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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws



hehe bilkul agree tumhari yeh baat se...
Chalo chalo jao... Maine unres kardiya ;)
dono update pe. not to forget ok :D



Okay, madam. Going now. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Res

Unres...

I will be really frank, kyunki maine pehle hi kaha jo bhi ho raha hai mujhe bilkul accha nehi lag raha...
Aur tumne is part mein phirse AR ke jhagda kardiya... This is really not done...
Ek toh Armaan koh nehi pata Ridz is single now... Aur na Ridz usse batane ka soch raha hai...
Sid and Anjali ne toh plan banaya, but koi kuch nehi kar raha abhi tak..

I know jaise tumne story koh aage bada rahe ho, its necessary to show all these...
I can really understand, u can't just jump to AR and makes things correct all of sudden...
but current phase mujhe bilkul accha nehi lag raha...

Ridz galat thi, jaise usne Shilpa ke baaton koh react kiya, aur usse jo bhi bola...
But she was unaware the fact that Shilpa do blame her father for behaving the way he did with Padma and Ridz...
Jab usse pata chala, she felt guilty but Armaan ne Shilpa ke side li toh usse bilkul accha nehi laga...
Woh pehle din se issiliyeh Shilpa koh unlike karti thi, she reminds her of Armaan when they were interns...
Aur toh aur, Armaan ne kehdiya, Shilpa se dur rahe...
Even I don't like it, kyunki Armaan acche se jaante hai... Bina full truth jaane, its obvious Ridz to react like that...
Haan jo kaha, kehna nehi chahiyeh tha, bohot galat tha but... it was just a react to know such a big truth...

if anything i m glad that its Sid was there for Ridz...
Woh guilt hai yeh baat Ridz se chupane ke liye, but usne samjha Ridz aise kyun react kiya...
Even Armaan knows but he choose to blame her...

So I just don't like the part :P
but but but... suno suno suno...
Jo huva wohi toh pasand nehi... but u write it super awesome...
emotions and everything was just too perfect...
and that is the reason that main comment na karne koh kehkar bhi comment kar rahi hun...
tujhe complain jo karni thi heheh...

Continue soon...
take care...
Love it and love u :*


Arre is chapter mein jhagda kara diya toh kya hua ? Next waale mein fir dosti kara denge. Koi load nahi hai. :p

Ekdum se turant thodi plan kar lenge, yaar . Thoda time do . Woh log Armaan jaise masterminds toh hai nahi ki bas minutes mein unhe idea aa jaaye. :p

Right you are . Armaan ki toh galti hai hi . Usne ekdum se Shilpa ki side le li . Aur usse itna zyada defend kiya, toh obviously , Riddhima ke kuch puraane insecurities waapas aa gaye , jo us waqt the jab woh sab Mumbai mein the .

Woh toh Armaan gusse mein sab bol gaya. Ab , sabko pata haina , jab usko ekdum se gussa aata hai toh woh kaise react karta hai? Toh bas, wahi hua . But, woh Ridz ko samajhta hai. He knows her better than anyone else. So , he will realize his mistake also. Uska kuch tension nahi hai. :p

I'm glad that even though you don't like the plot, you love the way I'm writing . Mana karne ke baad bhi you commented, it means a lot to me! I know that sabse zyada shayad aapko hi chahiye ki AR get back together . Aur woh nahi ho raha , isliye I'm sorry . But, pakka, is chapter ke baad ab bohot saare achche, happy aur cute AR moments aayenge till Armaan finds out about the truth . Their bond will grow a lot. So, I hope you like those chapters ! :)

Loveee yooouuu !! :****
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings



Hello! Waise, I think you're not on my PM List, so I'm gonna have to add you. :p

The confrontation did go horribly wrong, didn't it? Matlab, itna drama? :p

It was done in front of everyone for different reasons, which have nothing to do with Shilpa. But, she became a tool in a larger scenario, because this scene will be the backbone of many others.

Yes, Riddhima was shocked, and it was a lot for her to handle, but she outlashed too harshly, just like she has a habit of doing. Armaan has been on the receiving end countless times. And Shashank too, that once. Yes, she did accuse him of doing "sautelapan" and stuff after she found out the truth about Armaan, but I forgave that, only because it was the first time she stood up for Armaan in front of Shanky. It had more to do with my feelings for Armaan than Shanky that I was okay with her saying that stuff. Personal bias aside, she shouldn't have said that.

It was a shock to her, so yes, she would have reacted badly, but saying that "people like you" thing was taking too far. Like always, she spoke before thinking. So, she'll definitely regret it once she thinks about it with a clear head.

Yes, Armaan's reaction was surprising for many. Me too. I mean, he was defending his friend, but he didn't really think about Riddhima in that moment. So, he wasn't all that right either, but he was not completely wrong in what he said. Maybe he shouldn't have said it so harshly, but he really was angry with that comment.

Shilpa ki toh koi galti nahi hai. Poor thing. And, she isn't expecting anything from the Guptas. She's only *hoping* for it. Expecting and hoping are different things. She knows that after everything, it would be really difficult for everyone, esp Padma to accept her. So, she doesn't expect them to do it. But, she hopes for it as a best case scenario. And, in that scenario, the Guptas accept her. It's not something that'll happen for real.

Yes, no one was really in the wrong here, but no one was completely right too. So, gray area. Padma's reaction to it all is something that I'm struggling to write right now, but I'll show it for sure.

Hahahahaha. Smart you are. But, Armaan will not hold this against Riddhima, and neither will she, because both of them were really overwhelmed in that moment and they said things they didn't mean. So, they'll talk and it'll get better.

I'll try to update soon, but thoda time toh lagega. :p


Yeah! I am not on your PM list. I just keep an eye on updates and visit the forum whenever possible. But Thank You for adding me in your PM list.

Yes there was a lot of drama involved but I love this kind of drama where people talk (Ok maybe shout is the correct word) to each other instead of looking at each other secretly. And pinning for each other.

Yes Ridhima definitely have this habit of saying mean things and even being self righteous some times. Since only Arman and maybe some times even her family is on the receiving end of it. I don't think nobody ever made her see the fault of her ways. So I am glad finally Arman called her out on her bullshit. Because she never ever truly realized how mean and hurtfull she can be as she never have to face the consequences of her words.

About Arman the longer I think about his word I kind of think he is right. And he was any ways standing up for a friend. And part of that was also his guilt as he talked shilpa into this and he is considering himself responsible for this. So i understand from where he is coming from. But I just hope he also stand up for his own self. Like Ridhima needs to take decisions about life by taking her own happiness into consideration. He also needs to standup for his own self, don't allow people to walk over himself and stop them to take him for granted.

Poor Shilpa she has to face burnt of the situation but she'll come out of it as a stronger person with her friend's help. And yeah hope is better instead of expectations because expectation hurts.

Looking forward to padma's reaction. BTW where is Jaan and Tammy for the past few chapters they both kind of disappeared. I kind of miss them.

Yes I am smart lol. I was looking at the silver lining in the strained things among Arman and Ridhima Hehehe. Talking about silver lining yes you are right the public confrontation will create a soft spot in hearts of Nikki and Atul for Ridhima. And that will become a stepping stone to mend their friendship. Why I didn't thought about that.

Sigh! You have made me emotionally invest in this story as I don't really right comments on stories before. But this story compels me to leave comments. So please don't ever leave it midway. Because there is nothing worse than brilliant but abandoned story like many on the forum.

Yes of course take yours time. No worries I'll wait.

Take care
Sara



Edited by sara.dmg - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sara.dmg


Yeah! I am not on your PM list. I just keep an eye on updates and visit the forum whenever possible. But Thank You for adding me in yours PM list.



Yes there was a lot of drama involved but I love this kind of drama where people talk (Ok maybe shout is the correct word) to each other instead of looking each other secretly. And pinning for each other.



Yes Ridhima definitely have this habit of saying mean things and even being self righteous some times. Since only Arman and maybe some times even her family is on the receiving end of it. I don't think nobody ever made her see the fault of her ways. So I am glad finally Arman called her out on her bullshit. Because she never ever truly realized how mean and hurtfull she can be as she never have to face the consequences of her words.



About Arman the longer I think about his word I kind of think he is right. And he was any ways standing up for a friend. But I just hope he also stand up for his own self. Like Ridhima needs to take decisions about life by taking her own happiness into consideration. He also needs to standup for his own self, don't allow people to walk over himself and stop them to take him for granted.



Poor Shilpa she has to face burnt of the situation but she'll come out of it as a stronger person with her friend's help. And yeah hope is better instead of expectations because expectation hurts.



Looking forward to padma's reaction. BTW where is Jaan and Tammy for the past few chapters they both kind of disappeared. I kind of miss them.



Yes I am smart lol. I was looking at the silver lining in the strained things among Arman and Ridhima Hehehe. Talking about silver lining yes you are right the public confrontation will create a soft spot in hearts of Nikki and Atul for Ridhima. And that will become a stepping stone to mend their friendship. Why I didn't thought about that.



Sigh! You have made me emotionally invest in this story as I don't really right comments on stories before. But this story conpels me leavd comments. So please don't ever leave it midway. Because there is nothing worse than brilliant but abandoned story like many on the forum.



Yes of course take yours time. No worries I'll wait.



Take care

Sara







I know. People talking to each other is definitely better than secretly pining away in agony. But, that's also nice sometimes. All the ANGST! I'm a real masochist when it comes to angst, so I like it. But, not too much either.

You're right. Riddhima definitely has this habit of overdoing it and saying things that are hurtful and cruel, especially when she's shocked or angry and she needs to understand that she can't always get away with it.

Armaan will definitely take a stand for himself and he won't let Riddhima walk all over him. In the past, whenever Riddhima has hurt Armaan, he's always been the one to take the first step and forgive her, but not this time, no sir! My boi has the right to throw tantrums of his own. Which he will.

Shilpa has an amazing support system in Karan, Armaan & Rahul and they'll definitely be there for her through it all.

Hahahaha. Yes, I know Jaan & Tammy have sort of disappeared. Lots of Tammy is coming up, that I can promise. But, Jaan. Ahhh. I have to incorporate her in scenes and sometimes that feels unnatural. But, I'm working on a few outtakes in which she features prominently. And, as the wedding draws closer, there will be more of Jaan and her interaction with Armaan, Rahul & Tamanna. :)

Yes. That was exactly the purpose of doing it publically. Nikki and Atul will definitely soften towards Riddhima and this time will help them mend their friendship with her. :)

Sarrraaa!! You saying this means the world to me! Thank you so much! I'm totally planning on writing this story, because I also love it so much. I know that not many people are reading it, but the few of you who are, are all so encouraging and supportive that I can't even dream of leaving you guys hanging! This is a very ambitious project and I want to see it end. So, no leaving this mid-way. :)

Thank you so much! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings



I know. People talking to each other is definitely better than secretly pining away in agony. But, that's also nice sometimes. All the ANGST! I'm a real masochist when it comes to angst, so I like it. But, not too much either.

You're right. Riddhima definitely has this habit of overdoing it and saying things that are hurtful and cruel, especially when she's shocked or angry and she needs to understand that she can't always get away with it.

Armaan will definitely take a stand for himself and he won't let Riddhima walk all over him. In the past, whenever Riddhima has hurt Armaan, he's always been the one to take the first step and forgive her, but not this time, no sir! My boi has the right to throw tantrums of his own. Which he will.

Shilpa has an amazing support system in Karan, Armaan & Rahul and they'll definitely be there for her through it all.

Hahahaha. Yes, I know Jaan & Tammy have sort of disappeared. Lots of Tammy is coming up, that I can promise. But, Jaan. Ahhh. I have to incorporate her in scenes and sometimes that feels unnatural. But, I'm working on a few outtakes in which she features prominently. And, as the wedding draws closer, there will be more of Jaan and her interaction with Armaan, Rahul & Tamanna. :)

Yes. That was exactly the purpose of doing it publically. Nikki and Atul will definitely soften towards Riddhima and this time will help them mend their friendship with her. :)

Sarrraaa!! You saying this means the world to me! Thank you so much! I'm totally planning on writing this story, because I also love it so much. I know that not many people are reading it, but the few of you who are, are all so encouraging and supportive that I can't even dream of leaving you guys hanging! This is a very ambitious project and I want to see it end. So, no leaving this mid-way. :)

Thank you so much! :)


Yeah talking or maybe shouting to each other is the correct way to go. I love love love this story. Now I am relieved after your assurance of never leaving it. I really like your other story ILYLTF and all the mushy stuff in it. But I love this more with all the angst. Does that makes me a sadistic person lol.

Good Ridhima will at least get some lesson out of this situation. Yesss you are totally right Arman got the right to throw tantrums. My man always have been on receiving end. It will be good to see the tables turned.

Looking forward to scenes of Jaan, Tammy, Arman and Rahul. I just love their bond.

This story is just awesome and no praise is high enough for it. Just keep writing good stuff like this.

Sara

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings


Arre is chapter mein jhagda kara diya toh kya hua ? Next waale mein fir dosti kara denge. Koi load nahi hai. :p

Ekdum se turant thodi plan kar lenge, yaar . Thoda time do . Woh log Armaan jaise masterminds toh hai nahi ki bas minutes mein unhe idea aa jaaye. :p

Right you are . Armaan ki toh galti hai hi . Usne ekdum se Shilpa ki side le li . Aur usse itna zyada defend kiya, toh obviously , Riddhima ke kuch puraane insecurities waapas aa gaye , jo us waqt the jab woh sab Mumbai mein the .

Woh toh Armaan gusse mein sab bol gaya. Ab , sabko pata haina , jab usko ekdum se gussa aata hai toh woh kaise react karta hai? Toh bas, wahi hua . But, woh Ridz ko samajhta hai. He knows her better than anyone else. So , he will realize his mistake also. Uska kuch tension nahi hai. :p

I'm glad that even though you don't like the plot, you love the way I'm writing . Mana karne ke baad bhi you commented, it means a lot to me! I know that sabse zyada shayad aapko hi chahiye ki AR get back together . Aur woh nahi ho raha , isliye I'm sorry . But, pakka, is chapter ke baad ab bohot saare achche, happy aur cute AR moments aayenge till Armaan finds out about the truth . Their bond will grow a lot. So, I hope you like those chapters ! :)

Loveee yooouuu !! :****


as I said, I know this going on track is necessary...
Chalo koi nehi, I will wait...
Yeh acchi baat hai, AR ke moments padne koh mile ;)
Be it as friends or lover, I don't mind...
bas in dono ka ladai mat karwa...

arey arey, u dont need to say sorry...
u should be saying sorry at all...
Story hai yeh, aur jo tumne socha hai waise hi likho...
kissi ki wajahse tum apni plot change mat karna...
hum crazy fans hai, bas apni craziness ke wajahse bol dete hahaha...

Love u too :***
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Posted: 7 years ago
^ no, yaar. We're all human. Aur woh jo... Kehte haina... Mushkilon se milne wala pyaar... Great love stories are made only after facing a lot of problems etc, etc is all true.

Itna saha hai, toh phor pyaar ki kadar bhi toh zyada hogi. Aur jab we see how much our faves have gone through and now they're finally happy, woh satisfaction he kuch aur hoti hai. :p

The tables will definitely turn and Riddhima will have to take the first step. On many occasions.

Yes, the bond between JART (hah! That acrynoym is funny) is so cute and adorable. I absolutely love how much the 4 of them love each other. Planning on writing more of them. :)

Thank you so very much for all the love! ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings

^ no, yaar. We're all human. Aur woh jo... Kehte haina... Mushkilon se milne wala pyaar... Great love stories are made only after facing a lot of problems etc, etc is all true.

Itna saha hai, toh phor pyaar ki kadar bhi toh zyada hogi. Aur jab we see how much our faves have gone through and now they're finally happy, woh satisfaction he kuch aur hoti hai. :p

The tables will definitely turn and Riddhima will have to take the first step. On many occasions.

Yes, the bond between JART (hah! That acrynoym is funny) is so cute and adorable. I absolutely love how much the 4 of them love each other. Planning on writing more of them. :)

Thank you so very much for all the love! ❤️



Yaar, Rihoo Di commented when I commented. :p

This was meant for Sara! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws



as I said, I know this going on track is necessary...
Chalo koi nehi, I will wait...
Yeh acchi baat hai, AR ke moments padne koh mile ;)
Be it as friends or lover, I don't mind...
bas in dono ka ladai mat karwa...

arey arey, u dont need to say sorry...
u should be saying sorry at all...
Story hai yeh, aur jo tumne socha hai waise hi likho...
kissi ki wajahse tum apni plot change mat karna...
hum crazy fans hai, bas apni craziness ke wajahse bol dete hahaha...

Love u too :***



AR moments are in wholesale, I promise. I'm going to try to write at least one happy/friendly interaction between them in every chapter.

Arre har kisi ko sorry thodi bola. Bas, aapko. Aur woh matlab, aisi sorry jaise, like, I'm sorry I can't help it. Woh type wali. :p
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings

^ no, yaar. We're all human. Aur woh jo... Kehte haina... Mushkilon se milne wala pyaar... Great love stories are made only after facing a lot of problems etc, etc is all true.

Itna saha hai, toh phor pyaar ki kadar bhi toh zyada hogi. Aur jab we see how much our faves have gone through and now they're finally happy, woh satisfaction he kuch aur hoti hai. :p

The tables will definitely turn and Riddhima will have to take the first step. On many occasions.

Yes, the bond between JART (hah! That acrynoym is funny) is so cute and adorable. I absolutely love how much the 4 of them love each other. Planning on writing more of them. :)

Thank you so very much for all the love! ❤️


Yeah you are spot on by saying that. Humans only respects the things that are hard earned. All this will make their bond stronger than ever. And the foundation of their relationship this time will be stronger than ever with trust, mutual respect and correct priorities. Totally looking forward for the turned tables.😃

JART I love it. Sounds fun. These four together are absolutely adorable. Looking forward for their scenes.

You are most welcome. 😊
Edited by sara.dmg - 7 years ago

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