The Distance Between Us - An AR FF (Link to TDBU#2 - Page 1) - Page 104

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgd3



Oh you emoted it just fine sweetheart :) For me that one dialogue was the show stealer. I wonder if Armaan realises the significance of that question later. Bcoz tabhi toh he was way too angry to pay attention to it.



Yaar, woh Armaan hai. Of course he'll understand it. Riddhima ke baare mein koi aisi cheez hai kya jo woh notice nahi karta? Maybe not just yet, but soon, he'll understand. ;)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: appy_19

Hey.
You've written beautifully.
I never thought the story in this way. But its exciting.
I'll be waiting to see more of your updates.



Heyyy!! Thank you so much! :)

So good to see you here!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

exactly! well maybe not now.. bt armaan will surely realize this when ht get to knw abt ridhima and sid.. right prags??? I'm sure u planned something



Yes. I have. It'll not happen for sometime, but it will. Armaan will understand the significance of what Riddhima asked him.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

one more thing caught my attention when ridhima gt to knw abt kartik.. nikki was actually there to support her... it signifies how they care for her still. or I'm reading too much?



No, yaar. Obviously, at the end of the day, Nikki is only mad at Riddhima because of what happened between her and Armaan. Uske alawa, Nikki doesn't have any other issues with Riddhima. But somehow, that one thing has caused so many differences between them, that they've drifted apart. But, that doesn't mean that they don't care about each other anymore. Because, of course they do. All 7 of them have been through too much together to just stop caring.

One of the main reasons why I made Shilpa tell in front of everyone was because I wanted to use this as a stepping stone to bridge the gap between Riddhima and Atul & Nikki. Because I want them to support Riddhima in this situation. And then slowly, things will start getting better. Matlab, Atul toh already talks to her and stuff, he just isn't as close to her as he used to be. Nikki, too. Since the birth of her son, Riddhima and her have somewhat of a civil relationship. But, before everything, Riddhima was Nikki's best friend after Armaan. Toh, that camarederie between them is missing. But, I want to bring that back. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sara.dmg

Yay! Another update, I am loving these weekly updates long may they continue.



This part was like always fabulous. Well the confrontation went horribly wrong I wasn't expecting it go so wrong. I guess this should have been done privately instead of in front of every one. I understand Ridhima would be going through so much after learning the truth and she has too much on her plate right Now. But her outburst was a bit too harsh. I mean she has an old habit of lashing out on people after suffering and than being sorry later. Like when she shouted on Shashank after knowing about the reason behind Arman leaving and saying some really nasty stuff like you are not my father and you didn't treated me like your biological daughter (if I remember correctly). Similarly here her being angry and hurt is justified but statements like "people like You" was really below the belt. I know She doesn't mean all that but she should really try to stop for a minute and thing about the stuff she is saying to people and consider their feelings too.



And about Arman's reaction I have mixed feelings about it. Yeah he should have understood Ridhima's POV. But him standing up of Shilpa is just a thing Arman would do. He always have his friends back. And would always defend them. And also some one has to make Ridhima understand the gravity of situation. She just can't lash out and hurt someones feelings like that.



I feel bad for Shilpa. She doesn't deserves that. In fact no one deserved to suffer from their father's sins. But maybe she shouldn't have much expectation from Ridhima. After all no one can accept such a big truth so suddenly. But I glad people have her back and she don't have to suffer alone.



But overall this was an impossible situation where no one was wrong. I loved all the drama of this part. Only thing remains is padma's reaction after all it's her past that came back to haunt. Looking forward tothat.



Looks like Arman and Ridhima are back to square one. But I don't mind the distance. As the more the distance is the more it will take time to to wrap up the story. And longer the story is the more I'll get to read. A win win situation. Hehe



Waiting for the next part. Can't it came little earlier. I am being greedy now lol.



Take care

Sara



Hello! Waise, I think you're not on my PM List, so I'm gonna have to add you. :p

The confrontation did go horribly wrong, didn't it? Matlab, itna drama? :p

It was done in front of everyone for different reasons, which have nothing to do with Shilpa. But, she became a tool in a larger scenario, because this scene will be the backbone of many others.

Yes, Riddhima was shocked, and it was a lot for her to handle, but she outlashed too harshly, just like she has a habit of doing. Armaan has been on the receiving end countless times. And Shashank too, that once. Yes, she did accuse him of doing "sautelapan" and stuff after she found out the truth about Armaan, but I forgave that, only because it was the first time she stood up for Armaan in front of Shanky. It had more to do with my feelings for Armaan than Shanky that I was okay with her saying that stuff. Personal bias aside, she shouldn't have said that.

It was a shock to her, so yes, she would have reacted badly, but saying that "people like you" thing was taking too far. Like always, she spoke before thinking. So, she'll definitely regret it once she thinks about it with a clear head.

Yes, Armaan's reaction was surprising for many. Me too. I mean, he was defending his friend, but he didn't really think about Riddhima in that moment. So, he wasn't all that right either, but he was not completely wrong in what he said. Maybe he shouldn't have said it so harshly, but he really was angry with that comment.

Shilpa ki toh koi galti nahi hai. Poor thing. And, she isn't expecting anything from the Guptas. She's only *hoping* for it. Expecting and hoping are different things. She knows that after everything, it would be really difficult for everyone, esp Padma to accept her. So, she doesn't expect them to do it. But, she hopes for it as a best case scenario. And, in that scenario, the Guptas accept her. It's not something that'll happen for real.

Yes, no one was really in the wrong here, but no one was completely right too. So, gray area. Padma's reaction to it all is something that I'm struggling to write right now, but I'll show it for sure.

Hahahahaha. Smart you are. But, Armaan will not hold this against Riddhima, and neither will she, because both of them were really overwhelmed in that moment and they said things they didn't mean. So, they'll talk and it'll get better.

I'll try to update soon, but thoda time toh lagega. :p
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Posted: 7 years ago


Kya aap kabhi unres karenge?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings



Aao, aao. Aap bhi aa jao!



Actually main bhul gayi thi
Maine kaha i wouldnt comment
Until things get better in AR
So yesh here i m but i will not unres
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings



Kya aap kabhi unres karenge?




Sochungi
Edited by RihooHaws - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws



Actually main bhul gayi thi
Maine kaha i wouldnt comment
Until things get better in AR
So yesh here i m but i will not unres



*pouts*

Aap kitne zaalim ho, Rihoo Di! But, chalo koi nahi. Aapne read kiya, utna kaafi hai abhi ke liye. :p
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Posted: 7 years ago


Kal parso kuch kahoge?

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