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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Thank you for pm.😛 Dear, I have commented on chapter 16 - part 1.

So now the comment is for chapter 16 - part 2... I loved the update.🤗

Dear, not fair, you stopped at a crucial point... Too impatient to know if Arnav-Khushi will take their relation to next level & become one? ? ?

Arshi's passion is too too sizzling, sensuous & hot...❤️

Khushi has insecurities but Arnav is here to stay forever... He is the love that Khushi has never got in her life till date...⭐️

Khushi is going to take up a job with the police... This is a bit dangerous...

So Shyam likes Khushi... Hope so Shyam will back off once he knows that Arnav-Khushi are a couple & in true love...

Dear please update quickly... Impatiently waiting...

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Sandhya are you seriously leaving it at that point and actually expect us to SURVIVE😲 the week long wait...nahiii yeh nahi ho sakta...

plzzz dont do this...

So shyam likes khushi and thankfully the sensible Arnav (ur Arnavs are always sensible ) realizes it..hurrayyy for that!!

Nice update...but honestly my mind refuses to move beyond the unbearable cliffhanger ...next update kab ayega...and plz plz dont leave things only to our imagination 😉

P.S for some reason the Arnav Khushi interaction today made me miss DND even more...that Arnav was just PERFECT!!

Edited by thechaigirl - 9 years ago

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#283

LOVED D UPDATE...

STORY IS GETTING MORE INTERESTING N GRIPPING...

THNX 4 D PM.

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#284

How could you stop there ...

Akash has opened up to lavanya at least ...

Khushi has very good instincts...but how about Shyam ...isn't it obvious that Shyam is interested in her...which made Arnav jealous and lead to these steamy scenes...

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#285

This story is so very interesting ::)))

All credit to.your writing 👏

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Monalisaa

@Monalisaa

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Woow. First of all am glad finally Akash is doing something for his alcohol problem and the fact tht Lavanya is there to support him. I am just lOving this couple. Shyam is wipped.

Arnav and Khushi no comments. These two are so in sink with each other, it's incredible.

Awsome update.

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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#287

Nice part!!!!!

I thought about the story taking its shape with khushi deciding to work for shayam...as if nothing else it will give her satisfaction for trying to find justice for her friend...and may be it will give her a closer she needs to come out of her survivors guilt...

Though I liked Aakaash and lavanya but ...me being stupid fan of arshi I skimmed (as in didn't read their part twice 😳) their part...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#288

What to say sandhya, I always left speachless after reading your updates.

This update had everything. Thrilling, emotional, sensual, passionate, attraction, need, everything.

Can understand why Khushi confronted Vijay. She want to protect him as soon as possible, but he is way deep in this mess. I feel sad for laxami. How she will handle this situation.

I liked Shyam a lot but his heart is going to break when he will learn about her and Arnav. But right now he come as a ray of light in Khushi's life, a mean to live. Hope she could be benefited with these files.

A man can read eyes of another man. He shows his possessive side too.

It become their trend, first fight and then make up with love. Their chemistry is sizzling hot.

But why are you holding back and leave us wanting for more, you know what I mean😃.

Hope next time we get uninterrupted version😉.

Thanks for brilliant update sandhya. And sorry for late comment again.

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#289

Sandhya...

I always wanna praise u but fail terribly at the loss of words..

Ur fiction is definitely one of those I wait for.. read n reread..cherish every emotion u evoke..

Though my main interest always lies in Arhi,I always like to read about the other characters' perspective...

Aarti Raizada,

though seems to be quite a strong personality to her family n the world,

is too vulnerable..

She can never get over her loss...

but she can never lose hope to get her daughter back in her life...

In this process,she has neglected his sons..

Arnav had tried to harm himself in order to get her attention n love... when Shashi saved him..

Akash has become a complex personality..

Arnav wants to mend everything but tends to escape from situation sometimes..

Now..

Things r changing for better..

Akash has got a selfless,caring girlfriend Lavanya..

He is taking interest in mending his ways n that will lead to happiness n calm..

Arnav is head over heels in love with my Khushi..

His instinct tells that something has been wrong in Khushi's life..

He's not too curious to know about it but just concerned for her..

He has noticed Shyam's interest in Khushi n expresses it to Khushi blankly..

She brushes it off though...

I always love Arnav's possessiveness for her..

I just loved their convo...their small fight..the argument..the acceptance..their need to be with each other in every sense of the word..

I don't know what is in store for my Arhi...

I can't take it if they get separated..

for any reason,any person ..

waiting for the next update for more than one reason..

😉

😆

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#290

Sorry for thr delay

I m travelling and it hard to spare a mintue

By the time i hit the bed its 2am...

But, I couldnt resist the urge to read the second part

I would like to say, it's a confession chapter

Shyam? What kind of character have you created for him. So far I m liking him