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Chapter 24

Recap: Yudi: sure Pooja... tu to kya pura KMA aaj Major Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan ki movie dekhega wo bhi live..

Huda: movie kaha Yudiee, MMS bol.. uss jhabrele ka live MMS...

They all smirks...

Abhimanyu was roaming in the corridor after having conversation with Rajveer... Suri ji comes there...

Suriji: ohh Abhimanyu putar, tussi ethe ho... Brigadier sir ne aapko aapka kamra dikhane waste kaha hai, aayie main aapko aapka kamra dikha do... waise aapka room to wahi hai, jo pehle tha, aur aapka saman aapke kamre main bhi pauhcha diya gaya hai..

Abhi: thank you suri ji... aur aapko fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, hum apne room main khud chale jayenge...

Suriji: Arey nahi nahi puttar ji... Bc mera matlab Brig. Sahib ne mere kana vich sir kar dena hai... unka order hai, to pura to karna padega na...

When Abhimanyu and Suriji were having this conversation, Alekhg and Huda who were hiding behind a pillar heard their conversation..

Huda: oyy qaidi, yeh suri ji kaha se aa gaye... agar yeh uss jhabrele ke saath room me gaye to sab gadbad ho jayega...

Alekh: bol to tu sahi raha hai, huda.. kuch bhi karke suri ji ko yaha se khiskana hoga...kuch to karna hoga apun ko... Then after thinking something ... Sunn tu ek kaam kar... and then he says something in Huda's ear... After hearing which Huda gives a smirk...

Huda: kya idea diya hai qaidi... mere saath reh kart era dimag bhi chalne laga hai..

Alekh: apun ka dimag humesha se chaltha tha samjha na... ab tu yaha se chal aur jo bola hai wo kar samjha...

Huda: ha ha jata hu...

He then come towards Abhi and Suriji while running...

Huda: arey Suriji aap yaha ho, aur main aapko kab se dhund raha hu..

Suriji: Kyu khiote de puttar, aisi konsi gal hogi jo tu mujhe kabse dhund raha tha...

Huda: wo main to aapko mess le jana aaya tha, aaj ke lunch ka menu batane...

Suriji: kyu aaj teri baarat nikal rahi hai kya, jo aaj ka menu tu mujhe batayega... Kan khol ke sun le khotte, iss KMA me wahi banta hai, wo Suriji decide karte hai, aur aaj bhi wahi banega... yeh koi tera dhaba nahi hai, jaha aakar tu apna order dega, aur suriji tujhe wo banakra dege.. gal samjh aayi ki nahi?

Huda gets embarrassed because Suriji was saying all this in front of Abhimanyu, who was trying to control his smile..

Huda: main aapko order nahi de skata par Major Arjun Rathore to aapko order de sakte hai na..

Suriji: Major sahib... Major Sahab ne kya order diya hai..

Huda: ji ha major Rathore.. Unhone kaha hai ki kyunki aaj humari nayi faculty ne join kiya hai, aur kyunki kal se cadets ki training bhi suru honi hai, to aaj sabke liye kuch special banaya jaaye... jise faculty ka welcome bhi ho jayega, aur cadets training suru hone se pehle ek last baar dhang ka khana kha lege...

Suri ji: oyy kya matlab tera dhang ka khane se.. tu kya kehna chatha hai ki training ke time par main dhang ka khana nahi deta cadets ko...

Huda: Ab maine aisa kuch nahi kaha Suriji.. Main to bas aapko Major sir ka order bata raha tha... Ab chaliye na jaldi se aapko pura menu bhi bata na hai... jo Major sir ne decide kiya hai... Mjor sir KMA ke vice principal hai main to unse kal pehli baar mila tha isliye mujhe to pata nahi ki wo kaise hai, par sochiye suriji agar wo uss muchad, mera m,atlab ki Major Nayyar jaise nikle to aapke saath kya karenge agar unhe pata chalk mi aapne unka order nahi mana...

Suriji then imagine Major Nayyar scolding him ..

Nayyar while shouting: aapne mera yanki ki KMA ke vice principal ka order nahi mana... maine kaha tha ki aaj wahi banega jo maine decide kiya hai, par aapne wo nahi banaya... ab aap ko punishment milegi.. aapko rashan ke saaman ki yeh saari bori iss grounds se utha kar khud mess tak le jani hogi... Aur ha iss kaam me koi bhi aapki madad nahi karega, aur agar aapne kisi ki madad li to aapko iss ground ke pure 30 chakar lagane hoge... now comeon start..

Suriji: but sirji..

Nayyar: I said start your drill suriji...

He then imagines himself carrying all the gunny sacks of rashan to the kitchen and then fainting in the middle only while shouting

Suri ji: oyy mar gaya..

Suriji then comes out of his imagination...

Suriji: Oyy khote tu uss major Nayyar ki yaad na dila samjha.. Aur apne Rathore Sahab uss Nayaar ke jaise nahi hai.. main unhe janta hu.. aur waise bhi unhone kaha hai to wahi banega jo unhone kaha hai.. Tu chal main Abhimanyu puttar ko unke kamre tak chod kar aata hu.. Chaliye sirji..

Huda while trying to stop them: ohh kya Suriji, Abhimanyu sir koi bache thodi hai, jo agar aap unhe unke room tak chodne nahi gaye to wo KMA me gum ho jaayege, wo army me Major hai, I thin k wo apna room khud dhund sakte hai.. Kyu sirji aap apne room tak khud chale jayege na, akele me dare ge to nahi... ya Suriji ke saath main bhi aao aur aapko aapka haath pakad kar room tak chodke aao.. he says while looking at Abhimanyu and giving him a smirk..

Suriji tries to interfere: oyy khote tu yeh kya...

But Abhimanyu cuts him off and while looking at Huda says: its okk Suriji.. hume apna room pata hai, aur hum khud apne room tak chale jayenge, aap capt. Huda ke saath jaiye, kyunki mera to pata nahi, par hume yeh bhatke hue jaror lag rahe hai...

Suriji: o nahi sirji...

This time Huda cuts him: ab rehne dijiye na Suriji, inhone kaha to ki yeh khud chale jayenge... UAr waise bhi aaj ki davit ke chief guest to yahi hai.. yeh jo kuch bhi ho raha hai, inke sawagt ke liye to ho raha hai... ab aap chaliye mere saath..

Suriji: dekh khote gal sun tu meri...

Again he gets cut off by Abhimanyu: its okk suriji... aap jaiye... hum chalet hai... And he lefts from there... While suriji gets irritated by getting cut again and again...

Suriji: kamal hai, koi iss Suriji ko bolne hi nahi deta.. ab tu yah kya kahda hai khote chal mere saath mess main... And then Suriji leaves from there and Huda to follows him but not giving thumbs up to Alekh...

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Abhimanyu then reach his room and when he open his door and enter then a bucket full eggs and rotten tomatoes fall on him.. he gets shocked... After coming out of his shock he sees himself and then realizes that he is covered in eggs... most off the eggs and tomatoes got broken after falling on him and sticks to his hair, face and clothes... He then gets angry and realizes that someone has done this... He then decide to clean himself first and then punish the one who played this prank on him.. He then starts waling but the moment he moves forward, he falls on the floor on his back... and the eggs and tomatoes which were on the floor gets punctured and stick to his back... He groans in pain.. His hands which were on the floor becomes sticky.. when he checks he realizes that he is lying on a plastic sheet on which oil is spilled... That was the reason that why he fall, because he was standing on a plastic sheet covered with oil and the moment he took his step he slipped due to that oil and plastic sheet.. He then tries to stand, but because off all that oil, tomatoes and eggs, it became so sticky, that he was jot able to stand.. he was getting slipped again and again... After trying or say getting slipped almost 5-6 times, he manages to stand up with great difficulty, while taking support of the door.. He then carefully walks out of that sheet and moves towards the bathroom... but the moment he opens bathroom door, he fully gets covered in flour... He once again becomes shock.. and for some minutes was not able to see anything, because all that flour covered his face and gets stick on his face due to egg York and tomatoes... He is not looking less than a ghost... He then clears his eyes with great difficulty and enters inside washroom... After removing his clothes he then starts taking a shower... he was smelling very bad due to all those eggs and rotten tomatoes... he was not able to see properly... He then takes a shampoo which was in the bathroom and starts applying... As he wants to clean himself fast, he apply that shampoo on his body too... But when he was massaging shampoo on his hair, he smells something very bad... on smelling properly he realizes that the smell was like cow dunk smell type.. and when he sees his hands he sees that his hands are covered with cow dunk and not only his hands but his hair and body too was covered in cow dunk... He then gets very frustrated and angry and throws that shampoo bottle on the wall and shouts...Huda...

He then start cleaning himself with water only... but when he was in the middle the water stopped coming... He then gets more frustrated... And shouts ...

Abhimanyu: orderly... Orderly...

But nobody heard him, most of the orderlies were in the kitchen with Suriji and Huda, as planned by Huda, who was keeping them busy while asking them to prepare full lavish dinner and rest were kept busy in the activity room and were made to watch movie with all the cadets...

After shouting like 10 minutes, Abhimanyu realized that nobody is coming... And as he was smelling awful and needs to clean himself properly, he decided to go outside...

He very carefully comes outside and stands in front of his room... and tries to find any orderly, but after not finding anyone, and seeing the corridor full empty, he decides to go out and go towards the water taps, which were in the corner in assembly hall... When he moves out of his room, Alekh and yudi come inside his room and remove all the buckets which were tied on the doors and collect both the plastic sheets which were on the floor, one in front of the main door and one inside the washroom... they also take that shampoo bottle with them and replaces it with a new one... and after hi-fying with each other moves from there... They have cleaned the floor properly and removed all the proofs before moving out...After coming out Alekh send message to pooja... Pooja who was with Ali in the activity room, shows the message to Ali..

Pooja while speaking loudly: arey Ali miujhe na payas lagi hai, to main pani pike aati hu..

Ali: thik hai Pooja ji..

All the cadets heard them... Pooja then moves from there and come in the assembly hall, where Abhimanyu was standing only in his boxers... He was cleaning himself with that tap water with great difficulty.. He has cleaned his face and upper body and his hair were still somewhat covered in cow dunk... When Pooja sees him, she tries to control her laugh and then screams...

Pooja: Ahhh...

Abhimanyu who was cleaning himself, heard that scream and in a sift move turns back and sees Pooja looking at him and screaming... and after seeing pooja standing there and looking at him he too screams...

Abhi: Ahhh...

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In the mean time...

Rajveer after having conversation with Abhimanyu move towards his room and were looking outside the window... his hands were crossed in front of his chest and he was remembering all those moments which he spent with Abhimanyu.. their friendship, their training in KMA, they meeting after 4 years once again in KMA, Abhimanyu coming to know about Navin's death truth... He blaming Rajveer .. Their sword fight... Abhimanyu s behavior during appraisals, his challenge, Abhimanyu sending him to solitary confinement... his arrest, Abhimanyu's witness during his court martial trial... and then his words in NAina's house... all those memories were flowing in front of his eyes... Naina who has seen him going towards his room after having conversation with Abhimanyu, knew that he was disturbed... She knew that for Rajveer friendship means a lot... And he truly considered Abhimanyu his friend... Rajveer who can do anything for his friends, got ditched by his friend only.. She knows that how much he is disturbed, broken and in pain... She knows that he needs her and she needs to be his strength.. So she moves to her room...

Rajveer was standing looking outside the window, when he heard the knock on the mirror... He knows that who was knocking, as only Naina knows about that secret door as of now, and also because somewhere he knew that Naina will come to him, as she may understand that he needs her... But he didn't want her to think that he regrets loosing Abhimanyu... Surely he regrets but it was not in his hand and he knew that if Naina will come to know about this then somewhere she will hold herself responsible for this, which he doesn't want... So after calming himself he goes and turns the mirror and as expected Naina was standing other side of the mirror, looking anxiously and worriedly at him..

Rajveer: Kya baat hai Capt, aaj aap khud iss nachiz se milne aayi hai... aaj to mera din ban gaya... waise yeh chamatkar kaise ho gaya? Aapko mujhpar taras aa gaya yah phir aapko meri itni yaad a rahi thi ki aap apne aap ko rok nahi payi? He says while smiling...Naina was looking at him but didn't say anything.. She just catch his hand in her and come inside his room... She vaguely looks at his room and then sits on the couch and made him sit too beside her...Then looking into his eyes she says..

Naina: aapko pata hai aapko mere saamne pretend karne ki zaroorat nahi hai... Manti hu ki ek waqt tha jab main aapki unsaid feelings ko, aaki aankhon me chipe aapke emotions ko samjh nahi pati thi, jiske liye main aaj bji pachtathi hu... par ab main aapko itna to janti hu ki aapke dard ko, aapki feelings ko samjh saku... aap mere saath apna dard baat sakte hai... trust me main aapko galat nahi samjhongi...

Rajveer then sighs and after closing his eyes keeps his head on the back of the sofa... his right hand was still in Naina's hand... He tightens his hold on her hand...He doesn't says anything for few minutes... and Naina sits there silently waiting patiently for him to open up... After few minutes he says without opening his eyes...

Rajveer: janta hu Naina ki main apna dard tumhare saath baant sakta hu... Aur yakeen mano main apna sab kuch tumahre saath batna chatha hu... najane kab se maine issi din ka to intzaar kiya hai, jab main main apni zindagi, apni khushiyan tumhare saath baant saku... aur sabse jarori apna dard... he says the last line while looking into her eyes... Kyunki humesha hai main apne dard se khud ladta aaya hu, koi tha hi nahi jise apna dard baat saku.. ek Naveen tha, par wo bhi... he then closes his eyes and a tear escape from his eyes... Naina removes his tear from her thumb, which makes rajveer to open his eyes and looks into her eyes...

Rajveer: par ab tum ho mere pass... Naina smiles a little after hearing this... Rajveer then lay down on the sofa nd keep his head on her lap... Her left hand his still in his hand which he is holding with both his hand... Naina starts ruffling his hair with his left hand...

Rajveer: janti ho Naina main bachpan se hi akela raha hu... 12 saal ka tha, jab mere maa papa ek accident me... He stops in the mid and Naina can feel his pain... mere papa ek bahut bade businessman the, aur hum family background se bhi bahut strong the, to wo jaate jaate mere liye itna chod gaye ki meri zaroorte aasani se puri ho sake... Aur mujhe kabhi kisi chiz ki koi kami na ho... mere pass sab kuch tha... par kya paisa aapko sabkuch de sakta hai... unn paiso ne meri saari zaroorate puri ki, mujhe kisi chiz ki kami nahi rehne di, sivaye pyaar ki, apne pan ki, ek family ki... main life me jis chiz se sabse jayda garib raha hu to wo hai rishte, apno ka pyaar, unka saath... akele bada hua, 12 saal ki umar me khud ko sambhalna sikha... rishto ki kami thi isliye unki value bhi pata thi... islye jab Naveen aur chauhan mila aur mera dost bana to aisa laga ki meri saari kami puri ho gayi... manta hu ke Chauhan aur main utne ache dost nahi the, jitney main aur Naveen.. par uska reason sirf yahi tha ki meri aur Naveen ki soch bahut had take k jaisi thi... hum ek dusre to bahut ache se samjahte the... hum ek dusre ke supporter the to ek dusre ke competitor bhi... par wo competition kabhi bhi humare bich me nahi aaya.. NAveen mera sab kuch tha... par phir wo bhi chala gaya... aur main phir se akela reh gaya... manta hu ki Abhimanyu se door main khud hua tha, par uski wajah mera guilt thi, aur neveen ko innocent prove karne ki meri koshis ne kabhi kuch aur sochne ka time hi nahi diya... par iska matlab yeh nahi ki main Abhi ko bhul gaya tha... Naveen ke meri life me hone se Abhimanyu aur meri dosti me maine koi fark nahi aane diya.. Mere liye Abhimanyu bhi mera utna hi acha dost tha jitna Naveen... but alag interest hone ki wajah se hum jayda time saath me nahi bita paate the... Bas yehi ek reason tha... Par phir bhi maine use apna dost hi mana hai.. apna acha dost... uske saath ek emotional bonding hai meri... main humesha akela raha hu NAina. Isliye jab NAveen aur ABhi mujhe mile to unse main kafi had tak attach ho gaya tha... aur yahi ek reason hai ki aaj bhi main chah kar bhi uss bonding ko, uss emotional feeling ko apne se door nahi kar pa raha... I know ki Abhi mere bare me kya sochta hai, par maine to use apna dost hi maana hai... main janta hu kit um sab ki nazron me yeh galat hai... mera abhi ko aaj bhi dost mana galat hai par main kya karu NAina... mere liye assan nahi hai.. aasan nahi hai yeh accept kar pana ki mera hi dost mujhse had se zayada nafrat karta hai, assan nahi hai mere liye.. dard hota hai NAina mujhe, takleef hoti hai... mere saath hi aisa kyu.. kya main itna bura hu ki jise bhi apna manta hu wo sab mujhe chod ke chale jaate hai... kya main kisi ke pyaar ke layak nahi??

Tear starts coming out from his eyes... tears of pain, of loneliness, of longing for ur closed one... the same tears were flowing from Naina's eyes too, who was able to feel Rajveer's pain...

Naina while removing his tear : kisne kaha ki aap bure hai? Ya aap pyaar ke layak nahi... aapke maa baba ke saath jo hua woe k hadsa tha... usme aapki koi galti nahi thi... wo islye nahi hua ki aap pyaar desrve nahi karte... aap pyaar desrve karte hai tabhi to bhaiya aapse mile... wo aapse itna pyaar karte the ki apni life bhi unhone aapko saup di thi...Bhaiya ke saath jo hua usme bhi aapki koi galti nahi thi... wo to humare desh ke gadaron ke jaal me fans gaye the... unki jagah koi bhi ho sakta tha... isme aapne kuch nahi kiya... aur ab dekhiye aapke cadets, Huda, Alekh, Pooja, Ali, yudi sab aapko litna pyaar karte hai... Dr. Shalini wo aapko kitna pyaar karti hai... wo kehti hai ki aap unke ek laute true friend ho... Suriji wo aapko apne bte ki tarah maante hai.. Brig. Janti hu ki wo dekhate nahi par wo bhi aapko apna beta maante hai, aap pe bahut proud feel karte hai... mere maa babaunko dekhiye, aap me unhe unka beta wapis mil gaya... aapko wo itna pyaar karne kage hai ki wo to mujhe hi bhul gaye... jab dekho ab Rajveer Rajveer karte rehte hai... She says this line in a childish way, which brings out a smile on Rajveer's face... Naina too smiles a little after seeing him smiling.,. Well dats what she wanted... make him smile...

Naina: sab aapko bahut pyaar karete hai Rajveer... Kyunki aap pyaar desrve karte hai aur rahi baat Abhimanyu ki to, aisa jaroori to nahi na ki jise hum pyaar kare wo bhi humse utna hi pyaar kare... aapne khud kaha ki aapne Abhimanyu ko apna dost mana tha aur aaj bhi maante hai, aur iske liye aapko guilty feel karne ki jaroorat nahi hai balki proud feel karne ki jaroorat hai, ki jis insaan ne kabhi ek dost hone ka farz nahi nibhaya, jisne aapke saath itna sab kuch kiya aap aaj bhi uske liye sochte ho, feel karte ho... isme koi galat baat nahi hai Rajveer kyunki aapne apni dosti humeha nibhai hai... aapka abhimanyu ke liye wo emotionally feel karna sabit karta hai ki aap kitne ache dost hai, kitne ache insaan aur aapko isee badlane ki koi zaroorat nahi.. aur hum me se koi aapko galat nahi samjhega... na main na baki sab... kyunki main janti hu ki bhale hi aap Abhimanyu ko aaj bhi apna dost mante hai, apr aap saath humnesha sahi ka dete hai.,... yaad hai aapko ek baar pehle bhi Abhimanyu ko sahi raste pe lane liye aap unke against gaye the... humse wo revolt karwaya tha... aaj bhi aap wahi samjh le jiye.. ek baar phir aapjke dost ko sahi raste pe lane ki zaroorat hai, kyunki aapke bina wo bhatak jata hai... aur use sahi raaste pe lakar aap apni dosti ka farznaibhayege... wo chahe jo bhi kare ji bhi kahe use aapko effect nahi hona chaiye balki ek ache soldier ki tarah apna farz nibhana chaiye... She says all these lovingly, while caressing his hair and looking into his eyes... Her words seems like to create a magic on him.. they act like a soothing balm on his burns... that sooth him, make him calm... He realizes that it doesn't matter that whether Abhimanyu considered him his friend or not, but he considered him his friend which is a fact, and which he doesn't need to change.. and as for now he need to support the right, support the truth and as abhimanyu is on wrong side, so he will do anything to make him come on right side... even if he need to go against him, he will do that too.. Now Rajveer is relaxed after sharing his pain, his suffering with naina...Therefore to lighten the mood he says..

Rajveer: waise tumne sabke bare me bol diya ki sab mujhse pyaar karte hai, yaha tak ki BC ke bare main bhi par apne bare me nahi bataya.. what about you?? Don't YOU LOVE me?

He says teasingly... Naina realizes that now he is fine, so she too relaxes..

Naina while smilingly: har baat keh kar nahi samjhai jaati, yeh maine aap hi se sikha hai... I thought you can read my eyes pretty well... aakhir aaj tak yahi to karte aaye hai... to aaj bhi khud pad li jiye ki meri aankhen aapse kya kehna kehna cha rahi hai..

Rajveer smiles and then with his left hand caress her cheek and says: Tumhari aankhe mujhse keh rahi hai ki...

Naina whispers: ki..

Rajveer while bringing Naina's face down slowly with every line: kit um mujhse...

Naina: main aapse...

Rajveer: bahut..

Naina: bahut...

Rajveer: bahut jayada...

Now they are very close to each other... their lips just an inch away from each other... both able to feel each other's breath... Their proximity makes Naina shivers.. she unable to say any word so she just humms..

Naina: hmm

Rajveer whispers while looking into her eyes..: bahut jayada pyaar karti ho...

They both smiles... Rajveer was about to claim her lips and Naina closes her eyes after guessing his intentions as a gesture to show her willingness... Rajveer just placed his lips on her when they suddenly hear one scream...

"AHhh"

Naina opens her eyes and both look at each other unable to understand what happened, when they again hear...

" Ahhh"

Both say together...

Naina/Rajveer: Pooja/Chauhan...

Rajveer hurriedly gets up and Naina too.. Both rush outside to see everyone moving towards the assembly hall and they thet hear continuous screaming of many girls that too together...

" Ahhh"." Ahhh", "Ahhh"

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Everyone reached to the assembly hall... Girls were screaming while looking at Abhimanyu standing there only in his boxers... While Abhimanyu after seeing everyone there gets embarrassed...

Rajveer Naina too reaches there and when they sees Abhimanyu, they try to hold their laughter,,... Rajveer caught Huda, Yudi, Alekh winking at each other and Ali looking guilty while Pooja looking as if she in any moment burst out laughingly... So he then realizes that it was their plan and closes his eyes and with a swt smile just shake his head... Suddenly everyone hears a booming voice...

"Yeh kya ho raha hai yaha..."

Everyone turns and find Brig in a very angry mood...Everyone become silent..

Brig: maine pucha kya ho raha hai yaha... aur sab chila kyu rahe the... He then comes in front and finds Abhimanyu there in that condition...

Brig: Major Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan yeh kya badtamizi hai... aap yaha iss compromising condition me klya rahe hai... let me remind you agar aap bhul gaye hai ki yeh koi aam college nahi hai, yeh KMA hai, jaha iss tarh ki harkate bilkul bardasht nahi ki jati.. Aur ek faculty member se to bilkul bhi nahi,,, Abhimanyu wo was already embarrassed gets more embarrassed... but then he tries to justify himself..

Abhi: I m reaaly sorry sir.. but isme humari koi galti nahi hai... humare saath bhaut hi bura mazak kiya gaya hai... he then explains everything what happened with him..

Beig gets angry after hearing this: kisne kiya yeh sab... Ek faculty member ke saath aisa mazak kisne kiya..

Nobody says anything..

Abhi: Sir hume pata hai ki yeh sab kisne kiya hai..

Brig: to bato major kisne kiya hai yeh..

Abhi: sir yeh sab Capt Huda aur unke dosto ne kiya hai...

Huda: ohh nahi sirji.. Humne aisa kuch nahi kiya hai... Abhimanyu sir hum par bewajah shaq kar rahe hai...

Abhi: don't pretend to be innocent Huda... Hum aur tum dono ache se jaante hai ki yeh sab tumne hi kiya hai... so stop pretending and accept your fault.. He says somewhat strictly..

Alekh: jab galti ki hi nahi hai to accept kya karna..

Abhi: aap bhi Alekh.. Aap bhi humare saath aisa kar sakte hai humne socha nahi tha..

Alekh: socha to apun ne bhi bahut kuch nahi tha aapke bare me sir..he says sarcastically..

Brig: enough.. enough of your blame game...

Rajveer: sir if ypu don't mind I want to say something..

Brig: boliye Major ab aap bhi boliye kya kehna hai aapko..

Rajveer: sir I think we should go inside your office and then discuss this matter... as it's not looking good that faculty members are fighting with each other and that too in front of the cadets... Cadets pe iska acha sar nahi hoga..

Brig: you are right Major... All the faculty members I want you to report me into my office.. And Major

Now all of you dismiss... he then leaves from there angrily... All cadets too move from there one by one...

Now only our 6 cadets, Abhi, Rajveer, Shalini and Suriji are there.. Abhi then see Huda in anger while Huda smirks... Abhi leaves from there...

Suriji: oyy sirji yeh kya ho gaya... oyy khotteyo agar yeh sharat tum sab ne ki hai na to aaj tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta..

Alekh: kaye ko tension lete ho Suriji, jab apun ne kuch kiya hi nahi to darna kaye ko...

Rajveer: Yes Capt Alekh aap sab ne to kuch nahi kiya... He says sarcastically and looks at all of them.. 5 of them bends their head as they know that Rajveer came to know that they did this.. Although they feel right for doing that but still after getting caught by their teacher who is their role model, they are feeling little guilty in meeting his eyes..

While Shalini tries to hide her smile, as she also came to know that they only did this...

Rajveer: ab chaliye sab Brig ne hum sab ko bulaya hai...

And they all leave from there...

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Brig. Office:

Rajveer, Naina, Abhimanyu, Shaini, Suriji and rest 5 of them were standing in front of Bc's table while Bc was looking at them angrily..

BC: to ab koi mujhe yeh batayega ki yeh sab kya hua... aur kisne kiya... but let me tell you one thing first ki jisne bhi yeh kiya hai, aur jiski bhi galti hai use main asani se maaf nahi karne wala kyunki KMA me anusashanhinta mujhe katai manjoor nahi,..,

Abhi: sir hum aapko hi pehle bata chuke hai jo kuch bhi humare saath hua.. and I seriously think ke aapko unhe severly punish karna chaiye..

Rajveer cuts him off: ek minute.. Major Chauhan aap bina kisi sabot ke army ke reputed officers par ilzam laga rahe hai.. sirf aapke keh dene se ya aapke shaq ke binah par yeh sabit nahi jo jata ki yeh sab Capt Huda aur unke dosto ne kiya hai...

Abhi: Hum shaq ke binah par nahi keh rahe hume pura yekeen hai..

Rajveer: To hume bhi yekeen dilayi... Kya aap yeh baat sabit kar sakte hai...

Abhi: what do you mean sabit kar sakte hai humne kaha nay eh sab inhone hi kiya hai matlab inhone hi kiya hai..

Huda: sirji yeh jhoot bol rahe hai... kyunki yeh jab inke saath hua to main to waha tha bhi nahi.. Main to Suriji ke saath tha mess main unki help kar raha tha... aap hi bataiye Suriji...

Suriji stammers: haa... tha to yeh mere saath hi... sirji...

Alekh: aura pun log bhi waha nahi the sirji... Apun, charo activity rrom me the cadtes ke saath.. aap chaho to cadtes se puch sakte ho...

Brig then calls an orderly and asks him to as the cadtes whether Alekh and others were with them or not...

Rajveer: and Capt. Allhuwalia was with me sir... along with Dr. Shalini... we were discussing about cadets training which is going to start from tomorrow...Right Dr. Shalini,,

Shalini was first surprised to hear this as she was not with them but she says: yes sir I was with Naina in Major Rathors's office...

Meanwhile orderly comes and informs them that cadets said that their faculty member were with them in the activity room..

Huda: dekha sirji... iss jaat ne to pehle hi kaha tha ki humne yeh sab nahi kiya... aur waise bhi sirji pata nahi Major Abhimanyu ke saath yeh sab huia bhi hai yaw o aise hi..

Abhi: aap kehna kya chathe hai Capt Huda ki hume shok hai aise bina kapdo ke academy me ghumne ka...

Huda: ab aapke past record se to yehi lagta hai,... jab hum yah ape cadets the tab bhi to aap aise hi bina kapdo ke sirf towel me pure academy me ghume the... Kyu Yudie..

Yudi: yup bro... I mean Huda is right sir.. sir pehle bhi aisa kar chuke hai..

Abhi: yeh sab jhoot hai sir.. hum pehle aisa kar chuke hai wo isliye kyunki Rajveer ne...

He tehn stops realizing that he was talking about Raj ne hume, while Rajveer looks at him..

Abhi: humara matlab hai ki hum jhoot nahi bol rahe sir.. Aap chahe to humara room check karwa sakte hai... waha par abhi bhi eggs, tomamtoes pade hue hai.. aur bathroom me pani nahi aa raha...

Bri then asks orderly to check his room...After few minutes orderly comes and informs Brig that Major Abhimanyu's room is neat and clean.. There is no sign of aag, tomatoes and flour.. and also water is coming in the washroom...

Brig: to ab aap kya kehna chahenge Major... Apni safai me kehne ke liye kuch hai aapke pass..

Abhi was shocked to hear that: sir humara yakeen kijiye... humsach keh rahe hai..

Brig: bas Major... bahit ho gaya... aap apni training ke time pe hi aisi harkate karte aaye hai, mujhe ache se pata hai,... but let me remind you Major ki ab aap cadet nahi reh gaye blki ek teacher hai, aur army k eek reputed soldier... aura apse aise harkate aapko shibha nahi deti... aise harkato se aap cadtes ko kya sikhayenge... let me remind you Major ki yeh KMA hai, jaha par cadets ko discipline sikhaya jata hai... aap aise cadtes ko discipline sikhayege... Bina kapdo ke iss baar main aapko warning dekar chod raha hu aisa dubara nahi hona chaiye... Warna agli baar aapko kadi punishment milegi...and next time when I see you I want you to be properly dressed to stand in front of your senior not like some college going spoilt guy.. Do you understand..

ABhi: yes sir...

Brig: now all of you dismiss...

All salutes him and goes from there... Abhi moves from there while giving Huda a glare... Suriji too leaves from there...

Rajveer: I want all of you to come to my office now...they then move towards Rajveer's office...

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All are there in Rajveer's office...

Shalini: seriously guys tumhe yeh sab karte bhue bilkul bhi dar nahi laga... I mean agar tum sab pakde jaate to...

Huda: pakde to tab jaate na madam ji jab hum koi sabot chodte... humne plan hi kuch aise kiya tha...pehle humne saare cadets ko activity room me ikatha kiya movie ke bahane...iske do reason the ek ki hum nahi chathe the kin corridor me uss waqt koi bhi ho, warna wo jhabreela kabhi apne room se bahar nahi aata... aur dusra ...

Rajveer: apne liye alibi rakhne ka..

Huda: wah sirji aap to bade intelligent ho... Rajveer glares at him and he shuts down..

Alekh: Suriji ne bich me aakar apun ke plan ko fasa jarror diya tha, par apun ne Huda se kehkar unhe bhi manage karwa diya.. usme jayada mehnat nahi karni padi bas sir ka naam lena tha... Apun ne aisa isliye kiya kyunki apun ko pata tha ki agara unse pucha jayega ki unhone aisa koi order diya tha ya nahi to wo na nahi karenge...

Shalini: wah kya confident hai... yani kit um sabne apne alibi arrange kar rakhe the... but what about Naina uske alibi ka kya...

Pooja: ohh apni Zara ko uske veer ke hote hue kisi aur ki kya zaroorat.. hume pata tha ki shahruk she then bits her lips,... Ahh mera matlab hai ki sir Naina ko kuch nahi hone demge..

Alekh: Apun ko pata tha ki Naina Sir ke saath hi hogi to uske liye apun ko koi tension nahi thi... Naina ke sir ke saath hone ke do fayde the... ek Naina ke was sabot tha ki wow aha nahi thi aur dusra wo sir ko busy rakhne me usne indirectly humari madad ki...

Rajveer and Naina after hearing that looks at each other... they both remember their meeting and their kiss miss... Naina blushes a little and moves her gaze while Rajveer bits his lip...

Yudi: aage ka main batata hu... Main wahi abhimanyu sir ke room ke side me tha.. jaise hi sir apne room se bahar aaye main room ke andar gaya... phir maine jaldi se wo buckets waha se uteri, plastic sheets collect ki aur uss shampoo ki bottle ko collect kiya,,,,...

Huda: abe oyy yudiee tu akela nahi tha samjha, qaidi bhi that ere saath...

Yudi: ohh yeah I forgot... Alekh was there with me too...

Ali: water supply sirf faculty quarters ki band ki gayi thi... kyunki hume pata tha ki Suriji mess me honge aur Brig sir apne office me...

Pooja: aur shahrukh apni zara ke saath busy hoga...

Alekh: jaise hi sir hall me aaye, apun unke room ko saaf karke bahar aa gaya... aur water ki supply ko start kar diya.. apun ne hi Punjaban ko message kiya tha ki wo hall me aaye aur bahar aakar sir ko dekh kar chike... Jise puri academy waha aa jaye.. aur khaas tor pe Bc..

Huda: humara kaam aur bhi aasan kar diya uss jhabrele ne.. jab punjaban ke saath saath wo bhi chikha...

Shalini: wow guys what a planning... tum sab ne itni soch samajh kar yeh sab kiya I m impressed... but tell me one thing ki by chance agar tum sab pakde jaate to..

Alekh: to kya to kuch bhi nahi hota..

Huda: kyunki apne Rajveer sir jo aa gaye hai... unke hote hume tensiuon lene ki kya jaroorat..

Everyone smiles after hearing this..

Rajveer: haa capt Huda.. matlab ki raita tum falao aur use saaf main karo...

Yudi: but sir humne to raita failaya hi nahi to aapko use ssaf kyu karna padega...

Rajveer slaps on his forehead...

Ali: yudi bhai sir sirf ek missal de rahe the..

Yudi: What misile bro?

Huda: abe oo meri angrazi ki dookan mislie nahi masal matlab ke example... samjaha gohnchu...

Yudi: heyy bro I m not a ghochu okk..

Rajveer: ok enough guys.. stop this.. dekho aaj job hi hua so hua... jaisa maine kaha tha ki jab tak tum sab apni galti ka koi proof nahi chodoge main tab tak tumahre khilaf koi action nahi loga... so be careful... aur yeh sab harkate chod kar ab thoda serious ho jao.. kal se cadets ki training start ho rahi hai... us par dhyan do... aur misiion se related job hi duties tum sab ko di gayi hai us par bhi... understood...

All: yes sir...

Rajveer: now dismiss guys...

Everyone leave from there... Naina was the last one. And was about to go...

Rajveer: Naina tum ruko.. mujhe tumse khuch baat karni hai... Pooja who was just ahead oh her heard that and gives a wink to her and leave from there...

Naina turns: ji kahiye...

Rajveer smiles while looking at her: close the door Capt..as what I m going to say is a very confidential thing which nobody else should listen...

Naina with a fast beating heart closes the door .. Rajveer moves his chair little back and turns it liitle sideways... Naina comes close to the table.. She is satnding on table's sidein such a way that Rajveer is just on her right side...

Naina: kahiye aapko kya confidential baat kehni hai...

Rajveer: Kuch khaas nahi socha jo kaam adhura reh gaya tha use pura kar lo..

Naina with a confusing face: Konsa kaam..

Rajveer takes her hand in his and pulls her towards him... which makes Nains to lend on his lap...Naina's hand land on his shoulder...She was shocked and seeing Rajveer with wide eyes..

Rajveer: wahi jo hum mere room main kar rahe the... jise aapke dosto ke so called plan ne bich me hi rok diya.. kuch yaad aaya aapko.. he says this while tucking herhair stand behind her ear... Naina realize that he was talking about their kiss which unfortunately got missed... she starts blushing and looks downward...

Naina: mujhe nahi pata aap kis bare me baat kar rahe hai..

Rajvver: acha.. chaliye koi baat nahi main aapko yaad dila deta hu... he then lifts her chin with his thumb and forefinger and then slowly place his lips on her... Niana cluthes his shoulder tightly... Rajveer with left hand catches his waist while his right hand moves on her neck... He ten starts moving his lips slowly... and seductively... Naina too strats responding and move her right hand in his hair and start caressing his hair... They both kiss each other passionately... After few minutes they broke the kiss... Nsina feeling shy just hugs him, while Rajveer too hugs her back smilingly...and both sit like that only in each other's arms...

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Precap: Naina-Abhimanyu face off...

KMa's silver jublie celebration...

Some new entries...

Their first challenge ...

Rains's romance...

Note: guys I wrote this update as fast as possible so I didn't get time to re read it... So there will be many mistakes... kindly ignore them...

Edited by saiaarti - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

i will read soon this ff .i like it's name and i have started watching lrl now and just fall in love with lrl.plz add me to your pm list and plz pm me


Thanks for giving my story your time... i will surely add you on my pm list...
and will wait for your review...

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Originally posted by: rkchandni

Hey Arti waiting for d update PlZz cont soon


Sorry to make you wait, but was busy...
but now i have updated..
so enjoy the update...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: falah5

happy that i found this FF


Glad to know that...
will wait for your reviews and comments..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias

Amazing update...raj n naina is finally together n very happy to be with each other ...so major chauan ne entry le li n no one is happy to see him...but raj is hurt by what his friend did to him


thank you for liking the update...
yes Raj and Naina finally like finally are together... it took soo many updates for me...;)
And now when they are together, so they will surely be happy only...
Chauhan ki entry finally ho gayi... how can someone be happy to see him after what he did with Rajveer...
Rajveer will surely be hurt as whether abhi considered him his friend or not, But Rajveer truly consider Abhimanyu his friend...

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i will reply back other comments in the evening as now i m feeling very sleepy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
cadets rooks amazing plan
superb update
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Story acchi hai.par please abhi ko posetitve karo.abhi ke har bura baryav ke koi chupa reason do.mujhe rajveer abhimanyu dostana cheye.

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