The Distance Between Us - An AR FF (Link to TDBU#2 - Page 1) - Page 103

Originally posted by: Prizi

tu na pehle relax kar.. u can add them now also..

thoda modify karke

Originally posted by: Prizi

tu na pehle relax kar.. u can add them now also..

Hahahahaha. I know. Isliye toh mujhe tension nahi hai. :p

Originally posted by: Prizi

don't worry everything will be fine..

Hopefully! *fingers crossed*

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Now that I think about it, you're right. Maybe sabke saamne bolke tamasha nahi karna chahiye tha. :|

But, I promise, no one will make Riddhima's decision for her in this regard. Not now.

Originally posted by: dmgd3

That's okay. You had your pov and plan when u wrote this. U can always adjust along the way. I just feel that since it happened in front of everyone they will all have an opinion and as half the people in the room already resent Riddhima they will judge her n see her as the culprit because of her out burst.

Maybe you could have them not judge Ridz n let R-S solve it on their own. :)

I know that people aren't happy with Riddhima, but yaar, kisi zamaane mein, woh uske dost the. Iss tarah uske saath behave nahi karenge. I mean, they're mad at her because of what she did to Armaan. And, Armaan toh unke group ki jaan tha. Isliye it's understandable. But, Sid, Anjy aur Ridz ke alawa, koi aur Shilpa ko jaanta bhi nahi. Toh woh log kisi stranger ke liye Ridz ke saath aisa nahi karenge.

In fact, I was actually thinking that after this, it'll help bridge some gaps between Ridz, Nikki and Atul. Esp Atul. Uske saath Riddhima ki relationship will get better. Really soon.

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Hahahaha. It's okay, baby! :)

Hey.
You've written beautifully.
I never thought the story in this way. But its exciting.
I'll be waiting to see more of your updates.

Originally posted by: dmgd3

Oh you emoted it just fine sweetheart :) For me that one dialogue was the show stealer. I wonder if Armaan realises the significance of that question later. Bcoz tabhi toh he was way too angry to pay attention to it.

exactly! well maybe not now.. bt armaan will surely realize this when ht get to knw abt ridhima and sid.. right prags??? I'm sure u planned something

one more thing caught my attention when ridhima gt to knw abt kartik.. nikki was actually there to support her... it signifies how they care for her still. or I'm reading too much?

Yay! Another update, I am loving these weekly updates long may they continue.

This part was like always fabulous. Well the confrontation went horribly wrong I wasn't expecting it go so wrong. I guess this should have been done privately instead of in front of every one. I understand Ridhima would be going through so much after learning the truth and she has too much on her plate right Now. But her outburst was a bit too harsh. I mean she has an old habit of lashing out on people after suffering and than being sorry later. Like when she shouted on Shashank after knowing about the reason behind Arman leaving and saying some really nasty stuff like you are not my father and you didn't treated me like your biological daughter (if I remember correctly). Similarly here her being angry and hurt is justified but statements like "people like You" was really below the belt. I know She doesn't mean all that but she should really try to stop for a minute and thing about the stuff she is saying to people and consider their feelings too.

And about Arman's reaction I have mixed feelings about it. Yeah he should have understood Ridhima's POV. But him standing up of Shilpa is just a thing Arman would do. He always have his friends back. And would always defend them. And also some one has to make Ridhima understand the gravity of situation. She just can't lash out and hurt someones feelings like that.

I feel bad for Shilpa. She doesn't deserves that. In fact no one deserved to suffer from their father's sins. But maybe she shouldn't have much expectation from Ridhima. After all no one can accept such a big truth so suddenly. But I glad people have her back and she don't have to suffer alone.

But overall this was an impossible situation where no one was wrong. I loved all the drama of this part. Only thing remains is padma's reaction after all it's her past that came back to haunt. Looking forward tothat.

Looks like Arman and Ridhima are back to square one. But I don't mind the distance. As the more the distance is the more it will take time to to wrap up the story. And longer the story is the more I'll get to read. A win win situation. Hehe

Waiting for the next part. Can't it came little earlier. I am being greedy now lol.

Take care
Sara