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priya_28

@priya_28

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Posted: 9 years ago

#721

really loved it and really liked little small things u mention showing their development, will be waiting for next part.

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 9 years ago

#722

Arnav reaction is quite natural and expected. I hope Buaji is not gravely ill. Khushi will be devastated if anything happens to him.

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#723

Nice.. I liked how u brought it such that he had to choose between his reputation which he built with a lot of hard work and her feelings. I liked that khushi didnt look at him pleadingly contrary to her pleading self in front of rachel. It showed that she didnt want him to do it as a favor coz she begged him.

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#724

ASR in economy class .. Wow

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sanasahel

@sanasahel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#725

Nice update. I too agree with Arnav. they are getting to know each other. brick by brick let them build...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#726

Good to see you back ... K ... Off to read ...

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

#727

There is a quiet strength about Arnav that is very reassuring. I like how he gives Khushi space, even while tacitly letting her know he's there.

His actions are governed by his concern on her behalf, while hers are by a direct concern, and you show that so well. I loved how she doesn't look at him directly while waiting for him to decide on the tickets. That "We'll take it" was imbued with so much more than a mere acceptance of the tickets.

I agree with what you wrote of trust in your note K. Saying it aloud, is not what inspires confidence in the other person.

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hydsri

@hydsri

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#728

it is good to see Arnav starting to care for Khushi. At least it is moving in the right direction.

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#729

Hello Krani
Hey Loved the way Arnav was being protective and considerate towards khushi.
Thank u for the update.

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#730

Arnav wanting to comfort Kushi and being in an awkward position to comfort her not knowing how to was subtly shown. Yes, I do agree with you that Arnav's character is one with a few words, but he shows his concern and care through his actions. And it is exactly what he is doing here. Though he is aware of the risk that his travel in economy will lead to bad speculation, he is taking the risk for Kushi's sake nevertheless. And Kushi does not want to force him that decision. My only regret is the chapter was shorter than usual and the time gap between the chapters is keeping me restless.