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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#271

Amazing update! I felt the story has really stared when Shyam came up with the offer!! Cannot wait to read further!! You left us at a cliff hanger!!! Hope you update soon! Thanks for the pm!! I know you said no need to thank! Aadat se majboor!!!!

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#272

another mind blowing update.. cant wait to see more .

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SugunaN

@SugunaN

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#273

You are what you are and most of us are driven by our heart's desires. Alas, if we only we let our heads rule every so often, we would make fewer mistakes than we end up making in reality.

Khushi confronts Vijay and ends up regretting because the boy is in no mood to tell her. Which is understandable. It is his mother who is reliant and emotionally connected to Kyushu's family, him, not so much. Well, this kid is going down one way or the other because once someone gets involved in illegal activities, it is hard to leave when they pleased.

Our Shyam babe is in love. But he is not a stupid man. And most importantly, he is a smart and conscientious officer. If his personal interest made him dig deeper through the information Khushi requested, his police thinking made him recognize the time bomb Nilgiirs had been sitting on. Making Khushi a part of the investigation was a super smart move.

Arnav, troubled, tired with nothing going his way encounters the next obstacle of his life - Shyam. And boy, was he right and was he right? He is not Arnav Raizada for no reason 😆 He caught onto Shyam's crush / like/ love for Khushi and now only time will tell how this triangle plays out.

Your Arnav and Khushi are so real and are an absolute pleasure to read. Loved it.

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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#274

I think but I am not sure the story is beginning yet. To me, it is very much about finding the truth about Anjali just as this is about Arshi. So when we are onto something about Anjali.. the story is well on its way.

I am not skimming at all :)

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#275

awesome part two. loved that khushi got involved in cases through shayam and arnav predict shayam crush perfectly

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: FLGirl
I think but I am not sure the story is beginning yet. To me, it is very much about finding the truth about Anjali just as this is about Arshi. So when we are onto something about Anjali.. the story is well on its way.
I am not skimming at all :)

Thank you for letting me know that you don't skim :)

"When we are onto something about Anjali" - Am confused about this question. You mean like searching for her?

Edited by AquaSandhya - 9 years ago

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penrith

@penrith

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#277

Very nice. things are heating up

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Mojgan

@mojgan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#278

that was a piece of art! passionate, emotional, and breathtaking!

I love this story...

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pran28671

@pran28671

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#279

Such a wonderful update loved it

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bright01

@bright01

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#280

Great update. The feelings between Arnav and Khushi getting stronger day by day. loved it.

Shyam's crush for khushi should never turn to possessiveness and should not create any problem in Arnav & Khushi's relationship.