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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tuli_jayee

to witness one's parent die infront of your eyes scarred one for life. it took a whole lot of courage & will power to move on in life. with a loving family like Shashi , garima & payal , khushi has been able to move on to some extent.

since the past is out , hope this Jpalo is not going to bother them anymore.

Arnav needs a lot of patience , time & energy to make Khushi come out of this pain.

a very beautiful chapter. you have penned the entire details very beautifully.


J😊

ur pink is the best and the most important part of this story.yes it is way impossible for any soul to move on ,but she was lucky enough to do so because of such a loving parents and ppl she got around her.

In blue, yes and he will make sure of that.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalbi

arnav's conversation with jpalo was really worth reading, the conviction which arnav had in his voice and eyes even made the mafia speechless, well whatever he said couldn't be countered as he was right in every word he spoke..

Leading about her past, arnav must have felt devastated and even her request must have grown in his heart foe the girl he so immensely loves..
Khushi had this gut feeling of something being wrong with arnav and so she was sleepless, this is what love does to you, you may actually not know the real reason but definitely know that something or the other is not right..
When she over heard arnav being with JPalo, she must have undergone the same dread she faced decades ago seeing her father being killed infront of her very own eyes and so despite being afraid of rains and lightning, she ran her way down to arnav's place not even knowing what was happening around her..
Continue soon.. It was awesome as always


Shalbi🤗

dear, u have so many good points in her summary

yes I think the way poison cuts teh poison, Arnav and his attitude was enough for JPalo to back off ...def he won't bother them any more

red👏 bang on as u r reading this tory fully...yes her letter and her request is seeping down deep into him after that

Pink

as u mentioned u always have this feeling for ur loved ones if they are in danger...
nand she must be feeling awful..gying each second knowing that Arnav s there.She was totally oblivious of her surroundings ...kiss ko yaad rehta hai ke aas paas kya hai jab dil main ussii ka khiyal ho
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thnx Sweta😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 15 is updated on page 1 post 4
I will be answering you slowly yet definitely

already reached pg15

Love

Faiqa
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wow mrs arrogance nice name:)
Wat now with Anjali..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.




Sorry for this much late answer Sona, but I was really helpless this time.I think I will take a break next time with ur permission as this is crazy

Love u and sorry for leaving u like that ...this chapter was to show u all her past and why it was important for Arnav to know all of this.

U will love chapter 15...with Dhak dhak

my answers are in blue


Di🤗, dnt b sorry, reply late no problem at all di. Never b sorry 4 dis.
@bold Hawww, y my permission, me toh always tellu dnt stress urself for update, take ur own time. Di seriously take break, ur busy scheduled r realy so stressful. So just take ur tym.

I knw 15chappy is full on arshilicious, and i m going to enjoy it alot.
Love and hugs🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chapter.. Started with emotional moments and rest of the update was cute, especially the phone conversation.. It is good that khushi talked about the her worries to arnav and also the horrible night..

So long I said this..mojo is super cute.. And you had to to end it in a cliffhanger like that right? Hope things are alright at anjali's end..
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful... loved it... felt sad for khushi's past...
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Posted: 10 years ago
your are sweetheart for this update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written.Khushi scared of losing Arnav like she lost her father.
Yes JPalo a dead man after doing that to Khushi and made her an orphan.

'It is impossible to celebrate own happiness by making others unhappy"
How true are the words Faiqa!
Is it possible for any body to love like Arnav ?
Now what is the issue with Anjali?
Thanks in advance for the pm.

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