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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: Kowsi
Beautiful teaser!!
Everything is fine! Update when it's ready but don't be too late or I might just kill you if I have to wait for too long!! 😉😛

🤣 No after this threat I will def not think to take that long.Love you dear.Thnx for keeping my moral up.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: ZANADI

Thank you. I am glad you liked TD. And I hope Faiqa will give us many more stories. She is such amazing person and writer. Very talented.

Ladies , after all , a story starts and it has to end too...,but I still have next thread , I think😊, so chill pill

Zana , Zoya , Asha and Sanaya

Thnx ladies for keeping my spirit up🤗

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago

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xZoyax

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Posted: 9 years ago

#533

Phew Faiqa, we have one more Dhaga to be connected with this story, right!

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: xZoyax
Phew Faiqa, we have one more Dhaga to be connected with this story, right!

I didn't measure the length, One or two God knows😆

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: lovetoread08
Hi, superb update.👏
Proverb used to describe J Palo's mind state takes the fiction route to deliver true story and life's lessons meaningfully.J Palo's repentance shows himself in pain and this pain will led him to confess his misdeeds. The para read as the light drizzle turned into light rain capture's the pulse of every reader.The convo between the trio is not funny it at least elicit a chuckle. Further the feisty Khushi was enhancing the view of the chapter. Also Arnav's love ,care and affection to reedeem her pain is palpable, excellent piece of writing dear.The para in blue along with a flashback is well etched, a notable confession albeit a bit over the top. About teaser eagerly waiting to unwind. I must say again not only your style of writing is excellent but also the way you respond to readers is commendable. On a second thought your write ups indeed increase my vocabulary😉.Your view on Zanadi's. comment about life is truely appreciable and really touched my heart.Thanks for PM.

Thnx dear😊

I am touched , and thankful

for your time to read in depth, make comments and read others too , really really appreciate that.

I have no words for your style of reading, I am speechless.

Yes confession is on its way , lets see how Arnav makes his head down to accept his lady love with both hands.

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Roop_P

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Posted: 9 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

I didn't measure the length, One or two God knows😆

What ?Just logged in on my phone to check the update status.

will be busy with guests today.

What is this, we have one or two threads ???😭

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ritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#537

wow wow wowww...
superb,amazing,emotional and heart touching too di😳
you are a perfect writer😉
everything u wrote was just wonderful😃
update next part soon..
now i can't wait for it...
jaldi se likhkar jaldi se scrap karooo😆😆😆
thanks alot giving me pm😃

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Kowsi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

🤣 No after this threat I will def not think to take that long.Love you dear.Thnx for keeping my moral up.

😃 Just repaying you the same!! If your story is coming to an end I will so miss it!! I just become kind of attached to it dear! ❤️

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Adigallia Rodriguez

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Posted: 9 years ago

#539

Amazing update👏

The pain got connection in between hearts.His care and love will seep in her to show her the real meaning of love and trust.I must say the way you have described this scene is beautifully conceived and written.
Morning love chat is a bliss for these shattered souls.

P.S. Sorry for being Late ,traveling with work.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: xZoyax
Awesome and Fabulous👏

Started with Pain and ended with Smile

I love the way you have described JPalo and his pain, so he finally realized what his mother's words worth for.You are never lte if you realize.
Shaam ka bhoola agar swaire laut aye to ussey bhoola nahin kehte..

Now question is he has two envelopes at the end??? Faiqa you and your mystery😉 can't wait for that?curious Zoya is bechain.

Now Arnav's care and tenderness is making her realize what this man is.He gave her comfort and tried to soothe her pin all night, didn't take advantage of her being in love with him for a single second.This is beyond love.The way she was scared for him just like she was years ago for her father.He is right, Palo is dead.

He couldn't resist having her in his arms , a very hard thing for any man out there ,but again this is Arnav who can't even think to harm her by any means.

The morning and their phone chat, superb.That shows how much he has succeeded in winning her.

Now she won't say it till he say it
and he won't move forward till she make a deal

Stubborn KG kids these two are😆 seriously ,but one thing is good that after all they have suffered throughout , the innocence is still residing in them.

Now what happened to Anjalii? cliffhanger.😲