rosid/aviman ft : waiting for you completed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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guys i know right now iam yet to finish love in wild. but my mind is strrugling with new concept.but u guys don't worry i'l upde both the ff's simutaneously.i hope u guys don't mind in it.
i'm not going to open up the concept as while reading u urselves can understand the consept very easily.
so here is the tile
ROSID/AVIMAN FF: WAITING FOR YOU

roli's p.o.v:
i was jumping in joy in my room without making any noise after listening secretly to my mom's phone conversation with my sister's(simer didi)mother-in-law.oops...my wouldbe-mother in law.they said that they are coming to see me for their second son in an hour to my house.

when my mom came to me.. i played innocent role as if i know nothing.

my mom asked me to be in some beautiful saree but i throwed array of questions at her as if i know nothing.
she just asked me to shut my mouth and wear saree properly with few matching jewelleries.i was all already and waiting for them.and went into my thoughts.



it was 3 years before from now.yes i was studying middle of my first year mbbs.
i was cursing my college for being soo strict.
because it was a special day for simar didi. grooms family was coming to see her and since my childhood ,i was having lots of dreams regarding my di's wedding.

but to my bad luck, i was having my internal assessment exams at that time during november.

later in december i came home for my vaccation and i was so excited knowing that simar di's engagement was fixed on the day of my birthday.

i was planning a lot for that day.in december i gat around 15days leave.

and all of my cousins started teasing me with my jiju's brother .

they used say that we both are made for each other.

i used to be angry at them and scold them.but those words were hitting me.

unknown to myself i was excited to know about him.


when i was thinking my mom called me to come domn.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woe dear really awesome but i suggest one thing first complete 1 then start 2nd one bcoz its become hectic for you don't mind ddear just a suggestion
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi dear...so excited to get nxt updtes...pls update as soon as possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you all for your supports dear... in few minute i'l update next part...
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part:2

writers p.o.v:
roli was in her thoughts but was disturbed by her mother(meena).she called her to kitchen and asked roli roli to make some sweet.
roli: ma is there anything special / any festival today? why you asked me to wear saree and now asking me to prepare to prepare sweets.
meena:(she was tensed)shut up roli and do what i say.prepare some sweet.
roli: gaajar ka halwa..?
meena: fine.. but do it fast.
meena went out of the room.roli while preparing sweet went into her thoughts.

roli's p.o.v:
maa asked me to prepare any sweet. but how can i prepare anything when i know his favourite sweet.
yeah in december holidays, my cousins words created some impact on me.i went back to my college after holidays and again i heard some heart break news.i was crying as it IA on the day of my birthday.i cried lot.simar di and maa,pappa hardly consoled me.days were nearing to my birthday as well as simar di's engagement . i used to tease di with prem jiju's name.(sry... i forgot to mention).finally the day before my birthday has come.my friends some how planned surprise to me to cheer me up that night.simar di and my parents also wished me.but we didn't talk for long time as i was having exam in the morning.
afternoon... immediately after my exam i called pappa and asked him to give the call to simar di.
we chated for sometime.simar di gave phone to prem jiju as he wanted to wish me.i felt like crying to miss all those fun.while talking to jiju , i heard some hisk hisk sound.in mean time jiju said he is giving call to his brother.he wished me and said that every one here misses me.i simply said thank you and couldn't talk further as my top was already drenched with tears.i cut the call without even saying bye. i don't what they might have felt but my concern was not to show didi that i was crying and this will disturb her that too on her important day.
after crying a lot i felt some unknow excite ment.i think because 1st time he spoke to me...

writers p.o.v:
when was into her thoughts meena came and checked whether roli was done with sweet or not.
yes it was perfect.some car came and reached before their house meena asked roli to stay inside the kitchen itself,and jamnanlal along with meena recieved the guests(actually bharadwaaj family-simar's family).meena went to kitchen.
roli: my why they have come when didi and jiju are in malaysia..?(prem was working in malaysia and after marriage took di also with him).
meena: what sort of question is this roli..?. there is no reason for them to come here.afterall we are gonna be single family.now stop your questions and go give them water and sweet.and sit there itself along with them.
roli came out with tray and served them(mataji-prem's grand mother,rajender-prem's father,sujata-prem's mother&siddhanth-prem's younger brother).
roli sat there with them as per ,meenas order.while siddhant was gazing at her.
elders asked roli to go inside her room.
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Awesome dear waiting for nxt
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awesome dear just now saw u didn't give link on at no problem I found loved the updates did Rosid love each other from before update next soon can't wait
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sry dear for not providing link...from next i'l add it.
and thank you every one for your lovely comments...
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part:3
siddhant's p.o.v:
oh my god...i am unable to take my eyes off from my darling that too when wore saree for and made my favourite sweet gaajar ka halwa,these elders asking her to go to her room.i'm so restless and like how i was restless to see her 3years back...

prem's marriage got fixed and engagement day.i heard about roli ... that she simar babhi's sister.
i was irritated for her character and was angry at her...being babhi's sister how could she don't attend her sister's engagement...what kind of girl she is...?
when i was thinking ...my pappa went and asked jamnanlal uncle about roli...
that is i scolded myself for judging the person with knowing their part.
uncle told that roli is more upset than us.as she was planning a lot to do during her sis's marriage functions.moreover she very much exited for todays engagement as her birthday is also today.
but what to do... she is studying mbbs which is more responsible than this and today she have exam.we even asked her to come canciling the exam.but she is not that kind of girl when it comes to her studies.she can't compromise anything with her studies.that is why is soo far from us though we were not at all interested to join her this far...we tried hard to convince her as she was crying a lot for not attending..

my pappa praised roli that.. he is proud of her...
that who will concentrate on their studies now a days like this... every thinks to bunk classes and that when they get oppurtunity like this..their general discussions where going on..

engagement got over and its lunch time.that is when jamnanlal uncle recieved call from roli.babhi was talking to her and prem took the call and wished her.and i literally snatched the call from prem and wished her for her birthday and said that we miss u..she simply said thanks and cut the call immediatly..i guess she was crying terribly..
that evening i went and opend fb account and saw prem's account...as i don't have created any account.. i'l be using prem's account to chat with my friends .
roli was friend to prem.and i saw her timeline and her friends posted her bithday celebrations.my heart skipped a beat seeing her(ofcourse they tagged her name).i was fixed that she is mine...
i just logged out and never logged in as prem will be chatting personally to babhi... so,i created my account finally and sent friend requests to few friends and family members and finally to my roli.all accepted except roli.i was not worried as she doesn't know me.
finally wedding day has come..but stil i didn't find her coming her from her college. i hesistedly went and asked jamnanlal uncle as he was also tensed...i asked the reason behind his tension..
he said roli will be coming now(it was very odd time mid night 2'0 clock).as he was busy and didn't find any driver to send car to station.
i asked him to relax and said i will go and recieve her.uncle was hesitating but some how i convinced him.
i reached railway station after taking the details about roli's train and gow some interesting about her that she never sleeps during her journey.

finally train reached and roli got down.i went and took the luggage from her saying he has been sent by her dad.we simply went and sat in the car.she was soo irritaated and tiered and the reason is 1.for missing all the functions of her sister marriage..
2.cursing college for not sending her.
3.long journey

her phone rang and she spoke in some different language.she explained some thing.. i guess regarding some subject doubt...after the call she was irritated and murmering...what is this.. then don't even leave me without asking doubts .can't they understand my situation though i don't deny in explaing any doubts...

i simply smiled and asked whether she is okay..?
she bursted out her anger at me and said it is none of your buisiness and concentrate on driving..

finally we reached marriage hall. she rushed to her father and started crying hugging him.yeah all the reasons were i thoght before was correct and she also scolded for sending unknown person to recieve her that too in odd hour..
thank god uncle clarified her that i'm prem's brother otherwise she was thinking that i'm a driver..i simply kept the luggage out of car and turned and i found her standing infront of me and asking sorry for not recognising and thanks for recieving her in odd time.

i simply told its okay and asked her to take rest leaving all her tensions as morning is her didi's wedding.she went.

its morning and panditji asked to bring the bride.when i turned...my heart skipped ...by seeing babhi not babhi .. the person who was accompanying babhi...yes roli.. she was looking gorgeous in lehanga. i couldn't take my eyes from her.i was standing beside prem so that i can see her directly.in meantime i didn't even realise that the marriage got over.i was shooked by prem telling they are hungry and are waiting for him...yes premar didn't had anything.. and roli was with her didi.. and i was lost in her thoughts and finally we four didn't had neither breakfast nor lunch as marriage took place till afternoon.
finally we had lunch together...

writers p.o.v:
siddhant was lost in his thoughts and elders were calling him for long time as all the discussions got completed.. and to go home..finally sid back to his concious and asked what happened..?
elders laughed at him.and said everything is happening as we thought..lets go home.
bharadwaaj family left to their home..
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It's so beautiful update waiting for next can't wait

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