The Legend of Arrow - A Modern day Ramayana FF - Page 4

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

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So sorry I am late 🤢
But OMG 👏👏
I simply loved it. Especially your Urmi ❤️ And the way the sisters move in sync with each other.

Ram-Lakhan bonding
You are a ⭐️ Continue soon :)

The Legend of Arrow

By: Sayee

Last revised: 05-05-16

Disclaimer: Only the story idea is mine.

Ship: Ram/Sita, Lakshman/Urmila, Bharat/Mandvi, Shatrughan/Shrutkirti

"The power of God is with you at all times; through the activities of mind, senses, breathing, and emotions; and is constantly doing all the work using you as a mere instrument."
Anonymous, Bhagavad Gita: El Canto del Senor

"I have given my word that only death will take me from you."
Philippa Gregory

"AAAHHH" Lakshman screamed on the bed. Bharat, Shatrughan were having a hard time keeping him down.

"Lakshman...Lakshman..." they both called and pulled him down. They finally pinned him down and with the help of Mandvi tied him tightly to the bed post. Vashishtha quickly sedated him.

Ram, Sita & Shrutkirti stood beside an unconscious Urmila. Sita sprinkled water over her to wake her up.

"Di...Di..." Urmila slowly opened her eyes.

"Urmila..." Sita gently patted her cheeks. She & Kirti helped her up to sit on the sofa. Ram handed her a glass of water.

"Thank you..." she murmured and drank hungrily the water.

"What Happened??" Ram & Sita asked at once.

A few minutes back...

Urmila came running inside & started jerking Lakshman awake. She had to wake him up or else the venom would take effect.

"Lakshman" she kept on calling to him trying to jerk him awake. After about 5 minutes she saw him stir

"Lakshman..." Urmila called out albeit slowly so as to ease him out.

He slowly opened his eyes. 'Something is wrong' she thought. Her eyes grew wide when she saw his eyes turn from his Hazel brown to Blood red. Lakshman suddenly sprang up from bed & caught her throat. Urmila caught off guard was pinned down pretty easily.

"Lak..sh...man..." she breathed out...but no respite.

She had to do something, she kicked him from below..

"AAHH..." Lakshman shouted, his hand slacked a bit. the momentary respite was all she needed. She started running towards the door, when he caught her by her leg, she slipped & hit her hard on the floor, last thing she saw was eight pair of legs rushing into the room before losing conscious.

Present

There was silence in the room none knew what to say.

"It's the root of Belladonna" Sita said breaking the silence "The poison affects the brain cells & induces hallucinations into them. It makes them behave the opposite of what they are. They Hallucinate both inside & out"

"But Guruji had extracted the Venom.." Shatrughan stated

"Yes, but still the Venom has affected some of his brain cells" Vishvamitra said.

"What's the cure?" asked Ram

"It's hard Ram" Vishvamitra said

"I don't care, it's my Lakshman we are talking about, i would go to hell seven times if it needs to be done." Ram said

"Very Well" Vishvamitra nodded

"Sita you start with making the Jeevni" Vishvamitra said "Shatrughan you look for this book in your library" He scribbled something on the paper & gave it to him.

Ram looked at him expecting some work for him too. Vishvamitra looked at him and said "your work is after they have finished Ram" he reassured.

Ram nodded.

"Where do you bring Herbs for your Ayuralaya?" Sita asked out.

Ram walked aimlessly, Bharat was out with Mandvi in the gardens where they grow Herbs. Sita in the Ayuralaya with Guru Vahishth making The Jeevni 'Kadha'. Shatrughan was in the library and Kirti was tending to Urmila who had a swollen head.

He was crossing the Kitchen when he head it

"Dada" followed by a playful giggle.

Ram turned to see a six year old Lakshman sitting on the floor & eating the mangoes. Ram smiled looking at the innocent face full of mischief.

"Aapko bhi chahiye" Lakshman asked, Ram moved his hands towards him,

"par aapko...nahi milegi" lakshman quickly got up and started running out towards the garden.

"Lakshman...wait..." Ram called out and started to run after those small legs.

"Lakshman...Lakshman..."he called out in the backyard, that's when he heard the infamous giggle of Lakshman. He turned to see a slightly older, around Eleven year old Lakshman swinging highly. Immediately Ram went into protection mode.

"Lakshman...dheere...Lakshman...gir jaogae..." Ram said sternly running towards the swings.

"Dada..." Lakshman called out again and started swinging even higher. Ram nodded in affection & smiled looking at him. But the smile turned in pure horror when he saw him falling backwards from the swing.

"LAKSHMAN" but no one was there.

He was just imagining things. Ram sat on the ground dejected "Lakshman..."He mumbled

Lakshman paced in the cell, fuming how dare he, how dare he trap me inside myself.

"So done fuming" Lakshman's voice drifted from the front. He was sitting there cleaning his nails as usual

"YOU" Lakshman shouted and ran towards him "What did you do?"

"Chill, baby boy. You don't worry, I only gave the girl a swollen head, before I could finish my work the rest came, but no worries, next time she is dead" Lakshman said sitting back comfortably.

"YOU. I will kill you." Lakshman said fuming in frustration.

Lakshamn's expression turned to deadly serious look. "Kill me will you." he spoke calmly "you are forgetting I am You and You I. Kille me you kill yourself." He said. And then all of a sudden he walked upto Lakshman & kept one of his hand over his head."want to know, how are your brothers, how is the girl, how is your precious Ram Dada" saying this he pressed his hand over Lakshman's head. Images flooded into his mind.

"Aahhh..."Lakshman screamed, he started having a head splitting headache.

"DADA..." He screamed at the top his voice.

Ram was sitting beside Sita seeing her making the 'Kadha' when he heard it no actually felt it. The innate cry of Lakshman calling out to him.

"Lakshman" he whispered and ran out of the room.

"Ram" he heard Sita call out to him, but he kept on running, compelling Sita to follow him.

He ran into Lakshman's room.

"Lakshman" he started jerking him

"Lakshman"

"Ram, What happened?" Sita asked coming behind followed by Bharat& Vashishtha who had followed her on the way.

"Lakshman..." Ram said "He called out to me"

"But...but we never heard anything Ram Dada" Bharat said.

" No, he called me...I know his voice really well Bharat...It was him only...Lakshman" Ram called out again.

The other three looked at him with bewildered expressions, that's when Vashishtha noticed.

Originally posted by: Sumi-19

It was a very emotional and sweet update sayee!!!!!😃

feeling bad for lakshman !!!😭😭

Lakshman hurts Urmila in hallunications!!!😭

Ram imagining that Lakshman is growing from child to younger boy , u depicted it so beautifully Sayee!!!😃, but that part was emotional too!!!😭

I love Ram confidence that he was his only brother Lakshman, who called him. That is the connection between them!!!!😃☺️

But what has happened to lakshman now, blood oozing from his ears!!!!!!!😭😭

It was a very beautiful and sweet. very emotional update dear!!!!😃😭👏

AB JALDI UPDATE KARO, AB MUJHSE NEXT PART READ KARNE KE LIYE WAIT NAHI HO RAHA HAI!!!SO JALDI!!!😳😆

Originally posted by: Shivam...

sayee

read all the parts

really suspense and intrigue filled story , you have brought out the emotions and connectivity of ram and lakshman so well , the last part was the best i felt

do continue the good work.👏

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Sayee 👏👏
This was amazing!

Hayee! My Ram-Lakshman bonding You have portrayed Raghuveer's love for his brother perfectly.
And Lakshman is arguing with his own self? 😲😲
Nice touch.
Loved it ❤️
Update soon :)

P.S. My LakshMila ❤️