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Posted: 9 years ago
I like this story ... ..
I started it once when LOLWAsAalu mentioned about it ... but i was very apprehensive to start reading this one as it had 50+ chapters ... and i really dont like long and slow stories ...
I scrolled through your threads and thought of reading it when i ll have alot of time at hand.. i took really long time to read it..


i hv lost the count of people who mentions about this story... a lot of them would tell its an awesome story but incomplete... once rasgulla_sp also told about this story ( and i m very likely to read what she reads or likes ...;D ... taste hai bandi ka )
So ... i was curious as well ..i wanted to know why everyone keeps talking about a story which is really long nd is incomplete for years...
I started reading it and it got my interest pretty easily ... after i read a first few chapters i was telling myself to not read further as its actually an awesome story with no ending yet... but there was something about the story that keeps you glued .. i cdnt leave it despite knowing that it wont give me a closure .. but i continued ... i m not a very patient reader yet i read all the chapters :D
It was slow yes ..but it was interesting .. ..
Arnav was really rude to khushi post marriage... i hated him for that... from pushing her to sleep in darkness ,he has come a long way, to sleep wth her so that she wont be afraid of dark ...he is suffering alot of loss at business... still decides to help khushi by travelling in plane with her ... i absolutely loved this about him .. he has changed for good :) i loved his gesture .. his actions speak louder than words ...Nd i m not very good at consoling either... i can understand him partially ;) ...

Nk was sweet ... :)

About khushi i hope she will be able to forgive him nd will appreciate his kindness now .. i think she will help him with his work later ...
Nd yes i wish good health to her dad...

About flashbacks ... till a point in story i wanted to know what had happened in past but after some time i started skipping flashbacks :/ dnt mind but they dont intrigue me anymore ... i think i ll read all the flashbacks in a go once the mystery is solved ... :] ...


By the time time i had finished reading your previous updates .. i was lucky that you started updating new ones...
A thank You for that ...
But i had decided that i wont comment ( regarding updates not abt updating soon :D ) unless you complete the story .. lol.. that was a way to bribe you..you see 🤣 ...

But koi faida nhi ... you dnt seemed to be tempted by the offer at all .. :'( ... so i had to comment :P

I hope you dnt mind me saying what i m going to say next
... i had thought earlier that i wont write this .. but your last A/N made me change my mind... i m really taking a chance here ...


I really cant wait for updates ..nd i will be honest here .. as i told you i m not very patient .. i m someone who will read the epilogue first to kill the curosity :P ... but i hv really enjoyed reading all 50+ updates ( before you resumed the story ) ...
But now when you update after a long time and the updates are short with story not moving forward .. i feel a bit bored .. i remember there was one update where khushi asks arnav to sleep on bed ... and the next update was late late very late ... and when i read the update it had only arnav agreeing to her ...

I do like this story but when i get to read something progessing in it ... i think i like to read 3 - 4 updates at one sitting .. so..
Pleace if yu can do something regarding the length and time of updates . Please ? ...

And about your twitter account thingy..
Life is too busy to stalk ... .. mm.. is there anyway we can hv a set time fr update ? Like once a week or once a month ( only if yu gv us longgger updates ;) ) .. or yu can tell us in your A/Nabt delay in updates ? .. one line abt tht wd be enough ..sachi ...

P.s ... i think aquagal also suggested me to read this one ..

P.p.s thnk you for continuing it :)

P.p.p.s thnx for reading the comment ;) if you hvnt skipped this one.. that is :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read it on Saturday, but couldn't comment then.
Many may find the pace of ur story to be slow, but I really enjoyed the gradual growth in Arshi's story. I love how from absolute stranger they came to a point to have atleast a little bit of trust & dependance towards each other.

I like how things are shaping in their life. Though Khushi's father getting ill, is making me worried. Bt I really enjoyed how Arnav stayed there for her.

Bt I have a request, plz come back to updating on a regular basis.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arnav may not be able to comfort Khushi like few people do easily but he is comforting her in many other ways. Like he silently heard her desperation to be with her father and is now traveling by economy. It's these little gestures that makes me forget his behavior in initial days of their marriage. I'm sure Khushi has forgiven him too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
good to see u back K
a short update but a nice one - arnav's actions are completely justified
loving the flow
great going
will wait to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyyy Krani!!!!🤗

Firstly I wanted to apologise for commenting so late. I ended up reading the previous chapter, liking it and then not commenting because I was in a rush. Reading this chapter and then your note urged me to make sure I commented this time hehe😆

Coming to the updates, fantastic. I cannot explain how much I agree with what you said. It's not necessary for you to outright make Arnav or Khushi say they care, it's not needed, but rather to show they care through actions. Beautiful!!!🤗 After all, words are just words even if they are sweet, actions make impact thats why Arnav's decisiom to fly via economy is so sweet. He flew for her, he considered his rep but he did it for her!!! I love how circumstances are forcing them to come closer.😳

Hope Khushi's babuji is okay!!! Eager to read more.. pls update soon!! Pls pls😆 Loving the character development!!!😛
Edited by -JollyJabeen-JB - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
"We will take it" 😃 👏 🥳
Yaayy, Arnav takes one more huge step towards Khushi.

But that update was so short :(

Hope the next one comes quicker.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved this update...Only one complaint...wish it was longer! But I understand, life gets in the way.
Arnav is thawing and yes, his actions speak volumes. can't wait to see if this new challenge brings them closer. Though they are only just discovering each other their awareness of each other is so acute that it's a surprise that life goes on around them. well, let's wait and see what you have in store for us... Don't keep us waiting too long!
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Posted: 9 years ago
I did not know you have been updating this story... thank God I came across your tweet. This is a wonderful story. Even though I believe that slow-paced stories tend to be dragging but this one has just the right timing! Keep up the good work.
P.S You are amazing at portraying emotions; I can literally imagine the scenes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
that was an awesome chapter... u can see arnav gradually changing... giving khushi more importance then his image in this situation...
i dont feel bad abt arnav not comforting khushi... it not natural for everyone to be able to do that... in that regard... im similar to arnav

waiting for next!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update Krani. I understand your pov regarding Arnav's way of comforting khushi. Being the closed & private person that he is, I'm sure getting over emotional & smothering khushi with affection would have been way out of line for him. Giving his support silently is what he does best.
In the last even though I knew Arnav will buy those economy class tickets but still there was this apprehension that what if he doesn't?? Thankfully though he came through. Finally gave khushi more priority than his business & his image.
Keep up the good work, waiting eagerly for the next update. Take care.

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