AVIMAN/ROSID OS : LUV NOT BELIEVE IN FOGEY RITUALS

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Roli is the pampered daughter of the Thakur.She is capricious, prone to throwing little tantrums when her wishes are not granted, but is on the whole, a kind and generous girl.She and Radha the daughter of the village priest, are childhood friends, despite the difference in their status though Roli aunt dislikes the friendship, neither her loving mother, nor her fond uncle constrain her to end it.One day radha tell to roli that her cousin Siddanth coming home from mumbai in holiday.
Siddanth Orphaned at a very young age and adopted by his uncle a Poojari, and aunt, Premvati, Siddanth lives a poor lifestyle with them and their daughter, Radha.Poojari works for Bade Thakur and his family and prepares astrological charts and organizes prayers, and asks him for financial assistance so that Devdhar can go to Bombay and study, which is approved. Now he return after 8 years.Siddanth has matured, returns home so that Radha could get married.When Roli heard that Siddanth coming she is very excited they r childhood friend.when siddanth came and saw Roli he falls in love.roli very excited and hug him
Roli :wow siddanth ji(he is 6 yers elder then ROli so he call siddanthji) u look very handsome and laugh.Sid smiled.Day by day Siddanth even more in love with her than before.Roli open friendliness, her childish squabbles, her generous nature, even her questioning of what love is, all lead him to believe that she cares for him as much as he.Roli likes him too, but is very naive about love and intimacy.
Due to family status difference, Siddanth is unable to express his love for her.
Radha tries to warn him Roli condescends to you when she behaves so familiarly; don't make the mistake of thinking she loves you but Siddanth is sure - of his love. He decides to ask Bade Thakur for Roli's hand in marriage.
when Sid go to meet with bade thakur he is in for a shock, however. Roli's marriage is being fixed to Kunwar Narendra Pratap Singh and more shock when roli he saw roli is very excited she behaves like a child so she can't understand what is marrige foe her marrige where she can wear beautiful and heavy cloths, jewelliries. Broekn-hearted Siddanth decides to leave, but is forced to bow to his Roli's wishes and stay back for the wedding. Roli is married off amidst all the pomp and circumstance, and as her doli leaves the haveli, Siddanth returns to the city.
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when Narendra enter in room he saw Roli slept like a child he smile and he also sleep.The next day Roli comes back to her home in accordance with custom. Naren flush with happiness goes out in his jeep and is killed in an accident leaving behind Roli his bride of one day. Overnight, her life changes. A girl who has never known grief is subsumed by it. The women from the Thakur khandaan and even her own Badi maa are bent on following tradition that demands that a widow's long luxurious locks be shorn (for everyone knows that beautiful hair attracts male attention). Luckily for Roli succour is at hand Her jethani stops the ceremony. Roli is their daughter-in-law, she insists; the day the pheras were taken, she had renounced her paternal home. Now it is up to them to take care of her. And so Roli begins life anew in a household where her jethani is very loving, and very practical. Her young sister-in-law has a long life ahead of her; she needs to learn how to take care of herself. Young Roli takes her advice to heart; in that one moment, she leaves her childish navet behind.but no one can change destiny one day roli's jeth try to rape her but jethani came and stipp his devil act.Giving in to the young girl's wishes, the hapless woman sends Roli home.
There is a difference between the Roli who was the pampered daughter of the house, and the defeated young woman who returns home from her sasural. She is constantly reminded of her fate by her aunt, whose taunts hurt not only Roli, but also her mother. She ensures that Roli's life is miserable; her luxurious room is no longer hers, she cannot laugh, cannot talk to strangers, she is only allowed one meal a day, which she has to cook herself...
Meanwhile Siddanth not knowing of the storms that have broken over his Roli's innocent head, returns to hear this shocking news. He immediately return to village and first go to meet Roli when he enter in haveli and try to go to Roli room her aunt stop him and say now she leave in servant quartes Siddanth shock and when he enter in Roli room he totally broke down after seeing her condition tears came out from his eyes Roli smile after saw Sid and try to hide her pain. Siddanth can't belive that she is a same girl her plight grieves him immensely.He decide once again he bring smile on her face. After that every day he try so Roli came out from her pain.To Roli his presence is a breath of fresh air. In his company she learns to laugh again to feel again and finally,to luv again. But villagers talk about them and taunt to roli that she is widow and she is no rights to laugh cannot talk to strangers after hearing that Siddanth get angry
Sid:Customs and rituals r made for the ease of human , human r not made for customs and rituals.After that everyone mum.
Now Siddanth decide to ask roli hand from her uncle when sid tell his wish to roli's uncle he agree for marrige and thanx to Sid bcoz of him once again Roli life fill with happiness.Everyone happy except Roli aunt she tell roli that u r very unlucky if u marry with Sid he will also die after hearing this Roli tell uncle that she not marry with Sid.he shock when Sid heard this he console roli uncle and tell he convince Roli.He searching Roli and find on terrace.WHen Roli saw sid he try to go from there but Sid hold his hand and pull towards him she fall on his chest Sid cup her face and say
Sid:i saw love for me in ur eyes then y u do all this

Roli:no u misunderstand i don't luv u i know u change my life that dosen't means i luv u.
Siddanth try a lot to convince her but she is too adamant can't listen him just say everytime i don't luv u plz forget her and try to go from there when she going sid say
Sid: luv is a disease that dosen't come easily and when it comes then never goes away fine u not luv me na it's ok but for me u r my life and without u it's difficult to live better i die after listening this Roli kneel down and cry a lot Sid rush towards her and help her to stand
Roli: y u not listening me i m very unlucky if u come in my life u will die just like Narendra Sid shock and realize how much pain she hide in herself he can't control and pull Roli towards him and peck her lips so she came out from her pain she equally responded him.They were lost in each other's love.After sometime when they release their lips Roli hug him tightly
Roli:i luv u Siddanth ji and onceAgain cried a lot.
Sid:who told u that u r unlucky u r the most beautiful gift given by god to me.Roli tell everything Sid get angry and hold Roli hand And went to hall where everyone waiting for Roli answer. Rosid came there and sid scold her aunty and tell everyone y roli deny for marriage.Roli uncle tightly slap his wife and announce nxt day Rosid marrige.Next day marriage happen in a grand way.
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sid enter in room and lock the door he saw roli near the window he go and hug her tightly from back he took on her arms and lay down on bed and leaned on top of her and run his index finger from forehead... Nose... lips...(Roli close her eyes) chin... Neck... as he moved further down Roli caught his hand...
Sid smiled and Roli blushed...
Sid moved towards her face... Kissed on her forehead, eyes, nose, cheeks,,,, and landed on her trembling lips.
He pinned her both hands to the bed and kissed her crazily. He took her lips into his feelings it's sweetness and made his way into her mouth... He tasted every corner of her mouth with his tongue... He teased her entangling his tongue with hers to which Roli moaned...
Roli too responed to him similarly equally invading his mouth.
Both lost completely on each other invading their love mutually.
Sid without breaking their lip lock took her in to him holding her waist while Roli cross her hands on his back.
When they lacked breath completely...they pulled out their mouths apart.
Roli hugged him...
Sid murmured in her ears... Roli shall I turn naughty now.
Roli in shyness hug him more tighter and closed her eyes tightly.
Sid pecked her forehead and once again moved towards her lips...After irresistibly kissing eachother sid covered them with quilt to open new chapter of life...
They felt immense pleasure in owning each other .Rosid stayed happily for ever .

I know this time not up to the mark



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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome os di loved it waiting for more writings from u greedy people
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Its was speechless I just love it..
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Very cute and fab update dear
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such a cute,emotiona, heart touching and happy ending dear...very nice...
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Fab os di loved it
U r chupi rustum nt me
Waiting for nxt one
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good job dear...very unique idea
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sorry di for late comment wow di beautifully narated the story really this type of system really need change luvd it
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