Ardi SS: If only cruel fate didn't hit... (part 2 up) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonatia

Finally a fanfic by sayu. Sorry for late but Its so interesting ! Can't wait for the update..update soon :-D

thank u dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oye I'm slapping myself now!!! Bta hai Maine jab inbox mein dekha ki new ardi as, won bhi sent by u, then aisa lava, thank god, sayu maatey he khol lia. I couldn't read it, said u before, too lazy to type and read in phone and android, mere life most comfy is my PC. Permanent much ho jaaye then I'll unrest each and every story!!!
This is so long tym...😆 pehele bta nhi sakti thi!! Well leave it... coming to the update, finally ardi ss by sayu matey! Main nachu ta thai tha!!😆 this was so interesting! Loved how u described draus birth nd tht vicious lakshagraha🤢👏 this was too good on your first try! Go on sautanji go on! U will see suddenly in one fine morning u improved so much just like i did out of the blue...😆 waiting for the update!!
Love,
Chutri keeji😉
Edited by aanvi98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Baba sru whe u r gonna unres at four threads of mine???😡😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanvi98

Baba sru whe u r gonna unres at four threads of mine???😡😆

Four? 😕
Three, I thought 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Four? 😕
Three, I thought 😆😆

Hey bhagwan...kya karu main iss ladki ka...🤢 jaldi kar dena!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanvi98

Hey bhagwan...kya karu main iss ladki ka...🤢 jaldi kar dena!

Only your ffs are left 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanvi98

Oye I'm slapping myself now!!! Bta hai Maine jab inbox mein dekha ki new ardi as, won bhi sent by u, then aisa lava, thank god, sayu maatey he khol lia. I couldn't read it, said u before, too lazy to type and read in phone and android, mere life most comfy is my PC. Permanent much ho jaaye then I'll unrest each and every story!!!

This is so long tym...😆pehele bta nhi sakti thi!! Well leave it... coming to the update, finally ardi ss by sayu matey! Main nachu ta thai tha!!😆this was so interesting! Loved how u described draus birth nd tht vicious lakshagraha🤢👏this was too good on your first try! Go on sautanji go on! U will see suddenly in one fine morning u improved so much just like i did out of the blue...😆waiting for the update!!
Love,
Chutri keeji😉

thanku darlu! Glad u liked my first try! 😳 hope I get ur blessings for my other parts also! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay I know this one updated after full 6 months...mujhe nah writer's block bohot hota hai... but now with all your blessings and some tauntings *wink* *ROFL* I m finally back with this! So enjoy guys...

Part 2

"This is urgent! I want to meet rajmata kunti now!" A guard demanded.

The guard at the door hurriedly went inside and informed rajamata about this urgency. Without wasting the time she allowed the guard to come inside.

"So what brings you here at this hour, sumanth?" Enquired rajamata kunti.

"This was very important rajamata that can even cost all six of your lives." The secret agent said.

This made rajamata kunti scared. What must that be, she thought. May be related to duryodhan and gandhar raj shakuni..who else? Those are the only ones who would want to take her and her five sons lives! Those are the only ones who would stoop to such a low level!

"Okay so this time one more instigation again us! Doesn't it obvious sumanth?" Kunti said.

"Yes you are right! This time the target of substance is lakhshagrah rajmata!" The agent provided.

"Seriously sumanth you very well know this is not very new to us! Only for tatashree I m tolerating this behaviour of theirs otherwise it wouldn't be good for them!" Kunti said.


She was fuming in anger for all the deeds shakuni and his nephews did from the time when she and her sons set their foot in hastinapur.

"Anyways thank you so much! You always proved to be loyal to us and helped in our low times! Hope you will not disappoint me in future too! Now you may go!" Kunti thanked him.

The agent bowed to her and left the chambers.

"As soon as the dawn will fall upon I have to alert all of them!" She thought.

...

"1, 2, 3, 4,...,48!!!!" Bheem was doing some important work. Suddenly he screamed nakul's name.

"What happened bhrata bheem? Why are screaming my name?" Nakul said while putting fingers in his ears which were on the verge of blasting at any second by the looks of it.

"My laddos!!! Where are they?"
"What??" Asked nakul trying to act innocent and very well knowing what bheem was talking about intially.

"My laddoos! There were 50 of them but now only 48 are there! Where the two went then?" Bheem said looking very sad.

"Bhrata I don't know...and 48 laddoos are there right?! Why to worry about those 2 laddoos!?" Nakul said controlling his laugh.

"Nakul you know what! You are a very bad actor!" Came a voice from the background which made both nakul and bheem look into the direction.

"Bhrata Arjun what are you saying? I cannot unterstand." Nakul tried to hide.

"Seriously nakul" Arjun said giving a evil smile to nakul which earned nakul a glare from bheem.

Seeing it nakul gulped his fear which was there in his throat. He knew he would never win from these duo brothers. So finally giving in nakul said,

"Here they are..."

Bheem excitedly started to search in the direction. "Where?" He asked.

"Here bharta!" Nakul said pointing his stomach and suddenly both arjun and nakul gave in fits of laughters.

"NAKKKUULLL!!! I will not leave you!!" Saying this he started to chase nakul who was now running for his dear life.

This scene was been withnessed by kunti who was with yudishtir enjoying these happy moments with hoping and praying that this unity among these boys would never get lose!

"Shall we enter in now, Mata?" Asked yudhi which after got a nod from kunti.

"What is happening sons?" Kunti asked coming to the scene along with rajkumar yudhistir.

"Nothing much mata just this nakul always trying to pull bhrata bheem's legs." Arjun said.

"Ohh you two nah will never change!" Kunti said.

"Leave that because I want you all to know one important thing" kunti said emphazing on the part with seriousness.

"What is it Mata?" Sahdev enquired.

"Duryodhan and..." Kunti started but was cut off in the middle by aggressive bheem.

"What did that stupid greedy did now? Tell me I will now itself kick him to the death!" Bheem said gritting his teeth.



"Control bheem! Told you always not to use such language for your cousions." Yudhistir said trying to control the situation.

"But jeshth! You too know these people are not worthy of our love and respect." Bheem said.

"Yudhi I know you don't like this but son this time I totally agree with bheem because this time they have crossed all limits!" Kunti said siding with bheem.

"Crossing the limits in the sense??" Asked confused nakul.

"According to my sources ghandhar raj and co have build a palace which in said by everyone is the most beautiful piece of art! But from inside it is itself a death if trapped in." Kunti told fear evident on her face.

"A lakhshagrah?!!!" Bheem asked. Kunti nodded.

"And that palace is said they will gift us and will convince us to visit it! There the creater of the palace purochan would put the fire to the lakhshagrah so that within seconds we all would turn into ashes." Kunti completed.

"Don't worry mata! We will not fall into their trap again and accept their invitation!" Been said proudly.

"No bhrata bheem! We will accept it!" Said arjun startling all others.

"What are you saying arjun? Why we would?" Asked yudhistir.

"You will know it! For now the concern is only trying to act that we have accepted it!" Arjun concluded the discussion.

...

"I get Arjun you have turned into a very intelligent person! I like it!" Krishna said.

"Arya? Who is this Arjun? Don't tell me your new admirer!" Asked satyabhama irritatedly.

"Maybe something like that..." Krishna said which made bhama's irritation reach its peak.

"But tell you I will not share you with more again!" She clarified.
"Maybe your wish may not be granted bhama..." Krishna thought smiling to himself.

"Now why are you smiling?" Bhama asked suspiciously.

"Because my bhama looks cute when she gets irritated." Krishna smiled making bhama blush at his comment.

TBC...

Edited by -Saishree- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sautanji updated!!🥳 at last babe! I think ur on full mood to write😆
The update was so good beta! Full of Pandavs! Loved it! And bheem-nakul nok jhoks😆 they are so cute!! Kabhi hamare sahadev ko bhi add karlo!😳
And lakshagraha happening!! Panchu kahan hai hamari!! And at last krishna bhama...😳 they r so cute!!
Love,
Anu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
That was such a nice update! Bheem and Nakul are such cuties!

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