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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#471

Fabulous update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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ixray

@ixray

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#472

i just happened on your story and what a readers delight it is.

i confess at first the story seemed very familiar , sort of jani pehchani type , but then it evolved into its own signature.

the way you have fused actual episode events to your story is beautifully seamless.

thank you , please update soon . (i did finish chapter 4 )

gitz.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#473

Whats the use of trusting now after hurting her so much

They have CCTV he will see it im sure

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coolpd93

@coolpd93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#474

Still mending works of his are on d way ryt!?..i lyk d way u narrate the story..the 3 bitchs place are shown by the great asr..him believing her doesnt bring back d broken heart of hers back... since it has lyf hope it can heal with tym:)nyc update:)

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#475

Good to c u back. I have checked ur profile twice but at dat time u didn't start ds story.. awesome story. Wen I thought u r going to show wat hapnd at d terrace a new story starts.. n like khushi I also fried my brain fr dat 2 mt visit of asr at gupta house... waiting fr d next part...

Have an awesome weekend with ur dear ones..

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Simanthar

@Simanthar

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#476

Well written... Very emotional update.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#477

Hmmm... Khushi, AR and trouble are never too far away from each other, are they? If something could happen to anyone, it would be Khushi. But am glad to see a little more spunky Khushi, who wont keep quiet and allow accusations to fly. I am glad she stood up for herself.

But much more than that, I am so glad that she did not fold up and go weak kneed just because Arnav took her side.

I hate it when FF writers show Khushi to be a spineless woman, who goes weak kneed, and swoons over in delight, her rational mind taking leave and forgetting all that Arnav has put her through, the moment Arnav smiles at her or does anything nice for her. Thank God she is not that stupid.

Arnav not only hurt her but also humiliated her family - which woman in her right mind would continue to nurse a grand love and more importantly continue to loose her senses around such a man? I can understand taking time to get over it, but I would remember the humiliation every time I thought of the man! Its all fine to talk about a love that is all emcompassing, but a love that decimates your self respect, that makes you lose all sense of self worth is not love. There is a term that describes it loosely - the Stockholm Syndrome!

So Ram is a bright old interfering man who has decided to ensure that Arnav and Khushi's paths do keep crossing till they resolve whatever may be the issue between them.

Have fun with your sister and shall wait for the next update!

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#478

God! I was so so so happy to see you again here. I had thought you were one of those wonderful writers who I crave to read but had left IPKKND and FF forums for good.
Read the story from chapter 1 to chapter 4A in one sitting. Amazing work as usual. You really nailed it that IPKKND made amess of the redemption tracks..among many others. This story is how it should / could have been handled...with real feelings not hurriedly done.
Does IPKKND-EJ provide us closure...again half heartedly done.