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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

loved it

Arnav is doing everything to make her forget the pain n her dark past to
love never hurts u it heals u
u can fight hv different of opinions but wht matters that u find a away through all that n still stand by each other
its not perfect couple that make a relation work its an imperfect couple who try to make things better knowing that they r not perfect what counts


Thnx angel😊
Love the pink and I am so glad u said that , yes

perfection is where understanding stands mutually ...not perfection by face

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Posted: 9 years ago
First congratulation on Braun's reply to you. It's awesome.đŸ„ł
And teaser is awesome too. Finally they are getting close to their destination. Khushi is really innocent how easily she got trapped in his game.😳.
Waiting for update. Thanks for teaser.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archnahardik123

First congratulation on Braun's reply to you. It's awesome.đŸ„ł

And teaser is awesome too. Finally they are getting close to their destination. Khushi is really innocent how easily she got trapped in his game.😳.
Waiting for update. Thanks for teaser.


Thank You archana😊

Yes story is reaching to its end ,Idk how many more chapters,but not many as I don't divide things accordingly.The moment is near ,that I know.

She is innocent and he is brainiac.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hararnav

what a confession... poor officer might have gone mad:-))

heart warming update


😆 police officer must be pulling his hair

Thnx hararnav
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy

Aww what a beautiful release of Khushi's pain with someone she does not know fully yet she feels in her heart that he is the only one! And he held her soul in his gentle hands when she screaming for her dad who had been killed so evilly. Yet at the same time she was scared for her protector lest that the same fate befall him! They are totally engrossed in each other's love and pain like shama and parwana!⭐

👏 Beautiful emotions running through the chapter in layers and sub layers creating a surreal feel. Splendidly written Faiqu! I am in a trance by the magic you have created.



Thnx for Dil rakhne ke liye wiwu😊

You are one of those who give me reasons to be around...

Well said Shama and Parwana

she was one hell of a scared girl when she was walking through park and all.nothing was in her head except the fear that the person who killed her father , wht might he have done to her Arnav.

She complaints and cried her pain out and he held her to relieve that pain.

till morning she was out of it.He made sure of it.

Thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akai

wonderful update dear.

What is in the envelope. Is it the reason y anjali called Arnav.

Seeing the emotional cum romance it's giving me a wow feeling.

It's really too intense seeing the romance.

Kushi reaction was worth reading and arnav message was really too lovely dovely.

Kushi confessing his love to herself..





Thnx for this colorful BG

how did u do that?

Is It too tense, seeing the romance

I agree, It is so easy to write fight as compared to write romance like this like Arshi...because they have romance in between fight.

It takes me a long time to come up and complete all of these dialogues and chapter...trust me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arshi Di, Take all the time because I can't say good bye easily to this story of yours.This is a master piece.
Edited by RSanaya71 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for pm darling
will read it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RSanaya71

Arshi Di, Take all the time because I can't say good bye easily to this story of yours.This is a master piece.



Same here😭
Edited by xZoyax - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
So So Sorry for being so so late My dear đŸ€—
I was so busy in pooka, holidays ,kids and still until Diwali.

Can't tell you how amazing this chapter is.Passion, love, care, affection, fear, relief, smiles, blooming desires are not only inciting them but also us readers.

This piece of writing is simple heart touching.

Their night was comforting and day is bright ,embracing all the love they share.

BEAUTIFUL⭐


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