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roopathomas

@roopathomas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Shyam and his actions are so real. Love the possessive arnav.

Answer to your questions:

1. I think from 13.

2. I think I skimmed through the initial few chapters. But I think I will go back to read it again coz I started to read this story only after you reached chapter six n I somehow wanted to get to that chapter hence was skimming.

You are an amazing writer and I had read your first story n wanted to read again but found out that it was taken off. Do you have it in blog? Would love to read it again.

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chichu1

@chichu1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Wow... love u dear.. really liked the update... esp the 2nd part..since i am a hardcore arshi fan... 😉

But also liked the 1st part too... abt akash n his strugle...

Waiting for the nxt hot update😉

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

ahaaan..

so Shyam has made his intentions clear...but arnav and khushi...sigh...they are just perfect...

feeling bad for akash...atleast he is trying...hope lavanya will help him with his addiction...

regarding ur questions...ur every update seems very interesting to me due to uniqueness in ur plot...so can't miss anything...

as u have specifically asked not to thank you for pms so I just wanna say that thanksss a lot for these lonnnggg updates...

eagerly waiting for u to continue...😊

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Wonderful.. Long update!!

To answer your questions :

Felt like skimming through some parts of Akash- lavanyas story..

And with Arnav getting jealous of Shy am...I felt ...now its getting more better..

And the point u stopped the update... Sure felt like a cliffhanger..!!!

Waiting for more..

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Aqua Sandhya

With every update u outdo yourself which is somehow nearly impossible

As u have seen i rarely write husge comments but this update moved me so much almost want to shake up Akash and soothe Arnav

Loved it

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rizib

@rizib

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

I've never skimmed through updates.. and found the story interesting from the prologue itself.. It has never been what I expected. So every update is exciting..

Sorry about a short comment, but time has been expensive these days..

This update was 👍🏼

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anjubua

@anjubua

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Beautiful update the story has been thrilling since the beginning.

The still studying and getting to know each other. Amazing 👏

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sanasahel

@sanasahel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Nice update. shyam has offered a job to Kushi even though it is helpful to kushi in two ways one she will be near Arnav and second she will get to work in her field of interest and could get an end to anjali 's death, but hope shyam does not turn negetive when she rejects him.

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Arshi2503

@Arshi2503

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Amazing update.
Khushi acted haste in confrontation
with Vijay out of her eagerness to protect
the child.You have visualised it how a
teenager behaves when caught .
Shyam and Khushi conversation,simply
loved it.He is helping her more than a
higher official do.Hope this crush will
not turn into possessiveness.
Jealous Arnav noticed it.Loved every word
of this story Sandhya .Then where is the point
in skimming ?
Shyam offering the job and their impending
meetings and his assurance to find the criminals
I think the story is moving ahead.
Thanks for this story .

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RithReddy

@RithReddy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#270

A wonderful update with almost almost all the key pieces on the chess board moved (except the antagonist, people/person involved in kidnappings) and made a semblance of progress. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I'm getting ready to strap my seat belt because I can feel that it won't be long before the rollercoaster fall begins. I say this because, so far the story's taken turns but they are the gradual changes needed to build up the momentum. No rollercoaster makes the rider experience the steepest and the tummy twisting drop at the beginning. That is what you have done.

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