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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: prasannakamila

Finally finally u r back aarti
I hope ab tum teek ho
I missed ur story

Tqqq...
yes finally i m back...And i m fine now.. And sorry for not replying to ur comment before...
actually i hardly get type to write my story...
So when i update it, i feel so tired that i have left no strength to reply to ur comments..
But that doesn't mean i won't read them...
I read each and every comment...
And i too missed you all...
Waise ye jabrela kabi nahi sudhrega
well abhi tak to jhabrele ke sudharene ke koi chance nahi...
but future ka keh nahi sakte...
I'm excited ki hamare cadets USS jabrella ka saath kya karnewala hai
Our cadets will definitely do something according to their standard and to live all of your's expectations..
Raina convo.air naina ke room Mae secret door 👏 sach Mae raj ko naina ke pass rehane ki bahuth tharika batay hai
I m glad that you liked that secret door idea... i have to think a lot before adding it...
Ab Rajveer ko uski Naina itni mushkil se mili hai to wo uske pass to rahega hi aur uske liye wo koi na koi tarika to nikal hi lega...
Who s that villain Jo naina ko niksaan pahunchane wala hai
for villan you have to wait for my further updates...





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Posted: 8 years ago

Tqqq so much...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hi arti ,thx for this amazing ff

everything is perfect .in first few parts i was crying and feeling naina and raj love and ya i know watched lrl and really the way you write this ff ,i want this happen in the show but i know the show is finished and the way naina read rajveer diary and feel his pain ot was so aweaome ,and everyone too huda ,alekh pooja the way they love rajveer,
this was really missing in the serial ,in serial they somehow i feel they ruined naina 's character i feel they just made her selfish never want to know anything ,but i just love it what you did in this it just give me some relife that in your ff atleast we het to see naina feeling guilty and fall in love with raj.and then how everybody give idea to rajveer to purpose her was awesom,and i just love every song in your ff ,i want to write more but i think i dont know how to describe happiness which i felt after reading your update .so plz update soon its a request


Hi Adi... First of all thank you for taking out your time to read my story...
I m glad to know that you found my story interesting enough to read it..
Well i wrote the first few chapters in a way to show Naina and Rajveer's true inner feelings, which i felt that were not shown in the show...
They mostly communicated by eye talking, other than that they didn't show much that what they really felt about each other...
Especially Rajveer's, as they just showed that he loves Naina, but later on, his pain, his suffering, his feelings when he was keeping himself away from Naina, uski bebasi to not to be with Naina, i felt there was soo much which can be shown...
But they just focused more on dialogues, but not on emotions...
So i just thought of covered that emotions part in my storry...
and i hope that you liked it... and sorry dear for making you cry...
I am glad to know that u liked my ideas and my story, the way its progressing...
Thank you soo much for your this comment...
You know when i came back, i returned after facing a lot... and i went through a lot of depressing phase... i was depressed once again by seeing the response for my another story which is an os on Rajveer and Naina...But your this comment and encouraging words really motivated me a lot...
and i really needed this kind of words...
so thank yop for all the love and appreciation...
update will be up within few minutes...
Take care...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RNgirl

Hello ji,

Read the entire ff and must say it is really good
Can't wait for the face off
Plz add me tip your PM list and let me know when the next update is up

Thank you
Misha


Hello Misha...
Tahnk you for taking out your time for reading my story and commenting about it..
Glad to know that you liked my story...
Will surely add you on my Pm list...
update will be up with in few minutes...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Plzz update waiting 😭


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Update will be up within few minutes...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Dieing to read
Plzz give a dhasu update
Waiting


i have tried my best to give a dhasu update...
i hope you will like it...
It will be up within few minutes...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjunpremi

Story acchi hai.par please abhi ko posetitve karo.abhi ke har bura baryav ke koi chupa reason do.mujhe rajveer abhimanyu dostana cheye.


Well as i said you have to wait for the story to move on... Whether there is any reason for Abhimanyu for doing all that or not you will come to soon...
I can only say just have patience and trust me...Just trust your writer
From the starting i have it in my mind that what i am going to do with Abhimanyu's character..
just wait for the rest of the chapters... you will find it soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: prasannakamila

Awesome ud

Abhi ke saath kya prank kela hai...👏
Raina's romance... 😳
Eagerly waiting for next ud


Thanks for the comment and appreciation...
Glad that you like the update...
Update will be up within few minutes...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias

Superb update...kya plan banya Huda n gang ne mil kar...abhi ko toh pura janwar bana diya 😆...n Ali ne bhi is me sabka saath diya 😉...n phir apni prank ka koi saboot bhi nahi choda...it was dam hilarious...n phir pooja ka chillana abhi ko dekh kar n abhi ka chillana pooja ko dekh kar...but yeh chillana hamare love birds ke romance par rok laga diya 😆but at last raj KO apna kiss mil gaya 😳...waiting for next update...precap is looking too tempting


Thank you soo much for your comment...
Glad to know that you liked my update...
Update will be up soon..
Sorry for the delay but i was suffering from the fever...
But now no more wait...
Update is coming within few minutes...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 25

Naina and Rajveer both were there in Rajveer's cabin, lost in each other's arms... After sometime...

Rajveer: Ab tumhe yaha se jana chaiye Naina... Tumhara itni der tak mere office me hona doubts create kar sakta hai... Main tumse baad me milta hu... When he was saying all this he didn't realize that his grip became more tight on her.. (Now you should go Naina.. You being with me for a long time can create suspicion... I will meet you later...)

Naina with a naughty smile: Your words and actions are not matching Rajveer...

Rajveer looks at her confusedly..

Naina: on one side you are asking me to go, but on the other side you are keeping me close to you.. ab agar aap mujhe chodoge nahi to main kaise jaongi? (If you won't leave me then how will I go?)

Rajveer with a small smile: now what to do... my words were saying what my mind was asking me to say and do.. But my actions shows what my heart desires... And believe me my heart want you to keep you close for forever and never let you go anywhere... But if I will listen to my heart then how will we focus on our mission... So ab bahut ho gaya romance, now let's focus on our work... You just go.. and I will come after sometime... I have some work, which I need to finish... I will meet you afterwards... Hmm..

He said while losing his grip on Naina...

Naina: you don't have to explain me Rajveer.. I understand.. chalo now I will go and hope to see you soon... She says with a small smile and gets up to move towards the door..

Rajveer: ek minute Naina.. Main tumhe kuch dena bhool gaya...(One minute Naina, I forgot to give you something)

Naina turns: Kya (What)

Rajveer then come towards her and stands close to her... He then cups her face and place a chaste kiss on her forehead... Naina close her eyes and smiles little by seeing Rajveer's action...

Rajveer: I hope you got your answer... Take care and be my brave Naina which you always are...we are soldiers NAina and we have to face many difficult situations... Don't let yourself lose while facing anything or anyone and always remembers that I m always there with you..

Naina understood that he is talking about Abhimanyu... In the morning her friends managed to keep him away but now that he is in the academy, she has to face him sometime... She can't avoid him, he being there in the KMA itself...

Naina smiles: as you said that you are there with me and as long as you are there, I can face anything or anyone... You are my strength Rajveer and believe me because of you I am the strongest person...

Rajveer then hugs her tightly... After this, Naina leave from there...

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Naina was walking in the corridor... She was trying to find her friends... Suddenly she stops in her track as in front of her was standing Major Abhimayu Rai Chauhan...

Abhi: Hii Naina..

Naina: hello Major Chauhan.. She said with a clench jaw... She turns to go but Abhi stops her..

Abhi: hume aapse baat karni hai NAina..

Naina: par mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni.. So please excuse me... She turns and was about to go but Abhi stops her by catching her from her elbow...

Abhi: Naina please aap humari baat to suniye...

Naina: Yeh kya badtamizzi hai Major Chauhan... Aaj subah hi Brig sir aapko bata chuke hai ki ek army officer ko kaise behave karna chaiye... par lagta hai ki aapko unki baat samjh me anhi aayi... to agar aapko dubara Brig sir se daant nahi khani then start behaving yourself... Now just leave me.. She says and jerks her hand from his hand..

Abhi: I am sorry Naina, hum aapko hurt nahi karna chathe the... But atleast aap ek baar humari baat to suniye..

Naina: fine Major... To kahiye ki aapko kya kehna hai?

Abhi: Naina hum bas aapse itna hi kehna chathe hai ki, hum aapse pyaar karte hai, bahut pyaar aur hum aapko bahut khush rakhenge... To please aap apni zidd chod dijiye aur humare pyaar ko apna lejiye..

Naina: Ho gaya ya aur kuch bhi kehna hai aapko... now listen to me and listen to me very carefully... Aap kehte hai ki aap mujhse pyaar karte hai, lekin main aapse pyaar nahi karti... Aur na hi kabhi kar sakti hu.. aur jise aap meri zidd keh rahe hai, wo meri zidd nahi mera pyaar hai, mere Rajveer ke liye... Aur yeh pyaar main kabhi nahi bhool sakti, mar ke bhi nahi... Maine sirf aur sirf Rajveer se pyaar kiya hai, aur humesha unhi se karti rahongi... aur jitni jaldi yeh baat aap samjh jaaye utna hi aapke liye acha hoga.. aur mere liye na sahi to kamse kam Rajveer ke liye, jinhe aap duniya ke saamne apna dost kehte the, unke liye mujhe akela chod dijiye... aapne apni dosti ka koi farzanhi nibahaya, ab unke pyaar ko, unki mohabbat ko apna banana ki koshish karke, dosti jaise pavitr rishte ko aur badnaam mat kijiye... Warna logo ka Dosti shabd se yakeen uth jaayega... Agar Rajveer sir aapki jagah hote na to ek pal soche bina bhi apna pyaar apni dosti ke liye kurbaan kar dete, aur ek aap hai, jo zabardasti apne dost ke pyaar ko apna banana chathe hai.. Please for god sake sir, stop trying to make me yours...

Abhi gets angry and frustrated by hearing her words: For god sake Naina, stop saying Rajveer Rajveer everytime... Jis Rajveer ke pyaar ka tum gungan karti rehti ho, Kya uss Rajveer ne kabhi tumse kaha ki wo tumse pyaar karta hai... Kya kabhi Raj ne tumhe kaha kit um uski mohabbat ho.. Nahi na... Kyunki wo tumse pyaar karta hi nahi tha... Usne tumse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi, kyunki wo to kisi aur se...

He was cut By Naina, who became mad after hearing his words: Bas bas kijiye sir... aapko sharam nahi aati... aap har baar har baarkuch na kuch kehke Rajveer ko meri nazron me girane ki koshish karte hai, unke liye mere pyaar ko kam karne ki koshish karte hai... par bas ab bhaut ho gaya.,,,, Rajveer ne mujhse apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya ya nahi, wo mujhse pyaar karte the ya nahi, isse aapko koi matlab nahi... aap bas itna jaan lijiye ki main Rajveer se pyaar karti hu, aur humewsha unhi se karti rahogi... aap kuch bhi kahiye ya kuch bhi kar lijiye... lekin na to aap kabhi mujhe apna bana sakege aur na hi mere dil se Rajveer ko kabhi nikal paayenge... Kyunki mera dil dhadkna band kar sakta hai, meri saanse chalna band kar sakti hai, par main Rajveer se pyaar karna nahi chod sakti, iss janam me to kya har janam me Main sirf Rajveer se hi pyaar karongi... Naina sirf aur sir Rajveer ki thi, hai aur unhi ki rahegi...

Both were unaware of the fact there was someone else too, who heard their conversation... It was non another than Rajveer, who came there after finishing his work.. He was overwhelmed hearing Naina's words... But then he noticed that he was not alone who heard their conversation, but some cadets too were there and listening their conversation... Not wanting situation to go out of hand he move towards them...

Rajveer: ahh you are here Capt. Singh... good that I found you... Actually I need to discuss about some new drills with you, which I was thinking to bring in this year training... And as you are Drill commanding officer I need to discuss with it... I hope you are free now and I didn't disturb you two in your conversation...Anyways anything serious, because you two seems to be quite serious...

Abhi: ahh nothing serious Major Rathore... we were just discussing about our old days... and if you don't mind can you have your discussion with Naina after sometime...

Naina: That's not needed sir... My conversation with Major Chauhan was already over and now I m free.. And even if I wouldn't have been free, then also I need to come with you.. because as teachers our first priority is our cadets ... So its perfectly fine...Now shall we move?

Rajveer: sure Capt... Lets go...

They both move from there...

Abhi in mind: yakeen to main tumhe dila kar rahunga Naina ki Rajveer tumse pyaar nahi karta tha... Tumhe mera yakeen karna hi hoga... aur mere pyaar par bhi...

He then calls someone: Heyy where are you... You should have been here by now... Ok... just come tomorrow... now I can't wait anymore... Now it's time its time for Naina to face some realities and learn some truths... ok... I will wait for you... and remember what I asked you to do... Bye... he then moves from there...

On the other side Rajveer and Naina were going and walking in the corridor... Then suddenly Rajveer pulls Naina to him and hide themselves behind a wall so that no one can see them... And then without saying anything he just hugs her tightly... Naina was shocked at first... But later realized that Rajveer heard her's and abhi's conversation and because of it was emotional... She too then hugs him tightly... They didn't say anything, but understood each other's emotions without any words and let their silence talk with each other... They forgot about their pain in that hug...

Rajveer then whispers: I love you Naina..

Naina: I love you too Rajveer...

Then after some minutes Rajveer break their hug...He then while caressing Naina's face says: chalo hume chalna chaiye... Your friends must be waiting for you...

Naina just nods smilingly and they both leave from there...

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Alekh, Huda, Ali, Pooja,Yudi and Shalini were there in the mess...Where a lavish dinner is prepared by Suriji, as per Rajveer's order (which was by the way Huda's order)...All of them stares at the dishes which were prepared...There was Dal Makhni, Sarson ka saag, Maki ki roti, Kadai Paneer, Malai Kofta, Navratan Korma, Jeera rice, Raita, Salad, papad and for sweet dish Gulab jamun was there... All except Huda were stunned to see the dishes, where as Huda was standing there proudly looking at the dishes and Suriji, well Suriji was sitting on a chair, fully tired with sweat on his forehead...His one hand was there on his forehead...

Yudi: itna saara aur itn acha khana... isse dekhkar aise nahi lag raha ki hum KMA me nahi balki kisi ki shaddi ki dawat me aaye hai...

Alekh: abe yede, apun ne tujhe Suriji ko busy rakhne ke waste the sab karne ko bola tha, apun ko nahi pata tha ki tu behti ganaga me apne haath to kya pura ka pura naha dho lega... Tujhe itna sab banwane ki kya zaroorat thi... Saala bhukad kahi ka, yeh khana dekhkar aisa lag raha hai ki yeh sirf aaj ke liye nahi balki kal, parso aur najane kitne dino ke liye bana hai...

Ali: wahi to Alekh Bhai... Huda bhai aapko itna saara khana banwane ki kya zaroorat thi... aap jaante hai ki hume ann ka niradar nahi karna chaiye... Ab itna saara khana kon khayega? Aur aap jaante hai na ki KMA ki mess ka ek limited budget hota hai..par yeh khana dekh kar to aisa lag raha hai ki jaise aap ne pure month ka budget issi pe kharch karwa diya...

Huda: abe oyy usool, tu itni tension kyu leta hai yeh Huda hai na, dekh iss Huda ke hote hue khana kabhi waste nahi ho sakta... aur rahi baat budget ki to tu kyu tension leta hai... Apna tau hai na... Itne saalo se sabko wo ghass puss khilakar, bada budget bachaya hai tau ne... aaj ek baar shahi dawt ban gayi to konsi badi baat ho gayi...

Shalini: Huda, tum apne ilawa bhi kabhi kisi ke bare me soch liya karo... Dekho kya halat kar di hai tumne suriji ki... Ek to pehle itna saara khaana banana ki tension, aura b upar se budget ki... Aur tumhe kya lagta hai ki Bc itni aasani se budget approve kar denge... Hum sabko laga tha ki tumne sirf Suriji ko busy rakhne ke liye, aur apna alibi ke liye unh eek do dish extra banana ko kahi hogi... par yaha to tumne pure Five start hotel ka menu ready karwa diya... BC kabhi bhi itna expenses allow nahi karenge... Aur ab tumhare iss kiya ka khamyaza major ko bhugatana padega, jab unhe BC ko jawab dena padega... Tumne unke bare me nahi socha... unka na sahi to kamse kam apne bare me hi soch lete... agar galti se tumhara yeh jhoot pakda gaya na to tumhe andaza bhi nahi ki BC tumhe kitni badi saaza denge..

Huda: ohh Madam ji, thand rakhiye thand... Raj.. mera matlab hai sirji ke hote hue kahe ki tension... unke hote hue kis baat ka dar... wo humesha ki tarah kuch na kuch karke hume bacha hi lenge, aur apne aapko bhi... aur phir hum sab ne itni mehnat kit hi, uss jhabrele ke liye, to itna reward to banta hi hai na.. Ab tum sab ka to pata nahi par main bahut thak gaya hu, aur mujhe zoro ki bhook lagi hai, aur yeh khana dekhkar na mere pet me bhainse dood rahi hai, to main to chala khane...

Alekh murmurs: Saala bhains ki aulad, jab dekho to bas bhains, tabela aur gobbar hi karta rehta hai, aur saari jagh bhains ki tarh gobbar felata rehta hai...

Huda then goes to Suriji: Arey Suri ji mana padega aapko, kya daawat tayar ki hai aapne sab cadets aur faculty members ke liye... Aapne Major sir ke order ko puri tarah foolow kiya hai, dekhna Major sir aapse kitne khush honge...

Then a voice comes from behind: Ohh really Capt. Huda...

They all turns back to see Rajveer standing there, with Naina his side... When they all were talking they didn't realize that Rajveer and Naina came and were standing behind them and heard their all talking...

Suri ji stands up from his chair: ohh Sirji, jaisa aapne kaha tha, mera matlab hai ki jaisa aapne iss khote ko kaha tha mujhe kehne ke liye, maine ussi hisaab se aaj ka khana tayar kar diya hai... Par sirji aapko nahi lagta ki yeh kuch jayada ho gaya... Nahi mera matlab hai ki aap ne decide kiya hai to sahi hoga, par sirji ab Bc mera matlab hai ki Brigedier se extra budget bhi aapko hi dilana hoga... Agar Birg sir ko pata chala na ki mess ke iss mahine ka saara budget aaj ke khane me lag gaya na, to unhone to mere kana vich sar dena hai ji, By god...

Huda: Ohh suriji, aap kyu tension lete hai, Major sir hai na sab handle karne ke liye... Kyu sirji... Huda says smilingly looking towards Rajveer..

Rajveer with a tight smile: Of course Capt. Huda... Ahh suriji aap tension mat lijiye... Aapne wahi kiya jaisa aapko karne ke liye kaha gay tha, m I right Capt. Huda... he says while looking at Huda... and then looking at Suriji, aur jaha tak baat rahi Budget ki top aap tension mat lijiye, aaj ke khane ka saara kharcha, KMA ke budget se nahi jaayega... Yeh mera order tha ki aaj yeh special khana bane humare cadets aur faculty ke liye, to iska expanses bhi main pay karonga...

Suriji Smiles to the fullest: ohh sach sirji... Ki gal keh kar diti tussi ne... Tussi bade great ho ji...

Rajveer: well thank you suriji... Par meri baat abhi puri nahi hui... Maine kaha ki iss kahne ka expenses main pay karonga... Aur mene Capt. Huda ko yeh baat order dete time hi bata di thi, but you know Capt. Huda he is such a gentleman... He says while moving towards Huda... Jab unhe pata chala ki main saara expenses bear karne wala hu to unse raha nahi gaya... Aur unhone kaha ki Sirji Huda ke hote hue aap akele kyu sab karenge... Aap tension mat lo aapke saath main bhi yeh expense half share karonga... Aur inhone yeh bhi kaha ki Sharing is caring yeh inhone apne sir mera matlab hai ki Capt. Rajveer se sikha hai,... To isliye aaj ke kahne ka expenses main aur Capt. Huda equally pay karenge... M I right Capt. Huda... He says while keeping his hand on Huda's shoulder...

Huda was in a shock for a moment, while others were trying hard to control their laugh...

Suriji in excitement: Ohh kya gal keh rahe ho sirji... Yeh khota bhi kabhi change kaam kar sakta hai, iss suriji ko yakeen nahi ho raha... He then goes to Huda and hugs him and while hugging says oyy khote, aaj to tune iss suriji ka dil jeet liya, oyy balle balle... Aaj issi baat pe yeh suriji tujhe apni suriji special lassi pilayega... Aur tu fikar na kari yeh lassi Suriji ki taraf se, iske paisse main aaj ke khane me nahi jodonga... Ab main huni gaya aur tera liye huni special lassi lekar aaya...

Suriji lefts from there... and Huda who comes out of his shock when Suriji hugs him turns to Rajveer...

Huda: ohh sirji, yeh kya kiya aapne, mene kab aapko kaha tha ki main aaj ke khaane ke expenses aapke saath milkar pay karonga...

Rajveer: arey aap bhul gaye Capt. Huda. Oh koi baat nahi aksar bade log bade kaam karke bhool jaate hai... main aapko yaad dilate hu, yeh aapne mujhe tab kaha tha jab maine aapko Suriji ko aaj ka special khana banana ka order diya tha... Kuch yaad aaya aapko..

Huda: par Sirji, wo to aapne diya hi nahi tha, wo to maine jhoot bola tha.. aapko pata to hai...

Rajveer: ohh really... To capt. Huda jaise aapne jhoot bola tha, waise maine bhi bola... But to bad... Na to aap kisi ko yeh bata sakte ho ki aapne jhhot kaha tha, aur na hi main... Aur phir abhi thodi der pehle aaphi keh rahe the na ki main kuch na kuch karke aapko aur apne aap ko bacha longa... to dekhiye bacha liya na main hum dono ko BC se...

Huda: Sirji, isse bachana nahi balki fasana kehta hai... Kiss janam ka badla le rahe hai sirji mujhse...

Rajveer: abhi filhaal to issi janam ka.. Wo kya hai ki main ek normal insaan hu, isliye mujhe sirf apne issi janam ke bare me pata hai, jab kabhi agar pichle janam yaad aa gaye, tab unka bhi badla le longa...

Everyone laughs hearing this...

Huda while crying: this is not fair Sirji..

Alekh: saala nautanki... kya bacho ki tarah ro raha hai...

Rajveer: Capt. Huda mana ki main sab pe trust karta hu, aur aap sab ko mujhpar pura confidence hai ki main aap sab ko kuch nahi hone donga, but capt. Huda, main aap main se kisi ko iss baat ka galat fayda bhi nahi uthane donga... Aap ache se jaante hai ki aapki galti thi, itna sara khana banawane me, aur KMA ke pass ek limited budget hota hai... jo ki aapne unnecessarily spend karwa diya.. to ab galti ki hai to saza to bhugatni padegi na... aur kyunki aap mere fav. Students me se ek hai, aur main aapko punish hote hue nahi dekh sakta isliye, aapki aadhi punishment maine le li... ab chaliye jab aapne yeh dawat banwai hai, to iska luft bhi uthaiye...

Yudi: yes bro... Now that this lavish dinner is on you, my hunger has increased and m feeling dam hungry... To chalo...

Shalini: waise aaj aapne ek baat sabit kar di major ki bache chahe kitne hi bade ho jaye, par baap aakhir baap hi hota hai... Ussi tarh aapke students chahe kitne hi bade officers kyu na ban jaye, par aap humesha unke guru hi rahenge, unse chaar kadam aage...

Everyone smile hearing this...Then they all move towards the food counters... In the meanwhile cadets too start coming... All of them take their dinner and Rajveer was about to sit with Shalini on a different table, as he thought that it won't be good to sit with his cadets so soon... When he was about to sit there, Alekh calls him..

Aleekh: arey Sir, Shalini mam aap dono waha kyu bethe hai, aap apun log ko join kijiye na...

Rajveer: That's okk Capt. Sharma... But aap aapke friends' se kafi time baad mile hai, so I think we shouldn't interfere... You guys carryon...

Yudi: no that that won't be a problem... We all are faculty members and will be staying here together, so it would be good if we all know each other , so come on sir join us... Ahh well why I am asking you to join you, we should join you both, as you both are our seniors... What say guys... shall we join them...

Huda: ab yudiee, neki aur puch puch...pehli baar tune koi dangh ki baat ki hai... aur waise bhi aaj ki yeh dawat bhi to Sirji ne di hai... Unhone humare liye itna kiya hai, to hume bhi inse dosti kar leni chaiye... waise bhi samudra main reh kar magarmach se bair nahi karte... Inse to dosti karne me hi apna fayda hai...

Rajveer: well let me tell you Capt. Huda main rishte fayade yah nuksan dekhkar nahi banata... Aur aap sab ko bhi yahi salh donga... Rishte humesha dil se bante hai, aur dil se hi nibahaye jaate hai...

Huda: Yeh to aapne bade pate ki baat kahi sirji...

( If you guys are confusing that why Rajveer and Huda are talking in this way, then let me clear this that they are pretending in front of others that they don't know each others... so they just try to show that they are communicating normally and trying to know each others, so that others won't get doubt later on when they see them together..)

All 6 of them move towards Rajveer and Shalini's table... Naina was about to sit beside Rajveer but suddenly Huda comes there and sit on that chair... Naina looks at him frustratingly...

Huda: arey phoolan tu abhi tak khadi kyu hai, baith na...

Naina: Well thank you Huda, mujhe notice karne ke liye... par agar tumne thik se notice kiya hota to tumhe pata hota ki Main bethne hi wali thi, wo bhi isse chair pe... jis par tum aakar bade maze se baith gaye..

Huda: ohh sorry phoolan maine dhyan nahi diya... par isme itna gussa hone wali kya baat hai, yeh aakhri chair to thi nahi... Tu kisi aur chair pe baith ja...

Naina: thanks for your wonderful suggestion huda... She says sarcastically... She then move towards Rajveer's other's side chair.. But when she moves there Huda gives a wink to Pooja and as she was about to sit, Pooja sits there...

Naina while getting angry: Pooja... Tujhe dikhayi nahi deta kya, main baithne wali this uss seat pe...

Pooja: To kya ho gaya Naina, to kisi aur chair pe baith ja.. Wo kya hai na subah se main apni battery bina recharge kiye uss kar rahi hu, to ab meri beetry bilkul low ho gayi thi... aur isliye mujhe stand by mode me rehne ke bhi energy nahi bachi thi,.. Mere pass yeh chair khali thi, to main jhat se baith gayi, taki main jaldi se apni battery recharge kar sako... Please Naina tu meri doist hai na, mere network ko ache se pakadti hai, tu saamne wali chair pe baith ja...

While Naina was getting angry because she came to know that they were doing it intentionally, others were trying to hide their smile...

Naina frustratingly sits in the chair in front of Rajveer and when she looks at Rajveer, Rajveer smiles and winks at her, which increases her anger and she glares at him... Naina ka mooh fulla hua tha, nak gusse se laal thi.. wo bilkul ek aisi choti bachi ki tarh lag rahi thi, jisse uski favourite chocolate dusro ne chin le ho... Rajveer bas Naina ko hi dekh rahe the... Unhe Naina ka yeh bachpana, iss tarah se naraz hokar mooh fulakar baithna, bahut acha lag raha tha... Naina thi to suru se hi bacho jaisi massom, par waqt ke diye jhakmo ne uske bachpane ko daba diya tha... Umar se pehle hi wo badi ho gayi thi... Uska bachpana uske gusse ke piche chip gaya tha... par yeh bachpana puri tarah se khatam nahi hua tha... Uska yeh bachpana bahar aata tha, par sirf aur sirf uske Rajveer sir ke saamne, jab wo bacho jaise apni baat manwane ke liye unse zidd karti thi, aur agar wo uzki zidd puri karne se mana kar dete to bilkul bacho ke tarah unse gussa ho jati thi, unse ladti thi... Aur Rajveer ko Naina ka yeh bachpana, yeh maasomiyat humesha se bhati thi... Kahi na kahi uske iss bachpane, iss massomiyat ne hi unhe uski tarf khicha tha... Aur ab Rajveer ki bas yahi dua thi ki, wo Naina ki iss maasomiyat, iss bachpane ko kabhi khone nahi denge...

They all started eating while chatting normally, when Abhimanyu comes there...

Abhi: Well I hope you all don't mind if I join you all here... Actually I am the only faculty member left here, so thought why not join you all...

Pooja murmurs: ab yeh unwanted caller yeha bhi tapak gaya..

Huda: sir hum to mind nahi karenge, but lagta hai ki aap apna mind bahar chod kea aye hai, iss liye aapko yeh samjh nahi aa raha ki aap hume joi nahi kar sakte, kyunki as you can see yeh table full hai, aur koi bhi chair khali nahi hai...

Abhi: well capt. Huda mere pass mera mind hai, isliye mujhe pata hai ki aisi koi problem nahi, jiska koi solution na ho... He then take a sapre chair from the next table and places it beside Huda... see problem solved.. ab yaha par ek chiar khali hai, jispar hum aaram se baith sakte hai...

Huda: main bhul gaya tha sir, ki aapko kahi par bhi zabardasti bich me ghusne ki aadat hai...

Abhi: aur aapko bina matlab ke bich me bolne ki...

Huda: meri aur bhi kayi aadte hai sir jo main...

But he was interrupted by Rajveer: Capt. Huda, relax... Why are you getting hyper... He is our collegue, like I m your collegue... And like he said it won't look good if sits alone and have his dinner, while we all enjoy together... He is also a faculty member like us... So let him join us, like you all asked me to join you all.. Ahh Major Chahun please sit...

Abhi once agin feels differently hearing Chauhan from Rajveer aka Arjun Rathore's mouth...

Abhi: Thanks Major Rathore... Waise Major from which academy you graduated... because I am sure you are not a KMA pass out, as I never heard your name nor saw your name in KMA's ex students list..

All gets tensed up and they looks at Rajveer, while Rajveer is having his diiner calmly..

Rajveer: You are right I am not KMA pass out..I pass out from Pune Military academy, the second best academy after KMA...

Abhi: in which year?

Rajveer: 2002..

( Guys don't get hyper or get confuse by this year... asthiugh we are in 2017 and I m writing in 2017, but in my stotry its not 2017... lrl started in 2006, and in 2007 Rajeev left this show... that means they showed his accident in 2007... and my story starts after 4 years from that accident.. so in my story, the present year is 2011...And you have to assume it that only... now I can't do anything, as I started writing this story after soo many years... and according to me the present age of Rajveer is 30 years, Naina: 25 years... there is 5 years gap between them... Rest of the cadets are of the same age as Naina... )

Abhi: ohh...after that where were you posted, I mean we didn't meet before that's why and I never heard about your name before...

Rajveer: are you interrogating me Major or taking some kind of my interview...

Abhi: ohh its nothing like that Major.. Its just I am curious to know about you.. and if I have to be your frind then I need to kno w about you na, I mean after knowing each other only, we can be good friends, right...

Rajveer: sorry major, I differ from you... Kisi ke bare me sab kuch jaankar aap kisi ke dost nahi ban jaate... kyunki aapke bare me sab kuch to aapke dushman bhi jaante hai... Rishta chahe koi bhi ho, ek dusre to samjhne se banta hai, ek dusre pe trust karne se banta hai, warna chahe aapko kisi ke bare me uske bachpan se lekar ab tak ka sab kluch kyu na pata ho, par agar aap use samjhte nahi, us pe trust nahi karte, to wo rishta sirf naam ka hota hai... Aur main naam ke rishton me na to yakeen rakhta hu, aur na hi banana chatha hu... Aur jaha tak rahi baat mere bare me jane ki, to kabhi fursat me baithenge, to aapko apne bare me sab kuch bata donga... Sab kuch... He emphasis on the word Sab kuch... Filhal me chalta hu, kyunki mera dinner ho gaya.. He then gets up from his chair.,... Thank you all for having me with you all and making me a part of your group... Enjoy your dinner... Gud night... will see you all tomorrow... He then looks at Naina and gives her a assuring nod...

He then leaves from there... NAina was about to go behind him but Alekh catches her hand under the table..

Alekh whispers: yedi mat ban NAina, tu agar aise unke piche jayegi to shaq ho jayega.. waise hi yeh Abhimanyu sir kuch jayada hi question pouch rele the... Tu chup chap apna khana khatam kar, aur phir chali jaana.. Aur tu unki tension mat le, wo bilkul thik hoge samjhi...

The rest of them continue having their diiner though unwillingly, because everyone wants to go far away from Abhimanyu as soon as possible.. But they can't do so they just sit there and have their dinner... During the dinner, Abhimanyu tries to have converse with them, but they all avoid him, only Shalini talks with him.. But she also just gives him one word reply...

After having their dinner as fast as possible they all move towards their room...

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Naina enters her room after having dinner... She thought to meet rajveer But as soon as she enters inside her living room, she sees many bags, let me correct it many shopping begs kept on her table, sofas... She gets surprised to see all that ans soo many bags... She has no idea who kept those beg in her room and why... She suddenly gets suspicious and very carefully move towards them... She then very carefully take one shopping beg and opens it... When she opens it she sees a beautiful dress in that ... She gets surprised to see that... She then one by one opens all the begs... and in ever beg there were beautifull dresess... Some were traditional suits, some were sarees, some were casul jeans top, some were one piece dresses... some formals... In all and all evry kind of dress was present there... and in totallyty there were about 25 dresses... She was shocked and surprised to see these many and beautiful dresses...When she was busy in looking them, she heard a voice from behind..

I hope you like theses dresses...

She turns and find Rajveer standing near that turning mirror leaning on the nearby wall and his hands were folded in front of his chest...

Naina: Rajveer.. yeh.. yeh sab kya hai?

Rajveer then stands staright and starts coming to her: Naina... tumne mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya... pehle batati to ab tak main tumhe Doc ke pass le kar chala bhi gaya hota...

Naina gives him a confusing look: aap kya keh rahe hai? Maine aapko kya nahi bataya? Aur mujhe aap doc ke pass kyu lekar jaate? Mujhe kya hua?

Rajveer: arey kya hua matlab, tumahri eye eisght weak ho gayi hai, to tumhe doctor ke pass lekar to jana padega na.. Ab dekho tumhe pata hi nahi chala ki yeh sab dresses hai.. Ladkiyon ke pehnne ki dresses... He then smiles naughtily..

Naina: Rajveer.. aap... mujhe pata hai ki yeh dresses hai... mere puchne ka matlab yeh hai ki yeh yaha kyu hai, inhe kon lekar aaya?

Rajveer: ab mere ilawa yaha koi aur to hai nahi.. to obvious hai ki yeh main lekar aaya hu, aura b tumhare liye laya hu to yeh tumhare room me hi hogi na, Shalini ya Pooja ke room me to nahi...

Naina gets surprised to hear this: yeh aap lekar aaye hai, mere liye, itni saari dresses... Par aapko mere liye dresses lane ki kya zaroorat thi aur wo bhi itni saari... lani hi to sirf ek lekar aate na... itne pass waste karne ki kya zaroorat thi...

Rajveer then come close to her and cups her face: main yeh tumhare liye laya, kyunki main lana chatha tha... aur itni saari isliye laaya kyunki tumhari wardrobe me tumhare kapdo se jayada mere kapde hai... tumne meri hare k chiz ko sambhal kar rakha par apne bare me kabhi nahi socha... aur main isliye bhi laya kyunki main dekhna chatha tha kit um meri pasand me kaisi dikhti ho... Aur jaha tak baat hai paiso ki to Naina, aaj se pehle meri life me kabhi koi tha hi nahi jispe main paise karch kar sako aur wo bhi pure haq se... ab jab tum mili ho, jis pe main apne saare rights use kar sakta hu, to please mujhe rokna mat...Acha ab yeh batayo ki tumhe yeh pasand bhi aaye ya nahi.. Actually main tumhe apne saath le jata aur tumhe tumhari pasand ki shopping karwata, par you know na for now we can't go anywhere together... so I only have to do this shopping... Ki tum kasi lagogi...so I hope you like these...

Naina gets emotional hearing this and seeing his care for her: Raajveer aap mere liye job hi laayege wo mujhe bahut pasand aayega... aur main khud bhi apne aapko aapki pasand me dekhna chathi hu, aapne aapko aapki nazron se dekhna chathi hu...they share a cute eye lock...

Naina then turns towards the dresses and starts arranging them...

Naina: waise I must say ki aapki choices bahut achi hai.. ladkiyon ki clothing ke mamle me aapka taste bahut acha hai... koi nahi keh sakta ki aapne pehli baar kisi ladki ke liye shopping ki hai... To batayie, mujhse pehle kitni ladkiyon ke liye shopping kar chuke hai.. And let me warn you for your good the answer should be no one... She says playfully...

But Rajveer after hearing this lost in his thoughts... He then gets some flashbacks...

Rajveer was standing in a shop and was buying one dress..

Rajveer in his mind: I hope ki use yeh pasand aayega... Pehli baar aisa kuch le raha hu... please God bacha lena... meri izzat rakh lena... Waise wo iss dress me khoobsurat bahut lagegi.. Nahi nahi Khoobsurat to wo humesha lagti hai... uske pehne ke baad yeh dress bahut achi lagegi...

Rajveer comes out of his trance when she feels someone's shaking his shoulder lightly...He then finds Naina looking at him worriedly...

Rajveer: haa tumne kuch kaha?

Naina: aapko kya hua? Kaha kho gaye the? Main kabse aapko bula rahi thi, par aapne koi jawab nahi diya?

Rajveer: arey nahi Naina aisi koi baat nahi wo bas main kuch soch raha tha..

Naina: nahi mujhe pata hai ki aapko meri baat buri lagi... ek to aap mere liye itne pyaar se yeh sab lekar aaye, aur main aapkoched rahi thi, aap pe doubt kar rahi thi... par believe me Rajveer, wo sab maine sirf mazak me kaha tha... Main to bas aapko pareshan kar rahi thi...Meri intention aapko hurt karne ki nahi thi... I am sorry... She bends her face down...she was having some tears in the cornor of her eyes, which she was trying to hide but Rajveer noticed that..

Rajveer while cuping her face: Naina sach me main tumse naraz nahi hu... aur tumhara pura hak hai mujhse mazak karne ka... believe me mujhe tumhari baat ka bura nahi laga... believe me... lekin jo tum ab kar rahi ho na wo mujhe taklif de raha hai..

Naina looks at him quizzically ..

Rajveer: aur nahi to kya, apni inn aankhon se aansu baha kart um mujhe taklif de rahi ho Naina... Mujhe sabse zayada taklif tumhare yeh aansu pauchate hai... Aur agar yeh aansun meri wajh se ho, to wo taklif aur bhi zayada hoti hai... Top batao kyat um mujhe taklif me dekhna chahogi..

Naina moves her head in no..

Rajveer while wiping her tears: Main apni naina ke naino me aansun nahi balki khushi dekhna chatha hu... inn aansuon ki meri Naina ke naino me koi jagah nahi... samjhi..

Naina nods at him... then while sniffing says: par agar kabhi khushi ke aansun aa gaye to... aap mujhe itni khushiyan de rahe ho, to main kabhi inn khushiyon ki wajah se ro di to... She askes him innocently...

Rajveer smiles at her and then says very lovingly: khushi ke aansuon ki bhi koi jagah nahi... Par main janta hu ki meri Naina ah singh bahut emotional hai... aur use jayada khushiyan sambhali nahi jaati, aur wo ro deti hai... Isliye abse kabhi khushi ke aansun tumhari aankhon me aaye to tum bas apne aapko mujh me chupa lena... Bilkul aise... He then hugs her and hides her face in his neck...Iss tarh me tumhare khusi ke aansun dekh nahi paonga aur mujhe taklif nahi hogi... thik hai... he says while caressing her hairs... Naina just hides herself in him, as he said... Though Rajveer was not able to see her face but he knew that she is smiling, smiling with tears... Like she said Khushi ke aansun...

Rajveer in his mind: aaj itne saalo ke baad mujhe uski yaadkaise aa gayi? Ab jab meri life me sab sahi ho raha hai, jab mujhe mera pyaar, meri Naina mil gayi hai to phir se wo yaad kyu? Yeh sab Chauhan ki wajh se hua hai... Naina ne bhale hi uski puri baat na suni ho, par mujhe pata hai ki wo kya kehna chatha tha, aur kiske bare me kehna chatha tha... Ek baar phir se ek baar phir se tumne mere uss jakham ko hara kar diya Cahuhan... Ek baar phir se uski yaad dila di... Par yeh wada hai mera, apnea tit ko main apne aaj aur aane wale kal pe koi asar nahi daalne donga... Aur iss baar mere saath meri Naina hai, jo mere har jhakm hi dava hai...

Rajveer comes out of her thoughts and then to lighten the mood says: waise Naina main tumhare liye saari dresses laya hu, but you know koi sleepwear nahi laya... Kyunki maine kaha than a ki tum mujhe mere kapdo main jayada achi lagti ho.. aur main yahi chahoga ki jab bhi hum akele ho to tum mere kapde hi pehna... To dekho abhi hum akele hai, to you should change your clothes na and wear mine clothes...

Naina blushes a lot and in hyness makes her hold more tight on him...

Rajveer: arey jao na jaldi change karo...He then seperates her from him...Main bhi change kar leta hu, yahi... afterall mere kapde tumhare pass jayad ha... nahi..

Naina shys away and turns her away from him..Rajveer then hugs her from behind... and keeps his face on her shoulder...

Rajveer: kya hua change nahi karna?

Naina: Rajveer please...don't tease me...she whispers...

Rajveer: acha chalo I won't tease you... but now you should change... It's time for sleep... Kal subah jaldi uthna hai.. Kal se cadets' ki training suru ho rahi hai... Kal se bahut hectic hone wala hai... Chalo tum change karlo... I will also change... He then leaves her... Naina then goes in washroom to change and though she was feeling shy but she changed herself in Rajveer's t-shirt and her trouser only... On the other hand Rajveer to changed his clothes... and was now witting on the bed... His one leg was lying straight and one leg was folded and his one hand was resting on his folded leg... His head was resting on the headboard... And he was seems to be in deep thinking... He then hears the door opening sound and look to find Naina standing there in front of the washroom in his clothes... She was looking at him but was feeling shy... Seeing Naina like this a sweat smile comes on Rajveer's face... Unhone apna haat Naina ki tarf badaya.. Naina ne bhagkar aakar unke haath ko thama aur khud ko unki bahon me chupa liya... He then makes her ly down on the bed... Her head was resting on his houlder.. and Rajveer's hand was encircled around her shoulders to keep her close to him... He then place a kiss on her forehead...

Rajveer: Good Night Naina...

Naina: Good night Rajveer...

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Next morning:

Everyone was once again gathered in the assembly hall, as per BC's order...

BC: Cadets as I told you yesterday, that there are few of your faculty members who will be joining today... So they have come... But along with them, there are few new cadets too, who have joined KMA.. So let me introduce the new cadets first...

The first cadet is Cadet Inder Gaur...

We then sees a guy coming wearing a torn jeans and a loose t-shirt..(Harshvardhan Rane playing the role of Inder Gaur)


Next is cadet Sameera shroff... a girl comes there with a sweet smile... She sees NAina and her friends and smiles at them...

Huda: ohh teri surajmukhi...

Presenting Sanaya Irani as Sameera Shroff...


Next is Cadet Akriti Bhatt..Presenting Shikha Singh as Akriti bhatt


And last cadet is Cadet Anjali Rajput... Presenting Mawara hocane as Anjali Rajput...


Now let me introduce you all to your new faculty members...

Miss Sonia singh, Your Yoga teacher... We then see a Woman wearing a black saree... Presenting Sara Seikh as Sonia singh..


And last Miss Nandini Sharma... Your psychology teacher... Then a women enter wearing a yellow Kurta,... Presenting Ankita Bhargava as Nandini Sharma...


These two faculty members are not army officers..They won't be giving you any army training... But they will be helping you and making your training easy by making you all mentally, emotionally and physically fit... Now dismiss...

While everyone was clapping Rajveer was standing there shocked... From the moment he heard this name Nandini Sharma he was in shock and then he saw her coming... That one little hope which his mind was having that may be she is not that Nandini, that hope got shattered when he saw her coming... He realized that she is the same Nandini Sharma... His past has come in his present, which can harm his future...
Edited by saiaarti - 8 years ago

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