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RINKYKAUR19

@RINKYKAUR19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Oh my god

What a beautiful os you have written dear

It's superb

Convo b/w father- son was amazing

Amazing feeling after reading this

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

I'm not an AR reader.But I read some worls very rarely.So I read A Rainy dawn.1s I thought it was Armaan who was thinking.So I started imagining armaan n reading.Later on I started getting confused.So it was his dad's pov.Armaan met with an accident n their pain was depicted truthfully.By god's grace miracle happened he survived.I liked the last part-

I stood near the door watching both the ladies from the circle shaped glass, sitting beside the bed with immense loved in there eyes. They must had a very rough time. After all one of them had given birth to him while the other one had given birth to his child.

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: lashyyy

actually i didn't skip but i didn't understand the meaning of this disease i didn't heard abt it before thats y
yes i read the part very careful but
it happens when sometime if u didnt know abt anything u can't able to understand it properly n same happen with me i don't have any knowledge abt diseases that y may be
but thanks for clearling

It happens with everyone. I am glad you asked. Thank you once again fpr your support

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: tanyaarora2912
First of all I didn't knw anything about d disease u mentioned...!!
I just googled it n cane to knw about it...!!
I m so thankful to u fr dis...
As it added up to my knowledge!!!!!
It is only coz of u!!!!
This OS ws amazing in terms of father son duo!!!
As a reader I wnt to request u something...!!!
I want u to write an OS purely based on conversation between Armaan n Ridhima...
Plz if u cn do dat I would appreciate...
U just portray everything uniquely...
Continue soon...

Thanks a lot for your comment. I really value it. I know usually everyone wants to read to pure AR scene and conversion and that's why I decided to start writing AR lives from someone else POV, that how Longest hours series is started. Longest hours is actually a challenge for me. To test myself, to see my limits. It's actually to see how far I can go, and It turned out to be very well..and way better than my expectations. ..Thanks for the support, it actually more than what my work deserves honestly. I am so thankful for everything...for all the support and Kind words and everything...

Longest hours is a series of 7 AR OS...I have posted 5 on IF (I post on every Friday)

2 mores to go, I might start a new project soon-Which will have pure AR scene.

Till then read longest hours and comment, suggest like criticize.

P.S I am glad I could help you in gaining some knowledge

Edited by phoo_honey - 9 years ago

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I'm not an AR reader.But I read some worls very rarely.So I read A Rainy dawn.1s I thought it was Armaan who was thinking.So I started imagining armaan n reading.Later on I started getting confused.So it was his dad's pov.Armaan met with an accident n their pain was depicted truthfully.By god's grace miracle happened he survived.I liked the last part-

I stood near the door watching both the ladies from the circle shaped glass, sitting beside the bed with immense loved in there eyes. They must had a very rough time. After all one of them had given birth to him while the other one had given birth to his child.

Thanks a lot for your appreciation. I am so glad you like it. Please read my other OS also, you might like them.

Also Longest hours is usually from others POV on AR life

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

OMG!! another beautiful work of urs...I loved Armaan as a responsible hard-working dad for his son who is a special child...His nervousness to even consider a break and have a short trip with his wife was well expressed ...Infact he looked quite adorable when he was asking permission...Finally his son realized that they had never any problem regarding his disease...

Can u get me the detail of this disease?

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Seeta

@IshaniDeep

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

nice os too good really awsom

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

awesome...loving it
thanks for the pm dear

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Rinkykaur19 prizi enthusiastic IshaniDeep thank you so much for your comment and all the appreciation.

Edited by phoo_honey - 9 years ago

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
OMG!! another beautiful work of urs...I loved Armaan as a responsible hard-working dad for his son who is a special child...His nervousness to even consider a break and have a short trip with his wife was well expressed ...Infact he looked quite adorable when he was asking permission...Finally his son realized that they had never any problem regarding his disease...
Can u get me the detail of this disease?

Thanks a lot sanghita0000 for your appreciation on my work. I am really overwhelmed by this.

ADHA is a kind of disorder which effect people's life in many ways. In America the new generation is usually a victim of this disorder due to excess use of smartphone and other gadgets. In this patients usually are hyperactive, can't concentrate on one thing which lead them to do bad in studies. And also seeks for lots of attention.

That's why in the story AR, particularly Riddhima decided to move to Mumbai where they had their families and relatives which will understand Araav's problem and will give them the ATTENTION he seeks for. And they will be able to trust their family in case of leaving Araav with them. Also that's why Armaan asked permission about 2nd child ao that his son might not feel left out. I hope this will clear the story more For you.

Thank you once again.