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smric

@smric

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Posted: 9 years ago

#511

he hello!
such an amazing update
it all felt like its happening next to me. Khushi walking to his house..it was surreal..like im actually feeling it. it hurts to see her this sad. she is really has a very strong character. you are doing an amazing job in showing us all that she is strong.
anjali is going to give a news.. fingers crossed its not a bad news.
sorry for late reply.
thank you for your writing.😊

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: xZoyax

Hayee!!!! I'm dead🤢
only faiqa's update can make me alive😉😆

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

😆 cruel and me ...

No way, just doing bargaining like Khsuhi

Have no time Asha ,but see I am here everyday, reading and answering and giving teaser, giving u updates...may be not on time ,but I wasn't late that much either

Sorry to pester you faiqa 😳 but what to do..

okay!!! you don't answer our comments, instead you write the update and post it soon😃

sounds good no😆

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: pravallika

Sorry to pester you faiqa 😳 but what to do..
okay!!! you don't answer our comments, instead you write the update and post it soon😃
sounds good no😆

Yes I love this idea, fantastic

no answering

just posting

updates

threee timesss a weeekkk😆

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: pravallika

I know , this update will be dhamake dar, can't wait and she is indeed killing us😆

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#516

after such a teaser, I really can't wait to read the entire updtae..

it was so good..

And that kiss in the end.. Do update the soonest U can

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#517

Teasing teaser. ..

What the hell Raizada instead of confessing tge love you are riling her up..

P.S. - Readers please read 14 n 15th chapters fast yaar...

Our great writer is putting so much effort in giving us the best story...

Don't be miser in liking n commenting..

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Aimer_vous

@Aimer_vous

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#518

A killing teaser.Please update soon :)

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AdventureAwaits

@AdventureAwaits

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#519

Ok, now again I want to apologize for my late comment. I hope you forgive me. 😳

Chapter 15

Karma. What a short word for a deep meaning. JPalo, has to face the power of Karma on himself. The words of Wayne W. Dyer are so thrue.

And still I was feeling with JPalo. He took the only thing in his hand what could help him and this was the Christ Symbol that his mother gave him once. I just hope he will find peace but I think this is not so easy.

When Arnav stood in front of Khushi and the police officer asked her if she knew him, her answer was awww. Beautiful. In few words Khushi described her deepest feelings for him.

I saw her breakdown comming and it's absolutelly understandable.

I am very proud of Arnav how he handle the whole situation.

She needs him strong right now and thank God he was.The first kiss that should distract her from her sorrows brought it back. She remembered how he pushed her away and told him this.

And finally the dominating second kiss brought her walls of anger to brake down and ask him for help. It seems Khushi needed Arnav's dominance more than genleness. She wanted him to take the situation in his hands and make her forget.

After this night, Khushi became love, care and romance from Arnav. I think next updates will be full of flirting, kisses and hugs. Maybe even more. ☺️

Thank you Faiqa for this beautiful update and pm. I can't wait to read next Update.