Rajveer and Naina: Second Chance to their love, imp note on pg 94 - Page 54

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Its OK dear hope so u r fit n fine
N plzz give us these delightful updates u.r amazing writer

Originally posted by: MANNNAYAK

hey
I am new to your ff
just read it
loved it
please also add me to your pm list

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

very nice update ,i was laughing when alekh said about banse or gobar,i just love it.i wish rajveer told naina about her past so she know about it .and not from abhi .

Originally posted by: RNforever

hiii... Hii Arti
wonderful update..Thank you soo much
Raj I love u yr ...isse jada aur kya bolu...well I love him too.. everyone loves him...and you don't have to say anything else we understand your emotions..😊

love d bounding btw RN ...thank you
yr yeh abhimanyu mjhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha ...Abhimanyu ek bahut hi tedhi chiz hai, jisse samjhna bahut mushkil hai..
huda itni bezzati karta h phir bhi muh utha kar wapas aa jata h...well for me he is like kutte ki dum hai jitni marzi seedhi karlo tedhi hi rehegi..😕


Raj ka past h omg ...woh bhi nandani ????? oh !god plz koi problem mat karna ba inke beche ...

Well don't worry Arti, Raina ke bich koi problem nahi hogi, kyunki mujhe tum sab se maar khane ka koi shauk nahi hai.. main waise hi bahut kamzor rehti hu, tum sab ki maar bardasht nahi kar paogi.. 😉


Raj ko nandani yaad aa rahi h sab abhimanyu ki wazaha se ...haa kyunki waise to Raj ko sirf aur sirf Naina hi yaad rehti hai..

kya asa kuch h jo abhimanyu ko raj ke against kar raha h ...may be may be not.. have to wait to see how story is hoing to unfold and how the characters are going to grow...

I hope tum jaldi se next update karogi ...well hope soo iss baar jaldi kar do..

let me tell u ... mujhse jada aur koi intzar nahi karta tumhari fic ka ...well i am honored and blessed to have you as my reader and friend... i hope i can consider you my friend.. You won't mind right... Aur humara to naam bhi same hai.. Arti..


pata h kal rat actually mjhe aaj subha bolna chaeyi...4 bhe bhor me meri neend khuli toh bas maine apni id kholi aur jab tumhara pm dekha toh jhut se uth kar baith gayi aur 4 bje he tumhari story padhi coz I love ur fic yr ...par comment abhi kiya kyuki neend aa gayi thi raat me

Aww really... i love you Arti...You have my heart now... well i don't have problem, tumne comment kiya yahi mere liye bahut hai, time doesn't matter dear..
toh bolo kon h jo 4 bje uth kar tumhari fic padhta h mere alawa ...???? I am sure koi aur meri fic padne ke liye 4 baje to kya 8 baje bhi na uthe... Yeh sirf tum hi kar sakti ho... And love you for that..


chalo ab jaldi se update karo
ab jada intzar mat karana ... jayada intzaar nahi karwaongi.. update will be up within few minutes..

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Damn this update was so so entertaining...Thank you soo much..

It didn't feel like I am reading a fiction... It was as if I am watching the show all over again but now more of Rajveer and naina were there... Actually i write with this intention only, that when you all are reading it, you won't feel as if you are reading it, rather feel as if you are watching lrl.. I want you all to visalize every scene when you read it.,... That';s why i give more details and update this long chapters... Because i want you all to feel and be able to see that scene in your mind..some people may think that i am strecthing my story or feel bored while reading this long updates.. But for me this how i wish to write so that my readers though less in number, but feel satisfied.. and i am glad that i am able to satisfy some of my readers..

The first scene had me in splits... Rajveer surely knows how to handle Huda... I love their scenes just like they were in the show...hilarious and entertaining...

Well Rajveer to humeahs se hi inn sab ko handle karta aaya hai.. and only our Rajveer can handle them and for Huda as Shalini said baap baap hota hai bhai.. And Puja and Huda better not repeat what they did with naina on table... Naina will kill them and won't even feel bad about it..😆Well naina was really ready to kill them... Badi mushkil se maine usse roka unhe maarne se.. Kya hai na main kanon ko apne haat me lena pasand nahi karti.. 😉

Then abhimanyu... Damn Man... He is a pain.. He said all those things to Naina in the corridor and then he came on the dinner table as well. So shameless he is... He is really shameless...And then the room scene... It was so perfect and romantic... I loved the whole scene... And I love it that Raj and naina sleeps together.. That's so cute ☺️. He was about to blurt about Nandini to Naina... Raj came on the right time.. But I want Raj to be a bit more possessive about Naina.. Like when Abhi touch naina's elbow rajveer should have reacted... That way the story will be more passionate and romantic 😉

I loved the new cast... Sameera is here... So it's nice. Also Nandini although is a bad news but Ankita did a good job in Reporters and she is needed to make the story interesting... I hope that Naina will show her possessive side too when the time comes... This is going to be so interesting to read..

Naina ko bacahne Rajveer humesha sahi time pe hi aata hai.. I will keep your suggestion in my mind and will try to show Rajveer's possessive side too... But i think his that side will come out only then when he will be Major Rajveer singh shekhawat for everyone not Major Arjun Rathore... i hope you are getting my point..

P. S. I hope we don't have many Inder and Anjali scenes... I loved the movie Sanam Teri Kasam but since I love the show for the 1st season and for me the show ended there... Adding characters form season 2 and their scenes will affect the essence of the fic badly... Pls Pls don't give them many scenes.. Don't worry dear... actually i added Inder and Anjali beacuse i too loved Sanam teri Kasam.. I ahve watched it again and again continously for many days.. my love for them made me to bring them.. Also one of the cadet will be playing an important role and as i can't bring just one new cadet, i have to bring atleast 3-4 cadets.. So that it look more realistic... Let this fic be only on Raj Naina and their friends..Don't worry this fic will be Rajveer and Naina's only... I won't be giving new entries much importance, because to be very frank my fic is already long enough and chapters are also very long.. Adding their scenes means increasing chapters lenght more, which is highly difficult... and for me too lrl ended when Rajveer left the show.. After he left i hardly saw 4-5 episodes not more than that, as i couldn't bring myself to see lrl without him being there..

Waiting for the next update .. update will be up within few minutes..

Continue soon