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Originally posted by: taahir004

The Deep Emotions The Feels of both Khushi and Arnav so deep

and so real the declaration that love does exist and both indeed

can only obtain it with each other

Again Update was just Phenomenal

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Haila, yeh to kamaal ka update tha.. I am so giddy with happiness! Like you are an extremely talented writer. You are just proving your Excellency with every passing chapter and I am just so glad that I have an opportunity to read this exceptionally well written and thought over story.

This is your friend's life? Aww I admire your friend. She sounds like a very strong yet delicate person. Kudos to her for allowing you to give us an insight into her life. And full full marks for your execution and doing absolute justice to her story and arshi.

This chapter was more of an emotional yearning and pent up desires that had come to the forefront.. oh my what a brilliant writing di. I am just stunned to silence and I don't think my words can do any justice to this story. I love this story and I wish (I know you are busy) that we get the next part soonish! :D

P.S: I am sorry sorry couldn't comment on the previous chapter. Navarathri you see... :D

Originally posted by: 7APK

Super - Duper Awesome

Amazing Update I just love this FF Post Soon Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: lalarukh

awesome chapter...one of the best one for me :)...beautifully written...arnav, his flashback...the suffering of khushi as child,it seems like he re visit the past and suffered equal with khushi once again...awesome writing...

well said Lala, some moments of life of others you revisit them to know them fully and here tht is wht Arnav feeling.

loved his meeting with jpalo...so the dawn was in love with khushi's mother ...i was expecting fight action...but u totally shocked me with the beauty of one word love,it changes stone heart to puddle of emotions...loved the asr in front of jpalo..

I love movie pack actions as I am a mother of boys😆 kind a get used to it ,but my inner perceptive is when u can win with words,why fight and my personal perspective is Khamoshi as this one tool keeps me calm and it truly have shown me true faces of some evil minds in my life and everywhere.

Lala time is a Karma, what you sow today, u reap sooner or later.Trust me, couple of years down the lane and u see for ur self.Allah bey niaz hai,

we human don't think about it,but someone is there who is recording it.I can't even think to hurt a fly, a fear in me that he is watching has made me who I am today.I don't give a damn what ppl think of me, but I cared so much that no one should get hurt by me.Period.

loved the way u have shown khushi missing arnav there...and then the way she ran hearing the convo of rahim cha cha...its written beautiful...her disturbed state...her eagerness in reaching arnav...and ending scene wow so beautiful..:) loved each and every bit of chap :)

Originally posted by: ZANADI

HELLO HELLO

Dear Faiqa

Here is Zanadi with a little different COMMENT

I think you deserve it. So here I am, baby to praise you a little even I very well know you do not want it because you are a honest and goodhearted person. Well no matter if you want or not I am here with a little praise.

You are one of these writers here on IF who still keep close contact with your readers as good as you can even you work very hard and have to take care about your private life.

I know very well how it is and that's why I think you deserve to hear this from one other writer.

You are amazing.

ZANA, u r making me speechless and I have no idea what to say, Thank you dear for making me humble here.I truly admire yours as I just stumbled upon your work because it is different than many.I go behind concept , meaning and gist of the story and that glued me to it.It must have some factual part in it related to life.

I do not read much here on IF but you belong to one of these rare writers who manage to touch my heart. You manage to capture my heart and soul into your stories so that I feel everything together with your hero and heroine.

Whenever they are sad, I am with them.

Whenever they are angry, I am with them.

Whenever they are crying, I am with them.

But the best is when they are happy. I am happy with them.

Believe me, not many writers manage to capture their readers into the story so much that they feel everything.

If my words made u feel all of this then I am feeling blessed.Thnx dear

You need to immagine my face whenever I find your pm in my inbox.

And you can't even immagine how I look when I read NEW UPDATE in the pm.

When I saw the new thread I was like.

What the...

Where is the pm? I read that you wanted to send PMS later so I was glad you didn't forgot me. (p.s. I have it now in my inbox. Thank you)

aww, ZANA I don't send Pms for teaser or notes...just when i update as I hate PMs...headache and now I am thinking to ask ppl about scraps too.I think this is another headache for them seeing me much😆

But then I saw the NEW update and I was like

After I read it, Iwas like.

You nailed it lady. Again you did awesome job and make me happy.

Khushi's past was so painful and sad that it was hard for me to bear it. I hope this was not exactly the past of the girl who have been inspire you too. I am glad Arnav felt Khushi's pain. Maybe this will make it easier for her in future.

ZANA 65% is her past, she is a true incentive and inspiration for me to write this

Some say sharing the pain is just a half pain.

Loved the conversation between Arnav and JPalo.

I like very much that he is trying to deal directly with the problem without police or anyone else. This are the guys I love in books. In real life I am not that brave.😆 I would call the police. LOL

No, ZANA I have seen ppl here in NY dealing things by themselves too.Life experience.

The way he handle the whole situation showed that he is worth of being part of Khushi's life. He is the person who will be the tower of strenght in the future for Khushi. On the other side Khushi is one very strong young woman. I can't even immagine how it is to have to face something so horrible and still stand up every day and live your life.

yes he will be and he is already since the day he saw her

I wish the girl who inspire you for this story all the best and one bright future full of love and life. May she never again face anything bad.

THNX😊

Comming back to you Faiqa.

I hope you like my COMMENT😉

I want you to know how special you are and people like you deserve only the best. Stay as you are and do not change. I hope we will have more fun in future together and laugh later about many things.

aww, thank you dear, I love this comment muahhh from me and trust me I am nothing in this world, there are many many ppl who are shining out there every day and no one knows about them.I used to volunteer in a hospital, church, mosque, orphanage before marriage and again started recently.Meeting ppl of all walks of life and hearing things mke u feel and think so much and u end up with one thing

Life is nothing , it is just a drop of water...as a bubble we live in ego and all ,but when it bursts , u are again flat like this gravity which pulls u down.It is better to keep ur feet on the ground all the time rather than flying for no reason.

Hope I could bring one smile on your face

Love you

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