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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ColorDreams

Hey I had a ArShi os in my mind but stuck somewhere, can anyone help me? Please


~Aditi...


Where are you stuck Aditi?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you so so much dear


Originally posted by: Cortana


Like this

Here is a nice pic of rosid

http://media-cache-ak1.pinimg.com/600x/05/14/5a/05145a5530d622330d11ab738ab4a4d3.jpg

You have to put it inbetween tags.

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^ I purposely put a ! in there so I could show you the code. You should not put a ! when you use the code yourself. When you take the exclamation mark out and press post you get this


A lovely picture of rosid 😊

Edited by ayeshakapoor - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
im just in a dilemma with one of my ongoing ffs...its not about the story ahead but about the way of presenting...It's basically a RoSid FF titled the beauty and the beast...it talks of the story of Siddhant , a gangster who falls in love with a young girl Roli. The story begins with Siddhant having a clash with Shruti, Roli's twin sister. He then meets Roli who is an absolute replica of Shruti n fights with her assuming as Shruti. Though Roli manages to soften Sid a bit, Shruti complains about Sid to the cops. Siddhant who doesn't have an idea of Shruti n Roli being twins kidnaps roli...but soon things get cleared and Sid apologizes to Roli. But here Sid starts to fall for Roli. Roli a nurse basically starts working in a hospital where a doctor falls for her. Sid gets admitted in the same hospital being injured by a gunshot. Having Roli close to him his feelings do develop...this is where I get a confusion...should I make Sid's character a bit smooth n patient pr should he be rough forcing his feelings on Roli...the way is quite vague for me...i feel the second one is better as he is a gangster...plz help me out with this in the pov of a normal reader
Edited by RoshniMenon88 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
What's sid's pov on roll? After the misunderstanding clears about her twin how he reacts? Is he soft with her, talks nicely or a bit sarcastic and enjoys riling her up? How he is as a person, too ruthless or somewhat normal to people? He should be jealous of the doc not understanding why he's jealous and maybe snap a bit at her, but hopefully no manhandling like grabbing her arm and shit. That's too old fashioned and downright disrespectful.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

What's sid's pov on roll? After the misunderstanding clears about her twin how he reacts? Is he soft with her, talks nicely or a bit sarcastic and enjoys riling her up? How he is as a person, too ruthless or somewhat normal to people? He should be jealous of the doc not understanding why he's jealous and maybe snap a bit at her, but hopefully no manhandling like grabbing her arm and shit. That's too old fashioned and downright disrespectful.

after knowing the truth, he apologizes to her as he has been too bad with her...basically he is rude, but there is something about Roli that gets him attracted to her...n in the scenario he has started to feel something for her, n even enjoys her presence...n I too stick to ur opinion as I too dnt want him to go to extremes in jealousy...he snaps at her initially but majority of his anger goes to the doc
Edited by RoshniMenon88 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
I am stuck at a point of my AsYa FF's track can anyone help me out?

So the track is like, there is a party going on in the house the main lead share some teasing, taunting and few romantic sequences which is a side matter, but suddenly Zoya was passing through space and as in there was dim light only candles lanterns and lamps were the source of light so the chandelier fell almost on her but Asad saved her advertly. this was done by a random person who is band master and his family is hostage by the villian the person who want to kill Zoya, i.e. Rashid. But now Zoya has saved so Rashid wants to kill the band master's family, but the bandmaster narrated an idea secretly on the phone to Rashid so he can save his family, and Rashid can destroy AsYa.


Now what can we do that with which Asad can announce his marriage with Zoya and Band master and his family cannot harm, after all they are hostage by Rashid in an empty construction building.



I know it is a birbal ki khichdi😆 but i guess someone can help me. If possible, then please do me this HUGE favour. I'll be overwhelmed




Regards
Edited by ColorDreams - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ColorDreams

I am stuck at a point of my AsYa FF's track can anyone help me out?

So the track is like, there is a party going on in the house the main lead share some teasing, taunting and few romantic sequences which is a side matter, but suddenly Zoya was passing through space and as in there was dim light only candles lanterns and lamps were the source of light so the chandelier fell almost on her but Asad saved her advertly. this was done by a random person who is band master and his family is hostage by the villian the person who want to kill Zoya, i.e. Rashid. But now Zoya has saved so Rashid wants to kill the band master's family, but the bandmaster narrated an idea secretly on the phone to Rashid so he can save his family, and Rashid can destroy AsYa.


Now what can we do that with which Asad can announce his marriage with Zoya and Band master and his family cannot harm, after all they are hostage by Rashid in an empty construction building.



I know it is a birbal ki khichdi😆 but i guess someone can help me. If possible, then please do me this HUGE favour. I'll be overwhelmed




Regards



Can anyone help me out in this context?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ColorDreams



Can anyone help me out in this context?



Are there any chances of band master telling Asad about the blackmail who seeks police's help to rescue band master's family and on the other hand they pretend to show that the plan is going fine until family gets rescued..once he receives the call that everyone is safe, he announces his wedding with zoya..


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi,
I am trying to find Arshi FF
It's starts with Arnav cancelling his interview with khushi who is called Katrina Gupta I believe.
And they get arranged married by khushi's massi who hate her mother and Arnav's uncle who loved khushi's mother.
Arnav hates his parents and also has step sibling.
They live in London or new your I am not sure.
They also find out khushi's mother was the love of Arnav's uncle and her photo which is same as khushi.
Also Lav and Aman are in love and arnav's best friends where khushi has Angie and NK who are Muslim and also co-owner of the company run by khushi.

I am trying to find this ff but I forgot the name and I can't find it now.

Please help me with link if you which one I am talking about

Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_12



Are there any chances of band master telling Asad about the blackmail who seeks police's help to rescue band master's family and on the other hand they pretend to show that the plan is going fine until family gets rescued..once he receives the call that everyone is safe, he announces his wedding with zoya..



Yes there are chances but why will asad announce his and zoya's marriage

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