr me...this is d last tym..im going to ask u one thing...vl u help me

I cant understand..wat she is gng to ask

Roli...plz...complete rituals in my place...i vl go nw...n vl come back before saath pheras

I was shell shocked

Hw can I do this

Hw can I take di place

Hw can I deceive papa n jiju

Top to that...hw can I sit as bride beside another guy...when I luv my sid

I immeditly said...no di...I cant...

She started shedding tears again..plz roli...do this help..i sware I vl b back with in tym...roli I have no alternative...I cant frgo my passion fr mrg

di...lets tell to maa r papa...I said

roli...hw u got that thought...u know na..papa vl kill me...if he knows abt my goal she said

bt di...hw can v deceive papa...hw can v hide this frm him...no di..its nt crct...v r doing wrong

roli..u luv me na...

I nodded my head as yes

U luv my passion na...she asked

I accepted

Roli cant u help ur di..in achieving her goal

Bt di...hw can I keep my life in stake...that too i

I stpd in middle,...I don't want to tell her abt sid ji

She asked: that too

Di leave it...bt I cant help u...wat if papa knows abt this...

Di tried in several ways to make me accept

Bt I didn't agreed

Then she took some bottle frm desk

Its sleeping pills

I was shocked

Di wat r u doing...I asked her tensedly

Roli...y I have live...y this life..when I dint reach my goal...my passion...im nt intested in this lyf

By saying this she took fist full sleeping pills..n abt to keep her in mouth

I pushed her hand...all those pills fell down

I hold her shoulders tightly..di r u gone mad

Yes im mad...I m mad of my dance...my goal...y u stpd me...when urn t even ready to help me

Let me die...she took another fistful sleeping pils

I stpd her n said: di I vl do as u said

Her face lighten up

She hugged me

Really roli?

I nodded...tears rolling frm my eyes

Bt di...promise me u vl reach on tym I asked frwrding my palm

She kept her palm...I vl definitely

If ur nt on tym...I vl reveal all that im roli...i said firmly

She too agreed

I wore bridal dress n other stuff

I didn't expect this in my life

I was lost

Di left d place frm back window

After some hrs

I heard ma voice

She is knocking door

I covered my face with veil n went to open door

I opened it

Maa n papa came inside

Maa looked around

She asked: simar wr is roli

I cant understand wat to say

By that tym papa came n hugged me

N said

Simar...till nw I scolded u so many tyms...I was against to ur dance...bt simar ur my daughter I did everything fr ur well being...i hope u vl keep good name in law house...I hope..u vl nt do any thing which make my head down infrnt of society...I cant bear that...If anything happen like that...then it vl b d last day in my life...my heart is so weak..i hope u wont break my heart again...by thinking abt so called passion n goals

I was shocked

I got tears

I was dieng with guilt

Papa n maa left place

Its tym fr marriage

Maa came n took me out

She made me to sit on mandap

Pandith chanting mantras

Im getting tears

My hands r shivering

Im praying fr di

I was waiting fr her arrival

I was counting seconds

Papa came n did kanydan

Pandith ji asked to get up fr pheras

My heart beat is lowering

I was waiting fr di too come..n stop this mrg any how

6 pheras done

After 7 phera they declares us as wife n husband

Hw can I bear

He can I becum wife to jiju

Wat abt my sid...my luv

My meeting with sid,...nhok jhoks my love all revolved in my mind

I want to shout n tell im nt simar

Bt papa wrds echoed in my ears

Nw nothing in my hands

7 th phera over

Its done

Mrg over

My life is over

Pandit declared us as wife n husband...this is the hardest sentance I heard in my life

he uncovered my veil slightly n kept sindoor

my eyes blurred with tears...

I know he didn't c me...as viel is uncovered little...that he cant c my face

He tied mangal sutra around my neck

V went n took blessing frm all

This is the akward n unexpected moment in my life

...my dreams...all shatted in one day

My heart cant able to bear this w8

I just want to rush to room n cry whole heartedily

Atlast elders showd some mercy...they told me to take some rest

I agreed,...n rushed to room

N took out veil

I throwd garland aside

I started crying badly

My eyes r swollen

I lukd at the sindoor on my forehead...n cried again...as its kept by some one else

It is the dark day in my life

I lookd at mangalsuta...I was abt to take n throw it out

Bt I remembered my grand ma wrds..n the promise I gave to her

Nw everything happened then wat is there to think

So I decied to keep that mangal sutra..i dnt know y..bt im nt getting hands to take out that manglsutra..may b becz of respect I was having on mrg

When I was lost in my thoughts

I heard a sound frm backside

Yes she came

Ya simar didi

She rushed to me...n asked...sry literally shouted at me...roli mrg happened? Hw can u do this to me...I was strucked in traffic...I thought u vl stp mrg..bt didn't expect this frm u

Nw it really pissed me off

Hw can she accuse me

I lost my life my love becz of her...instead of thanking me...she is accusing me

Its my mistake to help her

Simar is blabbering

Nw I cant able to cntrl

Stop it simar...its enough...

She was shocked when I called with mere name

Roli she said shockingly

Dnt utter my name frm ur mouth...im no more ur sister...becz of u my life my dreams shattered...fr ur dreams..i lost my dreams...its my mistake fr falling for ur emotional black mail...nw c ur accusing...wat u said? Y cant I stop mrg? Im nt simar...who doesn't care abt papa...n his respect...n do wat ever she want...im the one who luvs papa...who thinks abt papa life..papa respect infrnt of society...papa knows u vl make his head dwn infrnt of society...so he came n pleased dnt do such things...just to protect ur name ...n save papa life I didn't stpd this mrg

Nw itself I vl say all this to papa

When I abt to go

Simar stpd me...n begged me nt to do that

At that tym v heard knock

Simar: roli give that dress n mangal sutra to me...some one knocking door..i have to ready fast..have to go to inlaw house

I was shocked

Hw can a person b that much selfish I thought

Im nt intrstd to give mangal sutra...I don't want to go to bw house as elderbahu...ofcourse I cant go too bt still I cant take mangalsutra out

I told: ok I vl give all...except mangal sutra

She was shocked...y she asked

I m nt interested to give ansr to ur qns..its my decision..by saying that I changed dress n gave to her

N I wore my dress n I came out

Maa n papa asked me wr I went..i covered by saying that busy with some wrk

They too convinced

All r set fr simar bidai

My eyes r searching fr my sid

I remebrd nw I have no more r8 to call as my sid

My eyes filled with tears

At that tym I saw him

Ihe is also cmng by searching fr some one

He saw me

N came to me

Ihe lukd at me

I think he observed my swollen eyes

He started hesistatingly

Roli I know ur feeling bad...i know hw much ur clz to ur di..bt dnt wry v vl take care of her...n I promise...I vl take care of her...infact bhabi means..like mother fr me( no chapels guys..plz trust me...I vl clear all things soon..im rosidians..as a rosidian I wont do anything which is against rosid plz be patient...to move stry further..im doing like this..hope u all understand me)

I didn't give rly...I left place without speaking

This made me mad

Bhabi is lyk mother...this wrds started revolving in my mind

This made me realize im nt frnd cum luvr to sid any more

I got tears

I cried like anything

Simar left to bw house happily

My heart filled with sid,,,bt mangalsutra on name of others

No one shouldn't get my position

I just started hating all

I lost my naughtiness

Became reserved

Fewdays later neha came

She is hapie that her buaji is fyn..i too felt hapie

She also brought news that vboth got seat in London university fr doing masters in business

I thought to go

I m nt intrestedd to stay here

I just want to go away frm all

Neha saw changes in mine n shocked

She didn't c me like this anytym

She asked me wats d matter,,

Im nt intrseted to share my grief with anyone...it should just burry in my heart

So I asked nt to pressurize me abt this

She understud me

She didn't insisted me agin

Bt I understud she is missing me lot

Bt I cant do anything

She is living with hope that oneday I vl share to her

Papa n maa gave approval to go London...aftr lot of effort frm my side

Atlast im in London along with neha

Today is my first day in clz

Roli pov ends

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Posted: 9 years ago
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emotional update yarr...poor roli so excited fr her di marriage bt that filthy creature made emotional blackmail n want to fulfill her dream...n again scolding roli..how can a person be selfish..i know simar will be hate her😡 luvd it when roli called her with mere name she deserve some slaps ...sid telling like that i thought to kill u bt ok u'll sort out that issue soon ...roli became reserved ...hope she share her grief with neha...roli gng to london how she'll meet sid then...i think both meet in london only 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fab update dear eagerly waiting for rosid meet in london
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sid don't know how to eat gol gappe he he funny sid ate golgappa which roli ate nice that bitch simar what does she think of herself selfish creature accusing roli good roli called her with name she don't deserve to be called didi poor roli feeling bad for her she became reserved now hope u sort out the issue soon & bring our naughty roli back waiting for sid's pov update next soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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tq so so much guys fr cmnts..feeling so hapie..vl upd next part tmrw n8..our sid entry n rosid meeting in london...stay tuned
Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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O god..broken roli..."bhabi is like mother"...waiting for rosid nxt meet...wats sid's reaction about roli's London journey..

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