~Arhi FF~#4~The Hands of Time~Chp-15~P.129~Mar 13~Link to Th-5 on P.1 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
firstly thank u so much for the update n pm .i loved the update so much .this story is close to my heart . n i have a hope that all the girls including are alive somewhere out there . i hope u prove me right .
my heart went out for arshi .
waitng for the next update .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Welcome back Sandhya. It was an awesome update and looking forward yo regular updates from you now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Welcome back! Hope you are doing well.
Congratulations on the new thread :)
The chapter was really good. I am glad that they admitted their feelings! It's hard to watch Khushi fight her inner demons. Overall the chapter was fantastic. I am happy for Aakash and Lavanya. I hope Khushi reconsiders about the upcoming interview.
Looking forward to the next update.

- Salikaa :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oops.. Are they really going to separate?
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Posted: 9 years ago
YOU ARE BACK!! WELCOME!!!⭐️ ⭐️ 🥳
The update is as usual wonderful. 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏
I love the way you describe party settings. It was so cool. Madhu and Khushi resembles real sisters, the bond between them is so strong and Madhu is an amazing lady, the horrible incidents of life didn'y dimmed positivity, brightness and cheerfullness in her life.
Aww, such a sad ending. Arnav is not a man to give up and neither can both stay away from each other for a long time. I am sure they will meet soon.
I love these lines, especially the past part, that's the essence of Anjali character in IPK as well.
They had nothing in common. And there had everything in common. How could she forget Anjali? She was the fabric that had woven their lives together.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wt a lovely comeback with a bang...beautiful chapter...emotions blended awesomely with the ambiance of party :)...madhu is such a sweet aunt...every one should wish for ...loved the way she invited all friends of khushi to make her comfy and happy...her all efforts seems to me like she is trying to heal khushi from all fears...getting her proper dress,facing people,mingling with them and all...its like bringing life back to her
its good to see akash and lavanya in pic :)...lavanya seems pretty nice girl...hope she helps in bringing back true meaning of love in akash life,is it too early to say :)...well just a small wish of a heart :)...its amazing how arnav noticing akahs and lavanya...and wishing best for akash but obviously with careful steps akash needs to move this time in life.
coming to arnav and khushi...loved loved loved their door meeting..:)...the attraction ,the eye lock ,his words..her smiles all look so good...but then poor guy waited long for a moment to chit chat with her...but can't blame khushi here...she is having load of baggage of past present...poor girl ..i am just hoping and wishing that arnav being so sensible ,he able to read between the lines...he able to connect the dots after listening to her,of course i do..then wt is stopping her from taking next step...h ope he understand that khushi is afraid of his mom their painful past ..i so wish he thinks on these lines so that he can bring himself and khushi out of these insecurities...only he can help her out ,for sure...i loved his words on being confused facing her blow hot blow cold attitude ...it felt so good when she said ..ofcourse i do... but then next moment all went wrong...so he is having his tabs on khushi...he knew about radha...i hope instead of running khushi find solace in arnav and they both work together in right direction..simply fabulous chap...loved it

Edited by lalarukh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
An update from youuu !!!!! what a surprise!

i really loved the update .. i loved the fact that both came to the terms ,not beating around the bush
but i can see where khushi is coming from,how can she involve with someone with such terrible history behind and that's just not the history thats haunting them even now and i guess it will forever , so given the situation no wonder she chose to run away!!im infact surprised that arnav hadnt thought about all these with all his mom hatred toward khushi! but huh! in love its bad enough one person is sane .. there should be some insanity you know ;) but god arnav is so perceptive!

and im more puzzled and glued to the story with radha thing .. i mean what is happening there!! are there some group behind all these ..

madhu and patti are very sweet and supportive loved them..

waiting to read more

thank you for the update sandhya , take care..


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Posted: 9 years ago
Marvellous update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Poor Khushi and Arnav awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
THANKS 4 D PM.
I M NOT AWARE OF UR WRITING STYLE, I THINK THIS D FIRST WORK OF I CAME ACROSS...
BUT I LOVED D WAY U WRITE...
THE PLACE U HAVE TAKEN AS UR STORY BASE, I FELT LIKE INSTEAD OF READING I M WATCHING IT THROUGH UR WRITING...I M VERY GOING 2 ENJOY UR STORY. I M SURE ABOUT IT...
I THINK KHUSHI NOT COMMITTED HER FEELINGS 4 ARNAV BEC OF HIS MOTHER WHO THINKS KHUSHI IS RESPONSIBLE 4 ANJALI'S DISAPPEARENCE N STILL KEEPING GRUDGE ABOUT IT. I THINK KHUSHI TOLD ARNAV ABOUT CONSIDERING JOB OFFER BEC SHE IS AFRAID OF HER FEELING N ATTRACTION 4 HIM 2 KEEP 2 HERSELF...VERY MUCH EAGER N CURIOUS 4 THIS ARSHI...AAKASH N LA PAIR...MADHU BUA, N GM UMA LOVED EVERY CHARACTER.
PS. PARDON MY ENGLISH...

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