Ardi SS: If only cruel fate didn't hit... (part 2 up)

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<font size="4">DISCLAIMER</font><font size="4">: ALL THE CHARACTERS ARE FROM THE GREATEST INDIAN EPICMAHABHARTAAND I RESPECT THEM ALL AND DOESN'T HAVE ANY INTENTION TO HURT ANYONE'S FEELINGS.</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">hi everyone,</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">first and foremost I am writing something for the first time so I am very very nervous. But this idea just came into my mind someday and thought to give it a check. This story is completely fictional and is set in the Dwapar yug. As the Great epic says that Arjun and draupadi sacrificed their love for the betterment of society and accepted their fate whole-heartedly of sharing. But anytime we thought that if this sharing didn't have had happened how their life would be...and this exact thing I will protray in my story. here the central characters will be Arjun and Draupadi.</font>



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To all my fellow Ardians, as Two years of SwayamvarSaptah have completed this is a little gift for my side...hope u'll like it😳
Part 1
Kampilya...
Drupad was very agitated after having tasted defeat at the hands of his enemy Dron. he couldn't stand by the fact that his own land Panchal was been divided by that mere bhikshuk dron and to top of it he himself like a beggar was given the half part of it. this thought made him more upset and agitated. in this anger he even scolded shikhandini, his daughter, whom he was always proud of and had given her every priority of being a worrier princess. but today for the first time he was upset with her and had taken every right of her from being called his daughter. now his sole intention was to make taste dron his own medicine which he had given him already. but all this the one thing that attracted was the boy who defeated him with one hand had really amazed and even impressed him at the same time. this had aroused a feeling in him to get that very same talented and humble prince his son-in-law and this was the sole dream of his life now.
To make these two things fulfill he fixed a meeting with the rishis yajn and upayajn. from the meeting it was confirmed that the two rishis would do a sacrifice for the occassion and from this sacrificial fire drupad would urge a son who would kill dron and a daughter who would be the most of most beautiful princess ever present on the earth who would marry the handsome prince Arjun and fulfill the dream of drupad of having Arjun as his son-in-law. an auspicious day was seleted for the occasion.

Hastinapur...
On the other hand, in Hastinapur mamashree Shakuni and his two nephews Duryodhan and Dusshasan, his two dear near partners-in-crime were instigating against the Pandavas. They were planning to have a Lakhshagrah for their cousins as a token of gift. After that as they had decided that the purochan would put the fire to the entire palace and Kauravas would get rid of the Pandavas.
"par aapko kya lagta hai mamashree, kya Pandav hamara yeh prastav swikar karenge?" a doubt was put forth by Duryodhan.
All this time Shakuni's face reflected his happiness but as aoon as his dear bhanja, his nephew raised his question that cruel smile that happiness changed into a serious one.
But he managed to compose himself after his mind decided to play a new devicious plan and returning back his cruel smile back to his face in a assuring tone he said,"tum chintaa mat karo mere bacchhe! yeh tumara mama hai na sab kuch theek kar dega! tum toh bas dekte jao mera kamaal! saying this the whole room reverberated with a loud laugh.
"par mein abhi bhi santusht nahi hu mamashree aur ARJUN ke hote hue toh kada bhi nhi!" Duryodhan stated his real fear. This time hearing this even Shakuni thought to give a second chance to devise his plan.

Will Shakuni and co be successful in their plan or Duryodhan's fear will come true...


Guys please share your views on this and do tell me if I should continue it or not...
Edited by -Saishree- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start Sayu!👏👏I like the concept very much, so no polyandry in this tale, wow!❤️
The first part was lovely and well written.⭐️ Please continue soon..😛😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arre wah! 😳 ❤️
So finally an ArDi story by Sayu!! 🥳
it was really very good!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oye u should definitely continue it!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept! Can't wait to see your version of ArDi unfurl!
And, sorry for not replying before...Exams+Net kharab!
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Originally posted by: ramya06

Amazing start Sayu!👏👏I like the concept very much, so no polyandry in this tale, wow!❤️
The first part was lovely and well written.⭐️ Please continue soon..😛😉

thank you so much dear😳
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Originally posted by: Mahiima16

Arre wah! 😳 ❤️
So finally an ArDi story by Sayu!! 🥳
it was really very good!

thanks mahi😳
and yeah!! finally something by me!!!😆
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Nice concept! Can't wait to see your version of ArDi unfurl!
And, sorry for not replying before...Exams+Net kharab!

thanks proteeti😳
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