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asdfgh456

@asdfgh456

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Posted: 9 years ago

#741

So happy there's another update!

I do love the way you're building up the story even though i can't wait for them to finally be on a good solid foundation together, but good things come to those who wait and all that. It'll just make the coming together even more sweet!

If Arnav didn't book those tickets though...it would be a million negative points and steps back for him, luckily he stepped up.

Can't wait for the next one :)

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#742

Beautifully written.

It looks like every bad things has to happen one after another. But bad times shows how strong your relationship is with your partner.

Both understands their situation that's why she didn't say anything about economy class as she knew this will effect his image in the market. And he knows how important it is to reach to her parents.

It was short but important update showing growth of their trust and support for each other.

Thanks for update even after being so busy.

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#743

Too good and exactly agree with Arnav's behaviour i can so relate to it nd simply wonderful but super short update

Please please come back soon with another super update

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#744

Small and awesome update...

Arnav's point is very well understood he is someone who cannot comfort any one by hugging or smooth talks but his action showed he cares for his wife and now priority is going back to india...

Syre traveling by economy class will create some controversy...

Can we expect reporter Sharma in coming chapters...

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#745

Awesome update K!! Loved it!!!!

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sanam

@sanamsky

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#746

this is not fair i been waiting for this like forever and this is too short update plz give long update i love this story

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rosalineak

@rosalineak

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#747

Amazing...

I request u to give a lil long update as you r updating once a month...

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#748

wonderful update. loved it. cant wait to see next.

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BelaSYD

@BelaSYD

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#749

Reffering to the notes at the end of your update, I personally prefer when the writer puts his/hers ideas down, without too much consideration for readers comments. What I mean is, comments are a great tool to improve writing skills; they will show where you left readers confused; or when the meaning got lost, or worse got derailed on a wrong direction. But at the end of it all, let your story be your story. Give it your own voice, and please, don't worry too much about those who want to pull the story on a different direction than that in your mind.

I understand your wish to move the story slow. After reading it, I can see no other way for this relationship . . . it's a day by day thing. Each small act from one of them, reveals a little more to the partner, whom effectively, has married a stranger. I for one, I'm enjoying the ride.

Cheers

Edited by BelaSYD - 9 years ago

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#750

Yay! You updated! Two chapters in a month! Thats progress!
Although I had thought thar our couple would get some more quality alone time in Australia but a family crisis has called them home. Nothing like a family crisis and trajedy to strenghen a relationship.Loved Arnav's decision to put his reputation on line for Khushi to get a chance to see her father on time.