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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ColorDreams

I am stuck at a point of my AsYa FF's track can anyone help me out?

So the track is like, there is a party going on in the house the main lead share some teasing, taunting and few romantic sequences which is a side matter, but suddenly Zoya was passing through space and as in there was dim light only candles lanterns and lamps were the source of light so the chandelier fell almost on her but Asad saved her advertly. this was done by a random person who is band master and his family is hostage by the villian the person who want to kill Zoya, i.e. Rashid. But now Zoya has saved so Rashid wants to kill the band master's family, but the bandmaster narrated an idea secretly on the phone to Rashid so he can save his family, and Rashid can destroy AsYa.


Now what can we do that with which Asad can announce his marriage with Zoya and Band master and his family cannot harm, after all they are hostage by Rashid in an empty construction building.



I know it is a birbal ki khichdi😆 but i guess someone can help me. If possible, then please do me this HUGE favour. I'll be overwhelmed




Regards

Can anyone help me?
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Posted: 7 years ago


okay! so zoya and asad are already in love right?..

You see.. its not normal and okay with right and common people to kill someone.. After the attempt to kill zoya by chandelier the band master gets scared more than anything. His inner soul wasn't feeling any right but he has to save his family aswell.. U can also show that band master's hand started shaking while attempting to drop the chandelier..

So, he realized that he just can't do it and his mind starts to send him in depressions and all.. He even gets convinced that he is good for nothing.. he can't attempt to kill zoya neither he can save his family like so so he should commit suicide or something but then Asad passing by caught him from attempting so and crying and shaky, the band master gets more scared and tells him all of it.

Asad becomes furious but then he had his own ways and ideas of certain things.. Band master tells him that Rashid will kill his family and then Asad helps him and plan.. He also asks band master to call rashid and tell him another plan to kill zoya which was actually asad's plan..

They twist events so that Rashid get involved and confused through out while at the back police saves band master's family..

Asad while saving zoya from the chandelier realizes how much he loves her and life is so short so why to waste? he wants to spend every moment with her.. he wants her to only belong to him and hence he decides to propose her but... When Police was still saving the family and they told asad they need more time and band master who was keeping eye at rashid informs asad that Rashid cannot stay engaged to party for more and will anytime call his goons around the old construction building for check, Asad askd band master to try and steal Rashid's phone..

Some misshape happens and Asad standing near mic sees that Rashid will caught the band master from stealing his phone, he gets nothing in his mind and simply picks up mic for an announcement to catch everyones attention and so as rashid's..
He has nothing in his mind after picking up mic what to say but then his eyes fell on zoya and thoughts ones again strikes him and he announces his marriage with zoya surprising her to core..

I hope this works for u😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
Perfect Idea 👏

But i did not get what did you want to say in this part

Asad while saving zoya from the chandelier realizes how much he loves her and life is so short so why to waste? he wants to spend every moment with her.. he wants her to only belong to him and hence he decides to propose her but... When Police was still saving the family and they told asad they need more time and band master who was keeping eye at rashid informs asad that Rashid cannot stay engaged to party for more and will anytime call his goons around the old construction building for check, Asad askd band master to try and steal Rashid's phone..

Some misshape happens and Asad standing near mic sees that Rashid will caught the band master from stealing his phone, he gets nothing in his mind and simply picks up mic for an announcement to catch everyones attention and so as rashid's..
He has nothing in his mind after picking up mic what to say but then his eyes fell on zoya and thoughts ones again strikes him and he announces his marriage with zoya surprising her to core..

I hope this works for u😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ColorDreams

Perfect Idea 👏

But i did not get what did you want to say in this part

Asad while saving zoya from the chandelier realizes how much he loves her and life is so short so why to waste? he wants to spend every moment with her.. he wants her to only belong to him and hence he decides to propose her but... When Police was still saving the family and they told asad they need more time and band master who was keeping eye at rashid informs asad that Rashid cannot stay engaged to party for more and will anytime call his goons around the old construction building for check, Asad askd band master to try and steal Rashid's phone..

Some misshape happens and Asad standing near mic sees that Rashid will caught the band master from stealing his phone, he gets nothing in his mind and simply picks up mic for an announcement to catch everyones attention and so as rashid's..
He has nothing in his mind after picking up mic what to say but then his eyes fell on zoya and thoughts ones again strikes him and he announces his marriage with zoya surprising her to core..

I hope this works for u😊



when chandelier falls, asad much have dragged zoya to him or pushed her and then him on top of her.. Zoya obviously gets scared and hugs him, she is shaky and Asad feels like for a moment he was about to loose her.. He too gets scared a bit deep in heart that what could have happend?

Then while zoya calms down, he takes her to room and provides her with water and all.. H e stares at her and thoughts pops up to him that life is so short.. We never know what happens next? If i want her in my life, i want to marry her then why wait and plan for future? why not now? who has seen the future??

He decided he will propose her now after the party and wouldn't wait for so long..

Then after zoya gets stable and joins the party he wonders how did the chandelier actually fell?? So he goes to see it only to find the band master trying to commit suicide by jumping off from the roof top.. Asad pulls him back and shouts!!

Band master thoughts Asad has caught him that he is the man behind the attack and will give him to police which will be worse because then Rashid will kill his family and him by himself and will plan some other way to destroy Asya..

So band master tells everything to Asad while shaking and crying.. Asad become furious and was about to march out to get a hold on Rashid but band master starts to beg that his family is in danger.. please help!!!

Just on time, Rashid calls the band master and Asad takes the phone putting it on loud speaker.. Rashid threatens the band master of killing his family and while he say so band master join his hands in front of asad pleading silently for help..
Asad cuts the call... Tell band master to do as he say..
Then band master calls Rashid and begs him for another chance.. he tells him that he has a plan B. Rashid gives him an hour..

Then Asad calls a friend of his in police and tells him the situation and also the fact that family needs to be saved quietly and quickly..

Then band master and Asad joins the party with the intention to keep it going as it is with and eye on Rashid so he doesn't call anyone or go out of it..

Police was about to do the rad in the construction building and police friend of asad calls him that they are about to go on action..
Aasd tells the band master that they need to be clever and make sure that Rashid don't picks his call in case any of his men calls him or he calls for the check and gets suspicious..
So now band master has to steal Rashid's phone..

Asad was watching and Band master was doing his job shakily and was about to pull out the phone from Rashid's kurta pocket and Asad sees Rashid about to walk away from the pillar band master was hiding behind and picks up the mic since to catch everyones attention and also so that to listen him rashid stays on same place..

Now asad had no idea what to announce.. He says that he wants to make an important announcement.. Then his gaze fells on zoya.. she was smiling at him!!

Now u can add that he remembers how zoya is a bit filmy and wants things a bit that way and so he goes up to her.. proposes her and all

And if zoya's character is not filmy in ur ff, then u can show that asad looks at zoya, remembers what happend few hours ago and just feels like saying it, proposing her and so he does.. he announces his marriage with her while saying the philosophy of life that why wait?? just say it... grab the opportunity now.. May be there won't be any tomorrow.. No timing is perfect, u just have to make the moment perfect! and all...

i hope u get it now
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi I'm Akshara .I have a os concept for Rosid.I want a title for the story .The concept is Siddhanth a guy 30 yrs wake up sees his wife who is pregnant 5 months .He thinks how they met and about their life they led together .Then he notices it rains outside .He brings something hot for his wife to eat .They both enjoy the rain and eat it.At the end a happy family with a baby girl .I also want guidance to describe the rain enjoying scene of Rosid .If possible help me soon please .Thanks in advance .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AksharaRosid

Hi I'm Akshara .I have a os concept for Rosid.I want a title for the story .The concept is Siddhanth a guy 30 yrs wake up sees his wife who is pregnant 5 months .He thinks how they met and about their life they led together .Then he notices it rains outside .He brings something hot for his wife to eat .They both enjoy the rain and eat it.At the end a happy family with a baby girl .I also want guidance to describe the rain enjoying scene of Rosid .If possible help me soon please .Thanks in advance .


May be "Memories"?


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Posted: 7 years ago
It is
Like Never Before by chaverah but it is shifted blog

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Posted: 7 years ago
Can sombdy help me with arnav khushi ff..where in khushi is pregnant and she is told to give the baby to anjali..well khushi denies and arnav supports her...and anjali finally adopts a baby from an orphanage which is managed by khushi ... it is a beautiful ff
Can somebody help me with the name of this ff


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: janhavi58

Can sombdy help me with arnav khushi ff..where in khushi is pregnant and she is told to give the baby to anjali..well khushi denies and arnav supports her...and anjali finally adopts a baby from an orphanage which is managed by khushi ... it is a beautiful ff

Can somebody help me with the name of this ff


ask in IPKKND forum buddy, they can help you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I think it's becoming a father. Check the list of ff in IPK forum.or Google. You will get the link
Edited by AlwaysHisGirl - 7 years ago

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