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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: Cutemithra
Nice chapter.. Started with emotional moments and rest of the update was cute, especially the phone conversation.. It is good that khushi talked about the her worries to arnav and also the horrible night..

So long I said this..mojo is super cute.. And you had to to end it in a cliffhanger like that right? Hope things are alright at anjali's end..

Thnx cutemithra😊

sorry for the cliffhanger ,but it doesn't seem fun without one😃

Glad seeing you liking the chain of events...emotional roller coaster ride is what bringing changes in their life.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: meniranjana00
wonderful... loved it... felt sad for khushi's past...

Thnx meniranjana😊

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: nuts4u
your are sweetheart for this update

awww, Thnx nuts😊 so sweet of u

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: manali garg
amazing update. loved it.

Thnx dear😊

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#505

So sorry for reading so late. This week was crazy for me, so couldn't make time to read.

I must say, superb update.

JPalo is actually Khushi's biological father! He is a brutal murderer, but right now he is in contrition indeed ! After all he is a human being and all human have conscience and repents at some point of life. Maybe he reached to that point. But will Khushi be able to accept him ever? cause she just abhorred him to the core. For her he is just the heartless killer of her dad, but nothing else.

All the Arshi moments were written beautifully. I could feel the intensity, the passion and the love. A vulnerable Khushi just spurted out all her pent up frustration, which actually was needed. Arnav also could tame his tigress, though she was really obdurate. I must say his charming persona and obviously his immense love for Khushi did the magic on her. And his cute banter also affects her a lot. I was enjoying as well.😉

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: Arshi2503
Beautifully written.Khushi scared of losing Arnav like she lost her father.
Yes JPalo a dead man after doing that to Khushi and made her an orphan.

'It is impossible to celebrate own happiness by making others unhappy"
How true are the words Faiqa!
Is it possible for any body to love like Arnav ?
Now what is the issue with Anjali?
Thanks in advance for the pm.

Thnx Arshi😊 and yes

these words are life's true facts

It is possible ,but rare to love like Arnav.

Anjali's matter

next update

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sweetakhi71

@sweetakhi71

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Posted: 9 years ago

#507

read 14, 15 chapters and teaser just now...

I know i read it very late but i was busy...

both updates were awesome dear...

I just wish ki it isnt some bad news which anjali is gonna say...

just cant see arnav and khushi separated..

the way arnav said to palo ki their is no need to finish as you are already dead was awesome...

and telling khushi that man is dead so that she wont worry is so sweet

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

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Posted: 9 years ago

#508

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#509

Hey finally read ur update. I'll nt b able to comment in detail. As m busy wid studies. Bt i luved ur both updates. It was wonderful. Totally beautiful. Thax fr pm.