The Legend of Arrow - A Modern day Ramayana FF - Page 3

Kya baath hai👏...totally unexpected twist-warrior girls👍🏼...lakshman

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The Legend of Arrow

By: Sayee

Last revised: 29-04-16

Disclaimer: Only the story idea is mine.

Ship: Ram/Sita, Lakshman/Urmila, Bharat/Mandvi, Shatrughan/Shrutkirti

"The power of God is with you at all times; through the activities of mind, senses, breathing, and emotions; and is constantly doing all the work using you as a mere instrument."
Anonymous, Bhagavad Gita: El Canto del Senor

"I have given my word that only death will take me from you."
Philippa Gregory

He walked as fast as he could, he need to tell him, that fool soldier had got the wrong target, he fumed, by gods grace the soldier killed himself by eating cynide or else if he would have been caught than all our plans would have failed.

A few more minute walk & he stood before him.

"What's the news?" Raavana asked.

"My Lord, shukra missed the target..." he trembled

"WHAT" Raavana fumed

"But he got the younger one My Lord" He said praying for his safety

This pacified Raavana a bit.

"The poison would have started affecting him now"The soldier

"But what's the point, both Vashishtha and Vishvamitra are there, they would easily extract the venom." Malya said from the right of Raavana.

A vicious smile spread over Raavana's lips "extracting the Venom won't save him, moreover the poison wasn't to kill him"

And he started laughing menacingly.

Ajodhyan Hills,

The Raghu Castle

Ram sat on the bed with Lakshman's head on his lap. He kept on calling out to him but Lakshman wasn't waking up.

"Lakshman..." he called out once more but to no avail.

He changed the wet cloth over his head. The fever has gone down considerably but still Lakshman wasn't waking up.

Ram sat with hunched shoulders staring at Lakshman as if he doesn't want to miss a single second, fearing he would wake up and Ram won't be there to help him.

He gently caressed his hair, tears started to flow again.

*Flashback*

Ram sat reading a book on history in the library, when Lakshman came there looking for him.

"Bhaiyaa" he called out. On finding him "There you are, I have been looking for you everywhere, come on now I have to show you something " He said pulling on Ram's hand.

"What is it Lakshman?"

"Come on..." he persisted pulling Ram

He kept on pulling him till they reached the sand pit in the gardens. In the middle of the sand pit a hut was made with no roof, someone was sitting in middle of it. The hut had only one door in front of which another statue was standing, pose ready to strike.

"What is this Lakshman?" He asked kneeling down in front of it & pulling Lakshman towards his lap.

"This Dada, is a our cathle" he said in his childish innocence, pointing towards the hut. "And the one in the middle is you" he pointed.

"and what am I doing?" Ram asked

"you are medi...medica... no...medi.." Lakshman was trying hard.

Ram smiled & stared adoringly at Lakshman

"MEDITATING" Lakshman shouted finally getting the word. Happiness smitten over his face.

"Meditating..." Ram laughed "who taught you this big word?" Ram asked caressing his face.

"Shathrughan" Lakshman stated.

"Ok...and who is that standing at the door?" Ram asked

"That's me" Lakshman said proudly getting up from his lap and brandishing an invisible sword " I am here to prothect you "

Ram raised an eyebrow " to protect me...an who told you that?" he asked

"Shathrughan..." he said slowly walking up to Ram and climbing on his lap facing him, and started playing with Ram's shirt buttons"He heard Guru Vashishtha speaking to someone that it's either you or Bharat, both of you are very important,so..." he gulped not in a habit of speaking such big sentences,

"So, Shathrughan said he will protect Bharat Dada & I you" he said looking up at Ram's eyes.

"Protect me & Bharat from whom?" Ram questioned

"No Idea" Lakshman shrugged, but then he looked up again, squaring his chest & said with fierce determination "Fear not Brother, when I am there"

Ram melted on seeing Lakshman like this & pulled him into one bear hug.

*Flashback*

Ram smiled gently ruffling Lakshman's hair.

Ahem Ahem

Ram looked upto see Sita standing at the door.

"Sita?" Ram questioned "You need something, Bharat would be there if you ne..."

He stopped in mid sentence. Sita had walked upto the bed and sat beside Lakshman.

"Has the fever gone down?" She asked

Ram nodded "But he isn't waking up..." Ram face crunched again in worry lines.

"Don't worry he will wake..." She stopped in between.

Ram traced her gaze she was staring intently at the wound.

"What...What is it, Sita?" Ram asked tension laced in his voice.

"No, this can't be..." Sita murmured she suddenly got up and started going out.

"Wait...What can't be..Sita" Ram practically shouted.

"Don't LEAVE him alone" she turned towards him and said and ran from there.

Lakshman slowly opened his eyes

"Dada..." he murmered but everything around him was blur, he squinted his eyes & his vision cleared, he could only see black bars in front of him. He was standing in a box suspended into nothingness with bars all around and nothing.

"Dada..." he called him again anxiety filling him.

"You keep on calling him...he won't be able to hear you" a voice sounded from behind him.

Lakshman turned to see HIMSELF standing, but outside bars.

"Who are you?" he asked

"Me...can't you recognize me..." the Lakshman mocked him " Oh, come on I can't believe it..."

"Stop blabbering and tell me...WHO ARE YOU?" Lakshman shouted "where am I? and why am I behind bars?" he asked

"whoa chill...one question at a time.." Lakshman said "Well for the starters" he walked and stood really close to Lakshman and said

"I am YOU"

Urmila walked aimlessly around the corridors when she saw Sita coming out of the room in hurry followed by Ram in frenzy pestering her

"What can't be Sita...you need to tell me" Ram was asking her.

"Urmila.." Sita exclaimed she quickened her steps held her by her shoulders and said

"Go inside and trying waking him up...It's THE ROOT" she said trying to imply the meaning to her. Urmila's eyes widened getting the implications, she ran past Ram and straight towards room.

"The Root...what's the root?" Ram asked again.

Sita quickly held his hand "We need to find Guru Vishvamitra right now" she said & pulled him with her.

Lakshman sat on the floor head in his hands, when he heard that voice

"Lak...shman..."

His head shot up, he stressed to hear it, definitely a girl's voice

"Lak...shman.."

there he heard it again, he looked here and there but could not see anything another than blackness surrounding him.

"Where am I?" he questioned again

Lakshman got up from his airy suspended seat dusted himself and said "I should better be going...a lady should never be made to wait...plus I need to make a quick work of her..." he said staring at his hands pretending to cleaning of dust his hands.

"W.H.E.R.E. A.M. I.?" he questioned again stressing each syllable.

Lakshman sighed heavily, turned towards him gave him a quite threatening look

"inside YOURSELF" he stated.

Beautiful

It is very beautiful sayee!!!!! 😃😳🤗

Originally posted by: Sumi-19

It is very beautiful sayee!!!!!😃😳🤗

Love the flashback!!!!😃

Bahut suspense hai aur itni jaldi kyu khatam kar diya. *POUTS*

Eagerly waiting for next part, can't wait!!!😃😳

JALDI UPDATE DO!!! *ORDERS*😆😆

But what has happened to lakshman, is he was seeing the bars in sleep or he has literally woken up but could not able to see anyone!!!!😕

plzz clear my doubt sayee!!!😕

Just wait dear everything will be cleared in next two updates 😉

interesting ...but at same time confusing update tha ...
kuch jyada he suspense ha story me ...
waiting for next amazing update like this one ...updated soon...

Thanks a lot 4 updating🤗it's mindblowing👏but,what happened to lakshman?is he dreaming?😕...Plz update soon...mujhse ab aur intezaar nahi ho raha😊

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Unres pagli

So sorry I am late 🤢
But OMG 👏👏
I simply loved it. Especially your Urmi ❤️ And the way the sisters move in sync with each other.

Ram-Lakhan bonding
You are a ⭐️ Continue soon :)

Very nicely written and different! Please PM me..