arsh ff:Hamari adhuri kahani pt 9 (b) update

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Diksha sharma

@shdiksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hii

Sorry for late post...

New characters

Mr.Alok rathore(alok nath) (armaan chacha ji)

Mrs. Jaya alok rathor (armaan chachi)

Mrs.Anjali sham jha (armaan cousin sister)

Sham jha (cunning man) he is the hole reason of armaan-shilpa problems...

He has very short role in my story...

Preet juneja (prem brother)(big time flirt)

Prithvi singhal (gaurav khaana) (simran would-be-soon)

Part - 5 (b)

Shilpa kissi she takrati hai...

Shilpa:bina us insaan ko dekhe

Sorry...am really sorry. Humne aap ko dekha hi nahi...

Person:hey beautiful...its OK...its my pleasure...ki mein tum se takraya...aakhir beautiful ladkiyon se takrane ka apna hi maza hai...

Shilpa ko uss ladke ka khud k saath flirt krne se gussa aata hai woh kuch khe es se phele hi voh person apna haath a age braha kr...

Person:hi beautiful !!!! Am preet juneja... Naam toh sunna hi hoga...

Abeer:nahi!!! Nahi suna us ne tumhara naam preet hai na hi usko sunna hai...

Preet:hi Bhai!!!kaise ho...

Or aap kaise keh sakte ho ki oh mujhe nahi jaana chahti...aap ko pta nahi ki ladkiyan mujh pr Marti hai...

Viren:or jyada bolne pr tum hum se peet kr maroge...

Arjun: or dorr raho us se...uske saath flirt kiya toh bahut boora hoga...

Preet:OK!

Nahi flirt krta pr aap teeno bodyguards kb se ban gye...

Vaise itni beautiful ladki hoo toh usko gaurd toh krna hi chaihye pr don't mind...

Beautiful !!! Kya hum phele mille hai...

Abheer:tum nahi soodroge... Vaise let me introduce... Bacha yeah hai preet prem Bhai ka chota Bhai or preet yeah hai ...

Shilpa...armaan Bhai ki wife...

Preet:what??? 😲😲😲

preet :Bhabhi...aap...I...I mean welcome Bhabhi...

Preet se shilpa k liye Bhabhi sunn kr Sab haste hai... Or preet shilpa ko hug krta hai or puchta hai...kya hum phele mille hai...

Arjun:tum sudroge nahi na...

Preet:arre nahi sach mein mujhe lagta hai ki meine in he dekha hai phele... Shayad galti lag gyi hogi...

Fer Sab sagai ki tayariyo mein lag jatte hai..

PR koi tha joh en sab ko dekh rahe hai...

Voh or koi nahi Armaan-prem-maan hai...

Prem:yr esko dekh kr kyi baar mujhe lagta hai ki shayad meine galti ki hai usko armaan se shaadi k liye force krke...

Maan: haan!!armaan mujhe bhi lagta hai ki humne shayad galti ki hai...

Armaan:kaisi galti...tum log uski baato mein mat aao...

Maan:pr yr yeah bhi toh ho Sakta hai ki sach mein hum galat hai...Hume ek baar us se baat krni chaiye...

Prem:haan armaan!!!

Ek baar es baare mein tande dimaag se soch Ku aged sach mein hum galat hue toh kya krege...

Kaise Sab face krege...

Armaan:u guys really think so ki mein galat hoo...meine job dekha job suna voh galat hai...no...meine joh kiya theek kiya...

Armaan yeah keh kr chala jaata hai...

Maan:yeah gusse mein much samajna hi nahi chahta hai...kyu nahi samajta ki dekha or sunna galat ho sakta hai...

Prem:pr galti hamari bhi hai us waqt bina soche samjhe humne shilpa ko force kiya or armaan se shaadi krwa di ...or ab yeh guilt mujhe had pal andar hi andar yeh card deti hai ki kahi kissi begunaah ko chot toh nahi de Di...

Maan:kya kro yr samaj nahi aata...aaine mein khud ko dekhta noon toh Ginn aati hai khud pr soch agar kii hamari bhen k saath aisa kre toh humme kitna bura lage ga toh hum uske saath essa kaise kr sakte hai...

Prem:yeh soch kr hi daar lagta hai...

Pr sach pta krne ka ek tarika hai...

Maan:kya???

Prem:yehi ki aaj voh bhi yaha aayege...hum un pr nazar rakhte hai...fer Sab pta chal jyega...

Maan:ha yahi theek hai...chal jaldi voh aate hi honge...

San sagai k liye as jaate hai...

Simran-prithvi rings exchange krte hai...Sab unke liye khush hai...en Sab mein shilpa piche khadi rehti hai...

Maan aur prem yeh notice krte hai pr kuch nahi kehte...

Shilpa vaha se jaane lagti hai pr ananya usko awaaz lagati hai aur apne paas aane ka eshara krti hai...

Shilpa ananya k paas jaati hai...

Ananya usko kissi se milwati hai or kehti hai " shilpa yeah hai alok Bhai shab aur unki patni jaya" ...

Armaan ke Chacha-chachi...

Shilpa un ke paair chu kr unka aashirwad leti hai...

Woh usko pyaar se seer pr haath rakhte hai or Galle lgate hai...

Ananya:shilpa yeah hai unki beti anjali aur yeh us k husband shaam...

Shilpa anjali k gale lagti hai or jaise hi voh shaam ki or dekhti hai...voh shocked hoti hai...or vaha se chali jaati hai...

Yeah baat koi notice nahi krta...pr maan-prem yeah sab dekh rahe hai...voh Dono yeh dekh kr kuch nahi samaj pate...pr ek baat samaj jaate hai ki shaam ko me kr shilpa k Mann mein koi or feelings nahi bas gussa ,nafrat or us se bhi bhard kr darr tha...voh much nahi samajte pr shilpa k piche jaane lagte hai...tabhi voh notice krte hai ki shaam bhi uske piche jaa raha hai...voh us me piche jaane lagte hai pr koi unhe raaste mein hi rokh letaa hai es liye voh unka picha nahi kr paate...

Pr jab voh us insaan se joh unhe rook raja that vaha she jaata hai voh dono full speed mein bhaag kr shilpa ke room k or jaate hai...ab tak unhe yeh toh samaj aa gya tha ki shilpa kahi or nahi apne room mein hi hogi...jab voh shilpa k room k bahare pohach jaate hai toh andar dekh kr voh shocked ho jaate hai kyuki aade she jyada saaman niche girra hai or shilpa ek kone mein baith kr roo rahi hoti hai...(guys andar room mein kya hua hai yeah aap Sab ko pta chal jaayega)

Us ko es tarah dekh kr maan aur prem samaj jaate hai ki unho me galti ki hai...kissi or ki galti ki sajah shilpa ko de Dii hai...

Maan:an him kya krege...

Prem:pta nahi pr ab mein kissi ko bhi shilpa ko hurt nahi krne doonga... Chahe voh armaan hi kyu na hoo...

Maan:hmmm...pr usse phele shilpa ko dekhna chaiye ..

Prem:haan...pr I think Abhi usse akele rehne dete hai kal subha baat krege...

Precap:shaam tries to force himself on shilpa...

Armaan-Maan-prem comes to rescue shilpa...

Armaan angry with shilpa and slap her...

Armaan feeling guilty...

I know boring hai pr bear it...

Next 2 update mein shaam ka character khatam ho jayega...

Armaan-shilpa ki story bhi start ho jyegi an jaldi hi...

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Edited by shdiksha - 9 years ago

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Sammy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

nice part

yeh shaam kaun hai?

kya problem hui thi...and maan prem ne kya kiya?

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ArshAriya

@ArshAriya

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

nice update dear

shaam ka kissa jaldi khatam karo yr

i cant see shilpa hurt

or yr armaan maan n pren ne kiya kya he

konsi misunderstanding

update soon

n thanks for pm

n sorry for late comment

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Bahot saare characters hain... Will have to read when I am really free.. Aise track rakhna mushkil hai

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Diksha sharma

@shdiksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Part - 6

Next day:

Sab ladies aaj shopping k liye bahar jaane wali hai... En sab mein shilpa tensed hoti hai,yeh baat Maan aur prem notice krte hai aur ek knowing look pass krte hai...

Pr woh es baat pr dyaan nahi dete ki koi or bhi hai joh Shilpa k es behaviour ko notice kr raha hai...

Sab ladies mall mein jaati hai...

Achanak shilpa ko call aata hai or voh tabiyat theek na hone ja Bahana krti hai or vaha se chalk jaati hai...

After 40 mins.

Armaan ananya ko call krta hai...

Armaan:mom kaha ho aur shilpa kaha hain...

Ananya usko btati hai ki shilpa ghar gyi hai..

Armaan ko much theek nahi lagta or voh shilpa ko call krta hai pr voh call pick nahi krti.

Armaan police ko shilpa ka no. Deta hai or unhe trace krne ko kehta hai...

After 5 mins. Armaan ko shilpa ki location pta chalti hai or voh vaha jaane lagta hai or police

Ko bhi vaha aane ko kehta hai...

30 mins back..

Shilpa ek hotel mein jaati hai...

Voh reception se room ki direction le kr room mein jaati hai...

In room...

Shilpa room mein enter krti hai... Vaha room mein sham hota hai,jiss k face pr ek conning se smile hoti hai or voh jiss Farah shilpa ko dekh raha hota hai...

Shilpa ko khud se hi ginn aati hai...

Shilpa:(tries to act brave) aapne jaise kaha tha hum yaha as bye hai,ab Hume voh CD aur photos dijiye...

Sham:tututu... Kya shilpa Abhi toh aayi ho...

Abhi jaane ki baat kr rahi hoo. Thoda time humare saath bhi bita lo...

Shilpa:him yaha voh cd aur photos lene aaye hai,voh dijiye Hume ghar jaana hai...

Sham:itni jaldi nahi...

Yeah keh kr voh shilpa ko dakha de kar bed pr girata hai or uss k saath jabar dasti krne lagta hai...

Shilpa:( khud ko bachane ki koshish krti hai pr nahi kr paati)ARMAAN (shilpa zor se chilati hai...)

Armaan who is outside the room,listen shilpa voice and enter the room...

Armaan ko vaha dekh sham darr jata hai ...

Sham(saara blame shilpa pr daalta hai): saale saab acha hua aap aa gye... Yeh dekhiye aapki patni kya kr rahi hai... Humne ense kaha bhi ki him apni patni se bahut pyaar krte hai pr yeh hai ki bas Hume seduce krne mein lagi hai...

Shilpa:nahi yeh sach nahi hai...plz

Sham:aap chup rahiye ...

Aap jaisi ladkiyon ka character kaisa hota hai unhe pta hai...

Es se phele voh kuch air kehta armaan punch on his face...

Ki voh niche gir jata hai...

Armaan apni shirt nikal kr shilpa ko pehnata hai...

Sham:saale Saab aap es ladki ka saath de rahe hai.. En ka toh yahi kaam hai ye..

Armaan fer usko punch krta hai...

Armaan:ek aur word nahi

Maan aur prem bhi aa jaate hai or police bhi...

Shilpa ki haalat dekh kr voh samaj jaate hai ki kya hua hai... Unhe gussa aata hai or voh bhi sham ko Marne lagte hai. ...

Police unhe rokti hai or sham ko vaha se le jaati hai... Fer voh shilpa ki or dekhte hai or shocked hote hai.. Kyuki shilpa behoos hoti hai...

Armaan shilpa ko pick krta hai or usse me kr vaha se chala jaata hai.. .. Aur maan aur prem police station jaate hai.

Edited by shdiksha - 9 years ago

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Sammy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

nice part

yeah that creep is arrested

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urvi-taarey

@urvi-taarey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

nic update
finally ab shayad armaan shilpa ko galat na samjhe

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ArshAriya

@ArshAriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

nice update dear

finally us cheap shaam ko arrest kiya gaya

ab jaldi se arsh ke bich ki misunderstanding bhi dur kardo

continue soon

n dear y i didn't get pm for this part hmm😭

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Diksha sharma

@shdiksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Part - 7

Its been 4 hrs. and Shilpa is still unconscious,with passing time Armaan is getting angry...

Armaan pov :

He want to scold shilpa for her careless towards her, towards situation. He is thinking what would have happen to her,if he didn't went their on time... Sham would have hurt her... But this girl thinks herself "Supergirl" who would have save herself from sham... She didn't even inform me... But NO,why would she need to inform me... He really wants to scold shilpa for her careless...

Armaan thinking:

(If she really have inform me about sham true nature ,i don't think so that I have believed her... Like my behaviour towards shilpa... )

Armaan: mom and anjali di is right,I have done a huge mistake in my misunderstanding... I should have given a chance to shilpa to explain her side of story to me... If I have done that than today everything have sourted out, but no how could I behave like a human who have a heart who always knows a person true nature... Di is right I have done a blunder...

Now how will I face her... What will she think about me...

And my family is also not helping me... They think that its my mistake... I know its my mistake but that time I was just thinking about my sister future... I thought Di loves sham her husband,and he also do that,so I just force SHILPA to marry me if not then I will make her life hell...

Ahh... What I have done... Today Di told me true nature of that bas...d sham true nature...that how he force Di to marry him if not then he will kill Chachu (anjali dad)...

How he force himself on Di,how he beat Di because of that Di lost her first baby... I will not spare that sham... I will make sure he spend all his life in jail...

But first I have to see if shilpa is up or not, if not then I will take her to hospital right now...

End of pov...

Saying this Armaan went to shilpa room... But he sees that anjali is already their...

Armaan:Di aap yaha kya kr rahi hai...

Anjali:kyu???? Taki tum Shilpa ke opar apna gussa nikal sako...

Armaan:nahi Di,aap galat samaj rahi hai... Mein toh bas dekhne aaya tha ki shilpa ko hosh aaya hai ya nahi... Ager nahi toh mein usko hospital le jaoga... Taki Dr. Bta de ki kahi koi problem toh nahi hai...

Ananya:(room mein enter krti hai) eski koi zaroorat nahi hai Armaan,hum hai yaha shilpa k pass,tumhe tension lene ki zaroorat nahi hai... Meine phele hi kaha that jab tum shaadi kr ke shilpa ko ghar laaye the ki Armaan tumhe koi galati hui hai PR tum nahi maane,ab dekho kya ho gya... Shilpa es halat mein hai...

Anjali:or haan Armaan, Shilpa ki fikar krne ki zaroorat nahi hai... Hum hai yaha uske liye tum apne business PR dayaan doo... Phele ki tarah jb tum shaadi k baad yaha se chale gye the shilpa ko yaha chod kr...

Armaan apni Di aur mom se yeah Sab sunn kr upset hota hai or vaha se chala jaata hain...

I know boring hai but I promise next part will be arsh...

Sham unki life se jaa chuka hai...

Precap:

Shilpa feels something new about Armaan..

Shilpa cooks Armaans favourite food...

Armaan to admit Shilpa in college without her permission...

Shilpa to say No to Armaan...

Edited by shdiksha - 9 years ago