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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Very nice update
Loved it
Shilpa shocked with armi behavior
He is behaving so normally n give her admission form
Omg its his mistake shil scold him wow
He deserve it huh ravan das sir wala
He he
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sammy4u

Waah..shilpa mei se achanak awaaj kahan se aagayi?

nice part
armaan toh kaafi time shocked rehne wala hai
btw shilpa ki qualification kya hai?/


Thanku
Yes armaan will be shocked...
U will soon know about shilpa qualification...
Thanks again..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sur1911

Very nice update

Loved it
Shilpa shocked with armi behavior
He is behaving so normally n give her admission form
Omg its his mistake shil scold him wow
He deserve it huh ravan das sir wala
He he
Update soon
thanks for pm


Thanku...
Yes shilpa is shocked with armaan changed behaviour...
Because its first time he is talking to her decently that's why she is shocked...
And because of his rude behaviour sholpa calls him ravan...
Thanks again...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: arsh4heaven

wow dear mast update tha

armaan ka silent behaviour shilpa ko choka raha he hehehehe
its funny shilpa ki thinking to call doc.
armaan ne shilpa ko collage me admission karana chaha
oops wrong move dude
shilpa to jese koi alag hi bandi lagi mujhe
har pal chup chup si aaj sherni ban gai
armaan bechara shocked hehehehe
wese shilpa ka ek ek lafz sahi tha
wow i totally loved this update dear
shilpa as jungli billi meauuu😉😆😆
plzzz continue soonish

Thanku for loving this...
Yes shilpa is shocked with his behaviour...
He is always on in his angry mood and suddenly changed to silent mood... So its quiet unexpected for her...
Armaan does not know any think about her about her life her age her profession ...anythink... He just married her forcefully because that time he thinks that she is having an affair with his sister hubby... But that's his just misunderstanding...
But he know it now so he wants to help shilpa... But that's his wrong move again...
So she is on in her jungle avtar...
Thanks again...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
diksha dear update kab milega
m want n updateee plzzz😭😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: arsh4heaven

diksha dear update kab milega

m want n updateee plzzz😭😭😭

I know u r wating for update...
Will update next part in this week...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Part - 9(a)



After encounter with Armaan in hall,
Shilpa was busy in chatting with her friends on i-phone... Shilpa was in her casual clothes ,, a lower and tank top , hair tied up loosely in a bun , some strands were hanging on forehead and sideway , not a sign of marriage not even her mangalsutra, d dot of vermillion on her partition was covered by her hair flicks , just the weeding huda(red and white bangles) is adurings her beautiful soft hands and she was looking a complete college girl * She opened d door of her room and got a shock of her life ... The Angry Bird - ASR was there . She was looking at him shocked with an open mouth * memories of last encounter with him refreshed in her mind * Why he is here? Ab essa kya hua jo ye mere door tak aa gaye? Shilpa tune apni taraf se kuch galat nahi kiya hei so iss baar is Akdoo ki kuch matt sunna.

Shilpa was busy in talking with herself and Armaan was looking at her confused * he was seeing her from past 10mins. * at the time of their marriage he didn't give her a proper look in his anger and aloofness &misunderstanding after marriage also he ignore her * he felt that he has met this girl, but where* he was looking at her without a blink lost in her soft look, her deep almond hazel captivating him, his mind said.. sach mei gudiya si hai , he was busy in his thoughts when he heard her voice.

Shilpa: kahiye kya kam hei? Ab kya prob ho gai aapko?

Armaan: sorry ??? He didn't get her words.

Shilpa: Kuch bolenge ya esse hi khde rahenge?

Armaan: (he don't know ki usko kya bolna chahiye because voh yaha usko uske blunt replies ka javab dene aaya tha, jis tarah she shilpa me usse baat ki yeah usko pasand nahi aayi... Kyuki aaj tak kissi ne bhi usse es tarike se baat nahi ki,because no body have the courage to face ASR and here his wife a mere girl showing him attitude... Who is she??? Why she is talking so rudely to him & only him??? Because he always notice the way she talks to the other family members specially his mom very sweetly... So why him only... Why she don't talk to him the same way she talks to his mom...

Armaan(thought): but why I want her to tall to me sweetly... (His mind) becaise she is ur wife... Haan..isiliye...

Armaan: tum mujhse theek tarah she baat nahi kr sakti...
Es se phele amrmaan much kahe...

Shilpa: excuse me... Kya matalab hai aap ka theek tarike se baat nahi krti aap se...
Aap baat krne k liye yaha the hi kab... Apni misunderstandings mein gun-point par aap ne mujse shaadi ki forcefully... Fer ghar laa kr chod diya aadhi rraat ko room se nikal diya, yeah bhi nahi socha koi dekh lega toh kya sochega, kaha jaogi... Kuch nahi or ab shaadi ko 10 months ho Jane k baad aap ko achanak se yaad aata hain ki ek wife hain,es liye clg mein admission dilwa kr Sab kuch theek krne ki koshish kr rahe ho,ager woh nahi hua toh yaha aa kr kya sabit krna chahte ho...


Armaan was again stunned with her blunt reply * nobody have this courage to reply him back and here this girl showing him attitude ... Who is she? Why she is talking so rudely ? He was too losing his patient and spoke in a lil harsh tone raising his finger at her.

Armaan: Dekho...( She cut his words.)

Shilpa... It's shilpa Singh for u Mr Armaan Singh Rathore. Formal hona hei to acche se hoeye. Aur haan apna ye money bank mujhe matt dikhaao , mujhe jo lena-dena hoga papa aur mumma se ker lungi...



Armaan was shocked and rooted at his place ..S h I L P A... He was looking at her with wide eyes * whole past refreshed at once ...

Armaan: oh toh mujse koi lena-dena nahi hain toh kyu ho yaha pr... Meine to tumhe us din hi shaadi se azaad kr diya that toh chalk jaati... Kyu ho yaha????

Shilpa : Haan chalk jaati.. Pr badkismati se .. mujhe koi shouk nahi hei kisi dusre ke ghar mei .. Aur .. Dusre ki jagah per rahane ka . pr sab ke saamne shaadi ki hain aapne es ka harzana toh barna hi parhe ga...maa aur papa ne force kiya ki wo logo ko kya jawab denge? Unki respect ke liye mei yahi hoon... Es liye zaada mat sochiyega... Hmmm..

Aur haan .. Agar aapko koi prob hei to maa ko bolo mujhe nahi .. Samjhe. Now leave , GN and she closed d door at his face.

He stood there for few seconds like statue and then dragged himself from there to his room and sat down on his bed * admission form was still in his hand and d word SHILPA was hammering his mind * the memories of dreadful past were flashing in his mind * his body trembled with rage and mashed d form in his fist * he threw that paper ball and came out in terrace to find some open space to breath * he was feeling suffocated in d room.

he walked for few min back and fro and then lay down on swing deeply immersed in his memories * remembered his encounters with her on their FN and mainly last one when he rudely behaved with her * he never saw her this behaviour with anyone and never heard her name in RM* he himself shut him in a shell . no one talks about her in front of him,she also ignore to come in front of him and also ignore him...

Armaan was shocked that why he didn't notice her in RM even he didn't hear her name in last four months , when he come back in his home after his marriage ? Because she is the one who ignore him... Not because she wants some attention but because she don't want to create a screen in front of his family.. But he himself make his marriage a topic to talk...

He is feeling suffocated...

Armaan POV:
I will make this marriage work... I have to... I will make every thing right... Yaa... I know the way I forced her to this marriage and then backout ,she will not trust me... But I have to make her ... Not as a husband but as a frnd ... Haan ease toh nahi chalega koi rishta ... PR kya mein chahta hoon... Pta nahi kya hoo raha hain meri life mein... Ab jo bhi hoga dekha jayega...

So mission pato "SHILPA" suroo...
So,ALL THE BEST ARMAAN"...




Finish...
Ignore mistakes...
I hope sabko pasand aaye ..will update next part soon...

Edited by shdiksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
superb
loved it
Shilpa n acha sunaya armaan ko
armaan want to work on this marriage
thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
nice part
so armaan shilpa ko pehle se jaanta tha kya ?

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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Part-9(b)
After 3 days...

Its been 3 days,all the family members is back from native place... Shilpa is so happy to see them... They are also happy... But then again she ignore armaan... And it pricks his heart somewhere...

Armaan is in his room laying on his bed motionless, his eyes were on ceilings, he never hoped that she wd behave like this, cold and rough,,,
Why she's angry with him or hates him??? Is this all bcoz of my rejection months back??? But she didn't say anything that time and accepted this relation,,, she did all the things that a daughter- in- law should do... Like taking care of his mother,,, help his sister in her bad time,,, also go in front of that "shamm", who try to misbehave with her,,, just to protect his sis. but she never back out of her responsibilities,,, then why she avoid me only...she behaved quiet normally with all the family members,, his brothers also takes her side always,,, and now a days they behave like they are bodyguards of his wife... They take care of her like she is a " glass doll",,, l also loved it,,, then why this rudeness and avoidness to me,, i just want to start a new start with her,,,simple ,, he threw his fingers in his hair nd combed back them in dismay ,, moved back to his bed nd lay down ,, her rude reply pricking him nd making him restless ,,, sleep was far away from his eyes ,, his eyes went to that glass door many times ,, he wanted to ask her d reason for this rudeness,, usse reason batana hoga ,, Armaan Singh Rathorewho never gave a 2nd thought to anything nd to any of his decision was thinking again nd again to confront her ,though he was hesitating for asking d reason but he had to,, he didn't know when sleep engulfed him .
On d other side of d room Shilpa was sitting on d bed clutching her dupatta in her fists ,, looking blankly on d wall ,, many emotions nd thoughts wr clouding in her mind nd heart ** why god gave her this helpless life ,, she is bounded to bear d things which her heart didn't accept ,, for d sake of her relatives nd most importantly for ananya maa she is living here otherwise what she has here ? She is living a fake life ,, she is all alone nd don't have anybody to whom she cd share her pain * Armaan Singh rathore , her so called husband came after months to thank her for taking care of his beloved family in his absence and now want to start a new start with her, this period he never come to ask me how i'm nd who was taking care of me? what wr my requirements nd needs? I'm also alone nd how i'm managing my life this thing never bothered him , huhhh ,, thanks , double faced man ,, grrr,,, I hate this .
She groaned in anger, her eyes rurned teary ,, his few words spoiled her mood nd didn't want to do anythink,, she got up , switch off d light nd lay down on her small bed cuddling to herself with a heavy heart ,, some warm drops fell down from d corner of her eyes nd lost in d pillow ,, thinking about her wrecked life she slept after some time .


Finish...
I hope u guys like it...
Ignore mistakes...
Edited by shdiksha - 9 years ago

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