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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome dear eagerly waiting for nxt
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awesome dear loved it sid fell by seeing roli photo why not when she is so beautiful roli scolded without knowing sid but then apologised so cute can't wait update next soon
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This msg behalf of devika(tatmantad)sry dear fo making you wait...but my posting limit is crossed...i type next part also but it showed that i can't post more than 20 in a day... keep waiting till tommorow.
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Originally posted by: ruhi1985

This msg behalf of devika(tatmantad)sry dear fo making you wait...but my posting limit is crossed...i type next part also but it showed that i can't post more than 20 in a day... keep waiting till tommorow.


thank you dear for helping me...will post next part in few minutes...
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part:4
roli's p.o.v:

though my mom didn't tell me i knew they accepted me.yeah i have seen him for the first time when i reached railway station to my simar di's wedding. i thought he was driver and shouted at him.i didn't even know what he might have felt.i realised he is siddhantji(prem jiju's brother)and came as my pappa sent him.i asked sorry and he simply accepted it with a smile...how sweet of him..?that day i slept as soon as i went to my room as i was soo tiered.
morning i dressed myself and came to mandap along with didi.he was also was there on mandap along with prem jiju. marriage got and post marriage rituals got over and all the way he was also side of me... i mean i was behind simar didi and he was behind premjiju.even in mandap didi teased me.and unknow to me i started blushing..
all of us went back to our home along with prem jiju , simar didi and siddhant ji.
it was ritual to stay groom in brides house for 2 days after their marriage.so, siddhant ji accompanied jiju.
i forgot about my little brother goutham.he joined hands with jiju and siddhant ji.
the very next day of marrige... it was ritual to for saali to tease jiju.so... how could i leave these chance as i already missed lots of chances for prewedding rituals.
i planned something and i didn't let any of my cousins join my team as unlike goutham... they may bribe them also and they will reveal my plan.
all guys i mean cousins and jiju and siddhant ji played cricket and all.after playing they came and sat tieredly.i served them icecreams as it was peak of summer season.
as soon as they(jiju and siddhant ji) had one spoon they couldn't eat further.and i started laughing seeing their faces..😆😆😆... yes i added full salt and prepared icecream and freezid it.
they literally got scared to eat icecreams in future. but what to do it was ritual and i should do it.even they didn't say anything other than finishing the icecream.as none of others knew what was happening and they didn't show out side.
later in the evening i served coffee to everyone.now they are seriously scared to taste it but still did it and just spitted out the coffee and started crying for spice.yes i have mixed red chilli powder in the coffee..they both had full can of water but still not okay for spices.all are laughing seeing them but i felt like crying.. as i didn't expect it would turn out like this...i silently went inside and brought honey bottle and gave to them and now they both gave look like they don't trust me. but seriously said sorry to them for doing this.they finally had whole bottle of honey and felt relaxed.but i was unable to face them. they found about it throgh didi as i cried infront of her.jiju and siddhant ji came to me.
prem: siddhant...is this roli the same one who was doing mischief with us?
siddhant: i don't think prem i guess it was some one else..
prem: thats what i'm thinking siddhant. how much we enjoyed with that girl.now we are missing her.. lets find out where is she...

saying this they both started tickling me...and i burst out into laughing.

prem: now confirmed she is roli...

i said sorry to both of them. and they scolded me for asking sorry.and said they didn't take anything and moreover everything happened according to the ritual ... i was finally conviced and was out of guilt.

next day was simar didi's bidhai...
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part:5
siddhant's p.o.v:

i still remember her cry...when she cried hugging her pappa and i didn't expect her naughtiness to that level and ofcourse it was a tradition but still can any beautiful minds think of making a salt icecream...?..yeah but i was literally didn't know whether to laugh at her thought or scold her for spoiling our mouths.but its ok.. finally prem aur mein tried different things and brought back out tastebuds to normal.but we were scared to hear icecream's name in our lives.
in the evening she again gave mug of coffeeto us..initially we hesitated to take it but seeing her innocent face we took and had a sip...thats it... we were shouting like crows for spices...i don't how she felt our cry , she ran in and got honey for us.but we were not in a mood to trust her but she genuinely said sorry and asked us to have honey.that was the moment i felt she is a real doctor.
in the afternoon something happened which anyone of us might have not expected.

simar babhi ka pappa fell down unconsious due to sunstroke(rosim are not own sisters but cousins.simars faather is not well and he has cerebral ataxia so., roli's father only takes care of both families).
she saw called me immediately...i didn't knew why she was calling in a tensed mode but i ran and went to her...she was unable to speak...but tried hard and showed roli's bade pappa(kishore dwivedi) to me and asked me to shift him to some shadow.
she immediately gave some c.p.r and saved him .in meantime i called everyone to the spot.
jamnanlal uncle called doctor and she said it is due to low b.p
. immediately doctor came and checked and said it was due to low b.p.
and said that he will be fine in few minutes.

everyone appreciated her.babhi hugged her and cried a lot.yes we all felt pain seeing both sisters.
me and prem were sitting with roli's grandmother.
she told us about roli that how she takes care of every one in the house.
how she handles her jiddi badepappa to have tablets and how she controls her angry pappa and how she understands and conveys wishes of both simar's and gowtham's.
i admired her a lot.
next day we have to take babhi to our house.
the atmosphere was very sad. but roli was smiling all the way and i guess she is crying alot and have put the mask of smile on her face.
we reached our home.babhi did grahpravesh.

maa,pappa took permission from roli's parents to let her stay along with babhi.
every one from babhi's family went to their respective houses except roli.
next day it was my turn to tease babhi's side.
i planned and slept as satisfied with my plan.

all were talking casually while was helping mom in kitchen.mom sent her to babhi and asked her to be with her.
i took water and served to my whole family and finally came near roli and bhabhi. babhi took and drank water.
roli drank with a suspected look.the next moment after drinking was spitting the water from her mouth.
she ran to washroom and started washing her mouth repeatedly.
finally she was back.but prem scolded me for doing that.but i didn't care.
later in the evening i served gaajar ka halwa...ofcourse mom made it.but special one for my naighty roli.
she started eating quitely... i was shocked how can she eat that as it was full of cillipowder instead of sugar.i noticed tears from her eyes but she covered and completed and said bhabhi that she will come in some time.i was wondering how did she eat..? i straightly went to bhabhi and told her the mischielf on roli.
bhabhi immidiately started worrying for roli as roli have allergy for spices and also she never prefer much spicy foods.
i was totally worried now i didn't know what to do. i felt like crying and slapping myself for my act.
finally she came out.her face was totally red.
prem was totally scolding me and yes i deserve it.
but my angel stopped prem from scolding.
roli: its okay jiju nothing happened . vaise bhi mein bhi koi kam nayi tha na...he didn't even know that i was allegetic if known then he would never do it.now close the topic.
i went and asked her sorry.she smiled and said no need to be sorry.lets be friends...
she forwarded her hands..
how can i miss the chance ... i immediately accepted. i asked her atleast now to accept my friend request.she didn't understand but i cleared.
she immediately went to fb and accepted friend request.
she collected mine and prem's no.s and created a group called FAMILY in whatsapp along with bhabhi.
i didn't know how one month has been got over.prem and bhabhi left to malaysia and yeah she cried a lot for missing bhabhi.
later even she left to her college as her vaccation came to end.
i missed her badly.

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